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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: prachurya
Wowie! I liked the whole concept. Brilliantly written. I just loved Kesar's dialogue- believe me its very difficult to sum up his turmoils but u did it so beautifully👏

Thank you prachuriya for liking it. Means a lot to me. I always wanted to see something like this in the real show, so gave it a try and I was not that confident. Any way nice to know that you liked it.

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Keithuu

@Keithuu

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Alanta...too good dear...😊
Main bhi hamesha se aisa hi kuch dekhna chahti thi kesgul ke beech mei ...thanx for those beautiful dialogues...loved the way u wrote it...
aur likhna...😳

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Shabenoor

@Shabenoor

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Amazing
Brilliant
Zabardast
i have no words to praise.please write a full ff.

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

⭐️Alanta..that was awesome.⭐️.brilliant👏

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Keithuu
Alanta...too good dear...😊
Main bhi hamesha se aisa hi kuch dekhna chahti thi kesgul ke beech mei ...thanx for those beautiful dialogues...loved the way u wrote it...
aur likhna...😳

Hamari soch kithni milthi hein na 😳

Thank you for liking

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Shabenoor
Amazing
Brilliant
Zabardast
i have no words to praise.please write a full ff.

Thank you dear for liking, but ff tho meri bus ki baath nahin, hein. I love random writtings😛 and reading ffs and stories😉

Edited by alanta - 13 years ago

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
⭐️Alanta..that was awesome.⭐️.brilliant👏

piu dear, thank you for liking yaar.

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Gman

@Gman

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Alanta, this concept is actually I was looking for which proceeds after their second marriage between two and yes you have fullfilled my another wish. 😃 Plz you have written it beautfully but I could not understand location and timing. But I loved it.👍🏼

Thank you dear. 😃

Edited by Gman - 13 years ago

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Gman
Alanta, this concept is actually I was looking for which proceeds after their second marriage between two and yes you have fullfilled my another wish. 😃 Plz you have written it beautfully but I could not understand location and timing. But I loved it.👍🏼

Thank you dear. 😃

Thanks dear. location: courtyard of Tallis burnt house

time: night

I have mentioned it in the previous chapter gina. missed you a lot😳

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Gman

@Gman

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: alanta

Thanks dear. location: courtyard of Tallis burnt house
time: night
I have mentioned it in the previous chapter gina. missed you a lot😳

Thank You Alanta, now i getting a bigger picture and location is perfect and timing is so right. 😉