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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

sab ayega arti.😛.have patience😉

imtehaan hogayi intzaar ki
aayi naa kuch khabar naye chappi ki
yeh hume hai yankeen
bewaafa tum nahi
phir wajah kya hui
intzaar ki
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4 ..

Those lovely eyes

Well gulaal reached dehradun and a driver was already standing there…With her name placard..she knew he was about to come…as PB had called her a day before…

She lazily closed all the windows of the car..and slept through the small ride on her way to Patel villa..Located on the Mussoorie Road

"Madam..ghar aa gaya",gulaal was startled as the driver..said in a low voice…

Are Gulaal tu aa gayi…zara dekhne de to mujhe…kitne saal bit gaye…aur tu kitni badi ho gayi hai…aur ye chashma..lagta hai bahut jyada padhai ..ki hai tune.."PB excitedly said…as gulaal seeked her blessings..

PB:"Are tum..Vasant aur kesar ko nahi lekar aye"

Driver: "baa wo vasant baba ne kaha ki wo pehle office jakar duty join karenge..unki jeep unhe lene ayi thi…kesar baba bhi unke saath hi ayenge"

Well they went inside..and gulaal excitedly hugged rewa..who in the meantime..had come to the living area to meet gulaal..

Rewa: "Oh gulaal..acha hua tum is weekend humare saath ho..Vasant bha bhi honge..vaise main tumhe gulaal bhabhi kahun kya"

Gulaal was shy..and just lowered her eyes…

PB:are gulaal tum aa gayi..naha k..beta come for break fast..kesar bhi aa gaya hai…vasant lunch tak ayega…"

Kesar..this name…brought so many fond memories in gulaal's mind…naughty,ziddi,cute little kesuda…whose chubby cheeks she loved to pull…she was ecstatic..and asked PB about his room..as she wanted to give him a book which she had brought for him…

"Dohas of kabir"

Kesar's room..

Kesar was sitting on his chair with his back towards the door..Gulaal slowly walked inside..and pulled his cheeks from behind…"are tere gaal to pichak ..gaye…"

"Ouch..",kesar screamed..and turned back..

G: "tu…I mean…Oh my God you roadside gunda…mera matlab..tu …kesar…"she exclaimed with mixed emotions..surprise,disgust,anger…

She couldn't figure outwhat exactly she felt..

K: "Ye acha tarika hai pyaar jatane ka..tum gulaal ho na…pehle thappad maro..phir use bhi zor se mere gaal nocho…chalo koi baat nahi…Thappad ka compensation to hua",he winked naughtily..

Gulaal..was shocked..taken back..suddenly a realization struck her..That means those lovely eyes were Vsant's..She was elated..and happy..

K: "OO miss gulaal in wonderland..mujhe dekh k itna khush ho gayi..aur ye gift mere liye hai kya",Kesar snatched the gift..and carelessly tore open the wrapping...to see the gift..and saw the book …

Gulaal came back to reality..and didn't know how to react.

K:chii Gulaal…tum mere liye ye kya le ayi…I hate books ..wo bhi..ye saintly gyaan wali…ye mere kisi kaam ki nahi.."he said with an irritating grin on his face as he threw the book carelessly on his table..

Gulaal felt offended and her anger grew manifold…

G: "Oh yes..I am amazed at your ignorance..Books are food for the soul..and saint kabir's dohas..were actually not only couplets but added a new whole new dimension to spirituality..and …social behaviour..par main bhi ye kise kah rahi hun",she walked away angrily

K: "haan yaar mujhe tab samajh mein ayega..jab tum hindi ya English mein baat karoge…Ye Hebrew mujhe samajh nahi ati.."

Gulaal came back to the guest room..still fuming with anger…

She heard the voice of Rewa calling.. "Baa Vasant bha aa gaye"

Gulaal's heart skipped a beat…she could feel something strange..At last..she would get to see those lovely eyes again.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

E lo ji arti.😛..chappi updated😉

logon ne to diyein honge nazraane bade bade layi hu layi hun main chappi naya

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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
piyu ithni jaldi update kiya. 😛
So this is still the FB. A small doubt how much is the leap here?
Intrestingly you are building it up, though short. Keep it up.
You didnt forgot to bring Kesar's signature waala "Chii"😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wah wah kya chappi hai bonu👏choory for late commentwa😳mera net bigad gaya tha😳and i loved your bratty, bigda nawab😳kya start tha and kya update hai, hug aa gaya😳tunne to hamari sukhi dil ki zameen pe pyaar barsa dala👏btw i love kabir and raheem ke dohe⭐️
"pothi pad pad jag mua, pandit bhayo na koe , dhai akahr prem ke jo padhe so pandit hoe"👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: alanta

piyu ithni jaldi update kiya.😛

So this is still the FB. A small doubt how much is the leap here?
Intrestingly you are building it up, though short. Keep it up.
You didnt forgot to bring Kesar's signature waala "Chii"😆

Thanx alanta.🤗.I can not do lovely long updates due to time shortage.😆.so small updates😉

Ok the opening scene..

Gulaal 28.

kesar 22

nxt..14 years ago..

and then again back to present only 6 months prior to the first scene..Hope it is clear..thanks😃

Alanta.😉.You know we are wickedians.🥳.We lubb chiii🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Trust Kesar to make 'first' impressions like that, tsk! But Miss know-it-all Gulaal ji has obviously not heard of not judging a book by its cover?! Par main bhul gayi na - madam sirf Hebrew proverbs padti hain - English is not her style :D :D :D

ps: I already dislike Vasant... he sounds, just like the show, too good for his own two shoes :-\ Btw Gullu with glasses?! :O Can you give her pigtails too?! Then Kesar can steal her glasses, pull her pigtails and run away *evil laugh*
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh no res😭
Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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chudail.tu comment next janam dena..all d best...😆

Piu..what a wonderful chappie..wow..first mein hi hug..😍..n chashma kyun...😉aapko hai na chashma...😛n loved d way kesu is..bratt..😳n vassy is gonna die in battle field..😭😭😭😭...what to say..ur chappies are passionate..⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow... this forum is full of budding authors in making... I love FFs... especially the ones based on my fav characters...

A bratty Kesar and a simple and sweet, Gulaal... well, it is a winning combination... but it takes lots of efforts to come up with a story and to maintain... so, thanks a ton for taking the effort... I am loving the Dehradun based Kesar... been to the place, and love it.. so, hope to see more of the place and my fav people through ur FF.

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