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Part 13

Same day at Bhatnagar house

Angad- bhai paka yeh dono direct yahi ane wali hai, ni matlab kahi hume hi inko lene na jana pade

Akshat- arey ni Dr. Gupta ne kaha tha ki vo aur poonam ko koi kaam hai vo khatm kr ke dono direct yahi aa jayengi, pata ni aaj yeh Miss. Punctual late kes3 ho gayi

Guddan- koi late ni huwe hai hum, humne kaha tha ki kaam khatma kr ke hum apko yaha milenge, time ni bataya tha ki kb kilenge

Akshat- oh god!! Its impossible to win over you

Guddan- so don't ever try this na

Akshat- help krne ayi ho ya tane marne

Guddan- suruwat kisne ki thi

Akshat- oh really toh ab galti meri hai

Guddan- offcourse

Mrs. Bhatnagar- bus kro tum dono yaha bahar hi ladte rahoge ya andar chal kr apna saman set kroge

Guddan- ji, chaliye (looking towards akshat)

Akshat- after you

So the whole day all the four where busy in arranging the room they becomes very tired to decides to take some rest

Poonam-guys pls thodi dher rest kr lete hai na pls

Angad- haan yaar bhaut thak gaye hai ab toh needh bhi ane lagi hai

Guddan- thik hai thodi dher rest kr lo phir kaam suru krte hai

Poonam- ji sukriya apka

Mrs. Bhatnagar- acha bacho tum log aram kro main tum sab ke liye coffee bana lati hoon

Guddan- main apki help kr deti hoon chaliye

Mrs. Bhatnagar- chalo phir

Suddenly guddan's phone beeped and a message appered

"Hey miss gupta coffee thode pyaar se banana vase bhi I don't like bitter things" 😜😜 Akshat

Guddan looked her phone with annoyed face, ab toh esi coffee banaungi Dr. Akshat ki ap lifetime yaad rakhenge. She put her phone back and went to kitchen

There angad asked akshat- kyu pareshan krta hai bechari ko

Akshat- tujhe kya problem hai ja kr apni wali pr dhayan de na mere aur guddan ke mamle mai padne ki zaroorat ni hai tumhe.

Agand- on fine pr kahi jayada pareshan mat krna dekh na kitni gusse mai gayi hai

Poonam- ji Dr. Akshat sambhal ke rahiyega jis tarike se yeh gayi hai na pakka iske dimag mai kuch chal raha hai

Akshat (in his mind) - I know she got annoyed when she saw my message. Lagta hai bhaut kuch hone wala hai Dr. Akshat Jindal be prepared yourself. He thought and simle

In kitchen guddan to herself- samjhte kya hai apne apko, while making coffee

Poonam ( came in the kitchen and said with shocked face) - tum coffee bana logi na, yeh namak kyun dal rahi ho isme dhayan kaha hai tumhara

Guddan- unhe mithi coffee pini thi na ab dekho kya hota hai with an evil smirked on her face

Poonam (with serious face)- guji tu na sach mai pagal hai itni choti si baat ka issue bana rahi hai

Guddan - tum humari dost ho ya unki, adding more salt in it ab chup kro aur chalo sabko coffee pilate hai aur khabardar jo apna muh kholne ki khosis ki toh yeh namak wali coffee tumhe hi pila denge

Poonam- guji ek baar phir se soch lo

Guddan- daro mat aur chup kr ke chalo humare saath

Both come to the hall and pass the coffee to everyone Angad was about to took the cup when guddan stop him

Guddan- ni in a loud tone

All looks towards her

Guddan- vi yeh Dr. Akshat ke liye hai unhome thodi meetha jayada dalne ke liye bola tha na isliye, vase mitti coffee banane ka bol ke kaha chale gaye

Angad- vo uper room mai gaya hai change krne

Guddan- ok toh hum unki coffee unhe vahi de ate hai ( in mind- chalo yeh toh aur bhi acha hai humara kaam bui ho jayega aur kisi ko kuch pata bhi ni chalega)

