AKSHAN SS -love chori chori part 13update ( 8 may 2019) - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Awwwie... Hope you update again soon...


Thank you dear

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Wah story ke cupid villain ko hi badal dala waise ye unexpected tha

Akshan conversation were cute
Update the next part soon


Thanks
Ha socha ke thoda different karu

Will update soon
Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: kusharberry

Beautiful update dear

Loved it
So Akshan are gonna get married within 15days loved their convo
Please do continue soon


Thanks lina

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Amazing

Vijay was surprise element
Akshan excited for their marriage


Thank you dear😊😊😊


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Posted: 6 years ago
#85
Superb update😊
Plz continue soon
I really want to see akshan chori chhupe romance before marriage too🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part - 10
Soon the engagement start akshat guddan went to the stage revati was holding akshat's ring while durga holding guddan's

Dadi said akshat to make guddan wear the ring akshat nod he take the ring guddan move her hand towards him he slip the ring in her hand

Then revati give the ring to guddan she held his hand and slip the ring everyone clap for them then Akshan went to dadi and toch her feet she keep her both hand on their heads

S-bhagwan kare tum dono ki jodi humesha bani rahe

Then they take blessings from bhusan ji and kaushalya

S- durga laxmi saru chalo tum teeno apni saas sasur ki pair chup

L- dadi hone wali sasu ma to humse choti hai to hum kyun unka pair chup

S- umar bhale hi choti hai magar rishte main tumhari saas hai

Reculantly trideviyan toch Akshan's feet both said sada suhagan raho at a time guddan brust out laughing akshat just control his laugh

Three daughter in laws stand up durga glare at guddan she shut up

Then one by one guest come to them and congratulate for their engagement

All are then get busy in chit chat and eating seeing it right time akshat grab guddan's hand went to dadi

A- ma main guddan ko apne kamre main leke ja raha hoon usse antra se bhi ashirwad lena hai

S- thik hai lala jao tum dono

Akshat then take guddan to his room guddan went to antra's portrait and close her eyes and join her hands akshat come to her after locking the door guddan open her eyes she look at akshat and smile

A- vaise kya kaha tumne antra se

G- main ne unhe thank you kaha kahina kahi unhike bajhse aap mujhe mile aur unhe promise kiya ki unhike tarha apki achi patni dadi ki bahu kishor ji vardaan ji ki ma aur teeno bahuon ki saas bange

A- I know guddan tum sab ache se nibha sakti ho

Guddan then saw the door was locked

G- akshat apne door kyun lock kiya sab kya sochenge

A- jaan koi kuch nahi samjhe ga sab khane main aur bato main busy hai

He then made her seat on the bed and seat beside her then take her hand in his he gently kiss her finger where he made her wear the ring

A- aaj tum officially meri ban gayi ho bas kuch din baad shadi phir tum meri biwi ban jaogi

G- akshat main pehle bhi apki thi baas aaj sab ke samne apne mujhe apna banya

Both then look at each other then akshat pull her closer guddan feeling butterflies in her tummy he held her face and bent down his head and put his lips in her guddan close her eyes in pleasure

Both kiss each other passionately then broke the kiss in need of air akshat then kiss her forehead both join their foreheads and smile at each other

Just then they hear knock on door both straight them selves guddan weep her lipstick mark from akshat they open the door and saw revati standing their with a teasing smile

R- vaise aap logo ne yeh door kyun lock kiya tha kahi suhagrat mana ne ka to irada nahi tha aap logo ka

G- chutki mar khaegi tu kuch bhi bolti hai

AKSHAN are really embarrassed with revati' talk of sr

R- acha sorry aab apka romance khatam ho gaya ho to chale hume ghar jana hai

Revati went from their akshan then hug each other then both went down stairs gupta's then went to their home

After two days it was akshan sangeet and mehendi gupta reached at jindal mension

Guddan was wearing a green lehenga looking very pretty akshat was wearing a blue colour sherwani and looking very handsome

Guddan was already seat on the stage then akshat come their he smile looking at guddan then went and seat beside her then revati and vardaan come in the middle with a mic

V- hello ladies and gentlemen aap.sabhi ka swagat hai mere papa mr Akshat jindal and humari hone wali ma ms guddan gupta ki sangeet main

R- so challiye bulate hai mere mummy papa yani mr bhusan gupta and mrs kaushalya gupta

Bhusan ji and kaushalya come on stage both dance on the song Aye meri zohara jabeen

Then come the trideviyan they dance on the song prem ratan dhan payo

Then come revati she dance on the song dilbar

Then laxmi and vardaan dance on the song tujhe dekha to yeh jana sanam

Then revati come with mic

R- so ladies and gentlemen here come star of tonight akshat jiju and guddan di

All clap for them akshat take guddan hand and both went to stage then the song started

Tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai.

O tere sang yaara...
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara

O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Main tera ho jaaun
Jo tu karde ishara

Kahin kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushboo se takraaun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwaab tu...

Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu...

O karam Khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.

O tere sang yara
Khushrang bahara
Tere bin ab toh
Na jeena ganwara.

Maine chhode hain baaki saare raste
Bas aaya hoon tere paas re
Meri aankhon mein tera naam hai
Pehchaan le...

Sab kuch mere liye tere baad hai
Sau baaton ki ik baat hai
Main na jaunga kabhi tujhe chhod ke
Ye jaan le

O karam Khudaya hai
Tera pyar jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai.

O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.

O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Main behta musafir
Tu thehra kinara.

The song finished akshan are lost in each other's eyes they brought back to their sense guddan blush at it

Then both family dance on gallan goodiyaan song

After the sangeet finished gupta's return to home that night Akshan can't able to sleep as next day is their marriage

That's it friends

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Posted: 6 years ago
#87
Nice chapter
Akshan Dance was nice
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88
Good update
Guddan laughing while giving Aashirwad was best
Akshan scenes were cute

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Posted: 6 years ago
#89
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#90
Superb
Update Soon

Edited by nahtani88 - 6 years ago

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