Star Commentor Award (Part 57)
Winners: Kkiran, Creampuff,
Runner Ups: Alamelu
Special Mention: Neenad
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): sanum23, Creampuf,aparna3011
Congratulations to all the winners
QnA Time
Itsagaintime for QnA with Maan-Geet. So be ready with your questions. We will have the QnA over the weekend. So submit your questions before that
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Part 58
She looks at him dreamily
G-You were so hot out there. Ijust wanna eat you up
Geet says biting a little on his ear
Maan is shocked that he had to stop his car
He is so shocked, confused and everything
She giggles at his reaction
She is happy that she could make him react, anything was better than he feeling sad
M-Hold that thought. This is not a safe place...or else
G-Or else....?
M-You want me to talk to dirty...eh?
G-I won’t mind that
M-Uh-huh. Point noted
G-By the way, why are we driving in opposite direction?
M-My home is in this direction only. You don’t know the routes
He says starting the car
G-No. I went to your place last time. You are coming to mine
M-You live in a hotel
G-So? We are going to my hotel
M-Okay fine!
She smiles
G-You look cute irritated...clenched jaw
M-Did someone mix anything in your drink?
G-You retard! You can’t appreciate if I am being nice to you!
M-I am just confirming
He shrugs
She is annoyed, can't she have normal hots for him?
She looks outside the window
He puts his hand on hers
She looks at him, her anger drains
M-You also did good. I am very proud of you. But pick fights little cautiously. I don’t want you to get hurt
G-I am fine
She says looking at him with a warm smile
G-By the way, I wanna show you something
She pulls her dress and puts her hand inside her bra
G-I had this too
She pulls out her trusty scalpel
Maan lets out a hearty laugh making her smile like a Cheshire cat
While she is more than okay with him carrying a gun coz that makes him 1000 times more irresistible, but in her mind, she is the good girl and good girls are supposed to ask such crap, so she asks
G-Can I ask you something?
M-Go on
G-Do you always carry a gun?
He thinks for a moment then answers
M-Mostly
G-Why do you have a gun?
M-For situations like these
G-You don’t do anything bad, right Maan?
M-I have a construction company. I think that's reason enough to carry a gun
She remembers, Maan forced her father to sign away his property. That wasn't any sort of clean transaction
But then she argues with herself that as long he doesn’t threaten her family its ok. That incident made her so mad at him, yet so irresistibly hot. (but she would not acknowledge that)
Geet’s stomach grumbles
G- That’s me
Maan nods amusingly
M- Where do you wanna eat?
G- Just keep driving. The first place we find
Maan Mcdonalds pe rokta hai
M-This works?
She nods happily
Both hog onto messy burgers, not date like in least
Geet is getting messages from her friends
“Where are you?”
“We are concerned about you and your safety”
“You are alone with him”
“The guy seems dangerous”
G- My friends think you will rape me
Geet blurts out
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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