Very nice update dear
Thanks for pm
Watting for update
Very nice update dear
Thanks for pm
Watting for update
Nice update 👍
Maan helped them and geet friends said this 😡😡 but like that geet stay with maan and now trying to chear him up superb update soon
Felt like laughing loudly when I heard the friends asking if maan was mafia. Wonder what they will say when the hear of geet and chainsaw😱
they have no clue that their friend is as good as maan or no better than maan.
She can take care pretty good care of herself especially with maan there
aww geet trying to get maan to talk eh. Calling him hero. Really !! Is maan going y to o be tempted by this??
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Part 57
Spectacular update..... greatly written
It was indeed a hectic unexpected night
Gosh Geet's friends think that Maan is part of the mafia
hate that they think he is a psycho
well then what is Geet? she had a chainsaw lol.....
sad that Maan heard them and was upset
of cos he refuses to go to dinner
liked how Geet handled everything
great she went with Maan showing her friends that she trusts Maan
So she finds him hot
Love this naughty playful Geet
update soon
Superb dear.
But I need to read all parts.
Omg can’t believe Geet saying this to maan
Waiting to know maans reaction now
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
She wants to eat him up seeing him save her in a crisis situation nice Geet couldnt have been more truthful. Let me possibly die but man does he look hot saving me. My goodness get new friends so gossipy. Uski gun tumhe kya tumhari jaan toh bachi next time Maan inpe chila deni chaiye for thier bewakoof comments.
Star Commentor Award (Part 57)
Winners: Kkiran, Creampuff,
Runner Ups: Alamelu
Special Mention: Neenad
Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): sanum23, Creampuf,aparna3011
Congratulations to all the winners
QnA Time
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Part 58
She looks at him dreamily
G-You were so hot out there. Ijust wanna eat you up
Geet says biting a little on his ear
Maan is shocked that he had to stop his car
He is so shocked, confused and everything
She giggles at his reaction
She is happy that she could make him react, anything was better than he feeling sad
M-Hold that thought. This is not a safe place...or else
G-Or else....?
M-You want me to talk to dirty...eh?
G-I won’t mind that
M-Uh-huh. Point noted
G-By the way, why are we driving in opposite direction?
M-My home is in this direction only. You don’t know the routes
He says starting the car
G-No. I went to your place last time. You are coming to mine
M-You live in a hotel
G-So? We are going to my hotel
M-Okay fine!
She smiles
G-You look cute irritated...clenched jaw
M-Did someone mix anything in your drink?
G-You retard! You can’t appreciate if I am being nice to you!
M-I am just confirming
He shrugs
She is annoyed, can't she have normal hots for him?
She looks outside the window
He puts his hand on hers
She looks at him, her anger drains
M-You also did good. I am very proud of you. But pick fights little cautiously. I don’t want you to get hurt
G-I am fine
She says looking at him with a warm smile
G-By the way, I wanna show you something
She pulls her dress and puts her hand inside her bra
G-I had this too
She pulls out her trusty scalpel
Maan lets out a hearty laugh making her smile like a Cheshire cat
While she is more than okay with him carrying a gun coz that makes him 1000 times more irresistible, but in her mind, she is the good girl and good girls are supposed to ask such crap, so she asks
G-Can I ask you something?
M-Go on
G-Do you always carry a gun?
He thinks for a moment then answers
M-Mostly
G-Why do you have a gun?
M-For situations like these
G-You don’t do anything bad, right Maan?
M-I have a construction company. I think that's reason enough to carry a gun
She remembers, Maan forced her father to sign away his property. That wasn't any sort of clean transaction
But then she argues with herself that as long he doesn’t threaten her family its ok. That incident made her so mad at him, yet so irresistibly hot. (but she would not acknowledge that)
Geet’s stomach grumbles
G- That’s me
Maan nods amusingly
M- Where do you wanna eat?
G- Just keep driving. The first place we find
Maan Mcdonalds pe rokta hai
M-This works?
She nods happily
Both hog onto messy burgers, not date like in least
Geet is getting messages from her friends
“Where are you?”
“We are concerned about you and your safety”
“You are alone with him”
“The guy seems dangerous”
G- My friends think you will rape me
Geet blurts out
Originally posted by: Creampuff
Part 57
Omg her friends think maan is a mafia boss !!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
So carrying a gun is psycho but a chainsaw is totally normal ?????? 😕
Do these so called friends actually know geet at all ........ & the fact she almost took out someone’s eyeball with her heel does not alarm them !!! 🤔 They are new friends from seminar, unko Geet ke asli rang kya pata. Ab Geet ko heel se marne ke liye self defence wala reason de diya and she used what she had as a weapon on spur of the moment
They think maan is not normal but neither is geet ...... they are perfectly abnormal in their unique ways but they make a dynamic duo ....... it is like Batman & robin 😆 hahahaha true, but wondering yahan Batman kaun hai aur Robin kaun?
Sad that maan had to hear her friends & it upset him 😔
But totally not suprised that geet finds maan extremely hot after the club incident. 😆 hahahaha...tum Geet ko samajhne lagi ho...good job!
Thank you di 🤗
Here all r very well in assuming things and on top of that their assumptions are 😂😜,be it the friends now there,geet,maan,each person has that skill, BTW ye observation toh kamaal hai, i realized ki iss story mein har character ka dusre character ke baare mein apna hi POV hai
Now comes to geet,she is 😂😍
Looking forward to his response to her
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