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Posted: 14 years ago
chapii-40
☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️mujhse kuch bhi bola nahi jaega☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
chappi 41-
aarey pb man gay and morning wala scene☺️and chotu vassy bhi aa ya, 😆kya baat hai aarti kay happy ending hai and kesgul planning for a baby girl😆thank u so much for such beautiful chappi, it was a wonderful journey with an even more wonderful companion called AARTI😃love you😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gman

Good that Panba gave up her Zid afterall. What a beautiful ending you have brought to us Aarti with Chota Vasant from beloved couple.


Thank you for giving such happy ending. Love you dear a lot. ❤️

ya she is melodramatic all she wanted to take her son out of a meaningless marriage but then she saw both are in love and she saw gulaal was quite caring for him so she gave it...was flipping the channel and saw a add where a mom says it takes 20 years for a mother to turn her son into a man and wife takes 20 min to turn him an idiot..and she will not give that 20 min to her DIL ...watched it and remembered panba she didnt wanted give that 20 min but gullu took her wothout her knowledge😆
and i always wanted vasant to come back ever since i killed him not as a ghost as a baby😳
thnaks gina for ur comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok... will drop by sometime to read piyu FF...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

chapter 40
The wedding was near and the modi house was filled with guests diaba jamuna kaki devika and other relatives arrived in the house.diaba was extremely happy for gulaal and kesar she sensed the love between them and was quite relieved that her son and her daughter in law have finally found their happiness
Haan
Adhuri saas thi dhadkan adhuri adhure the hum
magar ab chand pura hai phalk par aur ab pure hain hum😳

Gulaal was sitting in her bed in her room she was preparing the guest list...and then kesar came in her room...he looked at her and sat besides her...gulaal looked at him and smiled kesar gently caressed her hand...gulaal was shy

Haan ab to kahn chain ayega..

Jo haal dil ka udhar ho raha hai..

wo haal dil ka udhar ho raha hai

janejaan dilon pe pyaar ka ajab sa asar ho raha hai😳

She said "kesar mein list banaa rahi hun"

Kesar said "to banao mein kanha disturb kar raha hun"?and he rested his head on her shoulder and watched her quietly

Gulaal smiled and started preparing the guest list while kesar was staring her soft lips in sweet compassion

Gulaal looked at him and their eyes met gulaal asked softly "kya baat hai"

Kesar was little shy still he asked in low and husky voice "can I kiss u?"

Chuu lene do nazuk hothon ko kuch aur nahi hai jaam hai ye..OMG arti haila..chiii☺️

Gulaal heard those velvety words and her heart skip the beat...Gulaal was too shy she drop her eyelid and shook her head in refusal

Kesar smiled and said "koi baat nahi"

Haan kitna sharif hai re😆

And he lifted the head and started reading the guest list

Gulaal was staring at him he was looking so innocent and charming and her heart couldn't resist to give a soft kiss on his cheeks...she gently came forward to kiss on his cheek as she came near to kiss..his face turned and her lips brushed lightly over his lips...it was the perfectly synchronized..the soft contact of her lips run shiver down his spine...gulaal drew back in shyness...kesar lifted his head and his eys met hers...their was a spark in his eyes and he felt the pleasure beyond anything...kesar slowly came near and leaned and kissed her again gently and gradually in a deep passionate kiss that lasted long...holding her so close.gulaal involantary reacted to feel him...she felt heavenly...the warmth of his lips touched her heart.

Na mujhko khabar hai

na tujhko pata hai

jo chaya dhadkan pe chahat ka nasha hai...

Diwana tera besabar ho raha hai

jaane jaan dilon pe pyaar ka..ajab sa asar ho raha hai😳

she was so shy that she drew back and ran to the door

Kesar smiled there was charming glow in his face

He called back "gulaal...ek baar aur"

Gulaal turned back and said shut up and ran

Gulaal went into the living room after sometime kesar also followed her..gulaal was sitting with women who were preparing garlands to welcome the baarat...while kesar was standing in the corner staring her...raman came and asked him to decorate the room wth flowers but kesar was lost in the beauty of his beloved

Hai re...

jadoo hai nasha hai..madhoshiyan

tujhko bhula k ab jaun kahan..

dekhti hain jis tarah se teri nazrein mujhe main khud ko chupaun kahan

Diaba came there and saw kesar was doing unsual decoration

She came near and asked "yeh kya kar raha hai"

Kesar said daiba "woo rewa k shaadi k liye room decorate kar raha hun"

Diaba asked "nimbu mirchi se ??( he had put lemons and chillies instead of flowers)..kyu baarat mein bhoot aane waale hai jo bhagane k intzaam kar raha hai"

OMG kesu pagal ho gaya..haila nimbu mirchi😆

Kesar looked at the lemons and blushed and said diaba woo

Diaba said "bhag yanah se badmaash"

Kesar walked away blushing

While gulaal was sitting there she was thingking about her sweet passionate kiss with kesar...she too didn't paid attention in her work

Diaba looked at her in amusement and asked "ab tu kya kar rahi hai"

Gulaal said "diaba baraati k welcome k liye maala bana rahi hun"

Diaba said "tu mithai aur lado ki maala pehenaaygi"?..gulaal looked at the garlands and realized that she had weaved sweets in place of flowers...gulaal was nervous and shy at her silly mistake

Diaba started laughing and said playfully "dono pati patni paagal hai chal tu bhi bhaag jaa...nahi to yeh shaadi ka acha band baj bajeyga"

Haan haan ...kaise dhyaan lagega😉

And gulaal ran away too

As she went into corridor kesar grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him...he wanted to hug her

Gale se laga lu

labon pe saja lun

aa teri har dhadkan ko main apna bana lun

dard hai hal;ka sa magar ho raha hai..

