Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 15

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part-15

After their heartful conversation Akshat felt happy both of them have then their dinner and went to bed for the sleep bt akshat was thinking about revti's word.

Flashback

Akshat- revti guddan ka bday 2 din baad hai na main uske liye surprise party organise krna chahta hu aur tmhe isme meri help krni hogi.

Revti- uska koi fayda nhi hai jiju as she never ever had celebrated her bday and i dont know the reason bt she remain upset in her bday or torture herself by either closing herself in the room where all her mistake chits are there or she went out for some other place .

Akshat -dont u all tried to know about the reason .

Revti- i think papa knows about the reason even mami knows about it and used to taunt her when they r alone bt di and he remain silent about this matter even me and papa have talked to her to be happy in her bday bt she dont want to listen and once me along with some of her frnds organised a surprise party u cant imagined what would had happened.

Akshat- what had happened?

Revti- di was so angry and was crying that she became histerical and ruined all the decoration and then fainted her condition was so much worsen that we had to admit her in hospital so i would suggest plz wont bring this topic in front of her.

Flashback ends

Akshat was in deep thought he was very much shocked to know about this he never had imagined that this bubbly wife of him who just find excuses for celebration never celebrated her bday or he can say hate her own birthday bt y while he was in his deep thought guddu snapped at him due to which his trence broken

Guddan- ab qa soch rhe hain jindal sahab aap beech beech mein kha kho jate hain qa sochte rhte hai aap.

Aj- kuch nhi tum av tk soyi nhi.

Guddan- nhi jindal sahab hame neend nhi aa rhi .

Aj- koshis kro neend aa jayegi.

G- nhi aa rha hai neend tb se koshis hi to kr rhi hu nhi samjh ata qa aapko

Aj,- are gussa mat kro tmhari tabiyat thik nhi hua hai. Accha ye batvo ki tumhara dream qa tha qa tum bachpan se hi actress ban na chahti thi.

G- na main to engineer ban na chahti thi isliye ek baar admission v liya tha fir ek din she remembers something and her eyes become moist and face fall down. Aj notices this.

Aj- ek din qa guddan.

G- kuch v to nhi bs samjh aa gya ki parhai hamse na ho payega isliye hamne acting chose krliya waise v bacpan se hame acting ka bahut shauk tha aur usme parhai v jyada nji krno paregi aur acting mein to ham mahir hai she tried to smile bt it doesnt reach in her eyes.

Aj- accha.

G- ha chalo ab mjhe sach mein neend aa rha hai gud ni8. Guddan closes her eyes and soon drifted into sleep due to medicine effect bt sleep was far away from akshat's eyes many unanswered question was there which he have to find out first the reason behind guddan's hating her own bday and y did she left her study. The answers could be only given by guddan bt she will never tell him

He was thinking all this suddenly guddan started blabbering in her sleep.

G- ''hamne kuch v nhi kiya'' nhi sb hamari wajah se hua hai .

Aj -shayad koi boora sapna hai he patted her cheeck and tried to wake her up he succeded in waking her up. Guddan was really scared . Aj hug her

Aj,-koi boora sapna tha qa.

Guddan simply nodes her head

Aj -chalo ab so jao ab nhi ayega boora sapna

Guddan hold his hand,- ham aapse kuch bole gussa to nhi kroge na aap.

Aj- nhi kroonga gussa ab bolo .

G- qa kl ki tarah hi ham apke pass so jaye agar apko boora nhi lage to.

Aj smiles and says ofcourse guddu slept in his arms .

Aj was thinking suddenly he remembers revti's word

Aj in mind papa in sabhi ke jawab shayad de paye mjhe unse baat krni paregi vo v kal hi waha se mjhe kuch to pta chalega iske alawa aur v kuch hai jo guddan mjhse chipa rhi hai iske baare mein pta lagana parega with this he too drifted in peaceful sleep so once again they slept in each other embrace without having pillow boundry between them..

At morning guddan woke up she couldnt find Aj anywhere it was already late so Aj might have went to restro she thought she again had her breakfast in her room because she was not allowed to do any work and was strictly told to take rest she had no other option bt to oblige bt this time Aj had taken proper care so she dont feel bored he had kept video games her fav music CD , bollywood magzines and some cassades of movie bt she was also told to use this in a limit and bahu will check on her sometimes bahu too joined her so that she dont feel bored

In. Akshat's office.

Aj have recently came from a meeting and was waiting for someone then bhushan and revti enters .

Bhusan - deri ke liye maafi chahte hai damadji traffic ke wajah se late ho gya. Yes akshat was waiting for them only.

Aj- maafi q mang rhe hai papa aapne koi der nhi ki mai v av av meeting complete krke aya hu. Aiye na baithiye aap dono.

Bhushan- vo sb to thik hai damadji pr aapne hame itna urgent boolaya sb thik hai na guddan kaisi hai.

Aj- sb thik hai papa aur maine aapko yha pr kuch khas baat janne ke liye boolaya hai guddan se related.

Bhushan - ha damadji puchiye qa janna hai apko guddan ke baare mein.

Aj- apko to pta hai kl guddan ka bday hai aur maine socha tha guddan ko surprise party dene ke liye bt revti ne mjhe sach bta diya main aapse janna chahta hu ki aisi qa wajah hai ki guddan apme janmadin ko nhi manana chahti hai aisi kon si takleef hai jo usne khud ke andar daba kr rakha hai. He also asked about her education

After hearing akshat's question his head bows his eyes became moist.

Bhushan told the reason behind guddu's not celebrating her bday which shocks Akshat very much tears were flowing from his eyes.

Bhushan and revti left from there Aj wipes his tears and calls someone.

. ignore the mistakes and do share ur views😊...


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Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

First of all sry for not being able to reply earlier...i was a bit busy..but i mfree now😃..every part was just❤️

Super se bi upar wale parts the saare..loved it..👏

Cont soon plz😛😃

Next part updated

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Next part updated

Do check😳

awesome part...loved it....aj would defi atley revive guddu from her past..plz jldi suspense open kro ki kya tha guddan ka past...i loved each and every line of the part..❤️😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

awesome part...loved it....aj would defi atley revive guddu from her past..plz jldi suspense open kro ki kya tha guddan ka past...i loved each and every line of the part..❤️😃

Glad u liked it🤗dont worry suspense jaldi khul jayega😛thanks again for liking it

Ab aap v apna ss jaldi continue kro waiting

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Posted: 6 years ago

"Cliff hanger" kyu?

Amazing update👏

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for liking it🤗

Will continue soon😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Glad u liked it🤗dont worry suspense jaldi khul jayega😛thanks again for liking it

Ab aap v apna ss jaldi continue kro waiting

dont wry ..jld hi updste krti hu..wrk in prgress😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

dont wry ..jld hi updste krti hu..wrk in prgress😃

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks for liking it 🤗

Will continue soon😊

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