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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
Wow such a hot episode. Loving it ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Attiya I can't sleep her pls update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Phle hi din honeymoon pe ya haal 😆..seems like aage kya hoga..how can they face each other
Pls continue soon.i m excited ki aage kya hoga😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
How are you ? dear attiya I missed you a lot and take care dear as if u will be fine you will be posting soon look how mean I am. Back to update,AJ uncle's hormones have started to loose.Well I wanted to ask whether you are going to make him loose in the same trip or you have some other plans.Just curious😉 update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: attiya1.3

Salam and hi.. Due to fever couldn't update.

So enjoy.

AKSHAN OS- chapter 5( day 1): HONEYMOON DIARIES

" thank you sahil. Tum ne itne short notice par bhi ghar saaf karwadiya"
AJ said with gratitude.

" sir, apne last moment 2 rooms ready rakhne ko kahay.but, dair bauhat hochuki thi so 2nd room k washrooms start nahi ho PAYE. Kal hojayn ge. "

" sir ap logon k sath rehnay kon araha?" Sahil inquired.he thought this must be a honeymoon for newly wed couple but sir, just informed him to ready two rooms.

" actually, one of my family member is planning to come here and they have kids ,so that's why, just prepping up for them."

He went inside where guddan was looking outside window with open mouth.
" andhere main kia paglon ki tarhan dekh rahi ho .khair. Main aur sahil khana lene ja rahy.tumhara kamra dosra wala hai aur yeh bat sirf hamaray beach rahay GI. Jab tak main wapis aun, tum fresh hochuki ho MATLAB mera kamra aur washroom khali kardena."

AJ turned to leave.

" mera kamra khali kardena!" Guddan copied him.

" sun liya main n. Itni nakal utar utar kar kahin tumhara chehra tehra hi Na hojaye." He took his wallet and left.

" sun liya..." Guddan stopped in between.
" kahin sach main tehra hogya to!!" She touched her face.

" pehlay pura ghar dekhtay hain. Phir nahayain gay.wese bhi khadoos raat tak ayega"

She looked every corner of house.then stepped outside and enjoyed drizzling.due to dark ,she couldn't see much of surrounding.then played with little snow.after 1 hour she went back to AJ room to get freshen up.

" pehlay saman kamray main rakh deti hun." She slided her suitcase and put it in her room.

" kitna chalak admi hai yeh. Khud itna bara aur acha room liya aur mujhay yeh sarra hua diya." Guddan pouted.in hurry, she slammed the door and rushed to washroom to have shower.after 20 minutes ,she off the shower and looked around.

" uffh...kapray to nikalna hi bhool gayi aur kapray bhi dho diye main n. Ab Bahar kese jaon." Guddan got tensed.she looked outside and her sight met AJ bag.

"Is se phle k woh ajayay ,mujhay apne kamray main Jana hi hoga." She wrapped towel around her and she shivered as she stepped outside.
" ufhhh itni sardi"
She quickly reached to his bag and she wanted to bang her head.it was locked!

" Ab kia karun!"
She quickly ran to her room and this time another shock awaits her.it was jammed!
" ufhhh... Please khul ja! Please"
Tears started to fill her eyes.at the very next moment, she heard the voice at main door.
" guddan! Woh main..." Words stuck in his throat as what he saw just popped his eyes.
Akshat ko jhatka, Akshat ka control atka😆
there she was standing all wet in a medium sized towel which was trying hard to cover her.her fine legs were giving a full invitation whereas her clevage was trying hard to free himself from that blue towel.in a split of second, akshat turned and tried to calm himself.
On other side, guddan just stood frozen.tears started to roll on her face and she went down on the door and wrapped herself.akshat heard her sobbing
Guddan's adorable, crying like a baby😳
, he composed himself and turned trying to avoid looking at her. He removed his jacket because he realized its too cold even inside the house and she was just in a tow...he stopped at that point.he bent on his knees and wrapped his jacket around her.
Guddan raised her eyes and God knows why, akshat felt something bad.he wiped her tears and make her stand.
" shhh! Koi baat nahi.kia hua?"
He asked politely.

" woh main...w..oh...kapray bhool...darwaza...jam" guddan said between her choking voice.akshat put his finger on her lips.
" koi baat nahi. Main hun indhar." He tried to pushed the door but it was jammed.maybe it was slammed hardly.
" yeh to fully jammed hai." He looked at guddan who was shivering with cold.
" yeh chabi lo.mere bag main s koi shirt wagera phen lo.us k upar yeh jacket daal lo."
Guddan tried to cross him to reach the room but, her elbow touched akshat ,her grip loosen and her towel was about to fall when akhshat held it tightly at her back.in this process, he had erased all distance between them.guddan shut her eyes while akshat was staring at her face.after few moments, she raised her eyes and they both lost in each other.
" beautiful! " thats what akshat could think of. Her big eyes, glowing soft cheeks, rosy lips.😳 The towel has changed its position and now it was revealing more than before.
akshat hands were losing its grip.they tried to fill the gap.guddan hardened the grip on his shirt.akshat eyes went from her eyes towards her lips and wanted to touch them.he came close inch by inch.the next move can unite them completly.
Kiss- miss😆
" buzzz! Buzzz! Buzzz" his phone rang.both came out of there senses.guddan took the towel from his hands while akshat hardly kicked the door which opened the room.he took his keys and both stride straight away into their rooms and locked it.


