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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 1

A girl was sitting on a bench in the park. that girl was waiting for someone ..

and was looking here and there.. suddenly her friend Sameera came there..she told that he is coming ..

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She was getting more nervous ..how she will handle all this ? she will be talking first time with a boy that too from her same class but from different section..she use to talk so less to boys ..may be coz of her shyness and also may be coz of her Daarji ..he was a very short tempered man ..on every matter he got hyper if something not happen with his choice ..

They were scared from him very much though she used to share with their mother if she wanted something ..but still kind of scary environment was their home ..her father was in export -import business so he used to travel a lot..

in that kind of atmosphere ..how could Geet even think to talk to a boy ? but she was Geet ..Geet Handa ..Don't know why ? but she thought that she can never been in love with anyone in her life ..but when she saw Maan Singh Khurana ..her classmate ..from different section ..she forgot what thoughts she has before ..and when she noticed that he also seems interested in her ..she became so happy ..like her wish was granted ..their classrooms were in front of one other ..the windows of which open to other side of class by which one can easily see in other class ..and she used to steal glance at him through free periods ..lunch break etc..though she didn't wanted to distract her mind coz of anything as she have heard through her friends that in love one loose concentration..distract from studies and aims ..and only the person who you love is on mind..she was scared of that thought too ..if Darji will come to know her lesser interest in study ..he will kill her for sure ..so her main aim was to be in top students always ..also she like to study ..she was an intelligent girl ..but was never been on top till now ..she was in top 5 but not no.1 and Maan was topper of school since he came ..she tried hard but could not help it ..she got attracted to Maan ..

also she could not able to ignore the fact that Maan also steal glances at her..it gave her hope too ..

and if sometimes she saw Maan and caught him to watching her ..looking at her ..she was all shy ..but she was that smart to not let anyone know except her best friend ..Sameera..

Sameera also gave her idea to met him once and talk and than she was already desperate to meet him once..outside school ..despite being so shy and never allowed to talk to boys much ..esp in front of Daarji ..she went with the flow of emotions and didn't thought much ..not even thought of the pros and cons. and it was very difficult but but she managed to do that ..

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They went to a near by park but it was not so crowded means they could easily talk there without fear..

She was sitting on a bench and than she got the info of him coming..her crush ..her liking ..may be her love too as she was not sure but she wanted to talk for sure..

Her friend winked at her and said "Jaa Geet ja jee le apni zindagi ..she laughed and went from there giving them space..

He came and sit ..it was looking awkward ..she was never been like this with anyone till now..

"Hi ..thanks for coming..words were not able to came out of her tongue properly ..he was too nervous ..it was not easy for him either ..he was always been in studies ..but now after seeing her ..something has happened to him also ..but he was not sure though what's it exactly ..

"Hi ..hey pls don't be ..i mean be comfortable ..Geet ..

Listening her name from his mouth was like another amazing feeling ..

"Thanks ..woh ..first time I am here like this na ..Daarji is too strick na ..i am not allowed to go ..

"I understand ..my parents too ..even after being a boy ..i have to follow some rules you know..

He smiled a lil ..she too ..they started feeling comfortable ..

"You too have to follow rules ..haye Babaji !! "

"Your voice so sweet ..

She was all shy hearing this ..

"And you too "he could speak hardly ..as he wasn't so sure of reaction..but he wanted to say that..

She blushed and he noticed ..

"Thanks ..

"My name is Maan Singh Khurana ..you know na ?

"Ofcourse ..how can I don't know ..you know when first you entered in school na than peon called your name ..and I was there ..i very much know your name ..and I liked it too ..by the end of sentence ..her lil loud voice became low as if she had said something wrong ..

"Haha ..you are so cute ..so you saw me there only firstly ..ok than call me by my name ..

She shyly said "Ma-a-n

She just said his name ..he wanted that too happen ..

"Wow..it sounds so sweet from you ..

She smiled ..

He forward his hand towards her ..more closer ..and kept her hand over her hand ..she began to shiver ..like an electrifying touch she felt..

He stepped back as he thought something went wrong but seeing her face crimson red ..he again touched her hand and said "Geet ..one thing I wanna tell ..our common friends arranged our meeting and ya honestly there is something about you which I can't explain but right now I can't tell its love or just infatuation ..i hope you are getting it ..but in any case we will be friends for sure ..and I am just saying this to not to hurt you by any means ..you yourself think and decide ..

"Same here ..me too wanna meet you and wanted to tell you about my feelings but I am also not sure that its love or not ..but my heart said to meet you once and talk face to face.. I so wanna meet you ..

"Main bhi Geet ..and wow ..that's great ..we have similar thinking ..that is awesome ..now I can clearly tell you what I think about all this ..see our board exams are approaching and other than studies ..i have no priority this time but ..but you are making place in my heart ..

"I also want to study with utmost sincerity but.. but same here as you said ..and my Darji too want only a topper for me ..nothing less than that..you know ..Daarjij said this clearly ..study come first and if you get good marks ..you can settle yourself much better and also good alliances also will came of toppers ..intelligent boys for you ..

He laughed at how she described all this ..

"Kya hua ..kuch galat kaha kya ? "

She made baby face..

"Nahi nahi ..its just ..arre tum bolo na ..i can listen to you whole day ..

He pressed her hand lil more and he felt like he is touching some thing so delicate ..

"My Daarji wants toppers only and you are a topper too so I was thinking its my luck or coincidence?

"Hmm..i think its destiny if we meant to be together..but ye jarur hai k is se Daarji ki taraf se prob nahi hogi at least !!he asked

"Haan wohi toh Babaji mera itna dhyan rakhte hain na ..bas ..unhone ne hi ye sab kiya hai..

"Bilkul ..Babaji apne maanne walo ka poora khyal rakhte hain..but abhi hum sure nahi hain na..toh thora time dete hain..waise bhi exams aane wale hain toh ..

He again saidWaise agar main topper na hota toh tum mujhse nahi milti ?

"Nahi nahi ..aisa nahi hai..phir main ..,main kuch sochti aur babaji mujhe raasta dikhate..aur haan main tumhe bhi kahti k topper nahi ho to kya hua ..topper bano..is se tumhara hi fayda hai na aage..

He laughed at her talks ..he was liking her even more now ..

"Tum bahut pyari ho..i never thought main kisi ladki se aise baat karunga kabhi..but I like it ..meeting was good idea..accha ok ab toh main topper hoon toh wo baat toh clear ho gayi..

So if you agree na ..we can give ourselves a chance ..sometime and till than boards we will not meet outside anywhere ..but will concentrate more on our studies ..and by this time ..we will able to be sure about our feelings ..right ..aur tum bhi dhayn rakhna ..meri mom ko bhi toppers pasand hain..he smiled and teased her ..

"Hey Babaji ..tumhari mom ko bhi ?? waise toh main top 5 main hoon but agar is baar main top main anhi aayi toh ..

"Geet ..relax ..i was just kidding ..but haan Mom too want an intelligent ..topper girl for me ..aur tum top main toh already ho ..bas thora time aur do study ko ..

Don't worry ho jayega ..meri taraf se ye key ring tumhare liye ..mera fav hai..

"Thanks for this Maan..i will keep it close to my heart ..and from my side ..this book ..my fav..

"Thanks Geet ..me too will do the same ..and yes all the best for exams..

"All the best to you too Maan..

They shook hands with each other ..

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Meeting ended but before that we talked about some more topics too ..about studies ..about ourselves ..Our hobbies ..our fears too ..it was all crazy to meet like that ..to share with a boy but but I was comfortable with him and he was comfortable with me ..i was coming home with sweet memories of that meeting and was getting teased by my bestie Sameera ..and I am sure his bestie Lucky also will be teasing him ..about that meeting ..

"Bata na yaar kya kaha Shri Maan Singh Khurana ne..??

"Yaar bata toh diya ..

"Tum dono bade smart wale lovers ho ..pahle top karoge studies main ..phir love main..maan gaye ..

"Maan ..woh kaha se gaye ..

"Stupid Maan and maan gaye means agree kar liya ..tu jarur top karegi ..she laughed and I got irritated more ..

"Main jarur karungi ..Daarji ke liye ..Maan k liye ..apne aur apni family k liye

"Oye hoye ..kya baat hai..jhappi paa..she hugged her and both smiled ...

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Maan's POV :

After that short but sweet meeting ..we saw each other in school but not talked in alone like that one ..just with friends sometimes and those moments were like dew in desert ..they gave us hope to meet soon ..and ya ...we were doing it for each other ..for ourselves and also our family..parents..too..

But one thing is sure ..we were started missing each other more and when ever we saw each other ..there was an urge to meet again ..we used to see and touch the gifts we gave to each other..when ever we missed each other more..and her lovely talks ..her smile ..took my heart ..and I started realizing it that it wasn't just infatuation.. and same was happening with her too ..which she told me later ..

Than Board exams started and we were studying hard ..and prayed for each other too ..

After exams ..we got a sigh of relief that at least now we can meet but Babaji didn't wanted that I guess that's why I had to go to Delhi with my mom to my Nanaji's place ..and I came just before result was about to come ..and I already gave Geet ..the msg and both of us were counting days to meet again and confess our love ..

When result was out ..we met in school and yayy!! We both were toppers list..she improved too ..and gained 2nd position ..and me Ist ..she was jumping with joy ..not only for me but for herself too..she was a jolly natured girl..knew to be happy in every situation..i loved her more and wanted to talk to her in alone ..we again made a plan..this time we only knew we were going at some lonely place..

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Geet and Maan's meeting ..

"Geet ..you know for how long we are waiting for this moment ..i can't believe ..we did it and see now we both are toppers ..it means our love was that strong ..it even helped us not distracted us ..hai na ..

"Maan ..it means tum maante ho ..hum me pyar tha ..sirf infatuation nahi ..!!

"Geet ..wo mera matlab ..i mean ..ok fine ..ya I know it now ..i am in love with you ..I LOVE YOU GEET

He hold her hand ..kneel down and said ..and gave her a rose ..picking out from his pocket ..

It was a surprise but pleasant one ..she didn't expected it on that day atleast ..

"Maan ye ..

"Geet ab tum bhi apne dil ki baat bata do na ..tell me your feelings na..

He stood up and whispered in her ears..in this corner of his lips touched her earlobe and again an electrifying sensation gone down her spine and not only her he too not remained unaffected by this ..

He was just staring at her ..lost in her innocent beauty ..