And then he heard jamuna kaki calling him

He replied "aa raha hun kaki"

Hai re kaki ji galat timing😡

And then he said to gulaal "I seriuouly hate u...tumne haan karne mein itna time waste kar diye aur ab dekho poora ghar guest se filled hai...mere romance k to watt lag gayi hai"

Are guests hain tab to tu pagal huye ja raha hai..nahi hote to kya karta😆

Gulaal laughed and said "tsk tsk pooy guy"

OMG flirty Gullu.😳.me likes..me likes👏

Kesar said "jyada khush hone k jarurat nahi hai...u don't know me..ok"

Oh yeah..they are back to their challenge game..

Tune mujhe pehchan nahi

jaana main koi anjana nahi

ahiq hun main tere naam ka ..diwana hun main diwana nahi


And he left...leaving her smiling

The next day was rewa's mehendi function the following day was her wedding...everyone was happy and in light mood..they danced singed...gulaal and kesar were happy too more as they found their happiness

In the evening gulaal was getting ready for mehendi ceremony...gulaal had dressed up in red lehenga and light jewellery..she was combing her hair...

OMG...😉

kesar walked carelessly in her room and asked "gulaal woo pooja mein kaun sa samaan lagega uski list kanha rakhi hai?"

gulaal said while combing her hairs "side table mein rakhi hai"

kesar searched and said "nahi mil rahi"

gulaal said "dhang se dekho"

kesar looked at gulaal and said nahi mil rahi and he noticed her..she was looking extremely beautiful...he stood there for few seconds...watching gulaal combing her hairs and then he slowly walked towards her..he stood behind her...hugged her from behind her skin was as soft as dewy rose petal...her beauty intoxicated his senses and he caressed her finger on her back...gently pushed her hairs and kissed her on back and said in low and husky voice "u r extremely beautiful doctor".

OMG arti...⭐️

Ye pal hai apna to is pal ko jeele

sholon ki tarah zara jal k jee le

tum ko dekhun

tumko chahe..is tarah se kabhi..

humne kisi ko chaha kahan

Gulaal senses overwelmed by the sudden touch...she turned around and looked into his eyes...kesar gazed her and then leaned his head and gently kissed her neck and trailed the light kisses on the curve of her neck...the sensation was beautiful

Labon ko labon se sajao

kya ho tum mujhe ab batao

tod do khud ko tum bahon mein meri bahon mein

gulaal stood silent with the closed eyes and then heard rewa was calling her

E lo ji ..phir KMh😡

she opened her eyes and said in the low voice "kesar jaane do"

kesar held her in arms and said "nahi"

she replied soflty "rewa bula rahi hai"

kesar replied "bulane do"

she said "woo yanha aa jayegi"

kesar replied "aane do"

she said "sabko pata chal jayega"

kesar said "chalne do"

gulaal said "sab hasenge"

kesar said "hasne do"

gulaal said "ruswaayi hogi"

kesar replied "hone do"

gulaal said "aisa hua to mein chali jaungi"

kesar looked at her and said "tum mujhe chodkar kanhi jaa hi nahi sakti"

and he was about to kiss her but she smiled naghitly and ran

kesar called her from behind "gulaal not fair"

she smiled and walked away

👏OMG arti meri chotu govinda...that reminds me of chotu kesu scene⭐️

👏gulaal went in the living area she was enjoying the music and the dance...kesar came and stood in the near distance his eyes never left her there was a raw desire in him...he was looking at her with deep passion...

Dilbar mere kab tak mujhe aise hi tadpayoge

main aag dil mein laga dunga wo

k pal mein pighal jaoge😳

After sometime diaba asked her to bring some mehendi cones upstairs...gulaal went upstairs to take the cone...suddenly a hand covered her mouth and took her in a room gulaal looked above and kesar removed his hand from her mouth

Gulaal said "yeh kya yanha kyu laye"

Kesar said "tumahare pass rehne k man kar raha hai"

Gulaal said "par mujhe neeche jaana hai"

Kesar said "nahi aaj nahi" and he closed his room door

Are gullu ab nahi bach payegi😉

Gulaal said "par sab hume dhundhenge"

Kesar said "function chal raha hai sab apne aap mein busy koi hume nahi dhundega ok"

Gulaal replied "par mujhe mehendi lagwaani thi"

Kesar asked "kyu mehendi kyu lagate hai"

Gulaal was shy she said shyly "woo husband k liye"

Kesar came near and asked "husband k liye kyu"

Gulaal said "jiske mehendi ka rang jitna gehra hota hai uska husband use untna hi jyada pyaar karta hai"

Kesar replied "gulaal tumhare husband k pyaar ka rang bahoot ghera hai tumhari liye"

He said in low and husky voice "do u wanna feel it?"

