AKSHAN SS -love chori chori part 13update ( 8 may 2019) - Page 11

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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice one
Update the next part soon plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
Gud one
Loved it
Plz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
After so long and update wow b ittu si???
Plz update soon and this time a Maha episode plz ...
Well it was a good part Akshan convo was cute ...
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Hii friends sorry firse wait karwane ke liye but 1 week se main tour pe Mumbai gayi thi main ne kitna wish kiya tha kanika ya nishant se milne ki but my bad luck

So let's start the chapter

Chapter - 12

Soon the barat reach the venu gupta's are their to welcome them akshat climbed down the horse and the went to the door step kaushalya do the arti of akshat then some of guddan's cousin lift akshat and take him inside ( this happend in our side bride's cousin or her friends will take groom inside by lifting him)

They take him to a stage after some refreshment soon the panditji said it's time for vaar maala akshat was excited as now he will be able to see guddan and soon guddan come to the stage with revati and her cousins

Both look at each other both have a beautiful eye lock both are mesmerized by each other's look they brought out to reality by revati and jeevan's fake cough

Panditji said guddan to put vara maala on akshat she was about to put it vardaan and kishore along with some other lift akshat

V- guddan ma humare papa apko itni jaldi nahi milenge thodi mehnat kijiye

All laugh guddan start to jump but Akshat was keeping her head straight so guddan make a pout face akshat can't recite it he bend down his head guddan put the garland

And now it's akshat turn and now jeevan and her cousins do the same lift guddan so akshat trick guddan and said that something fall from her duppata when guddan bend to see it akshat put the garland

Then both went to the mandap and the ritual's start bhusan ji does guddan's kanyadan then it time for saat phera

Both stood up akshat held guddan's both start to take seven round around the fire all throw flowers on them

They complete the phera both sat down then pandit ji instruct akshat to tie mangalsutra around guddan's neck akshat does the same he slightly slide her hair tie the mangalsutra guddan feeling butterflies as his hot breath hitting on her nape then akshat take some sindur in a coin and fill guddan's partion guddan close her eyes in happiness

Panditji said the marriage complete now both get up and went to dadi and take her blessing

She hug akshan and kiss their foreheads then they went to bhusan ji and kaushalya and take their blessings then went to her bua and phupa ji they also blessed him

Jeevan and revati hug them and congratulate them for marriage

Now it's time for vidaai all are crying bhushan ji was not looking at guddan as he can't able to see his gudiya going away from him

Guddan first went to Kaushalya and hug her she also reciprocate it she was crying genuinely although she didn't like guddan but the fact the mother inside her making her cry as her daughter leaving her although she fake loving her but the fact she rised her

G- ma aap apna khyal rakhna and thank you ma apne aaj tak mujhe revati se jayada pyaar kiya mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai ma revati paida bhi nahi hui thi apne mera kitna khyal rakhatha main chah kar bhi wi ehsaan nahi chuka paungi

K- nahi guddan aisa mat bolo main tujhse wo pyaar wo aapna paan ka dikhaba karti rehti thi aur tujhe kya kuch nahi kaha yaha tak ki main yeh soch liya ki teri shadi ho jayegi to tujhse mujhe churakar mil jayega par main galat thi meri andar ki maa tadapi uski beti ko dur jate dekh mujhe maaf kar de beta

G- nahi ma aisa maat bolo main aapse kabhi naraj thi hi nahi

(Guys main ne socha ki kaushalya ko positive bana deti hoon so aab se kaushalya guddan se genuinely pyaar karegi)

Then she went to revati and jeevan both cried hugging her

Then she went to her papa

G- papa kya aap apni guddan se naaraz hai uske taraf dekhenge bhi nahi

Bhusan ji turn to her and both father daughter hug each other bhushan ji then kiss her forehead

Then he take guddan and make her sit on car then she fold his hand infront of akshat

B- damad ji meru guddan bholi hai usse agar kuch galti ho jaye maaf kardijyega

A- aap chinta maat kijiye papa main guddan ka pura khyal rakhunga

Then he also seat on the car and it drove towards jindal mension guddan was still crying so akshat went near her and take her in a side hug and weep her tears and kiss both her eyes

A- jaan ro mat tumhre papa indore mein hi rehte hai indonesia main nahi tum jab chao unse mile aa sakti ho

G- akshat aapko pata hai jab hum chote the humare pados main ek didi ki shadi hui unki vidaai ke waqt wo bhout ro rahi thi unhe dekh main papa se boli ki papa main kabhi shadi nahi karungi mujhe unhe chod kar nahi jaan lekin ladki to paraya dhan hoti hai wo humesa apne papa ke paas nahi reh sakti

