Haq hai tumhara(SS) Last Part updated on 20 june 2019

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Here is two to three shot on upcoming track from my point of view..

Antraa ...tum ...kha thi ab tk ...15 saal ho gye aur tum...saying that Aj run and hugged his beloved wife..

Ant: mai coma m thi akshat 15 salo tk lekin tumhara pyar ...dekho tumhara pyar mujhe waps le aya...

All other family members run towards her and embraced her with love and welcomed her..

And guddan was watching all this with smile and tears..and then she remember something and run towards her room...and packed her things removed her pictures ...

All other are so engrossed in Antra that they forget about her...

Akshat was not leaving her hand and others are talking to her..

She saw them from far distance and left for her house from back door...

Angad noticed this...

Ang : bhabhi...

Antra looked at him...

He noded in negative to her and look towards door..but she was not there..

Dadi noticed it and looked towards angad and he says yes from his eyes...she closed her eyes due to guilt ..how could she forget her...her who save her family's life...and who just came out from death because of her lalla..

Antra: akshat hume apne kamre mai jana hai..chaliye naa..

Aj: haa antra chlo..and he remember about guddan...

He look around but she was now where to find...he looked towards angad..who turned his face due to anger..

Ant: akshat chlo naa..he noded absent mindly and walk with her...to his room..and as he open the gate he was shocked to see...there was nothing left in his room which belongs to her...she removed her things...but where is she..

Ant: humara room jesa tha wesa hi hai...tq akshat ..and she hugged him...he did not return her hug but pated her lightly on her back..

Aj: Gud...

Antra:...kon...

Aj: mera matlb hai ki tum abhi arm kr lo..mujhe thoda kaam hai..mai free hokar ata hu..

And with this he left his room..

Aj: maa guddan kha hai...aur uska saman...uska kuch bhi kamre mai nahi hai..

Angad: wo chali gyi bhaii...unki jroorat yha puri ho gyi ..to wo chali gyi..

Aj: angad...kya bol rhe ho tum..jroort nahi hai wo is ghar ki...patni hai wo meri..

Durga: nahi Aj apki patni Antra maa ji hai jo wapas aa gyi hai...is hisab se to guddan ab is ghr ki kch bhi nahi hai..

Aj: Kishore...apni patni ko samjhao...agar age se ye mere ya meri patni ke beech boli to mai bhul jyunga ki ye kon hai..

And he gave death glare to durga and leave house in anger..

After some time..

Aj knocked on Gupta house..

Revti opened the door..

Aj: guddan kha hai..

Rev: wo dii abhi abhi ayi hai room mai hai..mai unhe..

He show his hand to her ...mai khud jata hu..

Guddan was arranging her clothes in the closet..he entered and closed the door...and held her wrist and pulled her towards him..

Aj: kya samajhti ho khud ko...jb marji meri zindigi mai ayogi..jab marzi chali jyogi..Mera koii haq nahi hai meri life pr..tum pr...kya sochkr a gyi tum yha..bolo..

He was boiling in anger....she looked in her eyes and saw tears of love and anger..he was hurt..he need to understand her decision..for that he have to calm down..so she hugged him tightly..for a minute he didn't respond but then he too hugged her tightly..

Gudd: hum apko chhodkr nahi aye hai...humne bas apko time diya hai..Antra ji ko sb kch samjhane ke liye...hum wha hote to bhut sawal hote jinke aap abhi jawab nahi de pate...

Ab aap aram se unhe samjhiyega aur fir hume yha se lekar jana..hume nahi pta tha ki aap itna gussa ho jyenge..

Aj: mai bhut darr gya tha..mujhe lga ki tum..tum mujhe chhod ke chali gyi ho...mujhe samajh hi nahi a rha tha ki mai kese tumhe wapas le jyunga ..kese samjhaunga ...

Gudd: hum samjhte hai aapko..bas isliye bina kch kahe wapas a gye hum..

Aur hum tb bhi samjhenge agar Antra ji nahi chayengi hume apki..and her throat chocked before completing her sentance..

Aj parted from her and held her from shoulders..

Aj: Mai tumhara hu Guddan..aur ye zindigi ab tumhari...decide antra nahi tum krogii..chalo ghar..

Guddan cupped his face

Gudd: hum chlenge ...phle aap baat kijiye Antra ji se..fr to hum hai hi..apke sath unhe samjhane ke liye..

He take her hands from his ckeeks and kissed them..

Aj: kch bhi ho guddan...ye yaad rakhna ki tum Akshat Jindal ki patni ho ..Guddan Akshat Jindal..ho tum..aur ye sach kisi ke bhi ane se nahi badlegaa..

