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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 21

Pinky arrives and want Maan to play Holi for Piya's sake

and when she goes into Geet's room she colors Piya's cheek

while she tells Geet that after Tia's death Maan's heart is also dead

and Geet will have to make a move try and fight hard to make a place

in hearts heart and yes that will be a very difficult task for Geet because

Maan has to first accept and get over Tia's death then he must allow himself

to live in happiness he needs to appreciate his life even before he accepts Geet as his wife

Pinky is right both Geet and Maan can not just be parents and have no love for each other

both need each other and need to experience love

Piya is excited and all happy seeing the attracted colors and it was a lovely gesture from

Maan to wish Geet

her parents understand Maan's pain but also wants him to start living and experiencing happiness

with his family

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Posted: 6 years ago

PART - 22



EVEN after his strong denial,he played holi for Piya's sake. He didn't want that she will be deprived from any happiness of life. Adi and Pinky left and Geet's parents too got ready to leave.



"Maan bete i want to ask for your permission. If you allow then we want to take Geet back our home for few days. She is injured and i hope you understand how i feel being a mother." Avantika wants to take care of her daughter that's why she wants to take her with them. But the same time she also had a conscious how to picked up her words which not hurt Maan's feelings in any way. "I know she get proper care here to but..."



Maan complete her words. "i can understand your worry regarding your daughter. I have no problem. She can go with you." Maan allowed and huge grin glowed Geet's face.



"mumma two minutes,i will pack Piyu's bag." Geet said while walking towards stairs and vanished Maan's all expressions.



"wait a minute Geet. Piya is not going any where." Maan objects.



"why? If i am going then she will come along." Geet's smile wiped off too.



"Geet don't argue. Just go and spend time with your parents. Piya had nothing to do anything there. She is not going any where." Maan declared his decision and snatched smiles from all faces.



"fine. Mumma may be some other time. I can't leave my daughter back." Geet's voice whimpered and tears were ready to flow out. Maan noticed her dull face.



"Geet don't behave stubbornly. They want to spend time with you. Don't you?" Maan tried to mend her.



"yes i want to but what about my baby? Apne abhi suna na mumma ne jo kaha. Like her i am also worried for my Piyu. Do you think i can stay in peace without my own child. Sorry Maan but for me Piyu is priority." Geet snap but in normal tone. "i am sorry Mumma..." Geet apologized to her mom which gave him a feel of guilty.



Maan scanned all faces and his feel of guiled raised. He was in dual what to choose and finally he gave up. "Geet don't cancel your program."



"Maan i..." Geet interrupt but he not allowed her.



"Let me finish first. Don't cancel your program. You can take Piya along with you." he took a long breath and allowed her with a heavy hearty. Though its very hard for him to send Piya away but he didn't want to parted Geet once again from her parents so he choose to send Piya with Geet.



"Thank you. Thank you so much." Geet gave him thanks whole heartedly. "mumma give me some time." She excused.



"Geet no need to carry bags. We already brought every thing of her need. After all wo apne Nana Nani k ghar ja rahi hai. She get every thing there." Avantika told her not to carry extra baggage as they already arranged everything of their needs at Handa Mansion which actually amazed Maan.



They took both the girls to Handa Mansion. Piya was so confused. Sometime she show excitement seeing new place and at the same time she starts crying. "don't cry my shona. This is your grandparents home. See..." Geet pampered her and trying to made her comfortable.



Avantika tried to took Piya in her arms but she glued to Geet and show her disintrest in going to them. "sorry mumma but ye mere or Maan k alwa sirf daija k pas jati hai. She needs time to mingle with you." Geet told.



"oh my daughter grow so old. Geet we know how to handle kids. Tu aise hi badi nahi ho gai. Right now she is disturbed because of new place and new faces. But i know what make her happy. Come with me." Avantika was amused on her daughter's behaviour of giving her lessons about kids. She took her to one direction and opened one room's door. Completely filled with toys and baby products. Piya glanced all around and gave a happy sound.



"aww my baby happy?" Geet kissed and she flaunt her milky white tooth. "wow mumma its so beautiful." Geet was delighted seeing the arrangements for her daughter done by her parents.



"its all done by your dad. He himself brought each and every toy for his grand daughter." Geet's heart swelled with the gestures of her parents.



She went near to her father and hug him. "thank you dad." her eyes poured tears of happiness.



"no need of it darling. After all RP Handa ki grand daughter pehli baar uske grand parents k sath rehne aa rahi hai,so ye sab to karna hi tha. Waise b mul se sood pyara hota hai." RP embraced both his posessions.



"mumm mumm..." Piya getting comfortable and seeing her mother happy with RP she to gave her approval.



"ok so this means now you both love her more than me?" Geet asked and both of them nodded.



"of course." he said and all laughed along with Piya though she didn't get any thing but seeing all happy little soul too turned happy.



"now you both take rest.I have some work."RP kissed both and left.



Avantika and Geet spend time after such a long time. Geet wants to share so many thing with her mother. While Piya was busy in exploring her new toys.



"gosh mumma apke jaldi jaldi k chakkar me main iski feeding bottle wahi bhul gai." Geet reminded and regrets.



"again you started. Do you think us a dumb? You mean hum itna saman layenge or sabse zaroori cheez bhul jayenge." Avantika was upset as her own daughter doubting their intelligence.



"no mumma its don't like that. Apko nahi pata ye kitni fussy hai apne Papa ki tarah. Ek bar jo cheez pasand aa gai firr woi chahiye. Ye nahi peeyegi new bottle se." Geet was tensed and told the reason to her mother.



Geet was right all tried to feed her milk with new bottle but every time she flinched it away. "see i told you. Ek to iske daant aa rahe hai ye waise hi cranky ho rakhi hai upar se uski bottle nahi hai." now Geet to loosing her temper seeing Piya's restlessness.



