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Geet wanted to know more about what happened with maan but was unable to do it. Eh why kabeer friends are jerk and always behave idiotically. I like the bonding between prem and geet and also loved how kiara blended with geet. This kabeer what was geet's fault if his friends behave this way. He surely deserves a beating. Maan tried to console geet but geet did the same to him. After making maan remember the promise maan told what happened last night. I think maan's father is crazy and maan should leave him..

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Finished all 5 parts

Geet have wonderful bond with hr bro prem

Kabir and Maan is best friend's and he usually comes to there house

Jai too his friends but any word's against his sister Geet complain to hr big bro kabir some time rude woth Geet and get lesson from his elder bro

Maan father is monster Geet get to know that when she at his backyard and accidentally heard his father abusing and beating Maan and throw him out of house in cold

Geet try to avoid Maan but he knows she knows about his secret he told Geet not to embarrass him in front of his friends Geet promised him if he share his pain with her than she will keep it secret

Geet become his friend and taking care of his food too bz she knows usually he sleep without food

Geet at last met his brother's gf and she too calling hr baby girl

Kabir blaming Geet fr attracting his friends what hr fault they can't resist hr beauty and admire hr and fault is whom don't know Geet is his sis so they comment in front of him

Geet consoling Maan and knowing about last night incident his father need punishment but Maan loved him wouldn't complain about him and suffering quietly

Like the part oh wat is with this kabir first geet is nt looking good so he is embraced n making fun of her now she is beautiful n mow he is nt tolerting if any body see her never understand this mad boy but i like prem he handled the boys in his own way geet super cool bro nt like that fool kabir unstead of Alex he is scolding kabir poor eet feel bad f4 her kabor need a good beating from prem😆

Geet wants maan to share but understand maan concern geet is born in protective family n navie so he dont want to make her sad i think its time that maan should make his daf realize or leave his house unstead of his beating n silent suffering

awesome update

Poor geet

Kabir is idiot

Chapter 4

That's so inhuman act!

Y maans father is like this!

Wanna know more about his background

Geet has a hidden door

Wow in futer that's gonna be really helpful for maan 😉

Jay is going to be beaten up by 2 & possibly 3 if he continues to rant like this

Kabir definitely need to be beaten up now 🙄

Y he's always so mean?

He's a protecting brother definitely but rude always 😔

Maans secret is out but not for us 😔

Waiting to know that 😐

Maan has it bad at home.

His dad is a drunkard while bringing prostitutes back to a home where he lives with his young son. Hes a disgusting man.

Beaten with a belt. What is wrong with this guy !

Its amusing how different kabeer and prem are. Theres no middle ground with those two. Where prem coddles kabeer just outright curses his sister though both are extremely over protective.

Chapter 5

Geet has blossomed & now she is garnering the attention of the football players & Kabeer is fuming 😤. Kabeer cares for geet but he was wrong to blame geet for his friend’s actions .

Nice that geet met prem’s Girlfriend kiara & they get along .

Maan & geet’s dialogue on either side of the fence was superb . Maan enjoys his college life & is happy but he blocks off the pain from home . He was correct when he said that he had to do that to remain sane. You definitely have to focus on the bright side of life to remain afloat otherwise you will just be buried amongst the negativity .

The last paragraph was beautifully written.

Geet is somewhat easing maan’s pain by allowing him to share. Their friendship is growing by sharing maan’s secret.

I am curious though, if maan has been abused for so long , how come no one noticed ?? I would assume that he would have bruises. No teachers, no friends noticed ?? Just a thought .

Thank you for the update

Congratulations for new story.

Interesting. Different concept loved it.

Part 1..

They are in school. She is a nerd with glasses n all. Everyone teases her for her looks. Listen up girl don't worry looks are not that important. It's the heart that should stay beautiful. As the saying goes beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.

But I can understand, u r in a stage where kids don't understand this as the kids in school can sometimes be very mean n never let u be.

Plus u have a jerk for a brother kabeer, he cares more about himself, his image in school n his football team. But u know what he loves to tease her. He may be doesn't show but he too loves her a lot. He learnt a great lesson from prem.

Prem is a loving big brother. Loved the way he pampers geet , his protectiveness n possessiveness for her .

Don't mess with this guy around he is the tough guy. Prem singhania is a very famous guy in the school I guess.

Loved the way everyone loves, cares n pampers geet more than anyone.

Nani is a sweetheart. Loved the way she treated kabeer for making geet cry.

Maan is kabeer's friend. He too teased geet. That's mean maan , u shouldn't do that.

Shivani is very sweet mom. I loved her.