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@Katyayani_devi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

🥱 😆 kidding continueee 😕 😉 😆

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alanta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Savz and reshma Thank you for your support.

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

[posted in other thread, but just thought that this should be put here too as well]

I think its the season of role-reversal in 'GULAAL'. So I want to see Gulaal undergoing similar turmoils that Kesar went through, not exactly the same but when it comes to Gulaal it will be in a different way.

(Note:This is not in a scripted format)

The Ever Waited Realisation

After moving to Tallis burnt house, they naturally came even closer. Eventually, Gulaal starts doing things in Kesar's preference, like letting her hair open for a whole day, but unintentionally though she know about Kesar's wish to see her like that . But all these happens in a subconscious level.

Kesar as he knows her more than anyone he starts to get an inkling on the whole scenario. But he kept silence and didnt discuss it with her. Secondly he didnt want to assure himself with false hopes as the person on the other side is none other than GULAAL.But he secretly adored it all. Eventually she became more attached and began to show her possessiveness over him, she began to express everything that she used to brush off till date.

One night Kesar came home late. It was raining heavily. Gulaal became so tensed, as time passed fear conquered her like nothing. Words of her friends on losing him starts to haunt her. She was totally shattered, she couldnt take it anymore, she just closed her ears tightly.

After a while she hears the sound of his bike and rushed to the yard. Kesar on seeing her standing in the rain ran to her and by grabbing her hand urged her to move inside but Gulaal resisted him.

Gulaal's condition was almost something like confused, fear of lose that resembled the scene Kesar when came home and barged in to her room and had a partial confession.

Gulaal: (lost her temper , she grabbed his collar and cried aloud) Tu ab thak kahan thi Kesar, Tuje anthaza bhi hai, ki mein kithni khabhrai hui thi. Tu mere baare mein socha bhi ya...

after a pause she just ran off . Kesar went after her.

Kesar: Tuje yeh kya hua ?. Tu dekh sakthi hein na mein teek hun aur phir tho yeh pehli baar tho nahin?

Kesar again asked her, but she was all feared, she dont have a reply and she just says her helplessness and she herself is unaware of what is happening to herself nowadays and all that she knows is that she doesnt want to lose him at any cost. She repeated to him "Kesar, muje nahin patha ki muje kya hothe ja raha hein."

Kesar who have gone through a similar phase a while ago and thus had an experience of the same and also who knew her more than herself, not being an ostrich like her and He being Kesar himself , he speaks it out, the plain truth, the biggest realisation for her:

Tujhe tho mujse pyaar hogaya hein Gulaal.

Gulaal got the shock of her entire life.

I may sound silly, but plz dont forget to leave your comment.

Edited by alanta - 14 years ago

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Priti

@pritirays

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: alanta
Kanha-Radha-Rukmini
(A dream scene of mine since Motaba's reference to Radha-Krishna-Rukmini)
[Motaba,Gulaal,Kesar,Thalli]

Motaba (to Gulaal) : Mein thujse hamesha poochtha dha na ki jab yeh radha aur kaanah bade ho jaa yenge thab Rukmini ka kya hoga. Ab waqt aa gaya hein gulaal muje jawaab do.

Gulaal : Jab raadha yahan hein tho yeh rukmini meera ke roop sweekar karne ke liye thayaar hoon motaba

(Gulaal tries to walk away and Kesar holds her hand at the moment)

Kesar (to Gulaal) : Aur agar yeh kaanah ke liye uski radha aur rukmini do no sirf aur sirf thu hi hein tho?

Gulaal : Mathlab????

Kesar : Haan Gulaal mere sab se pehale aur khas dosth, mera pyaar aur meri pathni mere sab kuch sirf thu hein gulaal.

Thalli : Radha tho mein sirf munch par dhi. asli zindgi mei mein laakh koshishe karthi rahi lekin na uski raadha ban paayi aur naa hi rukmini ban paaungi. Kesar sirf thera hein.

I just made a try. Wish to know whether you liked it or not. plz do comment either (update at the end of this page)

(pardon I'm not gud in hindi)

oye hoi kya dialogues likhe hain, you can be the dialogue writer you know! 😆
Loved this scene! 👏

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Thank you prachurya for liking it.

But seriously I needed your comments. If it was boring then feel free to voice out or else how will i come to know guys. Plz dont misunderstand me I am not compelling you to reply, just wanted to know. Thank you😊

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prachurya

@prachurya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

I loved the rain wala scene. I hope we get sumthing like this in the show . BTW we wud see the fear of losing him in Gulaal in today's episode...pta nhi shayad tumhare poore dialogues chori kr le CVs. Newez, I always wanted sumthing like this happening. Plz do write more of them.