She went to his room and knocked at the door "come in" he said and she went inside the room and her jaw dropped. He was standing without shirt

Guddan was looking him with wide eyes. His wide chest and six packs abs looked like he was spend lots of time in jyms

Guddan(to herself)- hmm body toh achi hai, then shrug her thought kya sochne lagi tum guddan.Akshat noticed her and smiled

Akshat- I know main kich jayada hi hot hoon but mujhe iss tarah mat dekho (said with mischevious smile). He came to her and whispered in her ear "kuch kuch hota hai"

Shiver ran in her body and her face becomes red

Guddan (looked at him) - le lijiye apki coffee and turns to go

Akshat- thanks for coffee

Guddan ( with smirked)- its my pleasure, in mind muskura lijiiye Dr. Akshat jitna muskurana hai muskura lijiye ek baar ap yeh coffee piyenge na toh muskurana bhul jayenge that's guddan's promise

Akshat (in mind) - kitni cute lag rahi thi blus krti huwi maan toh kr raha tha ki abhi uske gaal kheech loon and sip the coffee and in a second he threw it, yuk yeh coffee mai namak...hmmm not bad Dr. Gupta achi khosis thi apki

There in the hall poonam and angad was laughing as angad over hear the guddan and poonam's conversation in the kitchen and he know what akshat was doing in the room, when he comes down

Agand whispered to akshat- kesi lagi namak wali coffee and laughed

Akshat- hans lo beta has lo mera bhi time ayega

Angad- vase tumhe hi mitthi coffee pini thi na bahut pasand hai na mitthi coffee toh ab main kya krun

Poonam (to tease him)- vase humari guddan coffee bahut acha banati hai kyun hai na Dr. Akshat

At evening suddenly its start heavy rain outside

Poonam- oh shit itni tez barish ab ghar kese jayenge

Guddan- thodi der wait kr lete hai kya pata barish ruk jaye

Then guddan phone ring

Guddan- papa ka phone hai ek min, ji papa

Bhushan- beta tun aur poonam kaha ho

Guddan- papa humbe bataya tah na hum Mrs. Bhatnagar ke ghar pr hai vo humre ek friend ki shift krwa rahe the unke yah toh abhi yahi hai bus thodi dher se nikal rahe hai bus barish ki vajah se ruk gaye hai

Bhushan- thik hai beta toh tum doni aj vahi ruk jao aj mausam kcuh thik ni hai bhaut tej barish ho rahi hai poonam ke ghar se bhi phone aya tha vo bhi yahi bol rhae the ki tum dono jaha ho vahi ruk jao thik hai

Guddan- thik hai papa

Poonam- kya huwa kya kaha uncle ne

Guddan- vo papa bol rahe the ki hume yahi ruk jana chahiye mausuk bhaut hi kharab ho raha hai toh

Mrs. Bhatnagar- main toh kab se bol rhai thi pr tum hi meri baat ni maan rhai thi na ab toh ghr se bhi yahi bol rahe hai toh ruk jao na

Guddan-ji

At night on dinner, all comes to the dinning table except akshat

Angad to poonam- yeh akshat kaha rah gaya lagta hai coffee abhi bhi uske gale mai hi atki huwi hai.(both giggled)

Guddan( thinks)- lagta hai kuch jayda hi hogaya hai hume dekhna chahiye suddenly she hear someone whispered in her ear 'kisi ko dhoond rahi ho' and give a smile to her

Akshat- late ane ke liye sorry ek call aa gaya tha toh...