A- yeh to hai guddan magar tum ek gahr chod karti rahi ho magar tumhe dusra ghar mil raha hai aur main bhi to hu aab rona band karo

Then to lighten the situation he said

A- lagta hai tum mujhse shadi nahi karna chati thi issi liye itna ro rahi ho

G- nahi nahi Akshat hum to kanse aapse shadi karna chate the

A- acha to mrs guddan jindal aap mare ja rahi thi mujhse shadi karne ke liye

G- wo to hum kabke mar chuke jab pheli baar ehsaas hua hum apse pyar karte hai

Both hug each other

After some time they reach at jindal mension they come out of the car went towards the door dadi do the arti of guddan then she place a rice bowl and a plate of alta

S- guddan beta apne pair se yeh kalash gira kar iss thali main pair rakh kar andar aao

Guddan do as dadi said then dadi instruct laxmi to bring the plate of haldi and laxmi bring it then guddan dip her hand in it and then go to near the door just below antra's hand print she leaves her hand print

She come and stood beside akshat

S- chalo durga laxmi saru apni saas ka ashirwad lo

Trio make faces and went to guddan and take her blessing she just put her hand on them

Then they get up and durga hug her

D- (wishper in her ear) congratulations tum jo chati thi wo ho gaya ban gayi tum jindal khandan ki bahu humari saas magar humesha yaad rakhna yeh jimedari tumse kabhi na ho payega

And left her

G in mind - chinta maat kijiye durga ji humare saath humare akshat hai humse sab ho payega

Then it's time for another ritual to find ring from milk both seat facing each other a big bowl of milk kept in front of them they start to find it

All are cheearing them and at same time both take out the ring

S- are wa isse pata chalta hai ki tum dono ki bara bar ki chalegi

Then dadi said trideviyan to take guddan to akshat's room

Guddan was feeling goosebumps while going to akshat's no now their room

That's it friend

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So as all you know next part main ahem ahem hai to apko simple chahiye ya hot wala

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Posted: 6 years ago

Finally Akshan ki shaddi ho gyi

Nxt update hot wala chahiye mjhe

Plz update soon

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Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

Hii friends sorry firse wait karwane ke liye but 1 week se main tour pe Mumbai gayi thi main ne kitna wish kiya tha kanika ya nishant se milne ki but my bad luck

So let's start the chapter

Chapter - 12

Soon the barat reach the venu gupta's are their to welcome them akshat climbed down the horse and the went to the door step kaushalya do the arti of akshat then some of guddan's cousin lift akshat and take him inside ( this happend in our side bride's cousin or her friends will take groom inside by lifting him)

They take him to a stage after some refreshment soon the panditji said it's time for vaar maala akshat was excited as now he will be able to see guddan and soon guddan come to the stage with revati and her cousins

Both look at each other both have a beautiful eye lock both are mesmerized by each other's look they brought out to reality by revati and jeevan's fake cough

Panditji said guddan to put vara maala on akshat she was about to put it vardaan and kishore along with some other lift akshat

V- guddan ma humare papa apko itni jaldi nahi milenge thodi mehnat kijiye

All laugh guddan start to jump but Akshat was keeping her head straight so guddan make a pout face akshat can't recite it he bend down his head guddan put the garland

And now it's akshat turn and now jeevan and her cousins do the same lift guddan so akshat trick guddan and said that something fall from her duppata when guddan bend to see it akshat put the garland

Then both went to the mandap and the ritual's start bhusan ji does guddan's kanyadan then it time for saat phera

Both stood up akshat held guddan's both start to take seven round around the fire all throw flowers on them

They complete the phera both sat down then pandit ji instruct akshat to tie mangalsutra around guddan's neck akshat does the same he slightly slide her hair tie the mangalsutra guddan feeling butterflies as his hot breath hitting on her nape then akshat take some sindur in a coin and fill guddan's partion guddan close her eyes in happiness

Panditji said the marriage complete now both get up and went to dadi and take her blessing

She hug akshan and kiss their foreheads then they went to bhusan ji and kaushalya and take their blessings then went to her bua and phupa ji they also blessed him

Jeevan and revati hug them and congratulate them for marriage

Now it's time for vidaai all are crying bhushan ji was not looking at guddan as he can't able to see his gudiya going away from him

Guddan first went to Kaushalya and hug her she also reciprocate it she was crying genuinely although she didn't like guddan but the fact the mother inside her making her cry as her daughter leaving her although she fake loving her but the fact she rised her