"Maan ..i also feel the same ..its not mere infatuation ..its its..love..I LOVE YOU MAAN "she said quickly just that if she could not say this time ..she can never say it again..

"Oh!! Geet ..we are in love ..we are yes ..and it's the most b'ful feeling ..let's celebrate ..

In excitement ..he hugged her and she too without hesitation.she too reciprocated ..as she was dying to be in his arms ..though cautiously she was aware of what she should not do but their love was calling so they just lost in it.. they got parted after few min and in this time something happened which made them both

embarrased ..but than they laughed too seeing each other faces and roam there for more time discussing about various things and also they ate some snacks which Maan brought from outside the park from snacks vendor ..keeping Geet sitting on a chair in the park ..they were in the dense area ..full of big bushes and trees ..and they did their private party ..enjoyed chatting with each other and decided somethings for future too ..it became memorable meeting for them..

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Geet's POV :

After that meeting ..Maan and me decided to tell our moms at least and we did too ..and thanks God our moms are not hitler types and they only became happy that we told them ..than we let our moms met and they became friends soon ..

They often went to Gurudwara and we along with them went there too ..

After prayer ..we used to do seva in Langar and than spent sometime with each other ..while our mothers also had great time ..as they also became very close friends ..and supporting us in every possible way..

One day we were celebrating Maan's b'day ..that day moms could not come but they had given us permission to meet ..we had great time ..we sat in the same park where we first met ..did our party..cut small muffins ..as cake we could not bought..drink softdrinks ..i gave him a woolen jacket which I have made in holidays ..he was so happy ..and he gave me a b'ful purse ..as return gift..he bought for me from Delhi..and yes he kissed on my hand too and I can't explain that feeling ..that was that was..no I have no words..

So ya till than no prob and our love story was going smoothly ..

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Love story could go more smoothly but but than someone came ..he was Dev ..an NRI who came to India and his Dadaji was so close friend of my Daarji ..and he wanted to join the college here ..as his father said to live sometime in India ..he was missing India too much and Dev also loved India and wanted to study here ..even after facilities given to him to study anywhere ..

My Daarji was very happy to see him ..and he used to go and meet Dev and his family and they do vice versa too ..i was afraid what if Daarji by any means started thinking about my marriage with him than ?

I was shivered with the weird thought ..and also I was scared more coz Dev also was topper.

My mom said that she will tell Daarji now about my alliance with Maan ..she will talk to him in other manner ..and than Maan's mom will send rishta for me ..but when Mom went to talk to Daarji ..he was talking to Dev and his family who were just came..we got relieved when no such thing happened and Darji didn't talked about any alliance with Dev..but still we were worried ..next day Daarji went out of town with Dev s Dadaji ..meanwhile Maan could not control himself ..he was not agreeing to be keep quiet ..he was waiting for us for so long and now suddenly Dev is in picture ..we were more worried coz Daarji always praise Dev a lot ..he was so impressed with him ..

I agreed with Maan but its just that in hurry we could not take any imp decision..now when Daarji will come and when Mom will talk to Daarji..we were waiting for that..

We were in same college ..Dev ..me and Maan ..eventually Dev and Maan were in same cricket team ..

Maan asked him while practicing in lunch break that what is the scene ? why he is going to my home [Geet's home] so often ? what is his interest ? angry young man Maan singh Khurana straight forwardly asked him and he have no answer ? as he first got shocked but after words he burst out laughing ..

Maan got more angry ..but he kept his hand on her shoulder and let him calm ..

"Arre Maan ..don't get hyper mere yaar..but Maan turned around and his back was in front of him..

"Maan singh ji ..gal toh sun lo ..tusi bhi na ..see bro no such scene is going on yaar..Geet is like my lil sis ..

I have a girlfriend and that too abroad ..you wanna see ..see than ..he fished out mobile from his pocket and show a girl's pic ..Maan's anger settle down a lil..

"How can I believe ?

Oye hoye ..sacche aashique ho lagta hai ..you are really a true lover Maan ..but I am also in love with Michelle ..and we will get married after studies will complete..she is also coming to India in few months ..my mom-dad know about us .. so pls believe me and just tell me what's the scene between you and Geet ? may be I can help you ? but only if you are interested ..he raised his hands and gave look like I am just asking ..and I am genuine ..

After lil more effort Maan told him everything [at first he was not ready to trust him but than he did ]and he promised to help Maan ..Maan became happy now ..he got a new friend too plus he teased me that day on phone that he got a new bro-in -law..

"Maan ..tum bhi na ..itna gussa kya karna ? mom dekh leti na ..Daarji aane wale the ..i understand but wo toh Dev accha insan nikla ..agar wo Daarji ko bata deta toh ?

"Toh main chupchap dekhta rahoon sab kuch..aur tumhe koi le jaye ..ye mujhse nahi hoga ..

"Aww Maan ..but tumhe lagta hai k tumhari Geet aise hi kisi k saath chali jayegi ..

"Nahi Geet ..woh mujhe gusaa aa gaya tha ..par dekho na ..hume kuch help hi mili..aur haan Geet Handa k otoh ye Maan singh Khurana chup bhi nahi kara sakta ..le jana toh door ki baat hai ..uski marji ke bina ..

He was in pacifying mood and began to tease me too ..i was no less ..

"Maan singh Khurana ji ..apni help se help leke jaldi is Geet handa ko lene aao warna ..mujhe ilzam mat dena agar mujhe koi aur pasand aa gaya ..

"I will kill that ...he left incomplete coz he understood that I was just teasing him..

"Oh mere angry young man ..ab gussa choro ..aur aage ki planning karo ..

aur waise bhi ab phir se exams aa rahe hain ..

"Haan who toh hai ..toh phir karte hain wohi ..study ..study and only study..sirf yaadein liye ..study k liye jalayenge diye ..raat raat bhar aur milenge exams khatam hone par..

He said in such a way that I could not stop laughing but also became emotional than ..we decided diff plans during exams but every time we noticed that our love grew more stronger ..not lesser ..after meeting so long ..this time also we were going to do that ..not only for us but also for our parents who supported us in thick and thin and we could not let them down in any way and we had trust on our love ..

"Wah wah shayar saheb..bahut acche ..ab itne acche exams bhi dena ..best of luck ..

"My best of luck is you ..so I will just see you in my mobile and I got my luck ..

"Maan ..I gave him a flying kiss ..he too..

"All the best to you too ..

"Mine also same Maan ..i have your pic ..my luck...chalo milte hain phir..exmas k baad..

"Sure and meanwhile our moms will fix our alliance I hope ..

"Fingers crossed ..

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see below for next part

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2

Next day Darji came home with Dev and he was very angry..Mom and me got scared that why he is so angry ? he was almost yelling my name..Geet ..Geet kaha hai tu ..mujhe tujhse baat karni hai abhi..

I was very worried that what Daarji will say now ? he got some info it seems ..but we have to go first ..

My mom went first and tried to calm him down ..

"Daarji ki hoya ?[What happened ?]

"Jo hua wo bataunga ..par pahle maine Geet se gal karni hai ..bula use ..[I will tell but first tell her to come ..i want to talk to Geet]

I went and stood with eyes down ..

"Geet I have fixed your alliance with ..be ready to be engage after your exams ..ok..

I got shocked of my life ..how can it be possible ? means all these days Daarji was thinking about this but but ..with whom ? with Dev..it was obvious seeing him with Daarji ..no ..i could not let this happen..how could I ? Mom ..mom tell everything na ..i was praying silently ..and I was not allowed to say no to Daarji but but I thought ..if this time I can't say anything ..i won't able to say anything in future ..

But for my help mom spoke ..

"Daarji ..aap kya kah rahe ho ..??matlab ..Geet ..aise kaise..wo "she also was not able to talk properly..she was late in telling him or even my father who was out of town than ..now she was also regretting it was clear on her face ..just like my face..how will I tell the truth now ?

"Geet ka rishta maine tay kar diya hai ..bas..?

"Daarji par mujhe ku-ch kah-na hai ? I could hardly spoke ..

"Kya kahna hai ..bolo !! "

Me and mom were not able to speak anything coz of fear..we were scared but don't know how I spoke ..

"Daarji ..maafi chahti hoon par pls aap meri baat suniye ..aise rishta tay mat kijiye ..main main ..wo..

Mom said forward .. Daarji ye kisi aur ko pasand karti hai..aap jo chahiye mujhe saza de dijiye ..par hamari baat sun lijiye ..

"Hmmm..toh aakhir bol hi diya ..par ab toh der nahi ho gayi ..maine faisla le liya hai ..

We could not understand ..

"Der ..nahi Daarji ..aise mat kahiye ..Geet puttar ki zindagi ka sawaal hai ..

"Toh pahle kyu nahi bataya ? "he almost shouted

"Kyuki hum dar gaye the..aapse ..I said ..with eyes looking down ..

"Kaun hai wo ..??

"Maan khurana ..Geet k college main hai ..uski family bhi bahut acchi hai ..main mil chuki hoon Daarji

"Tab dar gaye the ..ab bhi toh bataya ..

We were stood still..than

Daarji came near me and caressed my head ..

"Geet puttar ..its all my fault ..meri galti hai ..hum bado se hi agar bacche baat karne main darne lagein

Toh phir galti hamari hai ..unki nahi ..

I saw Daarji with ques in my eyes..

He said further that if we were not sacred ..than we would have told him..mom also said that she was about to tell them but she didn't get chance plus scared too ..

Daarji hold my hand and said "Par tere Daarji ne bhi dhoop main baal safed nahi kiye hain..and smiled

Now Dev who was quite for sometime ..came near us and smiled ..

"Daarji aap ye ??

"Meri pyari Geet ..tera rishta main tay jarur kiya hai magar usi Maan singh Khurana se jise tu pasand karti hai.. I could not believe ..nor did mom..what is Daarji saying ?

Than he told ..and told us ..that Dev s father was saying to talk to Maan's father for Geet's alliance if Daarji is searching alliance for Geet ..Maan is good friend of Dev.. Daarji was ok with it but he was thinking that suddenly Maan's name came from where ? as Dev came here just sometime back ..he than enquired to Dev and after asking many times ..Daarji got to know that Maan and Geet loved each other ..and Dev and Maan became friends ..their mother's also know about this and they want to tell Daarji but are scared ..and trying to tell..Dev told Daarji on one condition that he will not say or do anything to Maan till he will talk to Geet ..Dev wanted us together ..so he requested to pls see Maan and not to have nay random thought about him ..he is a topper too ..

