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Congrats on the new story, thanks for posting😊

Always fun to read these kind of stories where they r students...

Geet is such a cutie...

Poor she,she is doing wt her seniors saying

Maan slapped her

Wt will happends now after this, waiting

❤💙😊

shall read and comment!!!

Fascinating update!

so Maan has a crush on Sameera!

eager to know who is Yash's Mithu!

liked Maan teasing Yash!!

as expected Maan is angry that Yash made Sameera smile!

Poor Geet is so naive and listens to Smitha!

can understand that Yash is angry!

oh no Geet addressed Maan as bhaiya😔

Gosh Maan punched Geet in her mouth! hate Yash for this!

Very well written.

Both maan nd geet are in school nd he has a crush on sameera.maan in anger bruised geet without thinking the consequences.plz continue.

Plz update your other FF's.

Thanks for the quick updates, but off to work now so will comment later.

Congratulations for new work☺

And thanks too for sharing it, for its always a pleasure to read anything coming from you☺🤗

It made my hearbeats quicken!

Maan stupid aise koi marta hai kya, wo bhi ek ladki ko. Stupid was referring her as a kid a few moments ago. Fir socha nhi k ek bachi ko kaise itni buri tarah mar raha hai.

Duffer kahin ka!!

It's your loss only. Very good impression on your fallen angel. And look at the nerve of him. He don't have any regrets of his doing, I so hate him. I would have hit him 10 times harder, if I was present at that time.

Plz don't make geet to develop feelings for him, she should hate him. And that arrogant duffer should realize what terrible way he have behaved with that innocent girl.

He knew it was yash who was prompting her to tease him, technically he should have punch him.

Feeling very bad for geet yaar. Poor girl, she didn't even understand these these things and these good for nothing seniors of hers are manuplating her. Why are they using her, khud me himmat nhi hai kya, pange lene ki??

I expected her grandfather would himself go to teach a lesson to that arrogant fool, but...

Lets see kya hota hai..

Maan bhaiya ki haddi tutni chahiye, by his own parents, I really wished, fingers crossed.

And han, sameera, the angel should seen this maan bhaiya in a new light, as an arrogant devil! She should hate him.... Tab pata chalega maan ko.

Can't wait for next,

Sad that its a short story.... Is it a love story???? If it is, I was wondering ke, iss incident ke baad love tak pachuchne me time lagega na, toh 5,6 chapters kam nhi honge😉☺

Waiting very eagerly..... ☺

Wow such a cute n lovely story, a constant smile was playing on my lips while reading specially d kulfi treat .....

children are so humble n forgiving , i so want to b like dat again ... :-(

amazingly written...

Awesome story

Geet called maan bhaiya

Maan has a crush on Sameera and sameera is a studious girl

Yash was teased by geet and yash asked geet to do the same with maan

Maan was irritated and hit geet

Geet was upset and felt humiliated