After few minutes ,guddan has changed while akshat drenched himself in shower.

" Ab phir woh mujhay tharki Buddha kahaygi aur is baar harkat bhi aesi hi ki hai. Yeah to pehli raat thi.agle 6 din kia hoga" Akshat banged his head.
@ Bold ye wali line epic hai!!🤣

While guddan stared at his jacket and dug her face in it.

" subha kese face karungi aks...nahi...uncle ko. Woh bauhat baray hain. Nam nahi." 😳

Both were figuring out how to face each other unknown with the fact what next morning holds for them.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Atttiya eagerly waiting for your next update pls update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi attiya how is your health? I hope u r fine now as ur writtiw skills prove that you r a wonderful person so I pray to God that he keeps you always healthy n happy
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Salam and sorry for late update...
Enjoy😳

AKSHAN OS- chapter 5( day 2- morning): Honeymoon Diaries

Guddan stepped into hall with low speed..
" partner! Please uncle chalay gaye hun"
She looked around.AJ room was opened.she peeped in and it was empty.she was relieved for only 2 seconds.as she turned, there was AJ ,dressed as usual in black suit, reading newspaper and eating his omlette.
" inkay andar koi jin fit hai.itni subha subha kon itna fresh fresh aur tayar hokar bethta aur pata nahi, kia kha rahay.meray lye bhi bana dete." Guddan sadly thought.

She walked casually towards table.AJ didn't move his eyes from paper.she peeped onto his plate.
" cheese omlete! Pait main dard hoga akele kha kar" guddan take a deep breath of delicious omlette.she went into kitchen and found everything clean and cold.

" mu...mujhay bhi bhook lag rahi hai.banda do anday zyada daal kar thora zyada nashta banadeta hai." She was about to cry.
" AJ... Mujhay bhook lag rahi. Mujhay kuch banana nahi ata.raat bhi kuch nahi khaya us darwa..." She stopped in middle of the point.
This was it.

" idhar ao" AJ folded his paper and looked straight into her eyes.
" mujh...y nahi lagi bhook" she gulped down.

" idhar betho." AJ ordered.
Guddan seated next to him.
" pehli aur akhiri bar hum yeh baat karrahay.kal Jo bhi hua, woh hum dono ki galti thi.we forgot our level of relation.
" pati patni! Nahi nahi...usmain to kal s bauhat kuch zyada hoga" her heart said.

Na tum interested ho aur Na main."
" Ab aesa bhi kuch nahi" guddan added it in heart.

" main tumhain uncle ,khadoos, ajeeb lagta aur mujhay tum koi bachi."
" hot lagana bhool gaye ap" guddan just get restless with her heart comment.

Jo bhi hua, woh heat of moment tha"
" heat of hormones" this heart again.

" ainda nahi hoga."
" kun!!!!" This time, heart uses tongue to express.
Akshat eyes widened with this question.
" nahi ...woh...ap theek keh rahay"
Guddan find a escape route.
" aur yeh baat hamaray bech main hi rahay GI Bas" AJ continued.
Guddan nodded on his points.

" aur yeh raha tumhara omlete.meri plate jhanknay k bajaye dosri plate dekhti to nazar ajata." AJ wiped his face.

" aray wah! Uncle ap kabhi kabhi bauhat achay lagtay ho" guddan snatched the plate and started eating it.

" yummm!"

" meri meeting hai.main ja rahA hun.raat main late hojaon ga.kuch problem ho to message kardena.main call back kardunga" AJ picked his stuff and was about to leave.

" 1minute.Ab ap mujhay bilkul achay nahi lag rahay.main akele kia karungi is ghar main.ap wait karain .main bhi ap k sath chalungi."

" main tumhain kahin lekar nahi ja raha."

" nahi lekar jayingay?"

" nahi"

" pakka"

" pakka!"

" soch lejiye.abhi han kardein"

" Jo karna hai karlo."

AJ turned.

" daddiii! Mujhay bauhat dar lag raha" guddan sobbed and it was too real that even for 1 second, AJ thought to take her.

" beta guddan kiya hua"

" dadi...AJ akele ja rahay Bahar.mujhay is jungle jese ghar main akela chor kar.apko pata hai yahan chipkali bhi hai.ap n hi kaha tha inka khayal rakhna hai.Ab main meeting main inka khayal rakhne Jana chati to yeh mana kar rahay.daddi mujhay wapis bula lain." Guddan winked at AJ and he wanted to bang his head on the wall.

" aese kese ja sakta. Tu phone de usko."
Guddan danced while coming towards AJ and he could only glare at her.

" maa , main lekar ja raha apki guriya ko.han han, turkey kuch zyada achay se ghumaon ga inko.OK bye."

" tumhare pas 5 min hain"
Guddan ran to dressup while AJ smirk.
" chalo beta! Aesa turkey ghumaon ga aj k baqi k 6 din chup betho GI ."

Continued.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh nooo!
This CONTINUED word was a minor heart attack for me as it marked the end of today's SUPER AWESOME UPDATE 😭😆
When will u update the next part Attiya 🥱
I really liked this part a lot👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Oh nooo!

This CONTINUED word was a minor heart attack for me as it marked the end of today's SUPER AWESOME UPDATE 😭😆
When will u update the next part Attiya 🥱
I really liked this part a lot👏


Thanks dear😆

Soon...Saturday or maybe before

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