AKSHAN OS- chapter 5( the end): HONEYMOON DIARIES updated - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
#51
that was nice and last para lol yes Guddan you are cute really cute lol continue soon:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#52
Arre itna gussa AJ ka really frightening😕
I hope Akshat and Guddan slowly realise that both are falling for each other and have lovely moments
Nice update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#53
That was such a hanging end... you can't end there. Please continue asap. Please!!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Attiya pls try to update today pls
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Yes Attiya Di pls update today 😭
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Salam... Sorry for delay
Because I forgot that I am writing a story and I have to update it. 😆

Its a bit thanda part for me but, needed for development.

AKSHAN- OS chapter 5( day 3- morning): honeymoon diaries

Next day, guddan stayed in bed to avoid akshat.she couldn't sleep whole night.whenever she shut her eyes,there he was kissing her.

" khwab main bhi khudi yeh harkat start ki aur ilzam mujh par laga dain ge."
Finally she getup from bed ,took shower and stepped out into hall.
There he was , now with another trick to drool her.
Exercise!

Guddan came in a trance towards sofa and put her knees closer to her chest.he was doing squats with back towards guddan ,with black inner and black trouser.

" uffhhh! Exercising costume bhi black" heart started conversation.

" han Na, dekho. White hi pehan lete." Mind added.

Now he started with his yoga stretches.his body, muscles, hair and body movements were all enticing her.

" body kitni achi Na" heart complimented.

" han ...especially legs. Uncle bauhaut hot hain wese"

" han aur legs k upar..."

" shhh" guddan put her hand on chest.

" main koi PT teacher nahi hun Jo tum mujhay aese dekh rahi ho."

" nahi ...woh...main ..soch rahi thi."

" Mubarak ho! Sochne jesa mushkil kam guddan se ho pa raha hai"
Guddan pouted.

" nashtay main kia hai?" Guddan asked as if it was all normal between them.

" woh raha kitchen ,jao wahan" AJ said with a smile.

" ponch gayi.Ab?" Guddan was excited to eat some delicious breakfast from his hand.

" Ab fry pan uthao"

" okayyy!" Guddan said with all excitement.

" usko stove par rakho aur Jo banana hai banalo" AJ came back to his mood.

Guddan took a deep breath.stepped forward and came closer to him.AJ sensed trouble.
" wahan se bhi taunt mar sakti thin.sunayi deta myjhay" AJ gulped down.

Guddan grabbed his hand and made him sit on sofa.
" yeh kia kar rahi..." Guddan put her fingers on his lips.
" Ab ap kuch der sirf meri baat Sunay gay. Aese kab tak chalega.hum kab tak aese lar lar k chal saktay hain. Dekhiye Ab Shadi hogayi , 2weeks hogyay ,3rd week par hum honeymoon bhi agayay."
AJ wanted to interrupt.

" OK ! OK! Dosron k mutabiq hum honeymoon par hain. But kab tak hum yeh relation maintain rakhayn ge aese? Ab Na mera plan hai dosri Shadi ka aur Na apka plan hoga third saas lanay ka."

Something struck in his heart when she mentioned about her 2nd marriage.

" to?" He inquired what this point leads to.

" to Ab saath rehna hi hai to kisi rishtay se rehtay hain Na?"

" main tumhain patn..." AJ got furious.

" han han pata hai.patni ka darja nahi dunga.antara meri zindagi hai.pehla pyaar hai. OK! Rakhyay.
Main n konsa patni bannay ko bola. Hum dost ban kar nahi reh saktay? 1 normal rishtay k sath dunya k samne aayin. Na main apki personal space main aungi Na ap meri aur jindal parivaar ki saas bannay ki puri koshish karungi."

Akshat was stunned.after 5 minutes, he put his hand on her forehead .

" tum guddan hi hona? Aur kahin bemaar to nahi ho? Itni aqalmandi ki baat, woh bhi subha subha aur bina kuch khayay."

" ap mera mazaq urra rahay" guddan didn't like his reaction.

" array nahi! Ab dosti main mazak to chalta haina"

" MATLAB dosti?" Guddan got excited.

He put his hand on her palm " dosti."

"But kuch rules set hongay.
1. Jo Sab yahan hua woh yahin bhool kar jayain gay.

2. Meri dosti main safai buahat main element hai.so kamra, ghar or most important kitchen hamesha saaf rahega.

3. Tum meri chezon ko change nahi karogi.

4. "Ap mujhay har waqt nahi dantay gay. " guddan added.

5. Ghar k liye Jo main faisla lunga us main tum s zaroor opinion lunga.

" yeh acha tha" guddan got excited.

" but is dosti se mera faida kia?".
" kia chayay tumhain?"

" aaa...ap meri jindal parivaar ki saas bannay main help karain gay.kia karna hota hai, kese hota. And most important, mujhay cooking sekhain gay."

Akshat wanted to say no straight away but, her eyes caught him.she was looking at him with expectations and he doesn't know how, he said " done"

" yes ! Thank you thank you. " she hugged him tightly.akshat smiled and hugged her back and both said in union

" dosti wala hug!"
Continue..
Edited by attiya1.3 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#58
I forgot to complete day 3.. Edited😆

Edited by attiya1.3 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#59
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Ok guddu was starring at her uncles workout session 😆 aur uncle usseh hot BHI laga
Ok so when guddan talked about her second marriage uncle ki Dil mein Kuch Kuch huva nah
Now iam really excited to see how their friendship will turn into love
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#60
Awesome update
Love it
Akshan convo is amazing
Continue soon

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