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Posted: 6 years ago
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Salam and hi.
Firstly, I don't know about turkey. So apologies even if a mentioned something wrong in this tiny info😃

Secondly, an important note at end.so enjoy then read it.

AKSHAN OS- chapter 5( day 2- evening): HONEYMOON diaries:

This was the 20th time she has peaked into the hall.they left the house at 9:00 am, reached the hotel at 9:30 and now it was 1:00 pm.AJ was continuously giving lectures on god knows what and she has been sitting in this room all alone for these hours.

" partnerrr! Yeh uncle kab ayain gay.is s acha main ghar main hi reh jati.TV dekhne ko to milta aur yeah uncle..." A sour taste entered in her mouth.
" apna mobile chor kar mera legayay."

On other hand, AJ was in his full form.even he was counting at guddan's arrival.his lips turned into a curve. He has setup all his meetings continuously , smartly exchanged his phone and made guddan sit in a room with nothing to pass her time.

She again stood up and now ,it was 21st time, she peaked into his room and again disappointment.she came back to room again and looked at his screen saver.it was his and antara picture and both were smiling looking to each other.it was a vacation picture, uncle was wearing some colored t- shirt to her surprise and somebody took a random.
" mujhay dekh kar to kabhi itnay dandt nahi nikle"this heart ached.

" tum ne kabhi usko aese dekha" perfect point pitched by brain

" magar , taali dono hath se bajti" heart took the lead.

" magar pehla hath agay barha hua tumhara bhi to hosakta" brainy win.

" magar main kab larri!!" guddan uttered from her mouth this time.

" akele Bethe Bethe pagal hogayi ho kia? " AJ loosen his tie and was looking innocently at guddan.

" pagal hi hongi.ap ne Jan bojh kar yeh kia Na, itni sari meetings and mera mobile legayay." Guddan just wanted to eat him.

" ohhh! Mujhay pata nahi chala" he couldn't hide his smile.
" dekha, Sab apka plan tha"

" aray nahi, yeh to aese hi"

" aese hi, mujhay dekh kar akshat jindal aese hi muskura rahay hain. Qayamat ki nishani hogi yeh"

" acha gussa choro, chalo Ab"

" kahan?" Guddan calmed down a bit.

" Ankara nahi dekhna "

" sher ka nam bhi Antara s milta hua" heart informed her.

" shhh" guddan put her hand on chest.

" billi bhaga rahi ho kia...shhh shhh kia karrhai"

" nahi ...woh...chalain" guddan was excited.she had never been to any place other than Indore.

At her back, akshat smiled mischievously.
...

They saw 2-3 famous places as shown in Turkish dramas, went to seaside and now it was 5:30 pm.

" Ab kahan jarahay."

" turkey ayay aur yeh Na kia ,aese kese hoskta." AJ pointed towards hot air balloon and he clearly knows what guddan reaction will be.

" kk...iaaa" she stammered.
AJ controlled his laugh.in diwali party, rewati has told him an incident which reveals that guddan is frightened to heights at its peak.

" aray kia hua! Tum s nahi ho PAYE ga kia guddan?" He used the usual formula.

" nahiii...bilkul nahiii...chaliyay." she forwarded towards balloon.

" Ab ayay ga maza"

As balloon started to flow, guddan started her lord's chanting.AJ was casually standing there waiting for the action.as balloon takes its full flight, AJ called guddan.

" guddan woh dekho" and chord struck right.as guddan saw land, she started to scream.
" maaa! Maaa! Maaa!" Tears started to flow from her eyes and AJ laughed hysterically.soon he realized, he has gone over the line, he signalled the person to get it down but, he assumed as to increase height.
" oh shit! " AJ realized he didn't get the signal.

" guddan ! Kuch nahi hua. Sorry mujhay nahi pata tha tum itna dar jaogi.bass abhi neche chalain jaingay."
The balloon disballanced a bit and guddan just couldn't control more.she hugged AJ tightly and started crying loudly.

" guddan bass! Neche sabko lagay ga k main ne tumhain Mara hai.itna zor s kun ro rahi." He tried to calm her while patting at her back.

" acha dekho...kitna khobsurat view hai.ankhain kholo guddan .main hun yahan"
She opened her eyes and quickly shut her self in akshat chest.
" ap...apko yeh karna tha to mujhay ghar hi chor dete.aesa kun kia"
Akshat cupped her face " dekho mujhay...ankhain kholo.." Guddan opened her eyes and sadly look at him.
" mujhay nahi pta tha tum itna darti ho.sorry." as soon as akshat looked directly at her eyes, he couldn't move them.sunset was at its peak.rays flushed at her face and she looked more mesmerizing.on other hand, guddan could sense his guilt and he hold his shirt more tightly.they inched closer and forgot what they were doing at moments back.akshat tighted his hold at her back.and next moment, akshat put his lips on her cheeks.guddan closed her eyes.then he kissed below the former point, and then below.guddan couldn't stand on her legs.her knees started to weaken.she tightened her grip.she moved her face and exposed her neck to him.akshat started putting his lips at every inch.he widened her shirt and kissed her shoulder and was about to go down when guddan turned her face.they were breathing heavily .akshat kissed her cheeks again and now directed his way towards her lips.he kissed the corner if her lips and guddan moaned.as their lips touched, the balloon hit the ground and they realized their positions.the whole crew were smiling looking at them.
Guddan ran towards car while akshat,as hard as possible ,tried to looked normal while paying for the ride.then he stride towards his car and at next moment ,they were on there way towards home.both remained silent and didn't look at each other.when they reached home, guddan started to walk off and quickly hide in her room when she heard his voice.
" pack your stuff. We are going back" he ordered with straight face while guddan agreed and had same thought in their mind.

" hum akele sath reh hi nahi sakte"

Note:

So now, I want to ask...should I continue or not? If not, I can switch to one shorts and its absolutely fine with me. Maybe I am not justifying honeymoon sequence. So ,if I get 8-10 individual comments by tomorrow night, I will continue this..otherwise, I will close this chapter.😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Arre attiya it is not a question to be asked u should continue pls or abhi sirf shuruaat hai aage bat badhaiye pls pls 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Well I personally loved this part as I too have a height phobia and thus could feel Guddan's thoughts and fearful emotions😆
So,I somehow was imagining that it was me and not Guddan here the way the fear of heights was laid emphasis on here in this part 😉😛

Attiya Di please write os/ts etc but continue this FF as well 😳
It is superb 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Well I personally loved this part as I too have a height phobia and thus could feel Guddan's thoughts and fearful emotions 😆

So,I somehow was imagining that it was me and not Guddan here the way the fear of heights was laid emphasis on here in this part 😉😛

Attiya Di please write os/ts etc but continue this FF as well 😳
It is superb 👏


@bold raglak_akshan seriously MATLAB AJ babu k sath ...ahmmm ahmm ☺️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: kayafever


@bold raglak_akshan seriously MATLAB AJ babu k sath ...ahmmm ahmm ☺️


Ufff I am laughing so badly right now after reading what u wrote 😆 *Blush* *Blush* 😳
But Guddan won't spare me for this 😆😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
wow... this was so awesome! especially the last line.. they are attracted to each other...
can't wait for more.. do continue soon!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Awesome hot air balloon sequence
Loved it
Please update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
I am a silent reader of this forum from the beginning, but when you said you will close this chapter if there were not enough people commenting I was like I have to get back to commenting.

Anyways, it is a great story and I love how Guddan is getting jealous and the reaction that Aj has. Please do continue.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Woww... This is a great story! Always been a silent reader but thought to comment now.. can't wait for more of the honeymoon!!

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