Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks 🤗

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Originally posted by: Viditian1

Amazing...totally loved...waiting for the romance...cont soooon😃❤️

Thanks shaina for liking it will continue soon🤗

Aap v apna ss update krdo😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part-5

Everyone sighed in relief after all antra is out of their house and as well as from their lives it was not less than a festival for them.

After dinner

Guddan- chaliye ab ham sb ice parlour chalte hai

Dadi-kyu?

Guddan- ab finally bhootni aunty i mean antra ghar se chali gyi celebration to banta hai hai na jindal sahab.

Aj-he just pretending to be in khdoos mood and glared at her

Laxmi -plz Aj

Guddan-plz jindal sahab with a cute pout

Akshat chuckls -and says okk he so wanted to pull her cheeks and kiss her cheeks bt controled himself .

The whole family went to ice cream parlour and was enjoying eating ice cream bt there was one man its akshat who was bzy in admiring his wife who was eating ice cream like a child and she successfully finished 2 tubs of ice cream and was going to order one more this is when akshat stopped her.

Aj-aur kitna khaogi bimar par jaogi tum

Guddan- 2 hi to khaya hai ye last plz

Akshat-no ab ek v nhi chalo ghar av he wiped her mouth with his hanky all were admiring his care towards guddan he threatens her if she will show any fuss for not going to home he will cut the connection of tv

Guddan-nhi nhi jindal sahab ham chalte hai na aap jayiye bs dress saaf krke ate hai lekin tv ka connection mat katna bore ho jayenge ham she said all this with crocodile tears all chuckles at her drama.

Akshat-okk come quick we r waiting

After sometime everyone went to jindal bhawan and went to sleep at it was already late and they were tired

In Akshan bedroom

Akshan freshens up and went to sleep aftersometime guddan wakes up and check at Aj weather he is still awake or not after assuring that he is in deep slumber she went out of the room. Little did she know that akshat too pretended to be in deep sleep

Akshat- sits on the bed i know guddan tum qa krne wali ho mjhe tum pr pura doubt tha he without any delay went out of the room and went to kitchen he was in mood to yell at guddan bt what he just saw melted his heart and a smile adored in his lips guddan was eatinh ice cream and is sitting under the kitchen slabb in attempt to hide herself

Guddan -ha yha pr thik hai guddan nhi to jindal sahab dekh lenge to bahut darenge khadoos kahinke

Accha main khadoos hoon

Guddan gets scared by seeing akshat was sittimg beside her. She tried to hide her ice cream bt failed attempt as her face was clearly indicating that she is having ice cream

Guddan-ji...jindal sa...sahab aa..aap ...y...yha..soye nhi ..aap

Aj-ji nhi agat main so jata to aap yha pr maze se akele akele unlimited ice cream kha jati aur apna tabiat kharab kr leti guddan chalo ab aaj tumne waise v bahut ice cream kha liya mujhe pta tha tum yhi krogi isliye main av tk jaga tha q ki maine tumhe ice cream chupate hue dekh liya tha ab chalo room mein sone nhi to pta hai na main qa kr skta hoon ..

Guddan - nhi jana hai hame aap bahit khadoos ho ek ice cream bhi nhi khane dete ham nhi jaa rhe aap ke sath

Aj-guddan chalo aur tum aj 5 big tubs khatam kr chuki ho chalo

Guddan-ha aap hamre khane pr nazar lagate ho ab ham na khana khayenge aur na aapke sath jayenge

Aj-nhi jaogi r u sure

Guddan-apko hindi samjh nhi ati nhi aa rhe ham apke sath

Aj-you wish he nodded his head and pick her in his arms.

Guddan-utariye hame q uthaya hai hame aise

Akshat put her gently on bed and cover her with the blanket guddu ia just making faces

Akshat strictly say to her to sleep as she must have tired in the fiasco and she might worsen her health if she dont sleep she know what he can do and he getures towards tv

Guddan obediently closes her eyes akshat just smiled at her cute antics soon guddan drifted into a deep sleep akshat kissed her at forhead and in minds bahut jald tum in pillows ke jagah mre bahon me hogi he holds her hand with his and falls asleep while admiring her..

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Part-6 pg 9

Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
#54

Sooo cute...update..loved it...totally...u r far better writer than me...❤️❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

Sooo cute...update..loved it...totally...u r far better writer than me...❤️❤️

Thanks shaina🤗

Btw i m not a writter main to bs aisi hi.likh rhi hu 😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Thanks shaina🤗

Btw i m not a writter main to bs aisi hi.likh rhi hu 😆

but yuo write sooo welll👍🏼
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

but yuo write sooo welll👍🏼

Thanks

I m glad u liked it😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks🤗

Will continue soon😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks sonal🤗

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