AKSHAN SS -love chori chori part 13update ( 8 may 2019) - Page 10

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Posted: 6 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Nice chapter

Akshan Dance was nice
Update the next part soon


Thank you kajal

Will update soon

And congratulations for becoming a Goldie
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Posted: 6 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Chit15

Good update

Guddan laughing while giving Aashirwad was best
Akshan scenes were cute


Thank you dear
will update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#93
when will u update the next part?
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Posted: 6 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Mishti24

when will u update the next part?

She have exams right now so she is not updating hopefully she will update it jb uska exam khatam ho jayega😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

She have exams right now so she is not updating hopefully she will update it jb uska exam khatam ho jayega 😊

oh ohk i did not know that
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hii friends I am updating after long time pata nahi kaise hoga so enjoy
Chapter - 11

Next morning it was akshan's haldi and at evening their marriage both are very excited

Jindal mension

They arrange everything at pool side everyone present their just then kishor vardaan come their with akshat he was wearing a yellow kurta and white pajama looking handsome as usual they make him seat

Then dadi come first and apply haldi on his face and kiss his forehead

S- haye mera lala kisiki nazar na lage chalo aao sab bari bari haldi lagao

Then all come and start to apply haldi in no minute akshat turn total yellow some of their relatives even tore akshat's kurta although akshat was enjoying he put a stern face

S- acha lala apne sarir se thoda haldi de de aur nahne ja

A- ma apne body se haldi uska kya karna hai

S- tu bhi na bhul gaya guddan ko teri utri hui haldi lagni hai

A- acha thik hai

Then akshat does what dadi said then he went to bath laxmi and saru went to guddan's house

At gupta house

Guddan was ready she was wearing a yellow colour lehenga looking pretty she was wearing her eating someone close her eyes

G- jee mujhe pata hai aaap ho

Yes it was jeevan due to some work jeevan and her bua and phupa can't able to come for other functions and now they are here

J- wow darling tum to pehchan gayi mujhe to laga ki tum hottie ke sapno main kho gayi hogi

G- vaise main apse naraj hunn aap baki function main kyun nahi aye

J- sorry Darling tumhari marriage itni jaldi jaldi main ho rahi hai to hume sab kaam clear karke yaha anne main der ho gayi vaise tumhe hottie akhir mil hi gaya

Guddan blush at this just then revati come their they take guddan outside laxmi saru are present their when guddan ask revati about them revati say about the ritual guddan blush thinking about get coloured in akshat's colour

Then haldi start all apply haldi to her revati and jeevan were teasing her after haldi guddan went to take bath just then her phone beep she saw it's a message from akshat

Akshat

So mrs would be jindal ho gayi apki haldi

Guddan

Yes mr jindal

Akshat

Finally aap mere rang main rang gaye

Guddan

Wo to main kabki rang chuki hoon

Their message canvo interput by revati guddan then went to washroom to take bath

It's evening time

All are getting ready for the marriage akshat was wearing a white colour sherwani dadi come to his room she make him wear the turban and give him a sword

S- ek baar phir se tujhe dulhe ke roop main dekh rahi beta mujhe pata hai tu yeh shadi majboori main kar raha hai par beta guddan bhout achi ladki hai usse khus rakhne ki koshish karna

A- ma main antra ki jagha kisi aur ko nahi de sakta magar apke liye usse apna ne ki koshish karunga

A in mind - sorry ma apse jhoot bol raha hoon par abhi main apko apne aur guddan ke bar main nahi bata sakta

In all this the trideviyan are pissed off although they are taking part in marriage but they cannot digest the fact guddan will be their saas

L- durga di dekha aj kya kehe rahe the

Sa- ha di agar unhone dadi ki baat maan kar uss guddan ko apna liya to

D- tumh dono apna muh band rakho aj bhale hi dadi ko yeh kaha ho par unke dil maain antra ma ji ke liye pyar itna bhara hua hai koi aur uske andar nahi reh sakta

Little did this chudail know guddan already made her entry in his heart

Soon the barati leave for the venu

On the other hand guddan was ready in red colour lehenga seating with revati' her cousins all are teasing her she was just blushing just then bhusan ji enter the cousins went from their leaving them privacy only revati was their

Bhusan ji went near guddan and kiss her forehead

B- bhout hi pyari lag rahi hai meri bachi

G- thank you papa

B- mujhe pata hi nahi chala meri wo choti si guddan kab itni badi ho gayi aaj uski shadi hai meri wo nahni pari jo bachpan main kehti thi papa hum shadi nahi karnge hume sasural nahi jana apko chodke par aaj mujhe chodke chali jayegi

Both father daughter have tears in their eyes revati also crying

Guddan then weep her papa's tear

G- papa bhale hi humar shadi ho jaye magar rahenge hum apki hi beti ban kar aur jab bhi aap chahe apne guddan se milne chale ane

Bhusan ji hug her

R- this is not fair mere bagir aap log hug kar rahe ho

Guddan smile and sign her to join them then trio hug each other

After that bhusan ji went to check arrangements guddan seat down the bed with revati

Both Akshan are eagerly waiting to see each other

That's it friends
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Mishti24 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#97
Too good😊
Plz updste soon,vaise hi itna wait kraya
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Posted: 6 years ago
#98
Thank you for much awaited update
But wait was worth Akshan enjoying marriage rituals and now it's time for wedding and 3 dumbos don't knows the chori chori love story of Akshan
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Posted: 6 years ago
#99
Eeek!!! This is exciting I'm waiting for the Mega Revelation!! 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing update
Love it
Continue soon

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