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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
Fantabulous update very apt name too
Mirage is a web of desires that is unreal
This story also rightly displays that
Maan n his cute n understanding family which is built by Geet
While Dev n Meera led a materialistic life n sir to that failed in their life

Maan got his lesson n valued get now...

Thanks Rahi

yes the title was justified for the story

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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: usss
Superb story

It feels interesting to read something related to our life. Jealousy is a very common factor which can be seen in anyone. Maan and Geet were living a peaceful life before shifting to Mumbai with their adorable daughter Nitya. After shifting to Mumbai , Maan gets a friend Dev but also starts comparison of his lifestyle with Dev's lifestyle which leads to jealousy. Maan unintentionally hearts Geet too by comparing her with Meera's ability to handle home. But atlast Maan realize his mistake seeing the reality.

Dev was not bad as his intentions were to make his family happy but his way to fulfill the needs of Meera were wrong. Meera belongs to rich family and Dev not. Before marrying with each other if they realized and shared their needs with each other then may be they will lead a happy life.

THanks Priya

for the comment and like

You are right Dev was not a bad man but he did to make his wife happy was wrong..

She hailed from a rich family so he opted wrong means to provide her the luxuries

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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: jeyanthi123
Congrtaz
Beautiful os based on reality ...
Maaneet r leading a normal life and happy with it .. Maaneet with their daughter r happy ...
Maan s moving to mumbai and he s comparing himself with dev ... Dev r living a luxury life to show off ... Maan s getting inferiority .. He s getting angry on geet and dev lend money to maan ... Maan s indirectly blaming geet for der life ..
Geet s hurt with maans behaviour ...
Maan s shocked to see dev house and finally truth of dev s in front ...
Dev got arrested for fraud ...
Thank u for pm

Thanks a lot Jeyanthi

Geet and Maan both were matured but sometimes our eyes are not able to see the reality and we chose the wrong path

Same happened with Mana but thank God He had Geet who opened his eyes

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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: custodian75
Beautiful story. Life of an ordinary middle class family.
Maan's illusions are finally broken. He realises the gold he has with him in the form of his family is incomparable to Dev's.

Thanks fr the comment

Yes Maan's illusions are broken at right time

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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: SHRADDHA2102
Hats off to you. The topics is very crucial learning which u have written in utter simplicity... The story in plain language seems very simple but it has got deep meaning and teaching for lifetime... The story is simply Superb...

Many Congratulations to you for bring such a issue as concept of your story...

Thank u so much Shraddha that you were able to grab the message behind the story👏

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Jasbir Kaur

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Too much realistic story it is nd d way you used to write this also awesome. I liked geet's roll as she is very down to earth in her nature...I loved it very much...Thanks for this story...stay blessed

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sagorika93

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

beautiful story ..
maan is lucky ..he came back to his world before he could get lost in his mirage ...well he was lucky also because he got a partner like geet ..
if dev can also got a partner like geet then today he didn't have to go behind the bars!! I feel bad for him but he is a criminal so he deserves what he got today ..
maan wanted a life like dev ..he wanted geet to change herself into a elegant modern woman just like meera..in all his mirage he was so lost that he even failed to realize geet's dedication , love and care towards him..but m happy that he realized his mistake before it was to late

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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: jasbirkaur85197
Too much realistic story it is nd d way you used to write this also awesome. I liked geet's roll as she is very down to earth in her nature...I loved it very much...Thanks for this story...stay blessed

Thank U jassi... For the lovely comment

I was little hesitating while writing it as it was not a usual one..But I m happy that you all loved it

Edited by gorgeousqueen. - 7 years ago

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Rashmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sagorika93
beautiful story ..
maan is lucky ..he came back to his world before he could get lost in his mirage ...well he was lucky also because he got a partner like geet ..
if dev can also got a partner like geet then today he didn't have to go behind the bars!! I feel bad for him but he is a criminal so he deserves what he got today ..
maan wanted a life like dev ..he wanted geet to change herself into a elegant modern woman just like meera..in all his mirage he was so lost that he even failed to realize geet's dedication , love and care towards him..but m happy that he realized his mistake before it was to late

Thanks Sagorika

Obviously Mana is lucky to have Geet as his wife

There is a saying

a wife can turn in to a man she wants..She can take him at the right path or can push him on a wrong path

But Maan was so lucky that he came to know the reality before he could go far on that path