"Daarji aapko sab pata tha !!we got shocked again ..

He added "Haan pata chal gaya ..tum toh batane waali thi par mujhe pahle hi pata chal gaya ..and also I saw Maan with Dev's help ..and happy to know that he is so dedicated towards study..

I got to know this too that you and Maan promised each other to study hard and not to meet till exams ..everytime you are having exams ..that's one thing made my anger fly away ..you both respect your elders so much ..and your study too ..he again caressed my head ..i wan not in state to say anything ..Maan told Dev and he told Daarji ..now all open ..but Daarji is not looking angry now

"Daarji ..aap ne toh saara masla hi hal kar diya ..[ Daarji you have solved all this so easily..]

Mom said ..

"I love Geet so much and want best for her ..now she also improving in studies and she also have chosen best for her and keeping my condition in mind ..so how can I say no ? I agree for this alliance..

Hearing this I was jumping out of joy in my imagination and immediately wanted to tell Maan ..but first wanted to thank Daarji and Dev as they really brought sunshine in my life ..

"Daarji Mujhe maaf karna ..i didn't wanted to hurt you ..

"Jaanta hoon ..aur ye tere Maan hain na ..angry young man..Dev se bhi baat kar daali ..aur Dev Maan ka dost ban gaya ..aur teri aur Maan ki khatir mujhe convince karna chaha ..par is tarah hume sab pata chal gaya ..par main bahut khush hoon..tune A1 ladka pasand kiya hai..Geet..meri Geet hoshiyaar bhi hai aur bahadur bhi ..mujhe tujhpar naaz hai ..

I was happy but also at the verge on crying .. there are situations where you laugh and cry both ..

He embraced me and blessed me ..i saw drops of tears rolling from his eyes ..Mom too got emotional ..

We didn't expected something like this ..

Dev was also wiping his eyes ..his lil sis got her love ..what more he can want ..i thanked him ..he was truly so sweet ..he said

"Mention not Geet ..you both will set example ..love gives us strength ..it didn't let us fall but it rose us up ..and you have proved this ..you didn't let your Daarji down ..he is happy with the values you and Maan have..God bless you always my sis ..

I thanked Dev a lot from my heart ..and now Mr.Maan was called first ..he came with Dev and didn't knew what has happened ? Daarji talked to him in his way and he was all shocked to know that Daarji know it all ..he touched his feet ..than Daarji said "Ab jald hi hum tumhare ghar rishta lekar aayenge ..aur tum apni Geet ko le jana dulhan banake ..

"Daarji..main hairan hoon..ye sab..

"Hmm ..i was about to call your parents too but than I wanted to talk to you alone ..i am impressed with you and proud of you ..and you both could run away ..many youngsters do so but you choose the long and lengthy path ..but see you succeeded ..my blessings are always with you "

Daarji gave us lots of love and blessings and than Maan also found it supercool how all it happened..

We got a chance to talk in alone and we were like surprised like our dream came true ..we hugged each other tightly and our tears were saying what we were feelings ..mixed emotions we both had ..

It was a very unique meeting ..my father was also very happy when he got to know this ..

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After our exams ..we got engaged ..till exams we,as per promise not talked to each other though it was very hard to not talk esp when you have nothing to hide and you can meet ..but we stood by our condition ..but after exams ..he used to call me daily and we were in courtship than ..months passed and result came ..we both were toppers ..in our subjects ..very happy ..and going to be married soon ..

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Maan's POV :

That day also came ..and Geet was looking like an angel ..what to say speechless seeing her beauty ..

Dev was teasing me and I was just staring at her ..Geet will be mine from now ..that mere feeling was amazing ..now I will keep her happy always ..she is my treasure of happiness ..my reason to smile ..

When we exchanged garlands ..having Jaimala ..all were looking at us and we were looking into each other eyes ..i bowed my head and she put garland in my neck ..i do the same ..all shouted with joy ..

Than we took seven pheras and took seven vows but infact I could took unlimited vows to keep my Geet happy ..

Our marriage happened and Daarji took promise from me that i won't hinder Geet's studies even after maariage but will guide her and support her too ..i told him not to worry ..me and my parents also wants her to complete her studies ..

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Now after some years of marriage ..we are settled and working in MNC's but planning to open something of our own and hopefully we will succeed in this too ..our love will give us strength..i look into Geet's eyes and she also assures me ...

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"Geet and Maan opened their own co. Khurana and Handa constructions

Where Geet is interior designer and Maan handles construction work ..

"Maan ye kise kah rahe ho ?

"Geet meri pyari Geet ..mere aur tumhare parents sabko jab ye shaan se batate hain na toh mujhe bahut Khushi hoti hai..you are the best thing happened to me Geet ..he kissed her forhead..

"Maan same here ..yes Daarji also do the same ..telling everyone and distributing sweets to their friends ..relatives etc.and also going to give big party for this ..he also change a lot now ..no more scary Daarji..thanks Babaji for everything ..n for getting us together.

"Hmm and this is great na..and I will also sing this song for you ..

"Tera saath hai kitna payara ..kam lagta hai Jeevan saara ..

Tere milan ki lagan se ..mujhe aana padega ..duniya main dubara..

"I love you even more when you sing this for me ..

Aur aapki Geet bhi aapke liye ye hi gayegi ..

"Tere mere sapne ab ek rang hain ..jahah bhi le jaye raahein,hum sang hain..

"Wah wah kya kahne janab k ..but you forgetting something ..

"Kya "I was curious ..

"Geet ..but I didn't get my gift ..till now..

"What gift? Kya chahiye?

"My dose of your love ..aaj kin ahi mili ..he was about to kiss me ..when I pushed him away and ran from there ..he was also chasing me ..i went towards living room ..he too came there and tried to catch me and said that I could not run away from him and I showed him thumbs down ..giving him look that what ever ..you can't chase me..

During all this ..i was trying to tease him more and tried to lock the door but in this I was stumbled and was about to fall when strong pair of arms caught me ..and his touch was protective and fiery too ..i was escaping but only to fall in his arms again..i love my protector ..my lover ..my everything and now he will take away me with him in the world of love..where we will lost each other in each other ..his grip was tighten on me ..i stood up with his help and he was looking at me with deep brown eyes ..and said in his husky voice ..

"Geet ..tum mujhse bhaagti ho ..mere hi paas aane k liye ..tum meri ho main tumhara ..hum ek dusre k paas hi aayenge ..chahe kuch bhi ho ..than he changed his tone..teasing me ..

"Stop blushing and give me my dose first ..baaki baad main dekhnge ..he winked at me ..

"Mr.Maan singh Khurana ..kya matlab baaki baad main de"till than he sealed my lips with a deep kiss ..passionate and long ..his touches on my body made me shiver ..i was trying to change the topic but I knew he will get it ..and I will willingly give it ..

~~~~0~~~~

We parted due to lack of oxygen ..and she was looking heavenly..she was trying the outfit ..she brought recently ..and I loved it truly ..my angel ..my Geet ..i won't let you go anywhere ..i lost in her and unknowingly I said what I was thinking in my mind..First I have to remove some barriers ..

"Maan ye kya bol rahe ho ? barriers ? tumhe tumhari dose mil gayi na ..ab hato

"Aise kaise ..Mrs.Maan singh Khurana ..kaha jaogi ..aa wo main kah raha tha ..is dress main..you are looking breath taking my darling ..and like in our teenage ..we are no longer bounded by barriers..and also this dress have some barriers ofcourse which I will happily want to remove right now ..

"Maan ..Maan..shyly she spoke

I removed her dupatta and looked at her fully ..she was all shy ..this is so amazing ..just before a sec ..she was all naughty and now so shy ..i lifted her chin up and placed a kiss on her cheek ..followed by several kisses on her face..jaw line and than stopped at her lips again ..my lips touched hers ..and we bot got electrifying touches of each other s lips ..i lifted her in my arms and took her to our room..

~~~~0~~~~

Maan took me to the room and I was just staring at him with my arms in her neck he was smiling and giving me passionate looks ..soon he removed all barriers he wanted and also asked me to start unbuttoning his barriers oops shirt ..than..uff ..i was not able to think anything else ..his way of expressing love was ..i could be in his arms forever ..yes I want to be in his arms forever ..

He too said me the same and we drowned in the pool of pleasure.


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our next award category is

before announcing the name
want to clear something
this award goes to that writer or story, jiski update aane ke baad bhi wo waiting me rhti hai next part ke liye 😆


winner is

and 1st runner up is

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here we are again with the most intresting interview of writer...who won the title of most awaiting story of the year..
MADHUBALA123'S MYTH won the most awaiting story of the year so here is her and her readers view...
madhubala's words
1.myth won the most awaiting story of the year...How do u feel about it...
Don't be shocked. It's my first time 😲 hence the length!!

1)I knew about the nominations because one of my readers, TaranaGeet, posted the link to the polls on the comment section but never thought I would win. Never did the follow up as well. So when you informed me, it was a bit of a shocker. I do believe most awaiting means...waiting for more rather than the one that seldom gets updated.😆😆This makes me especially happy because it is the first ever recognition that I got as a writer. And it is my life-long ambition to be an official writier one day. 😳

When you know that people think your work is worthy enough of their time, that itself is a reward. But then when they choose it as an exciting story from a bunch of other good works, it is humbling and gratifying at the same time.
If I am not wrong, you selected the nominations from a different poll as well right?
So, thank you each and every one of my readers who nominated and voted for me. Ofcourse, the team behind GHSP celebrations, it is such a great effort that you are doing things like this without expecting anything in return. Thank you guys for doing this. 🤗

2.how different is this geet maan from your other stories
Well, I generally tend to keep the basics strong without deviating much from the show.To me in any form Maan Singh Khurana is this influential righteous man with honour and Geet Handa is the head-strong woman who knows how to stand up for herself. That is what the show gave us. However, apart from that there can be layers to a person's character.
The show was pretty much black and white towards the end. It gave up on that little shade of grey which is why we have so many good writers who explore that region successfully and readers who come here looking for it even after so many years. The CVs are not dumb. In the visual media, you have so many constraints budget, cast, production, management and so on. But when it comes to paper it is an open canvas.

