Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed*

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Note-Its all the same but unlike the show here akshat believed guddan he knows antra's reality and all the family altogether does the drama to put antra behind the bar and confession is still pending though Aj realised his eternal love for his guddan but guddan is still unaware about the feeling called love Akshat will try everything to make her naive wife to realise her love towards him so here we go

PART-1

Its antra and akshat's marriage Akshat is restless as they didnt collected any proof against antra many things were revolving in his mind weather their plan will succeed and they will be able to provide rawat justices what if he ends up marrying antra no he cant as he only loves his guddan but where is she his eyes were finding her but alas he couldnt find her since morning last time he met her when she said no actually ordered him not to back out from any rituals and dont let antra aunty to doubt on them she will manage all the things ''where did this girl go without informing me is she fine khi fir koi musibat mein to nhi par gyi' his mind taught he shrugged it but he cant deny the possibility the picture of guddu being admitted in hospital due to perv kaan still haunts him a mere taught of guddu trapped in any problem is enough to give him heart attack one part of his heart says to leave all this and went to his love before any problem touches her other part of his heart didnt let him do that it commands him to follow guddam plan Antra has given enough pain to his family specially his guddan on whom he cant even tolerate a single drop of tears in the eyes no he cant spare her for her deeds his trance of taught broked when durga comes to him and says it muharat time lets go to mandap dont worry have faith in god he will be with us and sasuma will do something Aj nods his head in positive he leaves for the mandap but not before praying to lord krishna for his guddan safety''hey bhagwan mjhe nhi pta meri guddan kha hai aur qa krne wali hai pr jaha bhi ho safe ho uski taqat ban na aur uska ye viswas banaye rakhna ki us se sab ho payega'' .

Akshat comes to mandap Antra is superhappy as according to her, her plan is being executed without any hurdles ,hurdles that is guddan bt where is she antra thinks in her mind kha gyi ye larki khi kuch gadbad to nhi krne wali, nhi she cant do it as she have no support system and right now no one will believe her even akshat without any proof and she hasnt left any proof perhaps she must be crying and cursing her poor faith and me for snatching her love poor girl even her husband and family didnt believed her for whom she almost sacrificed her life anyways i m happy afterall i m not only going to have a husband who will do everything to keep me happy as he is angry as well as guilt-ridden i will also become the owner of his property and now no one can stop me will this evil taught and a smirk in her face for her vicrory little she did know that her smirk and win will soon turn into defeat and frustration

Akshat who is sitting beside her is giving his best performance of acting like a bali ka bakrahe somehow felt the evil taught of antra''tumhe jitna khush hona hai ho jao antra q ki bahut jald tmhari ye jeet haar mein tabdil ho jayegi''

Durga ties the gatbandhan laxmi is also standing beside her Akshat looked at them bt they with a nod assured him that everything will be alright and they ask him to carry out the rituals antra make him wear varmala when it is Aj's turn he acted as he is tying around her neck but broke it same as what he did to mangalsutra before antra is shocked and ask him whether he is going to marry her or not . Akshat says sure in mind he says in ur dreams antra, antra shrugged her suspicion and concentrate on other rituals pandit asl them to take pheras.

Antra was happy whereas Akshat is restless and is waiting for his guddan he taught if guddan doesnt arrive for some more moment he will backout from the marriage as soon as they r going to take their very first phera.

''Ruk jayiye ye shadi nhi ho skti' a male voice come

Everyone turn their head some is shocked and some is happy but antra is scared while akshat have mixed reaction happy plus shocked


.-------------------------------------------------------------------INDEX

Part-1 pg-1

Part-2 pg-2

Part-3 pg~5

Part-4 pg- 6

Part-5 pg- 8

Part-6 pg9

Part-7 pg-10

Part-8 pg-12

Part-9 pg-14

Part-10 pg-16

Part-11 pg-17

Part-12 pg-18

Part-13 pg-19

Part-14 pg-19

Part-15 pg-20

Part-16 pg-22

Part-17 pg-24

Part-18 pg-25

Part-19 pg-27

Part-20 pg28

Part-21 pg30

pg-22 pg 31

part 23 pg31

Last part pg 32

Edited by Kammy02 - 5 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very beautifully written Kajal🤗

Please continue soon

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Very beautifully written Kajal🤗

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Sooo gud.....awesome ..loved it ...cont soon❤️

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Its good kajal

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Hey

This is the first SS/FF/OS I am reading on this forum....

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Interesting

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Sooo gud.....awesome ..loved it ...cont soon❤️

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