||And I'll Keep Trying|| A Sai - Virat OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Blackwind

It is beautiful❤️....I was so engrossed while reading and thought it ended too quickly😉

You are fab here👍🏼...plz post the other one too...would love to read😳

Thank you so much love🤗

I'm glad that you liked it!

I'll definitely post another one, thanks to your encouragement!

Originally posted by: ByunBaekhyun

Just one word : RESPECT!

Man you just wrote how it should have been portrayed in the episode today. The words that Virat used with Sai, that also in front of Pakhi..... CV should allow some time slot for Virat where he just sit back and understand the intensity of the words he used against that innocent soul. Words are sharper than knife and his words literally shredded the flower inside Sai, a flower which was already dying, a girl who was already broken.

Repenting is necessary for Virat after this fiasco and I distaste the idea of how easy it was to get Sai back in the room. He should be left alone for a certain period to repent. He deserved it. Otherwise, he won't remember the lesson and wil continue to use meaningless hurtful words in the future also.

I've watched some clip of the Bengali version and I simply don't like the Male lead. I know, humans are not perfect and it is kind of a good change and practical to show that Leads are not always perfect. But at least we can expect a strong backbone type Male lead for a strong character like Sai. If Virat goes exactly like thehe Bengali version, I would be extremely disappointed as Neil Bhatt has tremendous acting skill to potray 'Virat' so amazingly. The CV should put a good use of his acting by giving him a script worth of his acting. I could literally potray Neil while I was reading your OS. and the much needed certain period of distance between these two to sort things out and Virat's determination to make thibgs right are cherry on top. The episode today couldn't make me satisfied but your OS just did that. Exactly what I wasas expecting as a rational viewer.

Madam, please guide me how to thibk like you and write like you! Take my RESPECT man!!!

Oh damn, I just wrote a damn composition. Sorry!

Your writing just indulged me to write all these altogether. You are too good man!

Keep gifting us your writups. It's a treat to read!

Happy Writing!

Love you!

Oh my god!!!

Thank you so much babe🤗

This comment means so much to me!

Even I want an episode where Virat completely repents everything he said and Sai doesn't make it easy for him. He cannot get off so easily, not after everything he's said.

I hope they do show a scene where he literally begs Sai for forgiveness and she doesn't give a damn. Today's episode really disappointed me too. Especially the way Virat had it so easy. And Neil is a phenomenal actor, especially when it comes to portraying angst. I hope they put his talent to good use.

I'm so happy to hear that this OS was what the episode couldn't be babe! You have no idea what this means to me!

And don't ask me for guidance on how to write love. Your writing inspires me in so many ways, and the fact that you liked it, I'm on cloud nine now😃

Take all the love babe!

Thank you so much for encouraging me🤗

Wow!! Loved your OS. You have written it so well that the actual scene is going to have me in disappointment. 😆 Nevertheless, do keep writing more!! I like the way you have sketched Virat and Sai in your story. 🤗

Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown

Oh my god!!!

Thank you so much babe🤗

This comment means so much to me!

Even I want an episode where Virat completely repents everything he said and Sai doesn't make it easy for him. He cannot get off so easily, not after everything he's said.

I hope they do show a scene where he literally begs Sai for forgiveness and she doesn't give a damn. Today's episode really disappointed me too. Especially the way Virat had it so easy. And Neil is a phenomenal actor, especially when it comes to portraying angst. I hope they put his talent to good use.

I'm so happy to hear that this OS was what the episode couldn't be babe! You have no idea what this means to me!

And don't ask me for guidance on how to write love. Your writing inspires me in so many ways, and the fact that you liked it, I'm on cloud nine now😃

Take all the love babe!

Thank you so much for encouraging me🤗

The thing that is troubling me most is that, out of every damn hurtful things Virat said, CV made Sai to capture only the 'room' part. really?

So, really really liked the OS. Expecting some more golds from you!

and the fact that you said my writings inspire you.... *embarrassed*

babe, stop embarrassing meh!

Let's see what happens tomorrow. I'm starving for SaiRat!

Originally posted by: MissPrakash

Maam, this is perfect! I mean THE PERFECT Confrontation! I know we won't get anything like this on TV, but I just wish to say... you got it on point. Everything Virat must have thought in the aftermath, everything sai must have felt facing God knows how much in that house in ONE DAY!

Also, the way you wrote this... superb. You made me feel it, visualize, you are my favorite writer here i am not lying, trust me.

