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Posted: 14 years ago

#991

Originally posted by: nneeiill
wow arti

thanks for that bful explanation

the scene looks more n more beautful now ...

told u na me a carzy subtelty wierdo...thats y kesar said her ur husband loves u so much that u dont need any color to prove it...i m there to fill your life with color😳

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago

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OYesSheDid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#992

what is that it?! omfg, you suck! :@

lol joke, you were the reason I even stayed on this website after today.

Edited by CertifiedBummer - 14 years ago

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without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#993

Arti - how can you end the fic with the show?! 😲 I was going to rely on this, and the one Piyu is writing for the days to come, till i could find some semblance of peace with the fact that Gulaal is over ... 😒

Is there a way to talk you into writing another GK story? I'd be willing to bribe you if you agree to name the deal... !!!

Coming to the two chapters - which I read in a go:

40: Oh that was dedicated to chiii gang alright - between the confession today, and your chapter 40, GK fans have nothing left to complain about 😆 No seriously, a very well written flow of events, smooth, nothing rushed, with the right build up! In my head - its hard to imagine a GK kiss, because I see them as Talsagra people, lol, and my very blocked perception seems to imagine village people don't kiss! Blame it on Hindi Cinema!!! For years, they made such a big deal out of that, now one just tends to be judgmental! But on a more precise note - it was so easy to imagine this chapter - Kesar a young boy just out of college, Mumbai guy top to bottom, but one who wears his heart on his sleeve. Gulaal - a sound combination of modern career woman, but a very grounded home maker. The chapter was bang on! Thank you for writing it! 🤗

41: The end 😔 I'm glad DB came to their rescue - she was always going to be one huge vote. And her arguments fit in so well! Kesar may have made his promise to Gullu to convince PB, but DB really did the needful! She was sane, and compassionate. PB finally found the truth staring back - good for her, and the leads. And Gulaal's brief but candid confession of how she had made the promise honestly, but hadn't been able to check her heart - much much needed! As for the final part - aww! reminds me of all the happy Bollywood endings! 😆 I'm going to refer to the baby as Baby Kesuda though! They can call him what they like! 😆

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Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

#994

Originally posted by: JZephyr
Arti - how can you end the fic with the show?! 😲 I was going to rely on this, and the one Piyu is writing for the days to come, till i could find some semblance of peace with the fact that Gulaal is over ... 😒

Is there a way to talk you into writing another GK story? I'd be willing to bribe you if you agree to name the deal... !!!

Coming to the two chapters - which I read in a go:

40: Oh that was dedicated to chiii gang alright - between the confession today, and your chapter 40, GK fans have nothing left to complain about 😆 No seriously, a very well written flow of events, smooth, nothing rushed, with the right build up! In my head - its hard to imagine a GK kiss, because I see them as Talsagra people, lol, and my very blocked perception seems to imagine village people don't kiss! Blame it on Hindi Cinema!!! For years, they made such a big deal out of that, now one just tends to be judgmental! But on a more precise note - it was so easy to imagine this chapter - Kesar a young boy just out of college, Mumbai guy top to bottom, but one who wears his heart on his sleeve. Gulaal - a sound combination of modern career woman, but a very grounded home maker. The chapter was bang on! Thank you for writing it! 🤗

41: The end 😔 I'm glad DB came to their rescue - she was always going to be one huge vote. And her arguments fit in so well! Kesar may have made his promise to Gullu to convince PB, but DB really did the needful! She was sane, and compassionate. PB finally found the truth staring back - good for her, and the leads. And Gulaal's brief but candid confession of how she had made the promise honestly, but hadn't been able to check her heart - much much needed! As for the final part - aww! reminds me of all the happy Bollywood endings! 😆 I'm going to refer to the baby as Baby Kesuda though! They can call him what they like! 😆

i always wanted to end my ff before the show...i was so scared that my imagination doesnt coincide with them...thank god it didnt but still was scared so posted before the show...and chapii 40 was dedicated to chii gang and i planned sr night in a ocassion related to color so planned on mehendi night...and i wanted gulaal to follow her heart before confessing to PB i wanted her to free spirited and independent...so brought the sr night before confession

41 it has to end it ended😛...i always wanted vasant to return to their life...i just remeber the khomshi dialogue where helen said whatever is taken from u comes back to u in the end...😛

thanks jzee for liking i m still waiting for FD😳😳

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago

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without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#995

^^ are you saying that you'll write another FF if I post the FD really soon? Like tomorrow? *looks hopeful*

btw - that's a beautiful thought about Gulaal being a free soul before PB confession... it makes sense. And its fair to Kesar =)

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kalika.j

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Posted: 14 years ago

#996

@arti,thank you for a lovely journy with Gulsar.

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with love kalika.

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Gman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#997

Aarti I have saved your FF in my laptop and will cherish it with all my heart as original show Gulaal in future again and again. Hope that you will still be in touch with us through this forum as I will still keep on checking/ replying the forum till someone keeps posting except for Gopi11, Rashi 11 and Kokilla 11 and any other guy in disguise.

love you dear a lot.❤️

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alanta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#998

arti, what to say now I got double heart attacks, one the show ended and the other your ff on the very same day. But still you gave it an appropriate end. But missed a probable scene of Kesar taking care of Gulaal. But anyways...just a request arti, dont leave the forum, you are such a talented person, be it a ff, os, ss,or anything else but dont let your pen down , keep writting dear, I am a loyal fan of yours. Dont want to miss you all.

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Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

#999

Originally posted by: JZephyr
^^ are you saying that you'll write another FF if I post the FD really soon? Like tomorrow? *looks hopeful*

btw - that's a beautiful thought about Gulaal being a free soul before PB confession... it makes sense. And its fair to Kesar =)

i did my job and now looking for ur FD😳😳😳 thanks dear for apprecaiting i told u naa its more than winning as oscar😳