||And I'll Keep Trying|| A Sai - Virat OS - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ByunBaekhyun

Just one word : RESPECT!

Man you just wrote how it should have been portrayed in the episode today. The words that Virat used with Sai, that also in front of Pakhi..... CV should allow some time slot for Virat where he just sit back and understand the intensity of the words he used against that innocent soul. Words are sharper than knife and his words literally shredded the flower inside Sai, a flower which was already dying, a girl who was already broken.


Repenting is necessary for Virat after this fiasco and I distaste the idea of how easy it was to get Sai back in the room. He should be left alone for a certain period to repent. He deserved it. Otherwise, he won't remember the lesson and wil continue to use meaningless hurtful words in the future also.


I've watched some clip of the Bengali version and I simply don't like the Male lead. I know, humans are not perfect and it is kind of a good change and practical to show that Leads are not always perfect. But at least we can expect a strong backbone type Male lead for a strong character like Sai. If Virat goes exactly like thehe Bengali version, I would be extremely disappointed as Neil Bhatt has tremendous acting skill to potray 'Virat' so amazingly. The CV should put a good use of his acting by giving him a script worth of his acting. I could literally potray Neil while I was reading your OS. and the much needed certain period of distance between these two to sort things out and Virat's determination to make thibgs right are cherry on top. The episode today couldn't make me satisfied but your OS just did that. Exactly what I wasas expecting as a rational viewer.

Madam, please guide me how to thibk like you and write like you! Take my RESPECT man!!!


Oh damn, I just wrote a damn composition. Sorry!


Your writing just indulged me to write all these altogether. You are too good man!


Keep gifting us your writups. It's a treat to read!


Happy Writing!


Love you!

I agree 🙌🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I really wish you write it's continuation and show how Virat struggles to win her trust again 😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ByunBaekhyun


The thing that is troubling me most is that, out of every damn hurtful things Virat said, CV made Sai to capture only the 'room' part. really?


So, really really liked the OS. Expecting some more golds from you!


and the fact that you said my writings inspire you.... *embarrassed*

babe, stop embarrassing meh!


Let's see what happens tomorrow. I'm starving for SaiRat!


@bold - I so agree! She should have at least quoted the "Aakhir tumhe pata chal hi gaya ki iss ghar mein tumhari jagah kahan hai." How does Virat get off so easily?? I really hope that they show Sai putting him in his place in tomorrow's episode.


I'm so happy that you liked it OS babe! And yes, you inspire me a lot! It's the fact! And you need to accept it babe🤗


Even I hope something good is in store for us in tomorrow's episode!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24


Awww... Thank you babe🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

I really wish you write it's continuation and show how Virat struggles to win her trust again 😁


I actually thought of making this an SS, but I wasn't too confident with my writing

But seriously, the fact that you want to read a continuation literally warms my heart!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown


I actually thought of making this an SS, but I wasn't too confident with my writing

But seriously, the fact that you want to read a continuation literally warms my heart!

Ohh please please do make it an SS... I would love to read ahead 🤗🤩

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Ohh please please do make it an SS... I would love to read ahead 🤗🤩


Thank you so much encouraging me babe!! I'll definitely try converting it into an SS, or at least add another part to conclude it!🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is something more than perfection

Huge huge respect to you for putting it the way how all of us wanted and also what needs to be done being unbiased towards both sai and virat

Virat definitely needs to understand the gravity of things he said if we go by his characterisation till now

He is not someone who shouts in a fit a rage

As sai rightly said " agar aap nahi bhi aati toh bhi shaant hojate"

Pakhi added the right amount of fuel to the fire........I can say she knows testing the waters in a subtle way and acting by it.

I so loved the way u put the whole trust thing for sai after her aaba ....... Virat needs to understand the amount of trust sai placed in him unknowingly.

And then sai not giving in easily is the cherry on the cake(for a girl like sai who puts self respect above everything )

And I also believe the whole bedroom fiasco would have been different if not done before PP ( A THIRD PERSON BETWEEN A COUPLE)


ON THE WHOLE , this os is very close to my heart now gonna read it multiple times .

And yes can you please continue this???????

P.S. In a parallel world having watched yeh hai Mohabbatein where ML keeps on shouting at his wife......... Virat seems like a sweetheart for me 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown


Jaldi unres karo jaan🤗

Done Dana done! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It was super..do write an ff...n DM me😳

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