Finally, I love the fact that there was no solid conclusion, rather this is how I wanted to have the scene, on this note(without downplaying the issue..). I love how both Sai and Virat understand how much trust and respect stands for in their lives! Sai shone through, her fragility and strength!!.. Virat knowing it would take much more than this and ready to do it. Their hug was pure perfection, their vulnerability with each other.. how they view each other and them grasping to get what it is between them!(even though the feelings were not clear--- can I say that was the perfect touch!!! ) like at this point they must be your characters, that is SO virat and that is SO sai... this is SO sairat, I can't even!!!

Maam, don't ever stop writing!

( this is the longest review I have written in a long time but you deserve it, and if I can just request something... I would like Sai and Virat having a proper conversation about 'maturity' without bringing P in between in the cringe way as shown in the show. Where sai introspects how she is OTT sometimes, but virat refuses to let her feel bad about it knowing a girl her age shouldn't have to face all this and instead vows to let her grow and it is implied that he IS her actual guide)

If you feel like it, please do consider!

Love!

Thank you so much love🤗

This comment is just everything!

I'm so glad that you liked it!

Did you just call me your favourite writer here? Oh my god! This is the best compliment ever babe! Though I don't deserve this...

Thanks to your encouragement, I want to write so much more! Thank you thank you thank you!

As for you suggestion, did you read my mind or something??? Because I was actually thinking of writing one along the same lines😆. We actually need our dose of mature SaiRat conversation.

I'll definitely write one along these lines. Oh man... I hope I don't disappoint you😳

Originally posted by: aarushi04

Awesome os.....

Just what I wanted to see in today's episode.....

What they rather showed was immature.....

Yours os shows the perfect scene which they could have shown.....

Confrontation regarding virats nonsense talk was needed....not this childish lizard thingy!!!

Keep up the good work!!

🖤🖤🖤

Thank you so much dear🤗

I'm so happy that you liked it!

Even I didn't like how easy things turned out for Virat in today's episode. Hopefully we get to see more of Virat repenting in tomorrow's episode at least.

Originally posted by: I-Am-SherLOCKED

WOWWWWWWWWW.

Not going to lie, the sadist in me LOVED this OS because of how much Virat is suffering and thank you for not making Sai forgive him so easily!! I loved loved loved it! Write more, please!

Heyyy!!

Thank you so much babe🤗

The sadist in me would have definitely loved to see Virat suffer more on the show😆. In fact, I had made it even more brutal for Virat in this OS, but while editing, I toned it down a bit😆

I'm so glad that you liked it babe!

Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

This is pure fire...

Loved this to every bit.

I so wish to see this happen in the show..

Thanks for not making Sai forgive him so easily. Viraat should repent for every word he said to her.

Do write more.

Loved it. ❤️❤️

Thank you so much love🤗

I'm so happy that you liked it! Even I wanted Virat to repent more on the show, hope it happens

With your encouragement, I definitely want to write more!

Originally posted by: bones123

This was absolute gold. I wish Virat really introspects and thinks about the words he's used, the phrases he threw at her and how he literally fed her to the dogs of CN. Loved how you've brought about the impact of the hurt that it's caused her and how she's questioning herself, her worth of self and this relationship that she thought was going to be beacon in a storm.

AAAH, i hope that tomorrow's tete-a-tete explores at least some of this before heading back to headdesk ville.

Also please post Samrat-Pakhi OS. I think that relationship has the ability to be absolutely beautiful, if the two involved in it just give it a chance.

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Thank you so much for encouraging me🤗

After everything that Virat has accused her of, and the way he literally ganged up with the rest of the family against her, he should really repent, big time. I hope he doesn't get off too easy.

Even I want Sai to show him his place in tomorrow's episode. I hope they don't make it too lovey-dovey and mushy.

And thank you for encouraging me to post the Samrat-Pakhi OS. I think that if explored well, their relationship could be epic too, as it will be about second chances.

Originally posted by: CookiesNCream

Wow!! Loved your OS. You have written it so well that the actual scene is going to have me in disappointment. 😆 Nevertheless, do keep writing more!! I like the way you have sketched Virat and Sai in your story. 🤗

Awww... thank you so much dear🤗

I'm so glad that you actually like it! Arre yaar, don't compare it with the original screenplay yaar. I don't deserve that.😆 You're literally too sweet!