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Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: Gman
Aarti I have saved your FF in my laptop and will cherish it with all my heart as original show Gulaal in future again and again. Hope that you will still be in touch with us through this forum as I will still keep on checking/ replying the forum till someone keeps posting except for Gopi11, Rashi 11 and Kokilla 11 and any other guy in disguise.

love you dear a lot.❤️

thanks dear it means alot.. ya will be in touch this forum is so special its our sweet hell😛...and love u too😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1002

Originally posted by: alanta
arti, what to say now I got double heart attacks, one the show ended and the other your ff on the very same day. But still you gave it an appropriate end. But missed a probable scene of Kesar taking care of Gulaal. But anyways...just a request arti, dont leave the forum, you are such a talented person, be it a ff, os, ss,or anything else but dont let your pen down , keep writting dear, I am a loyal fan of yours. Dont want to miss you all.

i wanted to show kesar taking care but the original scene was so powerful that never touched it..i really wanted to show the ff different from the show yet maintaining same storyline so didnt put the scene that conincides with the main...and i really dont know i will write again or not...gulaal was so poweful show that hit my imagination...rarely aby show does it...and so greatful for your comment and really savour all your comment read it again and again

thanks dear will be in touch

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Keithuu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1003

Meri pyaari Aarti...😊
Tune kaha tha na tujhe my res accha lagta hai..tho prev 2 res main tujhe gift kar rahi hun,...😛
Yaar yday's dukh mein update nahi kar paayi...thats y...😔
Chappi 40...
yaar...main tho tamatarmukhi hi reh gayi...our chii bhavana ko sukoon mila...😉
Really nice yaar...kuch hua tho sahi...not like our serial's kesgul ki m still wondering kuch hoga bhi ya nahi...😆
Chappi 41...
super duper ending yaar...😊kajuda bhi aaya...m so happy...tu chahe usse vasant bulaaye ya vasu...mere liye woh mera kajuda hi hai...😉
M really sad ki ur ff ka bhi the end hua...m really gonna miss ur ff dear...😭😭😭
But happy ki hamein ek perfect kesgul story mila...jahan pe no dragging,not much talli jhalli torture,ramu bhi accha...n sabse best...we got chiii...😳
Ur ff is the first ever ff i read...n i totally love it...u r too good re...
luv u...😳pls forum se bhaag mat jaana...

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vinolya

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1004

Aarti, lovely chapters... I read last two chapters in a go. Your FF is over.. 😲 Btw, why did you end it that too so soon...😔

Chapter 40 was good with all chiii things. 😛.. The description you gave was really good. ☺️

Chapter 41... I liked it. I liked how Paanba accepted their relationship, that was beautifully put in words. Chotu vasant... 🤣... omg, this Kesar and Gulaal are super fast... 🤣 and the ending part was fantastic dear.

I loved reading your FF throughout, and guess what, this is the first FF that I have ever read.. I really admired the way you write.. so any plans about FF 2... 😳.. would love to read that also. 😃

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

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Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1005

Originally posted by: arti07

ya panba has to maan else i would have arranged her funeral...yes chota vasu always in my mind ekdum stupid romantic movie k tarah...thanks dear and ya one baby girl bhi to chahiye...and omg now i have tears in my eyes thanks chaittu ab hum log kya karenge😭😭😭

accha hua kuch nahi liya warna tera ff hum nahi padh pate na😃and mai kuch nahi bol sakti , mujhe ye☺️karne se fursat mila tab na☺️waise tu roti hiu kaisi lagti hai😉😆na na pls dnt cry , ab hum khub sara chii imagine karenge aur yahan ff likhenge😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1006

Originally posted by: Keithuu
Meri pyaari Aarti...😊
Tune kaha tha na tujhe my res accha lagta hai..tho prev 2 res main tujhe gift kar rahi hun,...😛
Yaar yday's dukh mein update nahi kar paayi...thats y...😔
Chappi 40...
yaar...main tho tamatarmukhi hi reh gayi...our chii bhavana ko sukoon mila...😉
Really nice yaar...kuch hua tho sahi...not like our serial's kesgul ki m still wondering kuch hoga bhi ya nahi...😆
kuch nahi hoga 100 metre romance hai turba karte karte life spend kar denge

