Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 7

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Part 6

In akshan room its morning time and akshat was first one to wake up he smiles looking at guddan sun's ray was falling over her face it was making her angelic face more cute he kissed her forhead and cheeks akshat went to washroom after sometime he have his breakfast and said everyone not to disturb guddan as it is 7 'O' clock in the morning . He then went to his restaurent.

Guddu woke up at 10am and sees the bed is empty jindal sahab itni subah subah kha chale gye she sees the time and bite her togue are guddan jindal sahab jaldi nhi tu late uthi hai. She then took her cloths and went to freshen up

At restaurent Akshat is missing guddan and thinking how to propose guddan he then calls revti comes

Ravti-may i come in jiju

Aj- ha aoon na have a sit.

Revti-aapne mjhe itna urgently bulaya sb thik hai na di thik hai na

Aj-haa tumhari di bilkul thik hai actually mjhe tum se important baat krni hai samjh nhi aa rha kaise kru actually mjhe tumse help chahiye...

Revti- aap boliye na jiju dont hesitate assume me as ur younger sister aur jo bolna hai bol dijiye

Aj- actually sbko pta hai ki main guddan se kitna pyaar krta hu except guddan main use batana chahta hu apne dil ki feeling pr darr lagta hai qa vo mjhe ek dost se jyada dekhti hai khi pyaar ke chakkar mein main uski dosti na kho du qa pta go mri feelings jan ne ke baad mjhe chor ke chali jaye i really love her very much nhi reh skta main uske bina main..

Revti- jiju main samjh skti hu apka darr waise main di ke baare mein apko kuch batana chahta hu shayad is se apko idea mile apko qa krna hai.

Aj-ha bolo na revti

Revti- jiju meri di k maa ke jaane ke baad unhone sbke taane hi sune hai hamesha takleef hi jhela hai mri maa ne unhe kv v apni beti nhi mana har roz apni galtiya unse jabardasti.likhwa kr unka self confidence todi rahi.

Aj remember guddan writting mistake chits and her crying face

Revti continues apko pta hai maa jab v unhe mentally torture krti thi na di use v pyaar samjh leti thi aur papa ne kbhi stand v nhi liya unka sirf maa hi nhi sb ne di ko kisi na kisi tarah takleef pahuchayi mri di ko ye tak nhi pta yha tk ki unka aaj se pehle koi boyfriend v nhi tha pyaar kya hota hai unhe nhi pta.

Aj was pained to know that his guddan had endured so much till now now he know what he have to do now

Aj-thanks revti mri help krne ke liye mjhe pta hai ab mjhe qa krna hai.

Revti-thanks mat boliye jiju bs mri di ko unke his se ka pyaar mil jaye aur vo khush rhe is se jyada mjhe kuch nhi chahiye ab main chalti hu bye.

Aj- mra driver tumhe chor dega no arguments bye take care

Revti leaves from there Aj sits on his chair and took out a photo its guddan's photo

Aj- maine socha tha ki main apni feelings tumse confess krunga lekin ab mjhe tumhara confidence jodna hai aur sath mein tumhare man mein mre liye pyaar jagana hai he said it with a detemined face

Back in jindal house.

Guddan comes in kitchen to help others

Laxmi-are sasu ma aap uth gyi aap nashta kr lijiye pehle

Guddu nodes guddan was about to have her break fast then she remembers last night incidence where she vowed not to eat anything when her jindal sahab stopped her from eating ice cream

Guddan- nhi nhi krenge ham nashta ham khana v nhi khayenge jindal sahab ne hame ice cream khane se roka tha na unhe mra khana pasand nhi ab se main kuch v nhi khaungi and she doent eat anything the whole day .

Laxmi notices this bt she made excuses and in ni8 she went to bed and tries to sleep bt ahe was hungry

Guddan- are baapre bahut bhuk lagi hai hamne hamne gussw mein keh to diya ki kuch nhi khayenge ham lekin bhooke rehna hamse nhi ho paa rha she heard Aj's car coming towards home she pretend to be in sleep

Due to meeting Aj was late he arrived in the room and sees guddan in sleep he was dissapointed as he didnt got any chance to talk with her and she is asleep now he then changes his dress and went to studyroom for somework and guddu falls asleep while pretending

Aj comes and says to himself- aaj to main guddan se bilkul v baat nhi kr paya qa kismat hai akshat jindal koi baat nhi kl koi important meeting nhi hai kal main guddan ke sath time spend kr skta hu he smiles and kissed her forhead and went to sleep while admiring her it was his daily routine afterall.

Ps- hope u liked it i know this part is boring bt next part will be funny a bit

Plz ignore the mistakes and do share ur views


Part-7 pg 10

Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update

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Small and cute update🥳

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But it was spectacularly Awesome....loved ittttttt....cont soon❤️

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Originally posted by: Bhumi1992

Awosome

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

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Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: srain10

Small and cute update🥳

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