Haq hai tumhara(SS) Last Part updated on 20 june 2019 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing...

Do continue soon

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Didn't expect that... 😕

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#23

Hi dear..

Read both the parts in one go ..

Love everything in both part...

3no apni apni jagah sahi he...

Galti kisi ki b nhi he...bas halat bure he....

Love how akshat clear everything to antra....

Antra and guddan ka convo was also fine...

Hope 10din me kuch ulat-pulat na ho Jaye ....

Love guddan's confidence in her Jindal Saab and his family....

Let's wat antra will do now...

But ek baat sure he in sabme sabse jyada dukh guddan ko he hoga...

Continue soon....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome

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Awesome update

Love it

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Both Parts Are Superb

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👏👏👏

Very realistic

Loved it

Update ASAP

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Nice looking forward for more.

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PART 4

After five days;

At 5’o clock in the morning..

Antra knocked on gupta house door..

Everyone was sleeping except Guddan…she opens the door..

Gudd: aap …aap yha…kya hua sab thk to hai na..Jindal Sahab..unhe kuch hua hai kya…boliyee naa..

Antra: kisi ko kuch nahi hua hai ..tum mere sath andar chalo…

And they both went to her room..

Antra: mai yha tumhe lene ayi hu ..tumhe tumhara sab kuch wapas dene…kyuki jo tumhara hai wo ab mera kabhi nahi ho sakta…

Gudd: kya hua ..abhi to sirf 5 din hue hai..kisi ne kuch kha kya..JIndal sahab ne mna kiya aapko..

Antra: ye 5 din…sb samajh a gya in 5 dino mai mujhe…

Gudd: wese to hume pta hi tha..ki hum wapas apne ghar jyenge hi lekin itni jaldi…btaiye na kya hua…

Antra: betho tum..mai btati hu…and she start narrating things…

(bold will representpresent ->gudd& antra conversation)

@Day 1

As I came wake up in the morning Akshat was not there ..he was already in the bath room…so I tried to put his things for him…but I find some of those and wait for him to come out…

And as he came out..

Antra: good morning Akshat..

Aj: gm..uth gyi tum…aur ye sab..ye sab mai khud kr lunga..abhi tumhe pta bhi nahi ki konsi chz kha rakhi hai…wese bhi Guddan ne sikhaya hai mujhe apna kaam khud karna…

And he realize what he said..

Aj: sorry…mai use mention nahi karna chata tha…

Antra: it’s okay…mai ready ho jati hu….

When she enters the kitchen..

Antra: aaj breakfast mai bna deti hu…

Servant: lekin madam bf to ban gya…wo laxmi ji aur saru ji ne bna liya ..aaj unka turn tha naa…wse bhi Guddan madam ne sare rules bnaye hai..jisse sab apn apna kaam khud karte hai…

Antra: tumne to wha ke servants ko bhi apna bna lya hai…

Then I tried to make coffee for Akshat..

As AJ sips his coffee ..

AJ: guddann…guddann…ye mujhe coffee kisne di..chai kha hai meri..

All looks at his face…

Antra: Akshat…coffee mne banayi hai….tum to chai nahi pitethe…

She closed her eyes to hide her tears..

Antra: mai abhi chai bnakr lati hu..

Aj was confuse ..how to react..

Aj: nahi nahi rehne do Antra…mujhe chai nahi chahiye…jab guddan a jyegi….mera matlab hai ki ..mai juice le lunga…

And after this he went for his work..

Dadi: laxmi bahu..meri sari davaiyan kha rakhi hai..ye guddan ne sb kuch apne hath mai le liya hai tbse sbki adtein kharab kr di hai..

Laxmi: sasu maa…ne kha rkha hai ye to whi jane…mai puchti hu unhe…

Dadi: ek baar wapas a jye mai to aram mai aa jyu..

Antra heard all this ,and she entered there room..

Antra: maa ji…mai dundh deti hu..

Dadi: nahi nahi beta ..ye sab guddan ke kaam hai usi ke pass rhne de..tu aa beth mere pass..she noded and sit near her..

Antra: maa ji mujhse 2 ghante baat ki..lekin usme na jane kitni baar tumhara naam liya..

Tumhe pta hai guddan durga aur saru bilkul bhi nahi chate the ki tum wapas ayo lekin fir bhi…

Durga: guddan to chali gyi yha se..lekin kitna kaam tha..sb humare upr a gya..ab wapas to wo ayegi hi…to jaldi hi aa jye to thk hai..

Saru: haa ana to hai hi use..ye sab whi kare to thk..

Antra: aur angad..usne to baat bhi nahi ki hai mujhse..

Antra: ab tum btao kese..rhu mai wha jha har chz pr tumhare nishan hai…

Gudd: lekin ye to 1hi din hua tha naa..fr ..aapne 1 hi din mai haar maan li…

Antra: haar to mai phle hi gyi thi..lekin fr bhi bs vishwas nahi tha….mne fr kosis ki..

@2 day

Some people came from restaurant..

Man: wo hume Mrs. Jindal se kuch kaam tha…

Antra: haa boliye hum hi hai Mrs. Jindal..

Man: mam humne suna apke bare mai..lekin hum Mrs. Guddan Jindal se milne ayae hai..

AJ: Rajat..tum yha ..kya hua kuch kaam tha..

Rajat: sir wo apne mam se pohe ki recipe puchne ke liye bola tha na..

Aj: to apki madam to gyi hai apne mayke..rest karne keliye..unhe kya matlab..kisi se..wo to whi karti hai jo unhe karna hota hai…

Rajat: to hum unhe Gupta house jakr mil le..kyuki jo order liya tha uski dates bhut pass a rhi hai..bs 20 di hi bache hai…

Aj: kuch dino mai wapas aa rhi apki madam..tab aa jaiyega…

All members noded there head…and AJ leave from there..

Neha: yrr mam jaldi wapas ajye…ye itne strict AJ ko to hum bhul hi gye the…agr mam nahi ayi to pakka kisi na kisi ki job chali jyegii..

Riya: wo smiling AJ sir tbhi banege jab Guddan mam wapas ayengii..

With this all left for restaurant ..

Antra: mai whi thi guddan fr bhi khai nahi thi…

Akshat ke sath sath sabko vishwas tha ki tum jaldi hi wapas a jyogii…ek baar bhi kisi ko ye lag hi nahi rha tha ki..tum nahi ayogi…

Ese mai hum chahe kuch bhi krte hum tumhari jagha nahi le sakte the…aur humari jagha to kbki khi kho gyi hai sabki life mai..

Gudd: hume samajh hi nahi a rha ki hum khus ho ki sab hume itna chate hai ya..apke liye dukhi..hum kabhi nahi chate the ki apke sath esa ho lekin..

Antra: tumse to mujhe koii sikayat hi nahi hai..tumne to sab kuch de hi diya naa..

Bs..mai hi nakaam rahi…

Gudd: lekin aap itni subha subha..matlab abhi to waqt tha naa..fr..

Antra: guddan..humne kal ek akhiri kosis ki…aur uske baad jo hua…hum fr khud ko rok nahi paye tumhe wapas le jane aa gye…

Gudd: kya ..kya kiyaa apne kal..

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.to be continued….

kya kiay hoga Antra ne..?


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yaar yeh cliffhanger pe kyun roka

Yeh toh galat baat hai

Upar se itna chota update

Tarpa tarpa k mareinge sab

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