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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

Thank you for that long comment😃.
im feeling much better now, aaj maine Neil ka interview dekha, dekhti hi, i felt much better😆.
will update soon.
waise ek baat kahoon, i still dont know your name, would you tell me, that's if you dont mind😃.
and thanks for liking😊


ha ha neil is some kind of medicine i guess usko dekh ke beemar theek ho jate hain and theek beemar ho jate hain😆hey my name is chaitali u can call me chaitu😃and i dnt have a mind to mind😆

Edited by bioinfo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bioinfo


ha ha neil is some kind of medicine i guess usko dekh ke beemar theek ho jate hain and theek beemar ho jate hain😆hey my name is chaitali u can call me chaitu😃and i dnt have a mind to mind😆

oh okaii.
and yes Neil really is like a medicine, meri tabiyat theek hogayi but dil mein dard hogaya😆.
Chaitali, what a pretty name😃.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

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Ohh yeh talli bhi na..aakhe theek se 2 chappies bhi nahi hue hai n she is irritating me like anything..she is full on kektha type vamp...talli ko bhook lagrahi hai...toh gulaal kyun khaana bhanaaye bhukkad ladki..khud jaake bhanaao...ohh me loved how kesar made her leave his hand...good going kesu aise hi usse ignore karna..hosake toh usse kahi bhagaadena..so that we can have only u n ur beloved gulaal...ohh talli wants to scare her..he he so nice that kesar n gulaal came close because of her silly joke...ohh i loved how he is doing everything to bring smile on her face...talli koh jahaa kesar jaana hai waha jaana jaroori hai kya...good that kesar showed her her position...omg she is feeling uncomfortable😉...loved how he managed with vassy men...loved the last conversation between them...n the comfort that he came to her life...

Good to know that you are feeling good now...update soon the next chappie dear...

Yeah talli bohot hi irratating hai, actually mujhe serial waali talli se bohot irratate hoti thi because she was not all bad so it was harder to hate her.😕
meri FF ki talli kafi buri hai😆.
thanks for liking dear, will update soon😃.
Edited by rimjhim1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gullu talli ko kuch banake sulade lamba samay tak like kumbhkarn ki tarah😆hum sab log bach payenge talli se aur aap dono bhi
nice chapi yaar
can anyone tell me where is neils interview
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snehasri

gullu talli ko kuch banake sulade lamba samay tak like kumbhkarn ki tarah😆hum sab log bach payenge talli se aur aap dono bhi
nice chapi yaar
can anyone tell me where is neils interview

Thanks for liking😃😃😃.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice chappie with cute moments. Accha hua Talli ko side kar diya...warna main uska bhurta bana deti! Final scene was extremely well written. Awaiting da next chappie!
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter fifteen
That evening gulaal paced up and down her room, she was feeling extremly restless and the reason she thought was very silly.
main itne dino se kesar ki sort of girlfriend rahi hoon aur ab voh talli ke saath aise, she felt really stupid, kal hi toh maine socha tha ke main kesar se door rahongi, toh ab kya hogaya hai mujhe.

suddenly her door knocked, gulaal went and opened it, and standing there was a smiling rewa 'hum ludo khel rahe hai, aap khelengi'.
gulaal glanced over at her mother who was sleeping, she realised she was not going to get any sleep, just thinking about everything. 'haan chalo'.

