AKSHAN SS -love chori chori part 13update ( 8 may 2019)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hii friends thought to start a new story on new year hope you will like it

Note- this story will be like the serial but with a twist😉😉😉 their is no antrara's letter akshat said yes as dadi want him to get married

Prologue-

Guddan enter to jindal mension due to the misunderstanding dadi like her on first sight and get very pleased with her answers

Durga saru are happy but laxmi is bit disappointed as she want akshat to marry the girl choose by her but she convince her self

Then akshat come their he said guddan that if she want to marry him genuinely or its just for his money

Then revati and bhusan ji come their before they can clear the misunderstanding guddan as usual trip over and her saree open and she stand their with her jeans tops akshat and the three bahu's insult them

They went from their before going guddan turn and look at akshat he wink at her guddan blush and went from their

So like and comment if I go with this story

Index

Chapter 1- page 2

Chapter 2-page 3

Chapter 3-page 5

Chapter 4-page 6

Chapter 5- page 7

Chapter 6 - page 8

Chapter 7 - page 9

Chapter 8- page 10

Chapter 9- page 11

Chapter 10- page 13

Chapter 11- page 14

Chapter 12- page 15

Chapter 13- page 17

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Are last line ne to shock de daala😆
Serial vala Akshat wink!!!!!😲😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome promo
But ek doubt hai if AJ and his bahus insult Gupta's guddu jaateh wakat why did AJ wink at her aur guddu blush BHI kiya
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome teaser
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Are last line ne to shock de daala 😆

Serial vala Akshat wink!!!!!😲😆


😆😆😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: kusharberry

Awesome promo

But ek doubt hai if AJ and his bahus insult Gupta's guddu jaateh wakat why did AJ wink at her aur guddu blush BHI kiya


Thank you

Yahi to twist hai 😉😉😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you for your comment
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Well after reading the title and story lagta hai that Akshat and Guddan are before in a relationship but still my own prediction but just curious to know is it right? Waiting how you unfolds the story
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Interesting Teaser
Update Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Chapter -1
It have been 6 months since akshat say yes to marry due to dadi's bhuka hartal he have no option other than say yes he give the responsibility to his bahu's to choose their mother in law they immediately start their search

But suddenly akshat got a contract of 6 month in manali he have to go their so he said to postpone the bride hunt for 6 month as he can't be their to meet the girls they choose

After 6 month akshat come back from his trip one thing they all notice that akshat smiling without reason some time they can't figure out what it could be but dadi is happy she can see the old akshat's glimpse

Durga was going through some profile of girl's and saw a girl name leela wearing clothes like a female saint with a black glasses she go through her details and like it just then laxmi come their

L- durga di ek good news hai

D- kaisa good news

L- Aj ke liye ladki mil gayi uska naam komal hai

With that he show durga komal's profile but she don't like komal

D- nahi laxmi yeh thik nahi hai Aj ke liye yeh dekho iska naam leela hai mujhe pasand ayi hai chalo isse aj ko dikhate hai

Laxmi don't say anything as she know she can't convince Durga once she decide something they went to akshat's room saru join them durga show her leela she also like her durga knock on akshat door he call them inside

A- kya baat hai aap teeno yaha iss waqt

D- papa humne ek ladki select ki hai aap dekh lijiye

A- mujhe dekhne ki jarrorat nahi hai bas aap use bula lijiye main mil loonga

They noded and went from their then durga call the girl she receive the call after 3 rings durga then told her that she is selected they like to meat her durga then give her restaurant adress

The girl in her home start to dance after the phone call she is wearing jeans and top she is non other than guddan yes the leela durga thought actually is guddan

Guddan 2 days back got a call that their is a audition for sita role in a ramayan play and she have to give her profile if she get selectd then they will call her to impress them guddan clik a photo like sita then write a lot of good things about herself as they don't her name she make the profile in name of leela but mistakenly that file went to jindal house

And now when durga call her she thought she selected for the play so she is dancing just then revati come

R- di kya hua aap itni khus kyun hai

G- chutki humara selection ho gaya uss play ke liye

R- congrats di mujhe pata tha apko hi ye role milega

G- ha aur un logo ne hume bulaya bhi hai interview ke liye

Just then bhusan come their heard about it

B- beta tumhe kab jana hai main chalunga tumhare saath

G- thik hai papa aaj 1 baje bulaya hai hum tayar ho jate hai

R- di main bhi chalungni apke sath

Then revati went to get ready guddan then call someone but when the call don't connect she text the number smile and went to get ready

At 1 pm they reach at the restaurant guddan is stunned after saw the restaurant she want to go from their but can't say anything in presence of bhusan ji only revati know the thing both sister giving weird look to each other then bhusan ji said they will come to pick her once her interview finished

She meat the trideviyan their she now get more scared but she can do something dadi come their she start to question her seeing no option guddan answer to the question dadi is very impressed by her

Then take her to jindal mension akshat is in his room dadi call him to meat with leela he also don't recognize guddan now guddan is more scared but seat silently on the couch akshat sat just next to her

A- dekhiye aapko meri bahu aur maa ne pasand kiya hai to kya aap mujhse sach much shadi karna chahati hai ya phir sirf paison ke liye shadi karni hai

G- wo...hum..wo

A- ache se boliye yeh aise kyun baat kar rahi hai

S- beta dar mat bol

Just then revati bhusan ji come their as guddan text revati to come jindal house as they don't saw bhusan ji and revati before they are confused seeing them but akshat's reaction is something else he just looking at guddan

Before any one can say anything guddan get up to go to them but trip over her saree it got open she standing their only her jeans tops all are shocked durga in anger come to her

D- himmat kaise hui tumhari jhoot bolke aj se shadi karna chahati thi

G- ji hume maf kijye humne to apni file audition ke liye bheja tha par sayad galti se yha pohanch gaya

L- ha ha galtiyon ki dukan ho tum to har jaga galti se pahoch jati ho na

Sa- 1760 bahne banogi na koi fayda nahi hoga tumhare asli chehra sabke samne hai

A- enough ab koi kuch nahi bolega aur tum chali jao yaha se iss pehele ki main police bulan

G- thik hai ja rhe hai hum dadi hume maf kar dijiye

Guddan along with bhushan revati went towards the entrance then guddan turn to akshat he wink at her and guddan blush and went from their

Akshat then said everyone to go their respective room he then went to restaurant

Please comment and like how it is

Agar bore kar rahi hun to tamatar mar dena

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