Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 13

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhumi1992

Amazing part

I love this part how nicely aj conviced guddu and careing.

I must aj will gave punished kaushlya very well

Akshan scence are superb

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Lovely update👍🏼👏

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Part-12

At morning Akshat is first one to wake up he smiles looking at guddan she was snuggling into him like a cute kitten he tug her hair and gently make her lay on pilllow and went to washroom after sometime he gets a call guddu wakes up due to phone ring Aj thanks the caller.

Guddan- jindal sahab itni jaldi restro jaa rhe hai aj

Akshat smiles-nhi main aaj office nhi jaa rha as aj koi important meeting nhi hai main ghar se hi kaam krlunga tum itni jaldi q uth gyi so jaaon

Guddan -nhi jindal sahab need nhi aa rha waise v subah ho gyi vo chodiye ye batayie aap kha jaa rhe ho.

Akshat-ek bahut important kaam se jaa rha hu kisiko uski kiye ki saza deni hai kuch der mein aa jaunga tum breakfast krlo main bahuon se mangwa deta hu

Guddan doesnt say anything just nodes her head she is still in trauma and didnt recovered yet

Aj understood he went somewhere bt not before pecking her forhead it shocks guddan she cant figure out the reason behind her jindal sahab's behaviour

In Gupta house kausalya enters in the room as soon as she enters she gets shock as she saw a men sitting on the couch

K- da...damadji aa..aap..y...yha (yes the person is Akshat jindal)

A-ji ha sasuma main yha i think mjhe yha pr ane ki izzazat lene ki zaroorat nhi hai na..

K-ye aap kaisi baat kr rhe hai apna hi ghar samjhiye.

A- apna ghar samjhu ya mra ghar hi ghar hai aur i dont think ki mjhe mere ghar me ane ke liye kisi ki izzazat lene ki zaroorat hai am i right sasu ma he was sitting on the couch and had kept his leg on the table .

K- what nonsense is this its my house ha aap is ghar ki beti ke pati hai bt iska matlb ye nhi ki aap kuch v bolenge.

A- akshat angrily hits the table which breaks down and cause kaushalya to mobe backward kon si beti ki baat kr rhi hai aap jise apni beti to door ek insan tk nhi samjha ek dushman v apse behtar hoga are apne to apne pan ke aad mein uska bachpan uska selfconfidence sb tod dala hai usne aapko apni ma jaroor samjha apki respect di aur badle mein apne qa kiya use bepanah dard de diya . Aur aap jinda bachi hai na mrs gupta to sirf do wajah se ek aap aurat hai aur akshat jindal aurton pr hath nhi uthata aur dusrinq ki apki itni nafrar ke bawjood mri patni guddan apki respect krti hai aur main nhi chahta ki use takleef ho par iska matlb ye nhi ko aap bach jayengi.

K-bas damadji bahut sun liya maine aap mere hi ghar pr....before she continue her word akshat stop her by showing his palm

A- aap bahut badi galatfehmi mein hai mrs gupta let me clear one thing this house is no more belongs to u its belong to men if u remember ki aapne apni property mortgage rakhi thi for revti's education and it had been quite a long time aapme paise nhi chukaya and the person whom u gave the property urgently needed money so i did the honour and now this house belongs to me so if i want i cam throw u out of this house bt i will not do it as i dont want to punish other for ur deeds and mrs gupta i m here to warn u dont u dare dont u dare to show ur face to guddan and stay away from my family and my guddan as much as possible otherwise i will do something which u never imagined.

K was scared bt mustered some courage- aa..aap mu..mujhe aise dara nhi skte vo v us guddan ke liye are vo manhoos hai pehle apni maa ko kha gyi ab vo apke peeche pari hai us se kuch nhi ho payega (akshat was boilingbin anger)and vo sirf paison ke liye....

Bas mrs gupta roared an angry akshat anger is clearly visible through his redblood shot eyes he raised his hand to slap her bt stop clenched his feast and broked another table kaushalya hissed she was really scared now.

A-apne socha v kaise ki aap apni muh se itni ghatiya baaten bolengi meri guddan ke khilaf aur main chup reh jaunga she is not only my wife bt also my life my everything jis ladki ko aap manhoos bol rhi hai na aaj usi ladki ke wajah se jinda hai aur main chod rha hu apko warna sara indore janta hai ki akshat jindal qa kr skta hai aap to mri guddan ki gunehgar hai isliye apko saja v dene ka haq use hi hai aur ek baat ye jo apne kuch na ho pane ka sabd use suna kr diya hai na bahut jald main us dard ko apne pyar se bhar doonga aur sbko ye sabit krke dikhaoonga ki Guddan Akshat Jindal se sab ho pta hai akshat leaves the house after warning her leaving a frightened and shivering kaushalya behind.

