Haq hai tumhara(SS) Last Part updated on 20 june 2019 - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Awsome

Now i am excited to see guddan kya kregi akshat ko manane k liye😊

Edited by Mishti24 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Akshat's dialogues were on spot 👏

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PART 5

Morning;

Akshat entered his room and straight to the bathroom..when he come back he swa his thing were lying perfectly on his bed...

And there was she standing in sky blue saree with the cup of tea..

He run towards her and was going to hug her out of excitement but he stopped himself and start taking out his own outfits...

Gudd: aree humne nikale to apke kapde...ye phniyenaa..

Aj: mujhe apna kaam khud krne ki adat dalni hai..ab tum aaj ho kl nahi thi..aur kal fr kisi sahi aur galt ke chakkr me chali jyogi...ab roz roz to adtein nahi badal sakta na mai..

And he take his clothes and start changing..as he was buttoning up his shirt..guddan came infront of him and start doing for him...

He didn't look at her ..

Gudd: Ab humari taraf dekhenge bhi nahi...

He didn't answer...as she was done with buttons she hugged him...

Gudd: Hume pta tha hum wapas a jyenge...isliye hi to gye the..dekhiye naa aa to gye hum...

He jerked her hands ...away from him..

Aj: Apko yaad ho Mrs. Jindal ...abhi aapne apne is pati ko apki Antra ji ko udhar pr de rkha hai...to abhi to aap mujhe apna claim nahi kr sakti..

Gudd: Jindal sahab...aap esa mt boliye..aao koii chz nahi hai jo udhar pr..

Aj: mujhe to aajkal yhi lag rha hai...jo b,hai...aap dur hi rhiye..jbtk apki Antra ji apka udhar chukta na kr de ..

Wese bta du mai apko...jo sochkr aapbe muje ye udhar pr diya tha..usse jyada hi kuch ho rha hai...

He glared her with red eyes...

Aj: Har baat ki ek limit hoti hai Guddan..mai pyar krta hu tumse isliye ye nahi ki tum mujhe aur mere pyarvko test krne ke liye mujhe kisi ke bhi pass bhej dogi... Mne tumhe aur Antra dono ko btaya tha ki ab meri zindigi mai nas tumhari jagha hai..

Lekin tum dono ye baat nahi samjhi..ab mujhe akela chhod do..ye to kr sakti ho naa..

And he went out..by closing door with thud..

Guddan was crying sitting on bed...

Gudd: ye kya kr diya humne...ab kese thk krenge sab...

Antra enters and hugs her..

Antra: kuch nahi hoga...sab thk ho jyega..kosis kro guddan..tumse ho pyegaa..

She noded in yes and went down to make lunch for him...

@At Restaurant:

Guddan entered his cabin..he was busy with someone..

Gudd: Mr.Mittal..aap thodi der mai ayiyega..apke sir ko hum lunch krwa de..

Mittal: mai ata hu sir..

Aj: Mr.....

Ye sab kya hai..mujhe important kaam tha na aur tum yha...

Gudd: haa to patni hai aapki khana lekr aye hai ...

Aj : Lekin mere schedule ke hisab se mai to abhi Antra..

Guddan put her finger on his lips..

Gudd: Mr.Akshat Jindal yani ki aap sirf humare pati hai..yani ki Mrs.Guddan Akshat Jindal ke..

Aur ab aap humari sunege...

Hume pta hai humse galti hui hai...hum khud se nahi chate the apko unke pass bhejna...and she told him everything..

Aj: ek baar mujse bhi to puch leti...ek baar...kb meri zindigi mai ana hai kb jana hai..sab ka sab khud hi decide kr leti ho..

Gudd(crying):hum kabhi nahi jana chate apki life se...ye to bas hum samajh nahi pa rhe the...

Ho gyi humse galti...kya humne sach mai aapko khud se itna dur kr diya hai...

Hume sach mai nahi pta tha ki Antra ji ye sab bhi krengi..humne to unpr bharosa kiya tha..

Lekin kr di humne galti..kr diya apko khud se dur...

Hum hi chle jate hai yha se..and she turn around to run ...but he pulled her to him..

Both cried in each others arms..

Aj: kal mai sach mai bhut drr gya..agr Antra kuch aur karne ki kosis karti..aur tum maan jati uski baat to mai to kho deta tumhe..

Gudd: Hum ab aapse kuch nahi chupayenge...kbhi dur nahi jyenge..last baar maaf kr dijiye...

Aj: mafi mt mango tum bs mujhse ab kbhi dur nahi jana...

Gudd: kabhi nahi...

Aj: i love you Guddan...bhut bhut pyar krta hu mai tumse...bhut

Gudd: Hum bhi aapse bhut pyar krte hai..i love you too Jindal sahab..

Aftersome time they both composed themself... And eat lunch with each others hands..

Akshat take her to one of his room in his restaurant...

After a little make out session ..both were lying in each others arms..guddan's head was on his chest and arms were around him..he also wrapped her in his arms..

Gudd: Aap gussa na ho to kuch puche..

Aj: hmm..

Gudd: Ab Antra ji ka kya..matlab wo kha rhengii..

Aj: kal jo usne kiya hai uske baad wo Mere ghr mai to nahi rhegii...mai use agr maaf bhi kr du guddan tb bhi use humare sath nahi rakh sakta..

Ye sab uske liye bhi asan nahi hoga aur hum bhi uncomfortable rhenge..

Gudd: To fir..

Aj: mne vikram ko bol diya hai wo use akr le jyega..aur uske lifetime ka sara kharcha mai uthaunga..kbhi kisi chz ki kami nahi hone dunga..

Bs apne dil aur apne kamre mai jagha nahi de pyungaa..

Guddan looked at him with more admiration and love...and kissed him on his cheek and closed her eyes and peacefully lay in his arms..


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Posted: 6 years ago
#45

Amazing as usual avni

Qa ye last part tha?

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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Hash maan gaye jindal saab

Was it the last part ?

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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

Hash Mana he liya guddan apne jindal Saab ko...

Waise khatam ho Gaya Kya??

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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

One short last part is left..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#49

Awesome as ever!! Finally she is going 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Awesome update

Love it

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