AKSHAN OS- chapter 5( the end): HONEYMOON DIARIES updated

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Hi nice stor please do continue with it would like to read more:)

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Please update the next part aatiya di😉

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Awesome update
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wow... this was so awesome! especially the last line.. they are attracted to each other...
can't wait for more.. do continue soon!

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Awesome hot air balloon sequence
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Originally posted by: Nir_jaanu
I am a silent reader of this forum from the beginning, but when you said you will close this chapter if there were not enough people commenting I was like I have to get back to commenting.

Anyways, it is a great story and I love how Guddan is getting jealous and the reaction that Aj has. Please do continue.

😆ohhh...chalo my point worked in this manner

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Woww... This is a great story! Always been a silent reader but thought to comment now.. can't wait for more of the honeymoon!!

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Hi nice stor please do continue with it would like to read more:)

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Salam.

So firstly, I didn't put condition to get more comments.just wanted to know if this story is working or not.

Second...I feel this part a bit fictitious as its too direct and won't happen in series..so enjoy.

AKSHAN OS- chapter 5 ( day - 3 start): honeymoon diaries

" why I am not getting tickets? This is 5th agency I am calling to and same answer" AJ threw his mobile which hit the vase at the corner.he hold is head and sat on sofa. Guddan was standing at the corner of the room with her packed bag but, didn't have courage to utter a signal word.

" gussa to aese horahay jese main gunpoint par inko balloon lekar gayi thi aur woh Sab..." She shut her eyes.still she could feel his lips; his warmth .

" woh Sab kese hosakta. Uncle kese karsakte.is Umar main bhi inke hormones kuch zayada hi active hain" she looked at him.his face hidden by his hands.

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" akshat mera kitna dil tha itni height se sunset dekhne ka.dekho Na kitna pyara lag raha." Antara pointed towards the sky.they had come for a vacation to srilanka and akshat has planned a camp on this hilly place to fulfil her wish.

" hmmm! Bauhat khoobsurat." He looked towards her.

" main tumhain asman dekha rahi." She wanted to move his face.

" main apni zindagi main roshini karne wali ko dekh raha hun." He pulled antara closer and he kissed her with all his love. Antara blushed and akshat couldn't resist his hands off her while antara ran to create a distance.

" antara! Yar idhar ao"

" pakro mujhay"

" antara"

Antara

"Antara" AJ came back to his senses as his phone rang.

" sir aj ki to nahi parson subha ki flight arange horahi."

" mujhay aj hi wapis Jana hai"

" sir flights booked hain. Festival season hai"

" theek hai! Done karo. Mera dum ghut raha yahan" he hung up his phone and guddan couldn't bear more.

" kis baat ka itna gussa dikha rahay ap. Aesa lag raha k apko kisi ne bazar main cher diya hai"

" shut up! Just shut up. Mujhay tumhari awaz hi nahi sunni.awaz, shikal ,wajood Sab nahi chayay mujhay."

" kis baat ka itna attitude hai. Yeh ap ka guilt hai Jo gussa ban kar nikal raha"

" guilt! Kis bat ka guilt" akshat moved forward.

" Jo Sab apne kia uska guilt.man lijayay k apse control nahi hua"

Akshat became furious.he pulled guddan and answer in a stern voice.

" control!!! Guilt! Lagta hai tum apni had bhool gayi ho. Tum se muskura kr and araaam s baat kia karli to tum kuch bhi bol dogi .apni had aur aukat mat bholo. Aur kis bat ka guilt? Main n kiss kisi hawa ya bejan putlay ko nahi ki thi. " he moved closer. " tali 1 hath se nahi bajti. Tumhara response bhi equal tha tabhi woh Sab itni der tak hua. To iska MATLAB yeh bhi hua k tum bhi enjoy karrahi thin "

Guddan eyes widened. She was shivering with fear with this new avatar of uncle.he is too bold!

Guddan shut her eyes with embarrassment .

" aur Jo bhi hua tha woh tumhain control karne k lye kiya tha Maine .Ab puray staff k samne tumhain thappad mar kar chup to kara nahi Sakta tha." Guddan eyes widened with uncle plans.

" Ab agar apni had samajh agayi ho to mujh se sawal karne ki koshish kabhi Na karna." He loosen his grip and walked towards his room.

Guddan wiped his tears.

" jhotay. Badtamez. Mujhay control karne k liye tha woh Sab !!aur konsay mahurat main mujh se muskura k baat ki.isi point se jhotay sabit hotay. Is Umar main itni cute, piyari larki dekh kar phisal gaye bol dyn ge to Antara aunty kia akar saza dedyngi." She continued blabbering for an hour while akshat took a shower, changed clothes and shut himself in blanket, away from guddan voice.