Gulaal hung her head she stood still the words were choked inside her she couldn't speak any futher

Kesar came near he kissed her cheek moving his lips with beguiling tenderness he kissed her forhead cheek chin and then kissed her lips deeply... shockwaves ran up and down her spine at the feel of his lips..kesar then took her in his arms...he lifted her and carried to bed? eased her back onto the bed he continued to kiss with slow lessiure kisses exploring her...she trembled and shiver desire began to grow inside her her senses spun wildly she curled her toe...the primate feeling took over and they made love and their souls united in one...

Bahon ke darmiyaan..do pyaar mil rahein hai

jane kya bole man

dole sun k badan

dhadkan bani zubaan

aasmaan ko bhi ye hasin raaz hai pasand

uljhi uljhi sanson ki awaz hai pasan..

moti luta rahi hain sawan ki badliyan

khulte band hote labon ki ye ankahi

mujhse keh rahi hai k badhne de bekhudi

mile yun k daud jayein nas nas mein bijliyan...

👏

⭐️👏👏Arti..meri chotu govinda..😳.lubb you re👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Much love Arti for such a beautiful ending to their amazing love story.. chalo, wothout extra drama PB maan gayi... and the best bit was the arrival of the lil baby... wow, I can so imagine them with a small bundle of joy of their own in the show... if only the CVs would have shown us moreee...but, overall a very well written story Arti.. I loved it and hope to continue writing in future as well...


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Minks

thanks minks...panba has to agree she was the only one against it and plus she was not that aware that both love each other so deeply...she was an orthodox woman but then she loved her son dearly so gave up for the sake of her family..i wish too it could be so nice if cv would have shown the confession on thursday some naughty moment on friday and chota vasant on saturday and then gulaal and kesar could have danced with motaba and panba playing with the baby it would be perfect ending i would be so glad not at all happy with turba scene but then its ok
thanks a lot dear for ur support
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow arti ..loved the chii chappi


hmmm fultooo kesar ishtyle..undpredictable
when the whole house was busy in wedding preparation
Kesar Gulaal making love...magical it was

that made me remind the scene from Parineeta


and then chapter 41 was nice culmination for the entire story
Thanks arti for giving such a beautiful story
this is the first ff i had ever read...and it was worth it
u really brought the essence of KG in it...

will save all the chappi...





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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bioinfo

chapii-40

☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️mujhse kuch bhi bola nahi jaega☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
no bolo bolo u made me read that chii ff but swear meine wanha se kuch nahi liya else i would be liked by 116 members😆
chappi 41-
aarey pb man gay and morning wala scene☺️and chotu vassy bhi aa ya, 😆kya baat hai aarti kay happy ending hai and kesgul planning for a baby girl😆thank u so much for such beautiful chappi, it was a wonderful journey with an even more wonderful companion called AARTI😃love you😃

ya panba has to maan else i would have arranged her funeral...yes chota vasu always in my mind ekdum stupid romantic movie k tarah...thanks dear and ya one baby girl bhi to chahiye...and omg now i have tears in my eyes thanks chaittu ab hum log kya karenge😭😭😭
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

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⭐️👏👏Arti..meri chotu govinda..😳.lubb you re👏

thanks dear ...i m so gald else i was getting only tamatar faces😆 i thought gadbad ho gayi mein to edit karne waali thi is chappii ko
thanks piyu ab me going to read ur ff
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Originally posted by: nneeiill

wow arti ..loved the chii chappi


hmmm fultooo kesar ishtyle..undpredictable
when the whole house was busy in wedding preparation
Kesar Gulaal making love...magical it was

that made me remind the scene from Parineeta

actually i wanted to fill their life with love in some ocassion thats related to color... kg met wen it was holi...kesu realised his love the day after holi..holi day was major breakthorugh in the journey so thought to unite them wen some colorful event is going on.. ...so i thought mehendi day would be perfect where all woman were putting mehendi on their hand to get the love of their husband kesar filled gulaal life with love...i know i m crazy...i m subltely wierdo...and my ff name is apne preet se mujhe range de...and for this love scene i arrange the whle rewa marriage...

and then chapter 41 was nice culmination for the entire story
Thanks arti for giving such a beautiful story
this is the first ff i had ever read...and it was worth it
u really brought the essence of KG in it...

will save all the chappi...

thanks dear and this was my first write up and now really dont wanna write in future... see the world is save from a horrendous writer like me😆 😳
thanks nithya for liking😳



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Posted: 14 years ago
wow arti

thanks for that bful explanation

the scene looks more n more beautful now ...

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