MG FF: In the dark between stars||Note page 38|| - Page 18

Honestly I dont know what kind of resentment Kabir has towards Geet I may be over thinking it but they always arguing. Now the fury adds because he has guy friends and he has a beautiful sister wonder if he feel he will fail to protect her and that is why he is lashing out in anger. Kiara and Geet already hit off well looks like there is going to be many girl nights. The wounds are deep but the hurtful words hit deeper. I feel Maan will look after Geet as well because hearing this isnt easy either. The sky, the clouds and the stars are witnessing the hurt heal.

omg such a soulful update. loved the talk that maan and geet had at twilight, each becoming a silent support to each other. maan is facing so much and yet it is true that he finds his happiness outside home. kabeer needs some arsekicking.

kabeer is blaming his own sister. loved prem and kiara and prem is so mature and i loved how he took kabeer to task for blaming geet for andrew's fault. we have a feminist here.

Superb and extraordinary.. but don't bring jay between maaneet .. give some sense to kabir

Really nice story dear.. but I dnt lyk kabeer here why every man blamed a girl.... Girls ke bhi rights h bhar ghume masti kre.. prem is soo sweet he support her girl not lyk kabeer..n maan share everything with geet so nice..

hope you are well. thanks for updating 😊

Chapter 5

liked seeing Maan happy and laughing.

of cos Geet is worried about Maan.

surprised that Kabeer was possessive about Geet.

Well Jay is overconfident... what makes him think that Geet will marry him?

finally Geet meets Kiara. she seems like a nice person.

well Geet is indeed Prem's baby.

how can Kabeer blame Geet? great that Prem set him straight. agree with Prem.

Kabeer is so immature. he should be protecting Geet.

of cos Prem warns Andrew to stay away from Geet?

adore Geet's cute cribbing.

hate that Kabeer accuses Geet. why is it Geet's fault? glad that Maan stopped him.

feeling for Geet.

can understand Geet's curiosity regarding Maan's and how he handles everything.

at least he was direct with Geet. nice that Maan looks at the positives in his life. this keeps him going.

painful what Maan goes through. his dad is despicable.

great that Geet confronted Maan about how he smiles through the day despite what he goes through.

loved how Geet got Maan to open up to her.

at least Maan feels lest burdened. he needed to confide in someone.

the words were so apt and meaningful.... Maan has found his solace...

update soon

nice update

kabir hurting geet knowing it's not her fault n maan try to stop him

maan n geet become ease with each other

geet not able to bear how maan is getting hurt each night

Part 1:

i like the concept it’s reall interesting and funny...can’t stop laughing...kabir is hilarious but prem knows how to set him...so geet is his elder brother princess...good to see prem is protective for geet

Part 2:

Beautiful update.....i love the bond between geet and his brother...it is beautiful....heart breaking to see maan in this circumstance...childhood traumas are worst...they stays with you forever...these are the baggage’s that you can never get rid of...poor maan but i am glad that geet found out that maan is living in misery

Part 3:

Awesome part....it’s great that they both talk about maan’s situation....i am glad that geet blackmailed maan to share his situation and feelings....geet is such an empathetic person...but i can understand maan situation because he cares for his father...no matter how abusive he is...that’s the beauty of parents children relationship but maan’s father should be rehabilitation.

Hi,

Do not know how Geet has become Maan’s solace .... he can now beat his heart and lighten up a little.... his pain can be shared and he knows she will always keep his secret with her.... he sees that she is not her for giving him sympathy and pity..., she is here for she cares for him... she feels his pains and wants to lessen it... she has made it her pain... and there fore she is his accomplice not in his happiness but in his sadness.... and yet her own brother Kabeer could not understand her.... he was so rude to her... a big contrast between him and Prem.... yet who knows how these brothers will be going forward.... who will support her in life and who will not.... hope Prem’s girlfriend support her too ... as do not know what the future holds...

Thnx