FF '(1) Unread Message' chapter 24 pg 58 - Page 4

Originally posted by: CertifiedBummer

Oooyer, wonder what will happen next? :O Loved it, if after this comment I don't see chapter 5 I will have to personally kill you! -_- Dead serious here.

^LOL.
Have you seen Catfish or Trust?! :O Watch the trailers for em, they're both amazing. Loved em.

Originally posted by: prachurya

I read 2 chappies at one go. So good that Vasant angle is not there. Gulaal and Kesar are attracted to each other. Ab kya unke milan se pehle, Kesar ko dhundni padegi uske brother ki dulhan???? Whats poonam baa gonna do? What's Paan Baa gonna do? Too many unanswered questions, plz continue and update soon :)

Loved it! continue please 😊

"Bas mujhe kuch nahi suna, ek lafz bhi aur mat bol nah, tu tu, ladko ke saath batain karti hain, chii. Sharam nahi ayi tujhe."

"Nahi maa yeh ladka, mera matlab hain humare beech mein kuch, kuch bhi nahi hai", she moved closer to her mother and cupped her face in her hand's, "sach mein maa, yeh mera accha dost hai".

"phir toh tujhe koi farak nahi parega, kyunki kal tujhe ladke waale dekhne aa rahe hain, samjhi ".

Gulaal stared at her mother while tears rolled out of her eyes.

"aur agar nahi karni shaadi aur uske saath rehna hai she indicated towards the screen, toh uske saath bhaag jaa, par apne paapa ki laash se guzaar ke jaana" and with that she walked away.

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kesar looked around the house, preperation's were going on to take the vasant's rishta to some girl's house, he could not believe it, paanba could not stop describing the sundrta of the girl, joh bhi hai she can't be prettier than my gulaal he thought. arrey kesar, pagal gahi ka, you can't compare your bhabi and your...he smiled as he thought of her.

Kesar looked down as his phone buzzed, Gulaal, the name on the screen read, he stared at the phone suprised they had swapped number's but rarely spoke on the phone. "hello", said kesar similing like he had got all the khushi in the world.

"hello" her voive sounded troubled, "kya baaat hai Gulaal, sab theek hai, kya main online aa jaoon" he said concerned.

"Nahi, kesar, mujhe tujhse milna hai". "milna hai", "haan: she replied, "jaldi milna hai".

thousand's of question's raced through his mind, they had never met each other in person before, but she sounded so tense "kahan milna hai".

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They had arranged to meet in a park, kesar had initally offered to pick her up but after several plea's he had agreed she would make her own way.

10 minutes past, 15 minutes, kesar looked at his watch and started down the steep park paath, he was eagerly excited and nervous at the same time, the first time he would be seeing the love of his life in person.

suddenly a breath takingly beautiful sight came in front of him, he looked once and stared at her memerised, for wearing a white sleevless salwar suit. was non other than the girl he had been talking to online for five month's. Even more beautiful in person, her hair flew in the wind behind her as she walked.

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They talked for over two hours about everything but the subject Gulaal feared to bring up and then kesar looked at his watch and said we should be getting back, "gharwale intezaar kar rahe hunge na, aur phir kal mere...", he stopped as she interuppted him.

"im sorry kesar", and she started weeping, she got up and walked to the side of the lake opposite the bench they were seated on, he followed her puzzled and concerned.

"kya hua" he said softly. And crying and trembling she told him everything about her mother and her finding out about them, her marriage and how she would never be able to meet him again.

kesar stared at her horrified,"but surely woh samajh jayengi, if we explain to her", "nahi kesar mere paapa dil ke mareez hain, main unke aur maa ke saath aise nahi kar sakti." she clutched the railing's on the side of the lake and wept.

"shhh, sab theek ho jayega" and with that he pulled her towards himself and she wept into his warm chest.