Now back to the question, people who read my story know that this Maan and Geet are one of a kind. I am so enjoying this phase where I am free to do anything with them. As you know, there are two Maans who are similar yet different being from two different timelines. The "ancient" Maan is a typical aristocratic old school man in power yet he has a tender heart which always yearns to do the right thing. He is flawed to her in the sense that he is way too old fashioned. But if you look at him with a different perspective Maan is acutally a man of modern school of thoughts given the time he was brought up. Geet is a geek which I have never attempted before. I am personally not that much of a geeky person so my characters have never gone there. In this FF, she had to be one because the story demands so. As for modern-day Maan, I have enjoyed MSK's cooking skills in the show. There is nothing more sexier (am I allowed to say that word? 😕 😲) than MSK in his apron making spanish omlette for Geet with that guitar Maan bgm in the background. Good old days!!
So I thought, why not bring that to the front. Even a chef can be ruthless when he is Maan Singh Khurana!!!

3.what inspired u to write on timeline...
I have mentioned this in the intro part of the FF. I started binging the Outlander TV series on Netflix and half way through I realised that this would have been so much better with a more passioante couple. Then it hit me, Maan and Geet! That brought me here to this FF. This is different because of the premise itself. The Lord who falls for a woman who accidentally fell into his timeline. This isn't a typical love story. The love here blossoms along with the course of other events that are taking place in the story. That is how I want my readers to perceive this. At times, the romance might take a back seat because it is meant to be a mystery thriller rather than a love story. I never expected readers to accept this genre. But they received it with far more grace than I could ever ask for. It is exciting to see that the readers are actually present in the story waiting for it to unfold and reveal itself. I am travelling as well and eager to see where it takes me.
4.Readers are waiting for your updates(even me) how overwhelming is that to you...Do u tend to make your readers wait😉...Stoping at very wrong places😳
You said it! Overwhelming is the word. With each update I can see the intrigue building up which makes me more responsible and nervous at the same time for delivering good content. Keeping up with expectations is terrifying. But becuase this is the Geet forum, I know the readers would be kind even if I mess up. 😛
But I do not want to screw this. I have something planned since the beginning. So far I do not intend to change that story. Still, a lot of it has become bigger and grand than what I thought it would be. I follow the mood of the readers, and try to explain the characters in detail with each update so that we are all on same page.
Personally I hate cliff-hangers. 😆 I believe they are the gimmicks you use just to hook your reader/viewer when you can no longer keep up their interests. I don't intentionally do anything to make the reader wait. That is cruel if you ask me. But I planned to write a thriller and the intention was to develop myself as a writer as well. So there are crucial places where I have stopped. Not to leave a cliff-hanger but to keep the reader interested for the coming part. With Myth, I write each part like the chapters of a book so that if you binge read it is equally exciting as if reading a book. I write on a free software which keeps track on the total count of pages and words. I prefer to stop when it reaches a certain count and conclude at that point in a way that it has a closure but still you have to wait for the rest. If that is impossible, I would give multiple updates as it happened recently.(you all know when 😉 😆)
5 few words about your view on this poll and ghsp anni celebrations
GHSP anniversary celebrations- well kudos to you guys and your efforts. 👏👏
It is hard enough for me to sit and write for a single update a week. I can't imagine the time you give to create all these wonderful posts and events. The polls and voting are like award ceremonies to the anonymous writers like me and a place where the regular reader gets a chance to appreciate his/her favourite work.👍🏼
Each story here is different. There are so many categories and nominations and polls. The sheer complexity of it makes me wonder how you work out and plan all these. I was a small part of your farewell event. Even though I didn't comment much, I followed that thread as much as I could. It was lovely!!

The show is over and there is not much left to post in the forum. But efforts like this keep the members active and creates a sense of community amongst people who love this show even today.
Great work, all of you!! Happy GHSP anniversary!!! 🥳
6 two readers whose comment u will wait to read
Picking a favourite reader...That is one difficult task. You can't ask one to choose.😒

In my case, each FF has been a different genre and targeted different set of readers. Also I do have a bunch of regular readers who have accepted me even after my long absent periods now and then. I am thankful to all of them. Every FF has given me some special friends. Like jasminerahul and impoojaverma from The Divine Flower. For this particular FF, I can't confine it to two readers. But one pleasant surprise was kawaii following my story. I am a huge fan of hers (SLY has me hooked!!). It was a fangirl moment for me when I started seeing her comments for my updates.😆
Look, she is an expert and everyone here knows that. When soemone like that starts reading your story you become super-excited and nervous at the same time. 😳

Other than that, ShermeenluvsGC, LovelyUmang5 and TaranaGeet are the readers with whom I have a special kind of bond that happened with this FF.
If I have to name two readers, whose views I am eager to know it would be 1)kawaii - that is like a critics review for which I keep my fingers crossed. 😳
2) TaranaGeet- I think she is one among the first readers who commented passionately on this story and made me realise that this FF was being accepted whole heartedly.😊

Thank you all who have taken the time to read this.

@Sanjana- Thank you for asking these questions. I hope I have answered all your questions properly. Sorry for the length of my answers. I am a chatter box in general. *warning--don't get me started. This is what you get. 🤣* You can feel free to edit it out.
i very much enjoyed and didnt even edit a letter sweets😛😉

taranageet words

1 as u know myth won most awaiting story...What is your view on this...
Its a unique story with a very interesting and intriguing concept that has not been explored much before. The beauty of the story is not just the concept but also writer's creativity that brings everything to life and make us believe something that defies science and logic.

2.how do u feel about story line
Its a very well thought through and planned story with all ends tying perfectly. Each scene is very beautifully described and makes us believe that we are transported into a different era. The fine details, the mannerism, the expressions everything is very well researched and makes sense to the readers and sometimes I wonder if she spends so much time on researching life 200 yrs ago or if really is so much knowledgeable and observant. Her story telling capabilities bring the words to life and I wish movie or TV series could be made on it. The story has all the elements to it - thriller, suspense, drama, action, sci-fi, historical set-up, comedy and most importantly romance!

3.as all knew this maan and geet r quite different from other stories..Did u feel writer did justice to the characters
With Maaneet stories most of the times we know certain predictable facts but we yearn for the next parts of this story just to know how the writer has approached the chemistry. The characters are well defined and are portrayed consistently throughout the story so far. There are multiple Maan, Dev and few other characters but we are very clear how each will behave depending on the time period. It's amazing how she can bring out a clear distinction between each character and their part while still keeping the essence of the original serial intact as that's what we are all craving for and are here for.

4.few lines about myth
Myth - a timeless journey is actually a journey of Geet (a Dr/ Neuro Surgeon) through timelines where she is transported to a parallel world which existed 200 yrs ago and most of the people she has been encountering are the look alike/ ancestors of the current characters. As each chapter unfolds her journey, we are left sitting on the edge anticipating what will happen to her next and feel as helpless and alone as she does in a strange land with no modern comforts, freedom and loved ones. She tactfully manages everything by winning peoples heart and the special one's specially by her innocence, smartness and service to the needful.

This story also highlights how life was 200 years ago and brings forward the issues our society was plagued with and the good sides of those times too with larger than life description f all events that used to take place. It tells us how how difficult it would be for women from current progressive times to survive hundreds of years ago when the lives were flipped and women oppression was a reality.

5.few words about writer and her updates...
The writer, Madhu is the sweetest person! She is very consistent and predictable with her updates with clear expectations so the readers are not left guessing and craving all the times. She is very active with her replies on readers comments when she gets time and we often engage in fun chats and leg pulling. Her story thread feels like a fun place to hang out and interact with other readers. She maintains a good rapport with most readers by making them feel important.
The best part about her story and updates is the "Quotations" she brings in with each chapter. Oh my goodness... they are so simple yet deep in meaning that I always wonder how beautifully she has picked up just the right one that summarizes the entire chapter with each word of it. Her research is spot on and so detailed that I often wonder how she gets so much time? She puts in a lot of efforts and dedication to her work and that is evident as she never fails to add pictures to support her story where ever possible. In short - she is an epitome of PERFECTION!!
I wish her all the luck and success in whatever she does!

6.its in category of most awaiting...Was the writer making her readers more wait...
It was the suspense and anticipation of what will happen next made us wait like crazy each time even though she was very consistent and regular with her updates. We readers are very greedy you know and are never satisfied with just one chapter :). However, despite her busy schedule and job, she wold never disappoint us on weekends and sometimes with mid-week surprises too.

7.did u feel anything missing in the story...U want any particular scene r thing in your favorite story
Nothing in particular... like I said we readers are very demanding and greedy and often want her to rush in with Maaneet romance but what she actually presents in her work is far more beautiful than just physical romance and we can't be happier.

8 few words for our poll and ghsp anni celebrations
I think it is a great way to keep readers and writers motivated and connected!

kawaii words
1 as u know myth won most awaiting story...What is your view on this...

I think it deserves to be that. It has got an interesting plot, historical at that, intriguing characters and twists and turns here and there. it is bound to keep the readers glued. now that when i have started to read, I knew why it was most awaiting... well deserved.


2.how do u feel about story line

historical, peppered with fantasy is something i had always wanted to write. Sadly, it didn't materialize. Madhu is doing a commendable job. she has conceptualized it well and she has researched on it. and that is exactly why i love the story line. The characters are well built and there are proper justifications to everything. I think it is going great.

3.as all knew this maan and geet r quite different from other stories..Did u feel writer did justice to the characters

The characters are what the writer imagines in her head and give shape to it. if she thinks her characters are well justified, then they are well justified. we as readers are a clean slate. We will form the characters in our heads exactly how the writer has presented it. We cannot add or subtract anything to and from them to make them justifiable or not.
I believe the more different your characters are, more the readers love it.

4.few lines about myth

Myth is something am hooked to after a very long time. It is a thrilling story. you never know what is going to happen next. The characters are well sketched and the timelines are well defined. The chemistry between the characters are well penned. it has kept all of us hooked. and it is going great the way it is.

5.few words about writer and her updates...

I haven't known madhu for a very long time. The first time I received her pm was a surprise though. she is relatable. And i liked her then as a reader and like her now too as a writer. on one boring day at work, I ended up reading something of hers and that was Myth. she is putting so much effort into her story and as a writer and a reader, i can see it so well. She researches her topics well and has the power to convince the readers of her writings. She is regular in her updates and that is commendable. with life and work, we all know how difficult it is to keep up to our commitments. And that is why she is one of those writers I look forward to reading and knowing more.


6.its in category of most awaiting...Was the writer making her readers more wait...

I don't think so. we all have our own life and our own commitments. and even with all that, if she is updating even once a week, we should be thankful to her.