Mrs. Bhatnagar- koi baat ni beta beth jao dinner kr lete hai

Akshat- ji

Mrs. Bhatnagar- kisi ko namak chahiye

Akshat ko, Dr. Akshat ko all said together and chuckled, guddan chuckled and looked at him he gave her death glares. And then she ate her dinner silently as his presence give her goosebumps. After dinner

Angad- yaar bhaut bore ho rahe hai chalo koi game khelte hai

Poonam- no pls Sir aur mam sone gaye hai agar game khelenge toh shoor ki vajah se unki needh kharab ho jayegi

Angad- toh movie kesa idea hai

Poonam- superb idea vase bhi hum dono ko toh bachpan se hi late night movie dekhne mai bada hi maza ata hai kyu guji

Angad- ok toh chalo phir humare room mai jo tv hai vaha chalte hai pr kaun si movie

Poonam- hmm barish ka itna romantic mausum hai toh koi romantic movie hi dekhte hai naand she chuckled and angad, akshat and guddan laughed together, embrarrsement was clearly showed on their face

Poonam- toh romantic movie done

Akshat( looking towards guddan)- ni abhi romance ka mood ni hai

Poonam notice that but couldn't react

Angad- ok toh horror movie dekhte hai

"Done"-All together

All are watching movie suddenly electricity gone angad and poonam went to check the fuse and Akshat was already outside the room as he get some call

Akshat- kya huwa kaha ja rhe ho

Angad- fuse check krne

Akshat- do log fuse check krne ja rahe hai jot nad haan vase Dr. Gupta kaha hai usse bhi le jate

Poonam- oh shit

Angad- kya huwa

Poonam- arey main bhool gayi

Angad- kya

Poonam-guddan room mai akeli hai aur ussr andhere se dhar lagta hai she have nyctophobia she said quickly in worried tone

Akshat- tum dono fuse check krke aao main ja kr usse dekhta hoon

In the room

Guddan- yeh light ko bhi abhi hi jana tha aur yeh mobile bhi ni mil raha hai kaha rhak diya

She closed her eyes and sit in the corner her body was shaking from fear she tried to call someone but her voice didn't comes out in fear. Suddenly she hear someone open the door she only see the shadow as due the darkness she was unable to see the face of that person

Guddan- kaun kaun hai

But no reply the only she fell was the shadow was coming more close to her and one last time she asked who'd there poonam kya tum ho vaha agar haan toh plz yeh mazak band kro mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai plz

Suddenly she hear someone laughing in bery weird tone like ghost was laughing in horror movies. She felt someone sit besides her and moving close to her

Guddan- kaun hai

"Bhoot" the shadow replied and laughed

Guddan- Dr. Akshat ap toh yeh sab apne kiya

Akshat (on his phone flash now she see him)- tumhe kya laga yaha sach mai koi bhoot hai

Guddan- apko yeh sab mazak lag rha hai apko pata hai thodi dher aur agar ap kuch ni bolte na toh humari jaan chali jatai, with anger

Akshat- ok ok I'm sorry main toh mazak kr raha hai just a prank jase tumne mere saath kiya maine bhi tumhare saath kiya

Guddan-prank abhi jaan chli jati humri

Akshat- ok i'm sorry

Guddan-Ni chaiye apka sorry ap hi rakhiye and was about to go when she lose her blance and fall on him her hands were on his chest she could fell his heartbeats, her hair was falling on his face both were merely inch apart from each other that they cleary fill e/o warm breath and lost in e/o eyes looking into them without blinking

Akshat holds her waist with one hand and with other he was trying to remove her hair which was the big obstacle in his way to look the beauty in front of him they both were so lost in each other that they didn't notice the light come back and was in the same compromising position untill their trance was broken by angad and poonam

Both makes noise to clear their throat, both guddan and akshat face cheeks becomes red they quickly stood up guddan face was still red

Angad- light aa gayi hai i think ab hume so jana chahiye kafi raat ho gai hai kyi akshat

Akshat- ahh haan kyu ni bilkul

Poonam- toh chale Dr.Gupta (with teasing smile on her face)

Guddan- haan , good...good night everyone

Akshat- good night

End of Part

So this is the part 13 hope I'm able to create some moment of love b/w them and u guys pls tell me how u like it

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