She noded positively and smiles...he kissed her on her forehead and both open the door..

Outside Angad was waiting for them with whole Gupta family..

Aj: Papa mai kch dino ke liye ise apke pass chhodkr ja rha hu..jaldi hi akr le jyunga..aur jo apki beti ka hai wo usi ka rhega..and looked towards Guddan..humesa..

Ang: Bhaii i m sorry ..mujhe wo sab nahi bolna chahiye tha..

Aj: Dekhlo Guddan ...tumhare liye apne bhaii se naraz tha ye..samjhao ise ..

Gudd: Angad ji insb mai inki koii galti nahi..hum khud hi yha a gye the..

Ang : sorry bhaii..

Aj: sorry mt bol..mujhe to khusi hai ki koii to iske haq ke liye mujhse bhi ladne ko tayyar hai..

All smiles at this..

And both leaft Gupta house leaving their beloved there...with a promise of taking them to their real place soon..

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Wah wah... continue soon

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Awsome avani

Just loved it so much🤗

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👌👌👌now that's Akshat Jindaal kabhie galat nahi hone dega

Now how will he make under Antara will she leave him🤔

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Wow

Guddan's way to understand Akshat was nice and Akshat assurance also good

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Interesting. Continue soon.

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Nice Update avni

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PART 2

At Night:

After tossing and turning till 1'o clock at night he checked on Antra..who was sleeping in deep sleep..but to just double check he called..

Aj: Antraaa....Antraa...

And then pocked her on shoulder lightly...but she did not stir...then he slowly walk out of the room and call guddan..

Guddan who was trying to sleep picked up his call..

Gudd: Aap soye nahi...

Aj: tum..tum so gyi thi kya..

Gudd: hume to neend hi nhi a rhi yha..nyi jagha hai naa..lekin aap kyu jaag rhe hai abi tk..

Aj don't know what to say...

Aj : tum apne room ki peeche wali window kholkr rkho..m a rha hu..

And he cut the call..

Gudd: aa rhe hai..hello hello...kaat diya phn..aur a rhe hai yha..

After 15 min he knocked on her window

She hurriedly opens it..

Aj : bola tha na window kholkr rakhna..ab hath do..and he came into the room and sit on bed..

Guddan put her hands on her waist and Stand infront of him..

Gudd : kya hai ye sab..is umar m itni uchal kuud..aur kya jroort..

Before she can complete her sentence..he pulled her to him and lay on bed with guddan top of him..

Aj: Jb pati ese khidki se kud kr apni biwi se milne ata hai...to use ese dant nahi lagayi jati..

Gudd: To....to kya kiya jata hai..

Aj now turn around and put her down on bed and he lay down and get up on one elbow..

Aj: mai btata hu...he slowly bent down and kissed her cheek then her forehead then her eyes as he is going towards her lips she shyly turn her face..he smiles and adjust both of them on her bed

Aj : so jyo guddan bhut late ho gya hai..she turned towards him and kissed him on his cheek..

Gudd: Aap yha ..agar Antra ji..

Aj: kya ye jaroori hai ki jb b mai tmhare pass ayu tum antra ko beech mai lekr ayo..and tried to get up ..

But guddan was quick and held him by her arms around his waist..

Gudd: accha hum nahi baat karenge usbare m..ab aap jayiye nahi..

Then he take her in his arms and both sleep peacefully..

At 6 in the morning:

Guddan open her eyes and realize she was sleeping in his arms..then she looked at clock..

Gudd: uthiye..Jindal sahab uth jaiye..apko ghr jana hai sab uthne wale honge..

Aj : uth jyungaa..sone do mujhe..

And then someone knocked on their door..

Gudd: hume jane dijiye koii darwaze pr hai...hey lord Krishna..kya kre hum..Then she shouted in his ear..Akshattt..

And he sit up with a jolt..

Aj : ese kon uthata hai...

Gudd: hum pyar se utha rhe the naa ..tb uthe aap..

Again knock..she hurriedly go and open the door and peak outside..

Bhusan was standing out ..

Revti: Dii pura darwaza khol do..hume pta hai ki jiju andar hai..awaz a gyi hai hume unki...

She opens the full door and here he was stand half on window to get out..

Rev: jiju humare yha darwaze bhi hai..aap chaho to wo bhi use kr sakte ho..

Both Akshan looked embarrassed..

Aj: Good morning papa..bhusan noded while smiling at him and he ran out of the house..

Both revati and bhusan looked at guddan who turned around with red face..as bhusan left her room revti hugged her..