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: prachurya
I loved the rain wala scene. I hope we get sumthing like this in the show . BTW we wud see the fear of losing him in Gulaal in today's episode...pta nhi shayad tumhare poore dialogues chori kr le CVs. Newez, I always wanted sumthing like this happening. Plz do write more of them.

Thank you. But this was probably my last one. Gulaal's confession is the last phase of the story too.

You all could share your dream scenes here too and that was my intention of making this thread, but no one seems interested. Chalo koi baath nahin...

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Tu Mere Saath hein

[Diaba has returned from her pilgrimage and was the happiest person to see Gulsar union as she was the formost person who wished for the same since Kesar's return.Diaba showered her blessings on them]

Daiba:Dekha Soma, aakhir bhagvaan ne meri sunli.

MB: ha Diaba, (and looking at Kesar) aakhir kab thak maawri apne muh modthe rehthe.

Gulaal:A re kithni dino baath aap lautkar aaye hein.

Daiba: haan beta, lekin meri duaye hamesha tum sab ke saath dhe.

[All were extremely happy]

[At night Gulaal was unpacking her luggage at Kesar's room and Kesar suddenly entered the room and exclaimed]

Kesar: a re Gulaal ab yeh kya, saara kamra phir se kharaab kiya thune, la mein kar de thi hoon, yuhi sab kuch bhikar kar dethe hein...

Gulaal:(astonished) yahan tho sab kuch ulta hothe jare hein kya, Kesar tu hi tho hamesha...

Kesar:(interupted):Tu ab kaam karoge bhi ya nahin.

[Gulaal slightly smiled and they both arranged the room and finally spread the bed sheet and they simply sat on it]

[As they were sitting Kesar took his digi cam and both were engaged in looking at the photos of the dance they had yesterday, both went teasing and laughing at each other...]

Kesar: Gulaal yeh dekh...[Gulaal suddenly moved closer towards him and a sudden flash of consiousness striked him and was lovingly gazing at her, Gulaal noticed it and only then she realised their proximity and suddenly withdrewed]

Kesar:(determinantly extended his hand and asked) chaloge mere saath?

Gulaal:Iss waqt? lekin kahan?

Kesar:(softly but confidently): Tu mere saath hein, waqt ki parvah kyun karthe hein?

[Gulaal smiled widely and held his hand, both headed towards the door out ward]

(to be continued... if you wish)

(Just a token. whether to continue or not, all depends on your response, so plz comment)

Edited by alanta - 14 years ago

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prachurya

@prachurya

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

made me all dreamy...plz continue. It was really romantic. Ab jaldi se update karo...aage kya hoga!

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Jalthi Aag

[Kesar and Gulaal walked through the pavements and reached Tallis old house where they had spent few weeks and both sat on the courtyard and that was a cold night, Gulaal felt the cold was so intense]

Kesar: Kya thuje dand lag rahi hein?

Gulaal:Haan thoda sa.

[Kesar has forgot to wear his jacket,he was in his night dress, he looked around and found some firewoods and gathered some, with an effort he managed to lit them, (rubbing stones). Gulaal was sitting beside him with her both legs clasped, leaning her head on her knees, in a lazy mode. She was watching his deeds with great fondness and a bit childlike amusment. Kesar still arranging the fire, gave her a side glance]

Kesar: Teri tho aadat si hogayi hein na mujh se kaam karvane ki?

Gulaal:(in a lazy tone) Kyun? Patni hone ka faida uda rahi hoon.

Kesar:(with a smile) acha, agar aise hein tho ab aage se aisa nahin chalega.

Gulaal:matlab?

Kesar: yehi ki muje bakshish dena padega.

Gulaal:bakshish??(what u mean)

Kesar:haan (what I said)

[Gulaal clutching more to her legs, lowered her eyes and voice]

Gulaal:Kya doon?

[Kesar gazing at her, came more closer and at almost near her ears, looking at her lowered eyes with great passion]

Kesar:(asked with a challenging yet soft voice):Kuch bhi donge?

[Gulaal couldnt resist the passion in his eyes and went almost blushed, reflection of the flames were litting their faces, looking deeply in to her eyes, Kesar gently carressed her arms and even without her knowledge a bangle was pulled off and passed fore through her arms]

...

Shall I continue?.

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