In jindal bhawan

Guddan is sitting on the jhoola looking at the mistake wall and remembering the hurtful words bu kaushalya akshat was seeing this from some distance suddenly she stands and goes to her cupboard and started packing her bags.while packing bags she was about to fall as she still feeling guddh Akshat quickly went to her and prevent her from falling he make guddu stand.

A - ye tum qa kr rhi ho guddan . Guddan ?

G- bag pack kr rhe hai jindal sahab

A- vo mjhe v dikh rha hai pr q?

G- q ki ham ye ghar chod kr jaa rhe hai . Akshat steps backwords his heart clenched by a mere thought of guddu leaving her bt he soon composed himself as he understood her situation and what she is going through.

A- mjhe chor kr jana chahti ho apne jindal sahab ko tum kisi aur ke galtiyon ke liye ham sb jo tumhare apne hai balki tumhare dost bhi hai unhe chor kr jana chahti ho bina ye bataye ki ham sb ki kya galti hai aur ek baat qa tumse ham sb se door rhna ho payega.

Guddan now breaks down and hugs akshat akshat hugs her back and consols her

G-nhi ho payega hamse aap sb se khaas kr ke hamare sbse acche dost yani ki aapse lekin ye hi aapsb ke liye thik hoga aap sb se door rhna mre liye namumkin hai pr aap sb ki bhalayi isime hai.

A- aur tumhe aisa q lagta hai ki ham sb tumhare jane se khush rahenge.

G- q ki ham manhoos hai jindal sahab ham is ghar ke layak nhi hai kuch nhi ho pata ham se ham sirf galtiyan hi kr skte hai aur aur hamari shadi hamara mtlb hai maine aapse dhoke se shadi krke aapki jindagi barbad krdi apke upar bojh hai ham ham sirf logon ki takeef ki wajah hi ho skte hai.

Aj sushed her - bas mrs jindal bahut bol liya apne koi bhi mri biwi aur meri dost ke baare mein ye main bardasht nhi krunga us se kuch na ho payega bolne ka haq kisi ke pass nhi hai khud uske pass v nhi hai aur tum khud ko manhoos bol rhi ho na tumhe shayad nhi pata tum qa ho is ghar ke liye especially mere liye tum meri khushi ki aur meri jeene ki wajah ho mre andhere.se bhari zindagi mein tum roshni ho aur agar ainda tumne mujhe chor kr jane ka socha bhi na to mjse boora koi nhi hoga u get it.

Guddan smiles and nodes her head akshat felt happy seeing her smile he is determind to bring guddan's self confidence back...

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Part-13 ,pg-19

Edited by Kammy02 - 6 years ago


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Part-13

As akshan parted themselves .

Akshat- guddan tum mjhe apna dost manti ho na

Guddan- haa aap to mere sbse acche wale dost ho.

Akshat smiles and ask do u trust me,?

Guddan-ye v koi puchne wali baat hai hame khud se jyaada aap pr bharosa hai jindal sahab

Akshat- qa main jo bolunga tum vo krogi.

Guddan- aap ek baar bol kr to dekhiye.

Akshat- promise

Guddan- promise aur guddan apna kiya hua promise nhi todti ab boliye qa krna hai hame.

Akshat- to thik hai chalo mere sath he hold her wrist and take her with him to the balcony near the mistake wall

As soon as they went there guddu's past started haunting her and was about to fall akshat hold her.

Guddan- aap hame yha pr q laye kuch galti ho gyi hai qa hamse

Akshat sushed her- galti to tumse hui hai vo v khud ko takleef pahuchane ki galti aur aise is tarah apni galtiya diwar pr chipkane ki guddan main tumko 7 month se jaanta hoon aur itna to main acchi tarah janta hoon ki mri guddan kv v itni sari galtiyan nhi kr skti aur main yeh bhi janta hoon aur samjhta hoon ki tumhare dard aur ansu ke karan ye chits hai guddan aur tumhara ye dard mjhe v dard deta hai isliye main chahta hu ki tum apne dard ki wajah ko hamesha hamesha ke liye khatam kr do.

Guddan is in tears her hand is trembling.- jindal sahab ham ye kaise hamse nhi ho payega ye.