"first you calm down Geet. And wait. I will feed her." Avantika took crying Piya in her arms and cuddle softly. She was getting hyper because of hunger but not ready to intake milk. Avantika mash banana and add milk in that. She poured banana shake into glass and feed her with spoon. Piya was hungry so happily intake banana shake but not drink direct milk from bottle. Geet was in relief as she got milk in some other form. "dekha pee liya na. Bachhe to tantrums karte hi hai. Its our duty to fulfill their needs by any means."



whole day passed and Piya gelled with her grand parents. She is comfortable now. But Maan,he felt strange aloofness. His room was empty like before. No noise,no giggles,no cries. He was missing his baby doll so much. Maan walked and saw her favorite teddy bear. Maan sat on bed and cuddled firmly. "i miss you my baby. She must be happy with Geet but what will i do. Roz dono itna shor machti hai. But today my room is so silent. This is a killing silence, scaring me. I hope both must be alright and happy there." he feels loneliness of his life.



There Piya too restless along with Geet. "mumm mumm...." she scanned all around. "uuu..."



Avantika noticed. "Maan ko miss kar rahi hai." She said and amused Geet.



"how did you know?" she asked amusingly.



"because you to act like her the moment sun set. Whole day you play but in evening you need your dad around. Look at her face. Her eyes roaming here and there. So its quite obvious she is missing her father." Avantika compared Geet's habits with Piya and told her how she would guess.



"ha wo aaj kal meri chot ki wajhse..." Geet was almost going to revealed the truth of their relationship before her mother but stop on time as Maan's call distracted her. Avantika smiled and left. But before she picked up her phone Piya throw it on floor and broke it into pieces.



Geet's jaw dropped and Piya stare Geet in anger. She was so restless this time which made her angry. "Piyu papa ka phone tha. Ab wo sochenge maine jaan k unka call cut kiya hai. Baby why?" Geet cribbed to Piya and she stare her with her narrowed eyes.



"aaaaaa..." Piya shout loudly.



Geet took her to calm her. "what happened. Why my baby is angry?" Piya hitting Geet with her small fists and crying too. Geet stroked her body. She had a fever and her body is aching. "mumma... Dad jaldi aao." Geet panicked. "mumma isko fever hai." she scared.



RP checked and called the doctor immediately. Doctor checked her. "don't worry its normal when child having a teeth. Subah tak bilkul theek ho jayegi." he prescribed some syrups and left.



There Maan was restless. He was so confused why Geet cut his call. "she cut my call. But why. I agree she need to spend time with her parents that doesn't means she don't gave two mins to me. I only wants to hear my baby's voice. But this stupid girl cut out my call." Maan turned furious and threw his phone on bed. He went out in fresh air and watch at the sky. "dekha tumne apni friend ko. Tia why you gave Piya's responsibility to her. See how careless she is." he was so furious and poured out his frustration by talking with Tia. Same time a cool breeze blowed around him. His eyes shuts automatically. Gradually his temper goes down. With a jerk he opened his eyes. "Tia...." he screamed raised his arm to catch her but when he opened his eyes he found himself alone. Alone in his lonely world. Maan went back to his room and scan all around.

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Posted: 6 years ago

It's amazing

Just loved the update

Her parents make everything ready for their granddaughter

Piya is gelled with them

But now she misses her Papa and also become cranky and gets ill

Maan is restless,he is missing baby,and her not picking his call make him somewhere angry,but the cool breeze calmed him

Hoping they call each other to convey wt the matter is

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Maan is of too much guilty in everything this problem should be solved

Geet is happy to go for parents house

Geet parents are lovely love Piya more

Piya love super missing uuu Maan

Maan misunderstanding Geet for call

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 22


Geet parents ask to take Geet home and Maan agrees but the moment

she wants to take piya Maan instantly denies

and Geet tells Maan she cannot go alone , I suppose Maan does not realize

for Geet Piya is her baby and any mother cannot leave her baby behind

Maan on seeing Geet sad agrees because he sees everyone sad

Piya enjoying her time at her grandparents place but when it come to evening

she obviously wants her father , Maan on the other side is restless for one he misses

Piya and secondly he misses the companionship he got with Geet

Geet's phone falls and cannot answer Maan's call and now he is frustrated and tensed

speaking to his Tia about Geet but it seems he gets relaxed with the breeze perhaps

with Tia's thoughts he felt her around

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update baby . geet and piya went to her parents house, they arranged everything for piya there . piya was confused but later she gelled up with geet's parents when she was so many toys . other side maan was missing piya , she called geet but piya threw her phone in anger and phone broke into pieces . piya was missing maan , she was cranky too cos of fever . maan was angry cos he thought geet deliberately cut his call .

waiting for next

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update..

Geet parents make everything ready for their granddaughter and Piya gelled with them..

Piya missing her papa and had fever..

Maan is restless,he is missing baby and angry on geet for not lifting the phone..

Waiting for next update..

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Posted: 6 years ago

Beautiful update geet took piya also to her parents home...the way piya gelled with her grandparents was lovely her dad's arranged everything according to piya's so she happily played over there maan was missing piya badly and realized his life is empty without geet n piya...how cute the way he called because of his restlessness and piya through the phone...now what will maan think about geet.. waiting to read more

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update.

Geet’s family spending time with her and Piya. Piya and Maan missing each other.

I hope Maan misses Geet too. Waiting for next. Update soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb part.geet parents want to take with them but when geet talk about piya take with her maan denide it.geet also say no because she dont want to leave piya later maan agree.maan call to geet but piya break her phone maan get angry and talk to tia.

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