7.did u feel anything missing in the story...U want any particular scene r thing in your favorite story

I'd rather like to give space to the writer. imposing our ideas or thoughts shall take away the charm of the story and the zeal of the writer too. i believe in keeping patience and letting the characters grow. constructive criticism is something I wouldn't deny but at the same time, I would put my TRUST on the writer and let steer her way into the story and present her masterpiece.

8 few words for our poll and ghsp anni celebrations

ahh you guys!!!! what can i say? it is so amazing to see people put so much effort to keep the forum alive with so many events and polls. despite your committments you still manage to keep us all together in this forum..you deserve all the love and respect from everyone of us.
You guys rock!

thanks to u all who took your time out and answered our questions



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DaftGirk'scursed up love turned out as runner up of most awaiting story of the year..
so here is few words about the story from the writer and her readers...
daftgirk WORDS
1. cursedup love was the runnerup of most awaiting story..how do u feel about this...
Cursed is runner up, for what?😲 shoot found out, need to read and then react lol.
Aww thank you for the splendid news I feel elated, I am assuming most awaiting story is a good category😆. I like that my readers are enjoying and waiting for updates regardless of how slow it might be at the moment. Maybe due to this news I'll post two parts😉

2.what inspired you to write on this...
I won't lie the first part was entirely inspired by Penelope, and then the rest just churned out. May helped me with the title (SW), it was either A cursed up love or A cursed knot or A cursed Love. Strictly following the love theme as you can see😆

3.few words about the story line
Its of a tale, how a loved princess turns into a cursed realisation and her fight to discover herself with the help of a few helpful and not helpful characters. Honestly, the story was set but with time i forget the storyline lol and now Maan has also changed from a brewing alcoholic to something more somber. That reminds me I need to show him more maybe, coz right now his character makes no sense. Maybe I need to read the story again, that would mean you all have to wait. Maybe not a good idea😆

4.few words about maan and geet of your story
I love Geet here, she's innocent yet stubborn, meak yet fierce and totally cute. Maan is a building challenge, i need to show him change yet keep his traits. Hopefully that's doable, but again he isn't mean just affected or damaged 😆 due to the DARK past lol. Hoping I keeping the mystery quotient high?

5.do u believe in curses...considering your title...😛
Do I believe in curses, I don't think so but I do believe in that you pay for what you do in this earth. So yes in a way i do, every action results in an opposite reaction. Now if that action was to harm another, then the opposite shall end face you where you'll be harmed. Gosh I sound philosophical 😆

6.did u feel something you want to write but havent yet in the plot..
Yes the introduction of this Dark prince, I have it in my mind, picture included lol; dark and total bitch lol but will do him once Vicky and Meera have a little more screen space, plus Sameera needs to come back. However before all that Geet needs to know of Maan's growing feelings, i don't think i called it love but defo attraction. Wait did i say he loves her, its rather quick now when i think about it? I really need to read my stories😭

7.few words about our poll
Thank you to everyone who suggested Cursed Love in this category, thank you all for voting and thank you for making me runner up. It means alot, I don't generally win so 2nd place is good enough😆But jokes apart, thank you to you (Sanj), priya, preety and Kalpana for the poll, and ofcourse my readers. Gosh this feels like Baftas or Oscars lol.

Last but not the least, hope you girls smash it. All the very best.


Geetdrashti words

1.how do u feel about this...
Cursed up love one of my favourite ongoing story , so I am very happy about it 😊 very well
deserving ,congrats to the writer.

2.few words about story line
It start with a cruse. Painful heartbreak of both character and finally slowly realising what is love means

3.few words for maan and geet
Won't lie I disliked Maan at first because the way he behaved with Geet but now liking him as he giving her deserve place
love Geet, she endured so much still there is a smile on her face .

4.your fav8 character
Geet was my most favourite character but now liking Maan too and as supporting role I like Vicky a lot , his character is very real to me.

5.fav8 scene
Maan realising his love for Geet even accepting it without any dilemma.

6.do u feel something missing
Nope writer is fabulous , loving it to the core .

7.few words for writer
I love every story of her . She can writes in any genre romance , emotional , comedy , it's very unique talent .

8.it is in category of moist awaiting story was the writer making u wait...
Yes I always wait for this writers story .. She is so busy still writing for us. I can't thank enough for her dedication . Please keep writing .

9.few words for our poll
It's very nice way . By this readers can openly give their love to the beloved writers of GF . You guys doing awesome. 😊


keepdreaming words

1.how do u feel about this...
Won't lie I was confused between Myth - the timeless journey and Cursed up love ( while voting ) and I'm happy one won , other runner up ...totally deserving

2.few words about story line
Story line is based on arranged marriage still so different because of Sophie's narrative style . I can feel every character . Geet married to Maan but he stuck with his drunken GF , but how they fall in love that's the journey. A beautiful tale ...

3.few words for maan and geet
What to say about Maan? I was planning to kill him for his rudeness to her that too first night itself but now he winning my heart by his caring nature. And Geet I can feel her character , her pain , small happiness all touched my heart

4.your fav8 character
It's tough ...vicky and Geet now Maan too taking a sweet spot of my heart

5.fav8 scene
Fav scene hmm of course the first kiss ( dream on ) it's feel so real and the most beautiful realisation of him as he fallen for his wife

6.do u feel something missing
Nothing is missing . She shaped it up so well ..its complete package . Even supporting characters love story is worth reading and interesting

7.few words for writer
What to say about Sophie. I love her writing . Whatever she writes it has different charm . Her EX's lover series my all time fav ( she knows too ) I thought comedy is her strong point but no she can write anything ...and even made me cry with Cursed up love ... just want to say thanks for writing on maaneet even when you are too busy , I love you .

8.it is in category of moist awaiting story was the writer making u wait...
Yes she does make me wait but it's worth waiting ..i never feel disconnected or anything but wait with patience because I know she won't disappoint me or her readers . She has different charm altogether .

9.few words for our poll
About poll hmm you guys are best ... love you all for your effort to make this celebration so grand .. now for me its the most awaiting thread

thanks for all giving your time


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We met because of Her stupidness "



Geet forum geet forum, I just hate this forum , it became, a curse in my life ...my newly wedded wife spend her time talking with some maantein... who the hell they are??? he said greeth his teeth in anger..

His wife spoke tuanting him : lo khud jab Sara time office work kartey Hai... toh apko tab yad nahi ata,... that you are newly wedded huh !!!... while glared him

Husband : don't campair my office work with your stupid maanteins (iski toh mein) ok,... he said in strict tune while warned her with his finger that made her furious...

She held his collar, glared him angerly :: how dare you call my maantein stupid I will show you who is stupid ,,,And then she took one of his file through down in fish tank (me dancing)

Oyee Teri !! yeh kiya Kiya?? husband who shocked his beyond imagination went near to accuriam .

Wife ::just showing you my stupidity said with grinned ,...then she tapped her foot went from his study.

Husband looking his file with longingly !!!!

Husband: romance karney Aya Tha, business loss Karwa liya,...he looks up as praying to God ..,,,kush ab... he scolded himself mentally took out his file which became Titanic in tank (lol you deserve it).

Other side of mansion

Wife who talking with her heart : : dekha kha Tha k is ullu, donkey, monkey say pyar wiyar mat Kar... lakin nahi tujh ko hi bhot Chara Tha pyar ka... she scolded her heart

Her Heart : you are at fault he is your husband , and want to spend time with you but you and your GF world her heart repiled with scarm ,

Girl : side mat ley toh mere heart Hai... ya monkey ka , he also went to office leaving me in this bhotiya mansion ..Kiya Karti time pass k liye Kuch toh karna Tha,... she gives excuse to her heart

Heart :: time pass house hold course say bhi Kiya jaskta Tha... get another mock from heart

Girl irked said :: ha woh tab jab is Wade say Ghar mein koi servent nahi hota, she frustrated said with her hands she showed how big the house

Heart : your so lucky your hubby didn't let you work ,dozens of servent serve you... just one call...her heart again show her positive side
Girl sarcastically said : only dozens of servent are living here with hurt

Heart: you're unthankful person give up on her

Girl :: asi hi hoo mein koi problem she stubbornly said
But before her heart reply , one servent came and ask her for dinner which she said she is coming... he went back

She sating on a dining table waiting for her hubby show up ...

Wife to herself : ab yeh kha rhe gye? she get up to call him. but stop remember their fighting which happened two hours before

Girl in anger : why should I call him? she said to herself ,he called me and my friends stupid na. than why I go to call him ? she said annoyingly again sat down and serve herself while making face but when took morsel near her mouth her inner wifey start to feel concerned and guilty

Girl headstrongly said , mein jao gi nahi par,,,, I will call him by servant ...
Then she call nakul and ask him to call his sir ,...

Nakul : mam sir said befor dinner that , he is doing some important work so not to disturb him... and he order us to serve you dinner . He informed her

Girl lost her appetite after listening nakul

Girl ok you go and have your dinner I will do the rest work,.. she send him back

She stare her food then turned her gazed up to his study with sighed she pused her plate and kept everything back in kitchen went to her room
She sit on counch thinking about her behavior with him

Girl : did I crossed limited in gloom cursing her anger ,she laid down waiting for him to came back to their room and she will say sorry making plans how will she say this thinking this when she went to deep sleep don't know after some hours she opened her eyes , rubbing it with her hand , her gazed stuck on clock which said it's 12 midnight ,then she look around to see him but not finding him there ...she get up to search him
She went his study to see him after seeing the clock , she stood in front of door push it Slowly

He was busy in his work , his one hand working on keyboards and other held Mobile he was call connected with his staff member

He : Maria you just update me with latest quotintion I will type here , no I will type myself ...then paused again said I wouldn't be distributed you this hour if I can go to office

Maria : I will complete it no problem sir she offered to help him

He : no he cut her said it was me who ruined the file, so I will manage you have kids to look after he said in care for the children

Maria ok disheartly agree know her boss nature he will not change his rules for anyone not even for him self too

After getting updates he started his work again geet saw him working, side by side he rubbed his neck to give him self relax she moved back silently

She laying against by the bed post waiting for her hubby so that she say sorry to him and stop this guilty feelings , she took their marriage photo from bed corner carsing them

Girl taking their photo in her hand

Girl : why you love me so much , I didn't deserves it always hurts you na she hugs it remember their first encounter and their marriage

Flash back

2 years before a girl who was scared of her surrounding searching her desired place but she came out alone first time in her life don't know route of her own city where she took birth and brought up all her life

