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Wow surprise surprise ( for me 😂)

Was not so keen to visit but good I did 🤗( just realised I'm using IF emo after ages ..hoooo how long I'm not here 🤔🤔🤔🤔)

Anyways congrats

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Wow surprise surprise ( for me 😂)

Was not so keen to visit but good I did 🤗( just realised I'm using IF emo after ages ..hoooo how long I'm not here 🤔🤔🤔🤔)

Anyways congrats

Glad to see u dii..missing u..😍❤💙

Originally posted by: NeenaDd

Glad to see u dii..missing u..😍❤💙

😊😊😊

Wohoo... a new story! This is such a fresh concept. Thank you for sharing this!

Despite all the tension in the auto, the story somehow has feel-good vibes. So far, Nilesh Bhaiya's character is my favourite of all, followed by the auto uncle. It took me back to my school days, when I used to go to school in an auto and though it used to be a short ride, I have some fond memories from back then.

I am not sure of the dynamics of Maan's relationship with his mother and how Geet's complaining to his mom only aggravated the tension, but it was totally wrong of Maan to hit her like that. And even Smitha was wrong here. She started it all, egged Geet to tease Yash and now making her feel guilty and blaming her for issues at home.

Yes, Geet should not have lied, but she is a kid and maybe she would have confided in her parents had they been around, so can't really blame her for hiding the truth. Also, her mistake wasn't grave enough for her to be rewarded with a punch.

Eagerly waiting to see how things will change hereafter. Please continue soon.

Enjoying reading this story....Please update

A very fresh story... although you have decided to keep this a short one but if inspiration strikes then think about making it a bit longer...

Wonderful & different story Read all the parts & it was awsum. So still that r in the school. Maan has crush on Sameera. & Geet calls him bhaiya 😊

Ch 3: The way you described the interactions between the grandfather, Geet, Nilesh brought a smile to my lips. You have a fine handle on the seemingly uneventful, rhythmic incidents from everyday life.

Geet's shiftiness in giving clear answers to her grandfather's queries reminded me of the frequent sins of omission (rather than commission) that children commit -- just to get away from having to confront the reprimand that is guaranteed to follow!

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Wow surprise surprise ( for me 😂)

Was not so keen to visit but good I did 🤗( just realised I'm using IF emo after ages ..hoooo how long I'm not here 🤔🤔🤔🤔)

Anyways congrats

Hello Sabina... glad seeing you online!!! 😊

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hello Sabina... glad seeing you online!!! 😊

Sometimes ya 😊😊