Rev : Diii...jiju kitne romantic hai...chupkr khidki se aye apse milne..wow!

Gudd: bas kr ab..kya tu b..and she run towards bathroom..

Here as Aj was entering jindal bhawan..he collide with laxmi..

Lax: Aj aap bhar se..is tym..

Aj : Good morning laxmi bahu..and rum towards his room..

Laxmi: Aj...aap room m jane se phle ek baar mirror mai check kr lijiyega..

Aj turned around to look at her but she left smiling athim..

As he checked in his phone there was a lipstick marks on his neck and cheek..he removed them..

Aj: kya kya krna pd rha hai..wha papa kya soch rhe honge aur yha laxmi bahu…

As he enters in his room antra was sitting on bed..

Ant: kha the aap…mne pure ghar mai dekh liya…

Aj: mai bhr gya tha ..subha subha fresh air health ke liye acchi hoti hai naa..

Ant : aap mujhe bhi bta dete mai bhi chalti…

Aj : mujhe late ho rha hai bhut restaurant ke liye mai tayyar ho jyu please…

Antra: haa …thk hai..aap tayyar ho jaiye…mai apke kapde nikal deti hu…

After bathing AJ entered his room in bathrobe…and saw confused Antra standing there,..

Aj: kya hua..lyo mai khud nikal leta hu…

Ant: mujhe to lga tumhari cheze aaj bhi wahi hogi jha phle thi lekin koii bhi chz wha nahi hai..sab badal gya hai..

Aj: haa..Antra ab sab badal gya hai…jaroori nahi hai na jojesa tha wo wesa hi ho…15 saal ek bhat lamba time hota hai..aur is bech chate na chate hue bhi sab kuch badal gya hai..aur shyd mai bhi…

Antra looked at him….

Ant: kya badal gya hai….boliye na…aur kya badal gya hai…Akshat…

Aj holds her hand and make her sit on bed and sit on chair infront of her…

Aj: kuch months phele mujhe tumhara ek letter mila tha…..and then he told every single thing to her….she was sitting in shock…

Antra: aapne dusri shhadi kr li….hume nahi lga tha hum wapas ayenge…lekin ab hum aa gye hai…ab kya…ab kyaa Akshat…

Aj : mne jo bhi kiya tha ..sab tumhare liye kiya tha..ab tum apna pura time le lo ye decide karne ke liye ki tum kya chati ho..

Antra: aap…aap kya chate hai …aur kise chate hai..

Aj: abhi mai tumse yahi bolunga ki is sawal ke jawab mai ..m tumse juth nahi bolna chata…tum dono meri jimeedari ho mai dono ka pura dhyan rakhunga..lekin patni…patni ki tarha sirf ek hi rh sakti hai…

Ant : aur wo ..Guddan hai…

Aj : antra mai ab tumhara Akshat nahi hu…aur guddan ne tumhari jagha nahi li hai…wo to itni acchi hai ki jab usne tumhe dekha to tumhe koii dukh na pahuche isliye tumse milne se phle hi yha se chali gyi…

Ye jo meri zindigi hai us par ab sirf aur sirf uska haq hai..wo na jane kitni baar mujhe bachakar layi hai…aur fr mai bhi to use abhi abhi khote hue bacha hu…

Tum hamesa is ghar ki saas rahogi aur apne beto ki maa bhi..lekin meri patni ..meri patni ab Guddan hai…lekin tum jb tk khud nahi chahogi wo tabtk is ghar se dur rahegii..

Antra: ghar se to wo dur hai Akshat..par fr bhi apke bhut kareeb hai…aur mai apke pass akar bhi kitni dur ho gyi hu..

Aj: ye sab mere hath mai nahi tha…agar wo meri life mai nahi ati to mai tumhe wapas apna leta ..lekin…agar fr bhi tum chati ho ki mai tumhe apna lu…

He stand and take out his belongings….

Aj: to bhi mai tumhara purana pati akshat nahi ban pyunga..mai nahi kr pyunga tumse fr wahi pyar…na hi koii haq de pyunga…mai kuch nahi de pyunga tumhe Antra…kyuki mere pass mera job hi hai wo sab Guddan ka hai…and with this he left his room..

Ant: phichle 20 min mai aapne na jane kitni baar Guddan ka naam liya..aap to sach mai badal gye hai akshat..ab hume bhi milna padega apkiGuddan se..jisne apko itna badal diya ki aap hamara pyar bhi bhul gye…


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Thank you sooooo much for updating😊

Hope Antara won't turn evil 😬😬

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