Girl kiya zarorath thi mujko di k tuanting ko seriously leney ki acha khasa Ghar mein bhaiti achi nahi lag Rahi thi Kiya Jo alone Ghar say bhar ageye , mujko toh routes bhi nahi PatA , aur mobile mein balance bhi nahi , Ghar say akar k nikli thi k sab kuch alone Kar saktey Hai an kha GYA GEET HANDA ka confidence hi she scolded herself innocently talking with babaji

Yes she is geet handa daughter of famous industrialist mohinder handa , younger siblings of brij and Pooja handa , she is most pampered child that made her confidence zero she is fully dependent on her parent and sibling no friends no outing she and her books , and her family it's only things in her life

Mr & Mrs handa want her to makes friends live a normal life but geet stubborn nature , won't listen them , Last night her sister hurt her ego that she is khwa (well ) ki madk nothing without them opps geet handa get angry and decided to start her education again which she stop saying she doesn't like study , HANDA thought it was just her words they didn't heed on her words ,but geet this time too serious about it

Back to road

Geet kiya karo Kuch samj nahi araha , maa ko phone karo
She takes out her phone dailed her mother

You don't have sufficient balance to call recharge your account she heard a computer voice

Geet daam last night di ki challenge k chakar mein bro ko batya hi nahi payment k bare mein she cursed her di " , AB Kiya karo , she was not understand what she do right now she was standing on road in sunny day , diserted area no human around at this Time making her more scared she verge of crying any time

Geet mere ko ana hi nahi chye tha agar aye toh car aur driver ko lekey ana Tha , she cried for some time then composed herself , koi ni geet let walk for more maybe you get some one help , she walked slowly making her self confidence

After like ages she saw a man sitting on his bike near out side at one building she failed to notice which building it was , she sighed in relief but fearing to go near to stranger , after making her courage Stronger, she slowly walked to him after caming closed him she meekly asked

Geet in scardly : do you Know where is Delhi University sir she asked politely her voice shaking with fear

Man who's eyes closed suddenly look at her after heard her voice stared her from top to bottom with big brown eyes like she was some elian then said

Stranger : are you mad ???or faking it he asked rudely annoyed by her presence which distrub him

Geet who was scared from his stared , listen him calling her made fumed her

Geet : nahi batna toh mat batao itna rude q horey , jaisey Mein koi address nahi khoenoor maga ho huh she said in agitated her eyes shows how much she tired and worrying

Stranger saw her worried eyes he felt like helping her then with out tuanting her stupidity

he said : Miss" I AM so stupid" when People going out, they carefully look around to their srrounding , from right to left and up down not like you seeing only ground saying this he started his bike went from their leaving angry geet behind who is cursed him

Geet : donkey monkey idiot instead of help he also tuanting me , I am right stranger are bad dont talk with them , and what he said? to look left right up down what,,,, but ,!!!she chewed her words realizations hit her like turnando , where she was standing she look up to see the board where written in bold Delhi University

She was standing outside of her destination and asking someone , it address , how can be it more embarrassing for anyone ? she thought then cursed herself a bit more of her, stupidityy in front of some stranger man

She hit herself on her forehead lightly but, move inside the building with out knowing stranger watching her from distance so if she moved or not he went but don't know what makes him to return he park his bike nearby and watch her moved closely when he saw her entered the building he moved from there

Stranger : she is really pagal strange lady or making me pagal he thought


Handa mansion

Geet going where?? Mrs handa shout in disbelief hearing from her sister in law about geet

Taije ha she went to Delhi University ramu Kaka told me she informed to rano

Rano:: but asey Kasey alone woh chaley gye car bhi sath nahi lay gye Hai ab mujko fikar hori Hai ,

Taije : bus tumhari is nature nai hi usko asey BANA Diya bus apney room books internet yehi uski life Hai , world aur human say koi connection hi nahi , koi Ghar aye jye Kuch Lana Dena nahi , socha tha scold Kar k usko house course Mein busy rakho ge lakin woh Einstein ki maa Sara kam Kar k phir APney room uff asey lagta Hai Ghar mein hokey bhi Ghar mein NAHI taiji said with frowned

Rano :: ohh toh tabhi AP ney usko house course Karwai hehehe she laughed

Taije has mat Einstein ki maa k liye uska fav Kuch banatey Hai , AJ bechari bhut thak k aye he she lovely said

Rano asey usko dantey ho jab pass nahi Hoti toh care bhi AP zayada kartey ho

Taije ha toh bachi Hai , give reply with straight face don't want to get teased

Rano : acha Abhi koi mujko lecture dera tha with chukkled she asked

Taije acha chal bus ab mujko thoda kam karney de she said sternly save herself from rano teasing

Rano ; ok ok but let me call he papa too she took her phone dailed his number

Handa office

Mohinder get to know about his beloved daughter daring stant

He ended up call and went to brij's cabin where both working
He opened his cabin door went In side

Mohinder shout at Pooja why the hell you provoke her last night

Pooja brij both get sturted with sudden shout clueless saw their father

Pooja provoked whom dad brij ask seeing their father scolded Pooja

Mohinder geet he said with worries

Brij what dad what about princess what happened he asked getting impatient

Mohinder asked her he pointed out to Pooja glared her

Pooja dad I am with Bhai then how can I do something with you Einstein daughter she said sarcastic

Brij too noded in yes

Mohinder sighed with Pooja ignorance to geet

Mohinder : last night you are the one Pooja who said her about her life and her way of dealing with other stranger people she took all your words on heart now she went Alone to du do you Know he emphasize alone to them he explained to them

Brij ohh God let me call bgs , they will find her , he hurried said worried about geet taking out his phone start to dailed but Pooja held his hand to stop ,, make him and mohinder stunned by her act

Pooja let her do this alone dad , let her face her fear you think am her enemy but truth is I too want her to came out from her shell dad trust me we all their for her not let her anything but don't stop her doing things which she was doing by own , she explained them with determined

Brij tensely said but she didn't face outer world what if she lost in this city he asked with botherly concerned mohinder too noded

Pooja don't worries dad and bro about it she said making them relax then she took her phone open GPS tracking in her phone than doing something she opened some apps just few seconds she traces geet location ( ok writer liberty) while both father son looking at her like confusing

Pooja , bingo !! She said looking at her phone with grinned then said to them with enthusiasm look dad your Einstein daughter reached DU savely she show them geet location in her phone

But mohinder and brij won't convenience with this so brij msg his men's to go check geet

Pooja roll her eyes over possessive brother , some where she had tiny jealousy towards geet seeing everyone in home treating her like she is glass doll that's why Pooja and geet have always some argument and rifted between them

After two hours

Here geet get admission in DU principal really impressed by her knowledge first they are dispoint know about her delay in Education , which she managed saying she will work harder if they give her chance , after settling everything she moved back to out side , again talking to herself

Geet human being say face to face talking karna itna bhi hard nahi geet toh avaiye dar Rahi tho she came out from building , realized she out from building now her fear came again , brij men see her but they were instructed by Pooja not to help her , only if she is trouble

Geet to God : babaji APNI bachi par daya karo , Ghar Janey ka Rasta bata do , she prayed in her heart , than she look here there

Geet : mein left say aye thi ya right say she silently see here there to get some clue but no use , main while some one stood beside her

Stranger : Abbi tak DU phochi nahi he said in calm

Geet sturted with voice move two step away from him

Geet:: Dara Diya mujko asey koi KARTA Hai Kiya she shout gets scard from his sudden voice

Stranger building k pass stand Kar k bhi koi uska adress nahi pochata he tuant

Geet embarrassed but strike back ,: Oye mister zayada free honey k zarorath nahi ,

Stranger : he gave her look like who wants to be free with you stupid in grinning making geet more angrier :

Stranger said ::: by the way your welcome miss confused soul he said naughty

Geet in anger why you saying welcome yet confusedly asked

Stranger: well when if someone helps a girl then girl should say thank you, then it's answer is "your welcome" so I say he replies innocent yet messchively

Geet why I said thank you to you ??you didn't help me you tuanting me so no thank you for you said firmly

Stranger ohh I am so hurt he act like he was hurt putting his hands on Heart

Geet : AP ko koi kam NAHI kiyA she said while moving her head left right for help

Stranger sighed and held her hand and drag her with him to left side making her spooked with his action

Geet : what are you doing? leave me!! where you taking me ?? Fearing so much with his action she asked trembling

He doesn't say anything but drag her with him Both stopped or say he stop after walking or dragging her few meters both came near the texi stand

Stranger : now you will get taxi here , ok go he said point towards vehicle
Geet : stare him astonishly

He waved his hand in front of her face brought her back from her dream Land

Stranger : Sara din yehi standing rahna Hai go he asked

Geet huh without saying anything she moved her legs to texi stand

Stranger : unthankful lady, I ever met he trun to go but stopping himself stay and again saw her ,she was moving like a tortise , he shocking his head then look her

Geet :: don't know what will she say to taxi men she didn't even know her address properly only she knew the area where her home nor she had money with her , ( you will came to know just wait lillte ;) )

Stranger sighed and come close to her taping her shoulder

Geet look him questing like what

Stranger : are seriously in this world or you are from somewhere outer world he tuant in anger seeing her numb state

Geet eyes welled up by his words first she was in deverstic state of mind and her hunger making it worse ,

Geet start badly sobing making her stranger worried for her,

Stranger hey stop don't cry ok I'm sorry I didn't mean to hurt you , what just happened tell me please I am sure it will solve your matter he wondered his own words did he just say sorry and please to a complete stranger girl no stupid girl he thought

Geet no I will not say you also make fun of me said in whining like baby

Stranger no I will not Dekho I didn't said to hurt you , you're the one doing stupid mere Matlab Hai k you were standing there asking about address so it's looked so weird and after that you were checking like you came new world , I was just helping you out drag you here so you get texi but here too you are standing like log won't moving he said giving her explanation thinking he did something wrong to Her try to be normal

Geet whining like kids rub her tears with her hand , he offered her his hanky but geet was angry so how can she take his hanky , she trun giving him back

Stranger cursing his luck for stucking with kid but he doesn't want leave her alone , reason himself don't know

Stranger : ok at least tell me your problem did I brought you wrong side but I saw you caming from this direction so thought you wanted to came , don't worries you don't want to travel on taxi here a little bit walk you reached at bus stop where you get bus

Geet didn't say anything making him losing his cool but he doesn't want to shout so he asked again