G- ma aap apna khyal rakhna and thank you ma apne aaj tak mujhe revati se jayada pyaar kiya mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai ma revati paida bhi nahi hui thi apne mera kitna khyal rakhatha main chah kar bhi wi ehsaan nahi chuka paungi

K- nahi guddan aisa mat bolo main tujhse wo pyaar wo aapna paan ka dikhaba karti rehti thi aur tujhe kya kuch nahi kaha yaha tak ki main yeh soch liya ki teri shadi ho jayegi to tujhse mujhe churakar mil jayega par main galat thi meri andar ki maa tadapi uski beti ko dur jate dekh mujhe maaf kar de beta

G- nahi ma aisa maat bolo main aapse kabhi naraj thi hi nahi

(Guys main ne socha ki kaushalya ko positive bana deti hoon so aab se kaushalya guddan se genuinely pyaar karegi)

Then she went to revati and jeevan both cried hugging her

Then she went to her papa

G- papa kya aap apni guddan se naaraz hai uske taraf dekhenge bhi nahi

Bhusan ji turn to her and both father daughter hug each other bhushan ji then kiss her forehead

Then he take guddan and make her sit on car then she fold his hand infront of akshat

B- damad ji meru guddan bholi hai usse agar kuch galti ho jaye maaf kardijyega

A- aap chinta maat kijiye papa main guddan ka pura khyal rakhunga

Then he also seat on the car and it drove towards jindal mension guddan was still crying so akshat went near her and take her in a side hug and weep her tears and kiss both her eyes

A- jaan ro mat tumhre papa indore mein hi rehte hai indonesia main nahi tum jab chao unse mile aa sakti ho

G- akshat aapko pata hai jab hum chote the humare pados main ek didi ki shadi hui unki vidaai ke waqt wo bhout ro rahi thi unhe dekh main papa se boli ki papa main kabhi shadi nahi karungi mujhe unhe chod kar nahi jaan lekin ladki to paraya dhan hoti hai wo humesa apne papa ke paas nahi reh sakti

A- yeh to hai guddan magar tum ek gahr chod karti rahi ho magar tumhe dusra ghar mil raha hai aur main bhi to hu aab rona band karo

Then to lighten the situation he said

A- lagta hai tum mujhse shadi nahi karna chati thi issi liye itna ro rahi ho

G- nahi nahi Akshat hum to kanse aapse shadi karna chate the

A- acha to mrs guddan jindal aap mare ja rahi thi mujhse shadi karne ke liye

G- wo to hum kabke mar chuke jab pheli baar ehsaas hua hum apse pyar karte hai

Both hug each other

After some time they reach at jindal mension they come out of the car went towards the door dadi do the arti of guddan then she place a rice bowl and a plate of alta

S- guddan beta apne pair se yeh kalash gira kar iss thali main pair rakh kar andar aao

Guddan do as dadi said then dadi instruct laxmi to bring the plate of haldi and laxmi bring it then guddan dip her hand in it and then go to near the door just below antra's hand print she leaves her hand print

She come and stood beside akshat

S- chalo durga laxmi saru apni saas ka ashirwad lo

Trio make faces and went to guddan and take her blessing she just put her hand on them

Then they get up and durga hug her

D- (wishper in her ear) congratulations tum jo chati thi wo ho gaya ban gayi tum jindal khandan ki bahu humari saas magar humesha yaad rakhna yeh jimedari tumse kabhi na ho payega

And left her

G in mind - chinta maat kijiye durga ji humare saath humare akshat hai humse sab ho payega

Then it's time for another ritual to find ring from milk both seat facing each other a big bowl of milk kept in front of them they start to find it

All are cheearing them and at same time both take out the ring

S- are wa isse pata chalta hai ki tum dono ki bara bar ki chalegi

Then dadi said trideviyan to take guddan to akshat's room

Guddan was feeling goosebumps while going to akshat's no now their room

That's it friend

Like and comment

So as all you know next part main ahem ahem hai to apko simple chahiye ya hot wala

too good

Plz update soon

And i want it to be a hot and romantic one😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Welcome back🤗

lovely+fabulous 👍🏼

Loved it

In next part I'm ready to take wt ever u give 😉

plz update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Finally akshan get married 🥳

Now we want next chapter to be hot and romantic ☺️

But plz update soon ❤️❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update

You made Kaushalya positive it's good as there are other negative character👍

Daayan bahu doesn't know Guddan had Akshat support 😂

I want hot romance in next update please🙏

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Posted: 6 years ago

Aww!! AJ yaha bhi itna hi awwwdorable hai..!! Coming up next: Hotwa? ☺️

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