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Posted: 5 years ago

Geet has such a close knit family🤗.. her two brothers and her mom and nani.. I know kabir is giving her a tough time right now, but then he's a teenager whose life revolves around his stupid image right now.. Prem is such an overprotective brother of his little princess.. He looks like someone who took the responsibility of his family and kabir looks the spoilt one who doesn't even know the r of responsibility because he has Prem to look after everything.. So their father is not mentioned.?

awww.. geet regretting prem stepping in for her.. poor baby🤣.. prem is such a nice guy, taking care of his family, taking time out to play with his baby sister, handling the awkward phase of the idiot teenage brother.. the family is ❤️❤️.. thodi cuteness, thoda drama..

oh my Godd!!! poor poor maan.. going through so much abuse at home and not being able to tell anyone must be a difficult ordeal.. does he not have anyone in his family, except his father???😭

Geet is such a lovely and mature person🤗, its not easy to be able to understand someone else's emotions and feel for him to this depth.. it's good she took the promise, giving him the option to share his sadness and frustration.. sometimes even letting out the hurt and emotions can be the greatest help..👏

I understand maan being worried about his image and not wanting to tell his friends.. teenaged kids, having no worry except friends, girlfriends, petty fights and crushes😳.. not everyone is going to be as mature and be empathetic to him..💔

Geet is such an angel..🤗🤗

prem and kiara..☺️❤️ poor geet's friends..😆

Can this idiot kabir grow up faster and be a little bit responsible and mature like his elder brother or younger sister.. What does he expect her to do? just sit at home so that his idiot friends do not look at her..😡

I wouldn't even say anything about maan's father.. such people just need to find anyone to blame for being the loser that they are.. atleast maan has learned to separate the two worlds, being able to feel the happiness about his friends and college without it being clouded by whatever he has to face at home..😭

these two are such sensible individuals.. 🤗

I hope maan is able to get away from his father as soon as possible.. I am thinking if geet tells prem.. sure he will be able to handle it better.. to sort out maan's father but then that would break geet's promise to maan and may create more problems for maan as well..😭

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wonderful update...loved it... geet with pinky & nyra were present to watch boys playing football ... geet was thinking about maan who was happily playing forgetting last night horrible incident which geet was remembering & became sad...Life becomes Easier when You Delete Negative Thoughts which maan knew it...oh no kabir was angry for jay's comment on geet... geet was super happy to see prem with Kiara... prem warned the boys for their remarks about his sis geet ... oh no kabir totally different bro from prem... one cares his sis a lot & other hatred a lot.... kabir made geet cry because of his friends nasty dialogues for her without her mistake... finally at night geet & maan started talking when she asked him to tell his story which was he avoided but as the promise he stated his pain out made geet cry...Its true Maan feels so much pain and yet be with that person causing it..."Sometimes we need someone to simply be there. Not to fix anything, or to do anything in particular, but just to let us feel that we are cared for and supported."...excited for next... !!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Waiting... waiting for next update 😃

Whether prem will get to know about Kabir’s behaviour or the idiot will regret it itself..??

What happens with maan next???

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Isolophiliac00

Waiting... waiting for next update 😃

Whether prem will get to know about Kabir’s behaviour or the idiot will regret it itself..??

What happens with maan next???

Waiting.. waiting 😃

Can we have an update here as well.. please

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wat an awesome update firstly it was good to see kabir any geet talks loved there siblings love and geet asking for dating it's too good I hope she ll date maan and during rain Time at night too geet thought about maan .This time wat would have happened waiting to see maaneet talks.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Amazing update

Maan told abt his punishment to geet but not in details.

Kabir become guiltyas he yelled at geet.

Prem is corned for geet wht is that she is lost n not telling full truth.

Maan again slept outside n geet for cornsed for him as it was very rains thr.

Maan was feeling guilty as y he told geet all abt it as she come outside in heavy rains n freezing cold.

Hope maan is well as in last it didn't show like that.

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Posted: 5 years ago

oh my god such a sad and at the same time powerful portrayal of loneliness and abuse...loved how geet is worried about maan and going up to his house to check upon him. maan is also right. she shouldn't be there in the shed with him at night. Though the story is about developing friendship in the dark but maan understands the danger for geet. so geet gets to date...umm no one will propose and neither would she like anyone...prem chose his condition well. And as for kabir- okay he isn't a total prick, thank god for that.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Oh god!! what's happening with maan??

how same and different maan's and kabir's life are, on the onset, it looks nearly same with both of them being same age, being neighbors, having their families, being typical teenagers but when you look within, their lives are soo soo vastly different.. kabir is living his life with no worries in life while maan has to take each day as a new battle..😭

not to say kabir is bad or anything, I liked that he admitted his feelings and apologized for being an idiot..👍🏼

prem is the perfect gentleman.. knows how much of idiot his brother can be and the nature of his sister.. I'd like to know how'd he react if geet actually manages to find a boyfriend her age.. or how'd he react of his baby sister with maan..😆

geet being excited for his marriage😆.. well, that's what sisters are for.. I forced my family to have my brother's marriage within 3 months of their engagement because I was to leave for my masters.. she's simply such a pure heart🤗.. and it must be sad for her that she can't do much for maan..😔


Thanks for the update..🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

It is natural that geet thought about maan when it was raining outside. She knows how much he has been suffering due to his father. I feel bad for maan. I wish someone comes and bring out maan from this hell. He doesn't deserve it.

Kabir apologized to geet for his behaviour. He loves geet but it was overreaction and he should know how to handle the situation . prem is so sorted out person. The way he allowed geet to have boyfriend and later on worrying who would ask her out made him a protective brother. Waiting for next dear.

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