Stranger : look it's not safe for you to stand here alone , let me help you

Geet scared think about his word which are true but she was scared of him too

GEET in mind Kiya karo , tell him or not what if he get angry , taunt you like di did she was in delima tell him or not then her mind crossed check the negatives side of her surrounding like she alone what if he too left blah blah , , then she side her scared

Decided to told him

Geet said slowly : I don't know the address of my home correctly , I don't have money too she closed her eyes

Stranger. What !!!! He just looked at the girl whom he thinks stupid but she is beyond ,

Stranger are you coming from mental asylum or

Geet in mind he too tuant you

Stranger : am talking to you , he fuming this mad girl surly came from MA , he cursing himself to stay with her and wasted his time

Geet : look don't shout ok

Stranger wow you came from your home and don't knew the address , and you don't have money too dimag bhi Kiya Ghar par chor k aye ho. He shout at her

Geet I know you too will tuant me like di , why I told you anything , she whined

Stranger : stop crying or else he said in anger making her scared

Geet : geet shut her cry glup her lumps sobing slowly her whole face truned red with crying continuley looking him afraid

Stranger : he sighed big and said look I can't leave you alone in here so do you have mobile at least ? He asked control his anger

Geet node mikely

Stranger ok then call your family simple he said giving idea became happy like he conquer something big

Geet not her dupatta nervously looking here there

Stranger : now what call na

Geet : ek choti si problem Hai she said sheeply

Stranger think not again asked what problem

Geet I don't have charged too , said pouting

Stranger made fist hit himself on his temple

Geet hurdly said is not my fault I went to veerje for recharge but before I said di start her Gyan and made my mood worst then I didn't said to him and about money I give to Uncle whom I met this morning when I came here poor he showed me gun asked me to give money so I gave him he didn't took my phone how kind he was nahi she said innocently

Stranger gamping at her like she was some elian , wow master piece Hai , ab mein usko bhadur bolo ya pagal is ki jaga koi aur Hoti an tak toh hospital bed par Hoti , aur yeh Bina money k yeha tak agaye daring toh Hai yeh he thinks

Geet pook his shoulder by her finger lightly he came back from thinking mode

Stranger : toh ab Kiya karna Hai , tum yeha Ghar bana k rahney wali toh nahi ho

Geet : tana marna band karo jisko Dekho tana partey rehtey Hai geet tum ghar k andar rahti ho ,bhar Jaya karo ab bhar agye ho toh bhi she said irritating all

Stranger : Ghar say bhar nikalna aur tum jasi stupidity karna bhut farq Hai and by the way take this( he took out his wallet and give her money) take this and go to your house

Geet sturted with this no no she shoved his money back to him said no I can't take this please , I am not some she stopped her look him helplessly ,herself respect she didn't know what to do never in her life she took money from anyonenot even mohinder and brij they always fulfill her need and wishes before she demanded and her family give her everything before she asked only

Stranger why can't you ? (But he stop seeing her face ) ok don't let do one thing you go from taxi and give money after reaching your home ok he gave her advised

Geet node but taxi driver ko Kiya bolna hota Hai ? She innocently asked this make him not angry but he adore her innocent face

Stranger thought in this world can someone be this innocent Than smile at her now he held her hand , unknowingly to them pulled out his phone from his pocket call xyz taxi company which actually his friend company ask to send taxi soon

Geet look him strangley , heard him talking on phone ,she came to know that he Hired taxi for her feeling really down again Pooja words ringing in her mind she was nothing without any one support , geet you don't know how to do things alone Pooja di right you are useless only live in book world life don't know anything practically she thought and her feel more down

Stranger after completing his call " only fifteen minutes they sent their taxi he said normally make her relax

Stanger saw her quiet then ask so new in Delhi in calm tune for start to conversation with her so they killed their time

Geet nahi in sadness lost in her guilt

Stranger ok first time caming out alone he again asked this time with very friendly

Geet hmm she nodded

Stranger what happened you became quiet suddenly he asked directly

Geet you thinking an fool na, who didn't know anything about this city came out alone , my di also said same I am dependable freek who always look for some one who can helped me , I am demsil destries always land in trouble or making other life hell i don't have any talent nor I am perfect like her she asked hurtly more over today failure make it worse , sobing slowly she wiped her tear from her hand

Stranger : he too wants to say same but seeing her hurt eyes and her words dont know it's hurt him he looked at her eyes said : I thought something else about you ( geet look him he continues) how daring this girl who face dacoity but instead of crying and return to home , she chose to her task and reached her destination for which she came out from her home , his words making her heart warm feeling he looks at her face she too see him both eyes met with each other , geet saw honest in his eyes
stranger said :: look geet no one perfect in their lives everyone has some fault in them , har insan k decision perfect ho yeh zarori nahi , bus zarorath Hai toh apney imperfect decision ko perfect baney k , rahi bath tumhari di k toh she will soon understand you are imperfectly perfect in your own way said giving her smile encourage her

She lost in his words both came out in lost heard horn sound

Taxi arrive he went to the driver said him something while geet stand there

Geet asked walk towards taxi why you call taxi when there are many taxies in confusing

Stranger geet first I can't risk a girl safety you don't know proper address of your. Home and besides This taxi have gprs and it can connect to your phone as well as mine and you just say him about area name ok he replied to her questions while she touched by his gentleman but she still scard , Stranger held her hand rest his hand on her giving her assurence that don't scare I am in touch with you

she sat inside taxi look him thankfully ,

Taxi driver ok gudiye toh chinTa na Kari yeh khurana sab nai sab samjha Diya mano bus toh das mano area yeh lucky Singh Delhi k chapey chapey k PatA Hai taxi driver sweet sardar said her making her relax

Geet woh defence colony mein she meekly said tell him name of her colony

Lucky ohh gi tusi waha rehndey ho koi gal na woh toh half hour mein phoch jao gey he said cutting geet

Geet delighted after listening him , thanking the stranger again in her heart

Geet kitna ajeeb Banda Tha madad bhi k aur gussa she said in mind then she remembers that didn't ask his name

ohh no no Babaji she yelled

Lucky ohh Kiya Howa madam jee he asked heard her shout

Geet mein bhool gye she said innocently she hit her hand on her temple

Lucky worriedly ask kiya !!!! bhool gye Ghar k address toh nahi bholi na

Geet :: Nahi address toh PatA Hai but name pochna bhool gye she replied with pout cursing herself for her foolish

Lucky ohh g koi gal nahi Abhi bata deta Hoon my self lucky from hoshiyarpour he said funnily

Geet AP k nahi us admi ka she said in irritating by him

Lucky ohh Kon say admi ka he asked confused seeing her

Geet woh Jo mere sath Thai Jo taxi order ki woh she said knoting her dupputta in her hand

Lucky ohh toh AP khurana geee k bath Kar rahai ho AP bhi na Kamal ho madam jee itni dair say unkey sath Thai naam tak NAHI pocha he said with chukkled making fun of her that made her fumed

Geet ho jata Hai ab ap gadi chalye accident hojai ga said firmly

Lucky ok ok he rolled his eyes concentrate on road

Geet khurana k agey Kiya hoga cholo chadoo meno ki jaldi say Ghar phoch jao bus she said to herself.


Otherside the place where she left her Stranger

Stranger pagal ladki ab kabhi mujhsey mat takrana uff my head paining
Some one called him from behind

Maan what are you doing here ??

He looked behind saw his dadi caming to him

Maan dadi AP yeha q agye chaley bhut dhop hi yeh he said with concerned

Dadi arey AP yeh Kiya Kar rahai Hai AP toh humare bhar intezar karney Waley Thai Uni k she asked

Maan woh dadi he doesn't know what to say but luckily

Dadi cut him said rehna dey maan AP Kiya. Kartey Hai AP hi Janey chaley Ghar chaltey Hai ab phir AP khaye gye humari wajha say AP ki meeting miss hogye she tuant him

Maan keep mum and follow dadi

(Yes the stranger none other than MSK , who came to this area for some meeting but Dadi call him asked him to pickup her too so he came back to receive her where he saw geet standing after two hours still he parked his car went to her side rest you all know )

Both settled down in car maan all the ride he was looking at his phone checking taxi where it goes , making Dadi suspicious about his act but she let it go thinking he might check his mails

A sudden lines of worries appears on his forehead watching taxi stopped
Maan yeh taxi stopped hogyi q he thought With anxiety about geet safety
Let me check in GPRS where it stop

He checked the destination through internet defence colony he read xyz stop near Abc place he read then called the driver

Few minutes before in taxi

Geet stopped taxi at xyz stop near Abc place

Lucky ( driver) madam j yeh q rukwa di he asked in confusing

Geet bus bhaiya ji yeh rokna mein mere Ghar yehi pass mein hai she replied politely

Lucky ok jee he said didn't ask more

Geet bhaiya ji AP ruku mein Abhi money ley Kar aai mere pass cash nahi hai she said didn't told him about not having a penny think may he get angry scolded her for doing froud with him she instantly came out from taxi to get money but stopped by lucky voice

Lucky arey madam jee Meri bath toh suno he came forward stand infornt of her and spoke payment ton hogya hai woh online billing hai humari company walo k ( don't know writer liberty) khurana jee nai pehley hi kardiya he replies making geet first confused then angry on maan

Geet why he paid bills please tell me how much it I will pay you again and cancel his payment she demanded strickly

Lucky who get scard seeing geet avatar said madaam jee yeh sab toh company waley Janey hum toh bus labour hai acha hum chahtey hai ok he run to save himself

But geet stop him rukye yeh toh bataye k amount kitna tha she asked calmly understand that no use for conflicts

Lucky jee 400 RS only with tax

Geet ok

Than she move from there lucky to drive back but his phone ring he picked up

Manager of company where you dropped the girl he asked seriously scarring poor soul who was scard from geet now him

Lucky in mind ohh babaji aj kis k face dekha Tha subha Jo scolded mil rahi hai he pray

Other side hello!!! are you there idiot stupid duffer repiled first he furious ask

Lucky sirjee mein usko wahi chor k Aya jha unka ghar tha he replies slowly don't understand why he get call from company headquarter

Manager are you sure he asked with doubt

Lucky sunny paji ki kasam sirjee mein usko wahi dropped Kiya jha woh ladki mujko bola

Manager ok he cut the call lucky sighed in relief babaji yeh ladki tufan mail thi Oye tujko kitni bar bola customer k sath Bak Bak math Kiya Kar zaror Teri Complain karey hogi he cursing himself for landed in this

Manager called to maan inform him who was waiting impatiently

Maan ok but remember if I get complain about her being trouble than remember my name msk he cut the call Making manager life on stake

Here geet enter her house greetings all workers from watchman to Gardner step inside

Rano seeing her enter she delighted to see her back .

