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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: brishty.p

Hi ,

I’m new on IF . Found your story, read all the 46 parts on a go.

Liked the story very much and will wait for the next update.

You really have an amazing style of story telling and this story is just being soo sweet.

Keep Going 👍


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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi,

This is so nice of you to reply.

The character sketches of Maan and Geet are really interesting as they go through the changes with time.Truly speaking, I wasn’t liking Geet to be like this , thinking what about the self respect one should have, whether men find her charming or not.But as the story goes on, I was feeling the pain and Geet too took the step to leave Akhil ( for my relief).Now she is behaving like a normal girl and enjoying the company of Maan around her.

On the other hand, it’s nice to see the changes in Maan too.Earlier he was living a life full of negativity and thoughts of revenge. Little did he care about other things or persons around. With Geet, he is changing and enjoying the simple innocent things of everyday life.

I hope they really don’t get separated too far and both of them find the other side of life, which is not full of humiliation or hatred but friendship, love and respect.

Thanks again for your reply . Just wanted to share my view about the story and after all, I am a MAANEET fan😊

Hope all is well with you and please update soon.

By the way, as I use kindle for reading, would like to know if there’s any e-book format of your book.

Good night.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: brishty.p

Hi,

This is so nice of you to reply.

The character sketches of Maan and Geet are really interesting as they go through the changes with time.Truly speaking, I wasn’t liking Geet to be like this , thinking what about the self respect one should have, whether men find her charming or not.But as the story goes on, I was feeling the pain and Geet too took the step to leave Akhil ( for my relief).Now she is behaving like a normal girl and enjoying the company of Maan around her.

On the other hand, it’s nice to see the changes in Maan too.Earlier he was living a life full of negativity and thoughts of revenge. Little did he care about other things or persons around. With Geet, he is changing and enjoying the simple innocent things of everyday life.

I hope they really don’t get separated too far and both of them find the other side of life, which is not full of humiliation or hatred but friendship, love and respect.

Thanks again for your reply . Just wanted to share my view about the story and after all, I am a MAANEET fan😊

Hope all is well with you and please update soon.

By the way, as I use kindle for reading, would like to know if there’s any e-book format of your book.

Good night.


I am so very elated to read your character analysis. You summarized Maan and Geet's journey beautifully. I would also recommend you to read my other stories. I am sure you will like them.

So awesome that you have a kindle. My book is in kindle format only. You also get my book for free if you have Amazon prime or Kindle unlimited. Following is my book's link:

https://www.amazon.in/dp/B07PKFTS18


Lots of love

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 47

Geet bhaagke aayi

Then sighs out in relief

She smiles like a kid who had just lost her family and saw them again

G-Phew.....yahan ho...main to darr gai thi. Good morning

M-Darr?Kyun?

G-Ki tum ghar chale gaye

M-Nahi mujhe 2 baje jaana hai, I told you didn’t i?

G-emm...phir bhi

She wets her lips....thinking...o she is so stupid

G-emm..I’ll go and freshen up...cya

M-ok..your coffee is ready and some breakfast

Maan ne toast banaye hai

G-Aayi

Geet naha-dhoke change karke aayi, apna bag nikal ke

Maan ne usse khana offer kiya

Geet baith gai table par

G-Thanks,You had?

M-Yup just now..

M- You all set?

She nods

Geet jaldi-jaldi adha adhura khaati hai

G-Thanks it was good

M-You'll call me and let me know you are ok….or is even that not allowed?

She nods

G-Bye

She looks at him, her pretty eyes are misty

M-The taxi is here. I’ll help you carry your things

He says like he has been saying everything else, coolly and detachedly; jaise Geet koi hotel ki guest ho and Maan polite manager

G-Maan. Thanks for everything. You had been a great friend. A great person: I’ll really miss you

A teardrops and she hugs him

He is speechless. He tries to say something but only manages to mumble

He just hugs her back holding her close

He doesn’t know when he'll see her again

He just wants to hold her close and not let her go

She lets moves away and Maan lets go off her

G-Bye

M-Let me know if you ever need anything

Geet ne bag uthaya aur purse liya and walks out

Maan follows her out quietly, hands in pocket, head bowed looking at her load the luggage through corners of his eyes

She waves bye-bye as her lip wobbles

He raises his hand in half-hearted gesture

He has no goodbye smiles for her, only a dark sad scowl

Geet baithi aur chali gai

Maan ka phone baja

He picks up his phone and puts the speaker to his ears

M-Hm?

Antara-Hiiiiiiii baby. All set? I missed you soooooooooooooooooo much honey

M-Babe...I missed you too. Now you be ready in 2 hour and pack everything told you to. I’ll come and pick you up

Maan sayshis voice full of gravity…his expressions dead

Antara-Muaaaaaaaah

Antara ne phone rakha

Maan bhi jaakar taiyaar ho gaya

Saara plan check kar liye

He informed the Private investigator that Geet had left and they assured Maan that they had her followed

Ab Maan back to dude banker reaches at the Antara's place with a single red rose

He knocks on her door

Antara kisses him

Maan kisses her back enthusiastically

She is in a oomphy dress

M-C'monl ets go, we have to hurry

Antara tells the driver to carry her 2 huge bags

Driverc hup chap carries the bags for her

The building valet opens the door for them

Maan waves his hand

M-After myl ady

Antara- So for how many days are we going?

M-3 days

Antara-We'll have fun

Maan nods, Antara se sweet talk karta hua

He takes her to the airport; they have private jet waiting for them

He offers his hand to her as she gets out of the car

She is so happy, her caked up face brimming with joy

Maan smiles down at her and kisses her forehead

M- The fun is only starting


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Posted: 6 years ago

Very emotional it was to see her bidding goodbye. Maan looked very casual abt it although I knew something must be brewing in his head. He got intimate with Antara which looked like he was really involved in it unlike before. What’s in his mind?

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Posted: 6 years ago

She leaves,she is definitely feeling something special for him

Wt is he going to do,he is very normal with antara like a normal lovers

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Posted: 6 years ago

Geet leaves for Africa at last

Very emotional good bye


Maan is back to Anatara

Guess whats is in his mind

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 47

emotional update! well written!

sad that Geet left for Africa!

so Maan and Antara are off on their trip!

hmm surprised that Maan also kissed Antara!

what is Maan planning?

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Oh no what is maan planning involving antara thatvtoo

Sad to see geet go but of course maan has her followed

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update.geet bid bye to maan and she get emotional.

Maan meet antra and kissed her they off on their trip.let see what in maan mind.

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