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Posted: 4 years ago

She wants to eat him up seeing him save her in a crisis situation nice Geet couldnt have been more truthful. Let me possibly die but man does he look hot saving me. My goodness get new friends so gossipy. Uski gun tumhe kya tumhari jaan toh bachi next time Maan inpe chila deni chaiye for thier bewakoof comments.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 57)

Winners: Kkiran, Creampuff,

Runner Ups: Alamelu

Special Mention: Neenad

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): sanum23, Creampuf,aparna3011

Congratulations to all the winners

QnA Time

Itsagaintime for QnA with Maan-Geet. So be ready with your questions. We will have the QnA over the weekend. So submit your questions before that


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Part 58

She looks at him dreamily

G-You were so hot out there. Ijust wanna eat you up

Geet says biting a little on his ear

Maan is shocked that he had to stop his car

He is so shocked, confused and everything

She giggles at his reaction

She is happy that she could make him react, anything was better than he feeling sad

M-Hold that thought. This is not a safe place...or else

G-Or else....?

M-You want me to talk to dirty...eh?

G-I won’t mind that

M-Uh-huh. Point noted

G-By the way, why are we driving in opposite direction?

M-My home is in this direction only. You don’t know the routes

He says starting the car

G-No. I went to your place last time. You are coming to mine

M-You live in a hotel

G-So? We are going to my hotel

M-Okay fine!

She smiles

G-You look cute irritated...clenched jaw

M-Did someone mix anything in your drink?

G-You retard! You can’t appreciate if I am being nice to you!

M-I am just confirming

He shrugs

She is annoyed, can't she have normal hots for him?

She looks outside the window

He puts his hand on hers

She looks at him, her anger drains

M-You also did good. I am very proud of you. But pick fights little cautiously. I don’t want you to get hurt

G-I am fine

She says looking at him with a warm smile

G-By the way, I wanna show you something

She pulls her dress and puts her hand inside her bra

G-I had this too

She pulls out her trusty scalpel

Maan lets out a hearty laugh making her smile like a Cheshire cat

While she is more than okay with him carrying a gun coz that makes him 1000 times more irresistible, but in her mind, she is the good girl and good girls are supposed to ask such crap, so she asks

G-Can I ask you something?

M-Go on

G-Do you always carry a gun?

He thinks for a moment then answers

M-Mostly

G-Why do you have a gun?

M-For situations like these

G-You don’t do anything bad, right Maan?

M-I have a construction company. I think that's reason enough to carry a gun

She remembers, Maan forced her father to sign away his property. That wasn't any sort of clean transaction

But then she argues with herself that as long he doesn’t threaten her family its ok. That incident made her so mad at him, yet so irresistibly hot. (but she would not acknowledge that)

Geet’s stomach grumbles

G- That’s me

Maan nods amusingly

M- Where do you wanna eat?

G- Just keep driving. The first place we find

Maan Mcdonalds pe rokta hai

M-This works?

She nods happily

Both hog onto messy burgers, not date like in least

Geet is getting messages from her friends

“Where are you?”

“We are concerned about you and your safety”

“You are alone with him”

“The guy seems dangerous”

G- My friends think you will rape me

Geet blurts out

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 57

Omg her friends think maan is a mafia boss !!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

So carrying a gun is psycho but a chainsaw is totally normal ?????? 😕

Do these so called friends actually know geet at all ........ & the fact she almost took out someone’s eyeball with her heel does not alarm them !!! 🤔 They are new friends from seminar, unko Geet ke asli rang kya pata. Ab Geet ko heel se marne ke liye self defence wala reason de diya and she used what she had as a weapon on spur of the moment

They think maan is not normal but neither is geet ...... they are perfectly abnormal in their unique ways but they make a dynamic duo ....... it is like Batman & robin 😆 hahahaha true, but wondering yahan Batman kaun hai aur Robin kaun?

Sad that maan had to hear her friends & it upset him 😔

But totally not suprised that geet finds maan extremely hot after the club incident. 😆 hahahaha...tum Geet ko samajhne lagi ho...good job!

Thank you di 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thank you for the pm

hope you and your family are well.


well done to the winners


Part 57

Spectacular update..... greatly written

It was indeed a hectic unexpected night

Gosh Geet's friends think that Maan is part of the mafia

hate that they think he is a psycho

well then what is Geet? she had a chainsaw lol.....well becharo friends ko kya pata.

sad that Maan heard them and was upset

of cos he refuses to go to dinner

liked how Geet handled everything

great she went with Maan showing her friends that she trusts Maan

So she finds him hot

Love this naughty playful Geet☺️

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavimn

Superb dear.

But I need to read all parts.


Thanks for replying dear. Eagerly waiting for you to catch up on rest of the parts and share your thoughts🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kkiran

She wants to eat him up seeing him save her in a crisis situation nice Geet couldnt have been more truthful. woh to hai, as you say Geet ka koi filter nahi hai apni baaton pe Let me possibly die but man does he look hot saving me. hahahahah this is such a great line 🤣My goodness get new friends so gossipy. Uski gun tumhe kya tumhari jaan toh bachi wohi toh !next time Maan inpe chila deni chaiye for thier bewakoof comments. hahaha hope so, yaa wo kaam Geet karegi?

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Posted: 4 years ago

This story never fails to make me laugh...😍❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 57 & 58

This is super ridiculous... How is carrying a gun psychopathic...😲 I carry 3 two inch knifes (that's why I never wear a dress or sleeveless ever my wardrobe is really out of gender cause I use men shirts for formals and long sleeves for sarees... And people think I'm weird)😛 , a bottle of pepper spray and a freaking teaser alarm with me when ever I'm outside of my house... Wow... Now they're all in good terms with each other.... And Maan is really trying hard to hide his hurt because of Geet's friends... But I think Maan would make a hot Mafia boss if he's one... Like seriously he's got the looks of it.... And Geet is now being all cosy with Maan all of the sudden... Even I'm surprised if she'd have hit her head or something but she's normal and flirting with Maan.... Damn..... They're having a freaking date at McDonald's.... I love those things... And.... I'm hungry now.... And her friends are super annoying if it was me I would have probably punched them on their noses for upsetting my boyfriend... 🤗

Edited by UmaDevi97 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 58

Omg , this update is so out of this world!! 😆

Geet had a scalpel hidden in her bra 😲🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Is it for an emergency surgery 🤣🤣

Like cutting off parts of men that attack you 🤣🤣🤣

But what is even funnier is that maan can laugh at her antics

Like how they admit that they admire each other’s rough & tough hotness 😆

& they chow down at McDonald’s...... sounds like a very down to earth date .

Uh oh geet’s friends think that maan will rape her ???

& Dufus geet could not keep her mouth shut .

How will maan respond ??

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update


Loved geet maan conversation but why geet friends so bad about maan and now geet told him how he will react now

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