gulaal followed rewa looking around the beautiful house, it had many painting on the wall, suddenly they made a turn, this must be rewa's room.
as she walked in gulaal saw, talli, kesar and devika sitting on the floor , gulaal suddenly felt very concious, she was wearing a long nighty with her gown on top, 'main voh main, change kar ke aati hoon' she said turning to leave.
rewa clutched her hand and dragged her in 'sharma kyun rahi hoh'.
kesar looked up and saw her walk in she looked very pretty with her 'favourite nighty' on. he also noticed she was the colour of a beetroot red. he quickly looked down.
she walked in and went and sat next to devika, opposite kesar. he smiled and said 'chalo shuru karte hai, main nahi khelta, main tum charon ki madat karta hoon'.
the game began and gulaal was loosing, talli looked at her happily and then suddenly announced 'joh bhi harega usko koi dare karna parega'.
kesar noticed gulaal was loosing and suddenly sad to devika 'chal tu idhar bait, main vaha bait tha hoon' and he swapped places with her.
he smiled at gulaal encourigingly and she smiled back. as the game went on her began to help her and soon gulaal was in the lead. until talli said 'tu toh sirf uski madat kar raha hai, mera kya ab mein har rahi hoon, gulaal ki liye special treatment kyun'.
devika and rewa looked embaressed and began to look down, kesar stared at telli angrily 'haan specal treatment hi toh hai, kyunki gulaal bohot special hai'. talli gave him a very dirty look, gulaal looked upset.
as the resumed playing kesar tried to help gulaal again by rolling the dice for her but she gently moved his hand 'main kar loongi' she said smiling at him.
kesar moved back and continued giving talli a dirty look. finally the game ended, rewa came first, talli came second, talli came third, gulaal came last.
she still smiled and said 'koi baat nahi, mujhe kya karna hoga'.
'tum gana gaa loh' said talli, thinking gulaal's vocie would be quite horrible and she wouldn't be able to do it, she closed her eyes and rested back ready for the torture.
suddenly a sweet voice filled the entire room, they all satred as gulaal sang, her sweet voice filled the entire room. kesar felt his eyes filling up, her voice was so beautiful, just like her.
when she had finished she gave a little bow and gave a cheeky smile to talli 'theek tha kya'.
talli got up yawned and said 'haan theek tha, main chali sone'.
'bohot pyaari awaaz hain tumhari gulaal' rewa said.
'haan bohot pyaari' devika said smiling at her, 'tujhe kaisi lagi kesar' she said looking over at him.
'acchi thi' kesar said and got up and left. gulaal stared after him stunned, why had he not praised her, she felt kind of sad.
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kesar stood in front of the mirror, shirtless, something was stinging him on his back and he couldn't figure out what.
suddenly gulaal barged in she saw him and quickly turned aound and began to laugh 'apni body mirror main kyun dekh raha hai kya'.
kesar grabbed a towel and covered himself 'hans le tu, mujhe pata nahi kyun dard hoh raha hai'. at the mention of pain gulaal turned back round and faced him,' kidar dard hoh raha hai'.
'back mein' kesar said looking down embarrassed.
'mujhe dekhne de' and she went to him and gently move the towel, kesar was facing the mirror and gulaal stood behind him checking 'uff tujhe tu chot aayi hai' and she gently blew on his back, kesar felt like he was going to melt.
'na kar' he said moving slightly foward.
'kya hua'
'mujhe tu haath mat laga' and he turned and faced her, she looked down at the proper shirtless sight of him 'mujhe kuch hotha hai'.
'chup kar, pagal mat ban, aaja bed par batith, main cream laga thi hoon' gulaal said holding his hand and gently leading him to the bed, she sat him down and asked him where the cream was, 'waha draw mein hai'.
she took the cream applied it on her fingertips and gently massaged it on his back, he sighed happily and thought agar aise gulaal mere paas ayegi, toh aisi chot main roz kah loon.
'tune kuch kaha kesar' gulaal said and then suddenly the front of her gown opened, she looked at it frantically, for she was wearing quite a low nighty underneath, her hands were filled with cream.
'main tie kar deta hoon' and before she could respond he gently moved his hands across her waist and began to tie the knot, gulaal felt really shy and decided to put his mind on something else, 'kesar tune mere gaane ki tareef kyun nhai ki, accha nahi laga'.
he looked up at her his eyes full of love, 'ofcourse accha laga, tareef kyun karta, tujhe toh pata hai, how much i love your voice' and then he added in a low voice 'and you'
gulaal looked at him stunned 'kya kaha'
'tune kya suna'.
'kuch nahi, maine kuch nahi suna' she said lowering her eyes 'cream lag gayi, main chalti hoon' and she left.
kesar looked after her ' i do love you, i really do gulaal, aur mujhe pata hai, tune suna maine kya kaha'.

Edited by rimjhim1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG..gullu felling jeolous of talli..arey kya din aagayee..yeh kaam toh talli ka hai na...waise ithna shy wy feel karne ki kya jarrorath thi...good job rewa not letting her go anywhere...
gulaal special for kesar😳..talli ko kuch karo yaar😡🤢...gulllu haar gai...she sings a song...n all impressed except talli😡...ohh she is feeling sad as kesar didnot appreciated her😳
OMG...shirtless scene☺️...me loved it...kya scene hai😍

eimjhim...Jaldi se next chappie without that talli🤢

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Yeah Rimjhim...chii aya..☺️chii aya..

I lubbed the chappi😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Yeah Rimjhim...chii aya..☺️chii aya..

I lubbed the chappi😳

tumhe yeh chii laga😆😆😆😆.
agar mein sach mein chi likthi, toh tum to faint hoh jaati🤣.
thanks for liking😃.

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