||And I'll Keep Trying|| A Sai - Virat OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: nilmi

Awesome

Thank youuuuu🤗

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

This is something more than perfection

Huge huge respect to you for putting it the way how all of us wanted and also what needs to be done being unbiased towards both sai and virat

Virat definitely needs to understand the gravity of things he said if we go by his characterisation till now

He is not someone who shouts in a fit a rage

As sai rightly said " agar aap nahi bhi aati toh bhi shaant hojate"

Pakhi added the right amount of fuel to the fire........I can say she knows testing the waters in a subtle way and acting by it.

I so loved the way u put the whole trust thing for sai after her aaba ....... Virat needs to understand the amount of trust sai placed in him unknowingly.

And then sai not giving in easily is the cherry on the cake(for a girl like sai who puts self respect above everything )

And I also believe the whole bedroom fiasco would have been different if not done before PP ( A THIRD PERSON BETWEEN A COUPLE)

ON THE WHOLE , this os is very close to my heart now gonna read it multiple times .

And yes can you please continue this???????

P.S. In a parallel world having watched yeh hai Mohabbatein where ML keeps on shouting at his wife......... Virat seems like a sweetheart for me 🤣

Thank you so much babe🤗

I'm so happy that you liked it!

Even I was disappointed that Virat got away with whatever he said so easily. And my sadistic mind wanted Virat to suffer😆

@bold - Oh my god!!! This just made my day. I'll definitely try to continue this!

I haven't watched YHM, but most of the ITV MLs are so sexist, and it's refreshing to see Virat's character not being that. I just hope they don't turn him into one.

Originally posted by: XxSicMNDVSxX

Done Dana done! ❤️

Yaayyyyy! Abhi dekhti hoon

Originally posted by: mirami

It was super..do write an ff...n DM me😳

Thank you so much love🤗

I'll definitely PM you when I write next😃

Originally posted by: XxSicMNDVSxX

This One shot is an absolute treat!

It’s everything I wanted to happen in the episode ❤️

The way you explained Virat’s realisation with all the hurtful words he said to Sai, that’s exactly what I wanted in the show. Virat to sit and contemplate how rude he was to her.

Sai breaking down holding her aaba’s photo and Virat witnesses it ( Its like thousand of knives stabbing him) .

Now go and earn her trust back.

This OS was just perfect like how everyone has mentioned it .

I’m dying to see something of this sort to happen in the show, but till then, tum ho na 😆❤️

Babe! You write so beautifully 🤗

The moment I saw you posted the OS, though I didn’t have time to read it I Reserved it 🤣

See that’s the craze 😆

You explained Virat’s & Sai’s inner turmoils . I loved it how it was the main focus of your OS ❤️

And you ended it with Virat determined to win her trust back.
PERFECT!

Please write more :)

Nehhuuuuuuu! Meri jaan!

Thank you so much baby🤗

Your comment is just EVERYTHING!

Even I badly wanted Virat to suffer, just a little bit, for whatever he said to Sai. But he got off the wagon so easily

His apology also didn't seem emotional or heartfelt. It just felt like that apology scene was there to build up the romance angle.

@bold - arre yaar! You're making me blush now☺️ I'm so glad that you liked jaaneman! Tumhare liye aur bhi likhungi😉

Thanks for this OS.

This is what I wanted to see in the show instead of a half hearted conversation of hum apke hain kaun and abrupt ending.

Even if not the actual apology, I really wanted Virat to think about what he said & did and feel guilty about treating Sai this way. They could have dedicated 2 mins showing all the stuff he shouted at her instead of Virat walking bua downstairs.

Originally posted by: sukri

Thanks for this OS.

This is what I wanted to see in the show instead of a half hearted conversation of hum apke hain kaun and abrupt ending.

Even if not the actual apology, I really wanted Virat to think about what he said & did and feel guilty about treating Sai this way. They could have dedicated 2 mins showing all the stuff he shouted at her instead of Virat walking bua downstairs.

Thank you so much love🤗

Though I did love the bedroom conversation in today's episode, because it gave us an insight into their feelings. But I did feel that Virat had it too easy, especially after everything he said to Sai.

Heyy Niya, great work with this piece! 👏

I am truly glad to read it, even if thoda late ho gaya 🤗

Would have loved loved loved for the convo to have gone this way, because it was sooooo needed!

Reminds me of this song: "Dard mein bhi ye lab muskura jaata hai, beetein lamhein humme jab bhi yaad aate hai.."

Keep writing! Cheers!

Perfection....

This should have been shown on the serial....since it wasn't......thank god we had you to write this

Beautiful written...I could feel both Sai and Virat's emotions and angst....

Found it after 4 months😃

And I am proud of it

Beautifully written