Chappi 41...
super duper ending yaar...😊kajuda bhi aaya...m so happy...tu chahe usse vasant bulaaye ya vasu...mere liye woh mera kajuda hi hai...😉
M really sad ki ur ff ka bhi the end hua...m really gonna miss ur ff dear...😭😭😭
But happy ki hamein ek perfect kesgul story mila...jahan pe no dragging,not much talli jhalli torture,ramu bhi accha...n sabse best...we got chiii...😳 me too i hate dragging unnecessary ek din confess second day chii and third day baby superfast
Ur ff is the first ever ff i read...n i totally love it...u r too good re...
luv u...😳pls forum se bhaag mat jaana...nahi me not going anywhere

thanks kirti ur comment means a lot...i loved all your res and comment my sleeping beauty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1007

Originally posted by: vinolya
Aarti, lovely chapters... I read last two chapters in a go. Your FF is over.. 😲 Btw, why did you end it that too so soon...😔

Chapter 40 was good with all chiii things. 😛.. The description you gave was really good. ☺️

Chapter 41... I liked it. I liked how Paanba accepted their relationship, that was beautifully put in words. Chotu vasant... 🤣... omg, this Kesar and Gulaal are super fast... 🤣 and the ending part was fantastic dear.

I loved reading your FF throughout, and guess what, this is the first FF that I have ever read.. I really admired the way you write.. so any plans about FF 2... 😳.. would love to read that also. 😃

thanks vino...chii has to be there i cant end with turba or salsa its like getting a hundred mojiri in the end...really didnt wanted to waste time on panba so made her realized quick and she was sensible lady she was little apprenhensive about the relation but then kesar and gulaal love convinced her...chota vasant was always in my mind even before surufui came in pic in the show...so glad my ff and show didnt have the same ending

thanks dear for ur comment u ppl made me complete my ff else i m runaway writer😳...right now i m just reading piyu and parchurya ff

i have story in my mind not about age difference not about deeyarvatoo but a unsual kind of lovestory...like kesar and gulaal something strange and unusal but not sure i will post it or not..thanks dear for liking

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1008

Originally posted by: bioinfo

accha hua kuch nahi liya warna tera ff hum nahi padh pate na😃and mai kuch nahi bol sakti , mujhe ye☺️karne se fursat mila tab na☺️waise tu roti hiu kaisi lagti hai😉😆na na pls dnt cry , ab hum khub sara chii imagine karenge aur yahan ff likhenge😆

but atleast more ppl would have liked it...and i dont cry to cry jyada mehant lagti hain ..me all lazy love to do less hectic job...haan yaar show mein to nahi mila bas os pad padh kar apne man ko manna rahe hain...chiii

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Ganga

@Avatarana09

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1009

Nice ending Arti. Agree to your justification in that Gulaal sought Kesar from her heart and did not get tied down by promises. Well promises are meant to be broken. I like this Gulaal of yours. She is bold and more relatable.

You should have continued like how everyone is requesting.

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Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1010

Originally posted by: MeySimi
Nice ending Arti. Agree to your justification in that Gulaal sought Kesar from her heart and did not get tied down by promises. Well promises are meant to be broken. I like this Gulaal of yours. She is bold and more relatable.
You should have continued like how everyone is requesting.

thanks ganga...i want gulaal to be caring and loving like kesar...i wanted the same passion and intensity in two of them...didnt wanted kesar to beg infront of her... after all it takes two to love one another...gulaal in the show was good but still i think kesar loves her more...i so wanted gulaal to realize her true solumate was kesar not vasant but i guess cv didnt make it clear till end they were more in the lines ok one gone other takes over..as a avid GK fan.i wanted her to realize that her realtionship with kesar was more deep than vasant...but anyways no regrets

and i m now reading piyu and parcurya ff seems excellent...i rarely write... its my first ff must say this is the only show that hit my imagination...i have a unusual love story in my mind...nowaday whenver i think i imagine kesar/neil as a protogonist cant help myself 😳 but its not about age diferrence not about deeyarvatoo so not sure will post it or not...

thanks ganga for ur comment it means a lot

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