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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

unresed .. page 1

sorry for late😳


No need to say sorry Kalpana..
You are always welcome❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.


Thanks Kalpana for the lovely comment
I thouhg that no one would like it as it
s related to the reality of life
but I'm glad that readers are liking it
OMG?
I will be so happy if you learn something from this story..

Do you really think that in inspired you for your future?
than one more advice.. Try to be happy what ever you have with you.. Don't run behind anyone thinking that he is happier than you..
Everyone has his good as well as bad times..

Everything that glitters in not gold..
Thank u so much for the comment Kalpana



yes rashmi di.. really inspired i dont know what other thought ,its my personal opinion geet was ideal character in this story.we r humanbeigns it natural desire everything but we need control right we chose which one good for us same way geet chosed its good for her family.. mom always saying same thing everytime like u said now , everyone has his good as well as bad times, we need face off rather than run out from suitation & whatever u have in ur hand & just keep with happy.
till now i did not cross my line in past & as well as present because of my mom, i hope i never cross in my future also.. may be situation create my desires make way to wrong path,that time i wish while i remember ur story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hats off to you. The topics is very crucial learning which u have written in utter simplicity... The story in plain language seems very simple but it has got deep meaning and teaching for lifetime... The story is simply Superb...

Many Congratulations to you for bring such a issue as concept of your story...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo



yes rashmi di.. really inspired i dont know what other thought ,its my personal opinion geet was ideal character in this story.we r humanbeigns it natural desire everything but we need control right we chose which one good for us same way geet chosed its good for her family.. mom always saying same thing everytime like u said now , everyone has his good as well as bad times, we need face off rather than run out from suitation & whatever u have in ur hand & just keep with happy.
till now i did not cross my line in past & as well as present because of my mom, i hope i never cross in my future also.. may be situation create my desires make way to wrong path,that time i wish while i remember ur story


That feels so good to know kalpana that your mom is like geet in the story... If you haven't cross your limit in past as well as future then I'm very sure that you won't cross it in future also as you have got such a good upbringing by your parents...Just keep strong yourself.. and no one can maove you from your right path..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: tammana.m

Fabolousss 😃

Geet n maan both living their life hapily n peacefully
till not maan shift to mumbai and they meet dev n meera
seing dev n meeera n complexity happen
and he try to start comparison .
bt soon truth come out dev is fraud and how meera make his life hell
and geet was all true
an eye opener bt amazing os
as it happen in today world
ty for pm 😊

Thanks Tamanna or the comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

this is one of my favourite os from anniversary thread
it's most realistic story which we can relate easily
so loved it


Thanks Sabina
I 'm happy that you liked it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: metromasti

awesome story . maaneet are happily married...they have a daughter nitya . they were leaving a happy & peaceful life but maan's transfer change everything. he transferred at Mumbai & maintaining lifestyle is not a easy thing there . maan's colleague was dev & he is maintaining a high lifestyle & that impressed maan . in the meantime he brought geet & their daughter in Mumbai . he want lead same lifestyle like dev but that was not possible & geet tried to made him understand that , maan was frustrated , he was angry on geet but soon he came to know dev's truth...he earned money by unfair way & he was maintaining his high lifestyle by loan . dev was arrested for fraud . maan realized his mistake , later he went to summer camp & enjoyed with geet & his daughter . he told everything to geet & she told him they will return dev's money which he gave for nitya's summer camp .


Thanks dear
sorry I changed the color as i was not able to read your comment in that color..
This all happens in our life..we can see such characters around us
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nefret19

A fabulous story with such a wonderful and apt moral told in it. Something that happens everywhere and in everyone's lives...the moral of the story is something everyone of us needs to imbibe in our heart, mind and soul...The values & principles that Geet lives by are the ones all of us should inculcate and live by. And not be swept away by the false pretences that people live by and resort to bad ways to feed their unhealthy habits and lifestyle. Superb story:):):)


Thanks Indra..I m so happy to know that i was completely successful in conveying my social message to all of my readers
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: -Gemini-

Tum kyun itna hass rahe ho😃
Tum tho comment nahi karti na


issiliye to hans rahi hai kyunki lakshu ne wo sab likha par hum dono ko pata hai ki wo comment nahin karegi😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: JeevanaP

Very nice story RA

Reality of life...nicely put in words ...
But how can meera be so ignorant of everything...
Good realisation by maan ...
We have a saying ... You should spread your legs only as much u have a bed...It's suits here...

Thanks JP
If Meera too was mature like Geet then how could i have written this story.. 😆😆
ek character to chhaiye tha na aisa😛

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