Aj- maine qa kha tha tumse ainda ye kv mat kehna ki tumse na ho payega q ki i trust u aur mri guddan se sb ho skta hai agar tumhe khudpr bahrosa nhi hai to mujhpr to hai na believe on the trust which i have for u . He takes her hand guddu looks at him with teary eyes they extirpate the chits from the wall together aftersometime Aj left her hand guddu removes some chits together bt again falls weak Aj again holds her hand and they together removes all the chits from the wall

Guddan looks at the wall and then to her mother's potrait and to her jindal sahab she breaks down and fall on her knees Aj sits beside her wipes her tears and took her into his embrace.

Akshat- rona band kro ab abhi tumhe is wall ko phir se bharna hai guddan look at him with a question mark on her face Aj says ha is deewal ko tumhe fir se bharna hoga lekin is baar apni galtiyon se nhi balki apni kamyabi se jaise tum roz apni galtiya likhti thi ab se tum roz apni kamyabi likhogi aur roz

Guddan-pr hamse ye ?

Akshat -tumse ho payega guddan always remember tumse sab ho payega aur tumhara ye dost tumhare sath hamesha rahega .

Guddan smiles wipes her tears and says mjhe apke yakeen pr yakeen hai jindal sahab jab aap hamare sath hai to ye hamse jaroor ho payega.

Akshat again hold her hand took her with him from there while crushing all the miatake chits beneath their feet. Akshat then ordered the servants to clear the balcony.

Durga and laxmi come to their room with two plates with her and keep it to the table akshat ask ye qa hai durga bahu.

Durga- Aj ye aap donon ke liye nashta hai.

Aj- guddan ne break fast nhi kiya av tk.

Laxmi- nhi Aj hamne bahut samjhaya unhe lekin vo nhi mani keh rhi thi ki vo breakfast aapke sath hi krengi.

Durga- ji Aj laxmi shi keh rhi hai sasu ma hamri baat to nhi mani ab aap hi dekh lijiye they leave from there.

Aj glared at guddan and guddan holds her ears and wishpers a sorry

Aj- seriously guddan tumhara fever abhi v hai chot ayi hai sir pr aur tum apna khayal nhi rakh rhi aise kaise chalega.

Guddan-sorry na waise v mra khayal rakhne ke liye aap ho na aur aap mjhpr q chilla rhe ho apne kon sa breakfast kiya hai.

Aj-ek min tabiyat tumhari kharab hai meri nhi

They continue their cute banter. Aftersometime

Aj-maaf krdo mjhe mri hi galti thi.

Guddan-haa apki hi galti hai ab chalo hame bhook lagi hai breakfast krlete hai

Aj- sure. They have their brealfast together after they finished their breakfast guddu takes the plate with her Aj stops her ye qa kr rhi ho tum.

Guddan-plates le jaa rhi hu aur qa kr hi hu.

Aj,- vo mjhe v dikhta hai tum plates rakho main ye lekr jata hu.

Guddan-lekin

Aj-lekin vekin kuch nhi tum aaram kro main ye lekr atat hu no arguments. Guddu obliges Aj left the room with plates.

Guddu is sitting on the bed and smile thinking about Aj her smile widens she remembers Aj helping her to remove chits.

Aj comes and sat beside her he notice her being lost in some other world

Akshat- qa hua guddan bahut khoyi khoyinse lag rhi ho.

Guddan- haa aj ham bahut khush hai jindal sahab aisa lag rha hai ki hamare upar se bahut bhari bojha hat gya bahut accha lag rha hai hame thank u .

Aj- kisi bahut intelligent insaan ne mjhse kha tha that friendship mein no sorry no thank u. Guddan giggles and Akshat smiles Akshat then remember something and returned with medicine in his hand guddan sees this.

Guddan- nhi jindal sahab hame nhi pina ye bahut krwa hai ye and runs from their.

Aj,- dekho jid mat kro pilo ye tmhari tabiyat aisi bhi thik nhi hai .

Guddan- nhi aap hamare dost ho na plz nhi

Aj- accha thik hai agar tum ye pilogi na to mre pass tumhare liye kuch hai.

Guddan- mre liye qa hai mre liye.

Aj-pehle ye and take the medicine to her guddans makes horrible faces Aj chuckles tumhari aise face dekhkr dawai ki karwahat nhi khatam hoga guddu dranks it in one go.

Guddan- ab hamara gift .

Akshat gives her a chocolates guddu excitedly hugs him and kiss him on his cheek she again bit her tongue in embarrasement bt unlike previous time she bravely faced him

Guddan- to qa hua hamne apko kiss kiya apne v to hane kiss kiya tha kal hamne apna badla liya ab hisab barabar

Akshat- maine tumhe av kuch kaha qa

Guddan- nhi to agar aap bolte to isliye pehle hamne hi bol diya and she turned her face to other side while akshat chuckles at her antics.

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