Rano spoke sternly : agai kha gye thi Bina Kisi ko bataye... she show as she doesn't know about her going DU

Geet bite her tongue woh MAA mein she stammer to answer

Taiji came out from kitchen seeing geet return she smiled

Taiji agye tum she said with smile

Geet in mind lo ek aur agye datney, MAA Kiya Kam thi she made faces ready to hear another scolding session from taiji

Rano ab boley gi bhi Ya Teri zaban par lock lag gya she shout at her make taiji and geet look at her one looks her with confusedly and other with fear


Taiji q danth rahi hoo rano Abhi toh aye hai bachi aur tum shoro hogye she said politely taking geet side made geet to look at her with astonishingly

Geet rub her ears thinking she heard wrong taiji didn't scolded her and cheery on cake she favor her she pinched herself to confirm. ouch,,,, she winches

Rano gussa na hoo toh aarti utaro iski she asked saracsticaly glared geet who gave her innocent look of both

Taiji rano she dragged her name

Rano jiji AP iska favor mat Karo yeh ladki Bina batey chaley gye bhala koi responsibility hai ya nahi , she said in riled up from morning after knowing that geet not at home her worries came as frustrations taiji understand it's her motherly concerned

Geet who was happy a while becames ashmed to make them worried for her she cursed her ego who didn't let her told them her going out , in morning,

Geet hold her ears said sorry maa with moist eyes

Rano who hold her emotion by anger .her eyes too get teary , geet hugs said sorry as much as she

Taiji ohh ,,! bus bhi Karo tum dono Kiya emotional attayachar Kar rahai hoo ..she said wiped her tear make them feel better

Both parted geet give her sides hugs to rano kiss her get wacked from rano lightly

Rano chal ja fresh hokar AA she ordered and held her ears aainda asa Kiya na toh dekhna she warned her

Ahhh!!! maa acha sorry geet said removed her ears from her hold run to save herself

Taiji bhag mat ldki she scolded from behind which she ignores

Taiji shooked her head kab sudharey GI yeh ladki tufani express

Rano kabhi nahi she said both laugh

Taiji chal Enstain daughter agye ab toh lunch Kar ley she said playfully
Rano hmmm

At night

When mohinder brij and Pooja came , geet happily announced her decision and boasting about herself how she went alone without any one help she takes admission and blah blah indirectly mocking Pooja in her childish way , every one understand her but Pooja signal them don't stop her let her do ,

Pooja are you sure geet , you went alon...,, no one help you ... She asked teasenly pretend not believing her story making geet look at other grumblingly

Geet q apko dout hai she irritating repiled

Pooja bus thoda sa ...woh Kiya hai na khowa ki mandak went alone digest nahi hora she , mishevely said while grinning at her red face she was enjoying this

Geet get irated by Pooja remark di AP nai phir say ...!!!!

Rano interrupted before it's start third world war ok now go back to your rooms it's late tomorrow you both has work so move she said in strict tune both sister relc**tly quiet,... wish good night walking out but not before glaring each other

Here maan in his room with files and laptop but he was not working but thinking about today event or say geet first time msk get distracted from his office work ,

Maan thek say Ghar pochi hogi bhi nahi ... he thought with concerned pagal asey akailey hi chali aye... Than his mind kicked him what he was thinking he shuts all his thoughts and forced his mind to concentrate



Days went well geet too adjusted with studies to her surprised she made new friends pinky and Meera and at home every one delighted seeing her going out , and spending time outside her room with others it's not meant she stopped her love for books, and her fear from stranger still there somewhere

meanwhile maan who some time see her in his dream some time daydreaming about her , Dadi get seeing him smiling in this one year , he changed didn't shout at anyone , she got suspicious about his sudden change behavior she asked her detective aka adi if any new girl appointed at KC think as serial lover lol but to her disappointed get repiled no

Dadi : are you sure adi AP sach bol rahey hai dadi frownly asked

Adi : hehehe , Dadi why I tell you lie , it's true no girl appointed for maan sir sect Mrs Maria still Mk sect and she is 49 years old very actively working with Maan sir

Dadi frustrated by his repiled ok stop her praising , then ask there any girl who get special treatment from maan she asked change her questions

Adi : Hehehe Dadi special treatment toh kc mein mujko nahi milti AP kisi ladki k bath. Kar rahi hai he joked

Dadi rolled her eyes ok with disappointed

Adi ha ek ladki hai Jo zabardasti advantage leti hai he replies after thinking a while

Dadi immeditly ask Kon ,,, excitedly
Adi : Sasha he said with making face

Dadi kiya she shout no ways

Adi cut called dadi nutanki he said start to work again

Other side dadi recover from shock no. no hum us shasha ki bachi khurana bhau kabhi nahi she imagine her with maan , and made horrible faces

Dadi determined agar maan k life mein koi aye ga toh hum usko accept Kar ley lakin shasha no ways ... Is say pehley humra nightmare Sacha ho hum hi inkey liye koi ladki dekh ley gey aj rath party mein she thought

Mean while at handa

Mom Kiya Mera Jana zarori hai?.. geet ask rano who was cooking

Rano geet ab Tere papa nai kha hai pura Ghar , she replied curtly irritated by geet constant question

Geet Mama mere test hai she said making excuse

Taiji who came said , kal exam kahtam hoi hai aur ab test huh she suspicious asked while geet bite her tongue forgetting she was on holidays after her exam

Rano look her sternly geet made faces

Rano so final decision sab ja rahey hai she order geet stamped her foot went from there both shook their head

Geet in her room cursing her luck Kiya babaji koi idea Doo na party say bachney ka , she looks up for help but didn't get any and finally she reluctantly agreed to came along with family

At party

All busy in meeting everyone here geet find some corner and sat there with her phone , searching online story to read (just like me)when didn't get any she started to look here there to entertain herself meanwhile some boys came to talk but her glared rudely answer make them to run away

Geet kiya boring party hai she made faces all gossiper at one roof , showing off their dressed and makeup she thought when a manly voice came behind her

Lost again ?? Maan said teasing her

Geet, Tum!!...she yelled seeing him there

Nahi mere bhot hai miss handa he sarcastically repiled

AP kabhi seedha jawab nahi dey saktey geet irritated asked

No he curtly repiled with smile

Geet glared him asked what you want

Maan nothing by the way why you stop taxi abc road that day , you know how much I worried he angrily scolded her remember

Geet listen his word stunned by his care giving innocent look which melt his heart

Maan Don't give me these look answer he sternly asked

Geet woh mein nahi chahti thi k taxi driver Mera Ghar dekhey she replied like a student who gives excuse to teacher after doing mishevies

Maan what but q he asked confusingly

Geet arey AP woh ### show nahi dekha Kasey taxi waley Ghar dekh Kar gundo ko Bata detey hai she asked give him a Gyan which she get from a fictional show

Maan gap at her you are actually stupid he frustrated said making her mad at him

Geet AP nai phir mujko stupid kha she frowned

Maan nahi Enstain bola he tuant

Geet AP na DD ho in shot dust danav she said giving him name

Unknown to them peoples start to stare them MSK with girl interesting , our Dadi too saw them talking with each other , but other people can't see the sparkling eyes and smile of MSK which Dadi noticed

Dadi imagine them as couple doing bhagra inside her heart humai humari bahu mil gye she thought

Some ladies who stand with handa's women jealous from geet they asked tuanting at them

Rano tumhari party mein ati nahi aur aye toh Dekho Kasey MSK say bath karna lagi , a lady asked who was eyeing on maan want to fixed her daughter with maan

Rano woh actually she is tongue tight how to answer her she herself stunned how geet know Msk

Tayji who get furious by lady comment replied so party mein kisi say bathey karney jurm hai she asked strickly

Her daughter : aunty bathey karna aur MSK say bathey karney mein farq hai

Pooja q msk k elian hai please get a life you... but she cut by Rano
Rano Pooja ...

Dadi came to them listen those ladies tuant she get pissed off by their comment meanwhile she get her desired information about handa's

Dadi arey AP log yeh hai , hum logo ko dhond rehey Thai she said act like knowing them ,where handa's women seeing each other confused

Lady arey savitri jee AP Kasey hai she asked in fake sugar coated smile

Dadi with royal attitude say hello then to rano Kasey hai ap bete , Ghar ana hi chor Diya AP logo nai she asked in front of those bitching ladies who are gossip about maaneet

Rano jee woh AP before she asked one lady ask from Dadi

Lady savitri jee AP janti hai she asked astonished

Dadi ha jantey hai humari maan ki saas Jo hai she said grinning at them giving heart attack to all

All saaas ??!

Dadi in fake serious why all you give me that looks Kiya Spanish bol rahi Hoon

Lady nahi nahi woh ohh acha toh Pooja aur maan ki bath Kar rahey thi AP

Dadi nahi hum toh maan geet k bath Kar rahey hai woh dekhy waha par dono kitney payare lag rahey hai sath mein she pointed at maaneet all look at them again who still talking with each other for them happily but actually not

Hearing dadi about maaneet all cursing their badluck lossing msk rishta and jealous from geet for getting it

In all this Rano , taiji and Pooja was too shocked to react first they get shock by maaneet then Dadi make them bewildered by her repiled to those women

Dadi run her hand in front of rano eyes bring her out from shocked

Dadi hum jante hai hum nai istarha say declared kardiya , par in woman ko chup karwanwy k liye zarori tha ,.

Rano jee mein samaj Sakti Hoon she understands

But taiji and Pooja not they are furious how can someone came and declared their geet as her bahu

Pooja , how can you just say this to all she asked in low yet angry tune knowing people around them it became scene here

Rano glared her to speak with Dadi like this

Dadi politely say hum AP k family ko dinner par invite kartey hai waha par zayada ache say bath Kar saktey hai , she gives rano her card

Rano accept half heartly because of environment and situation

Dadi please aye ga , sab geet ko bhi ley Kar aye ga humai woh bhot passand hai apney maan k liy she said hopefully make them agreed to came

Here maaneet still argue with each other

Miss handa ab toh apney stupid stunt nahi karti na he joked remember her act last year

Geet too remind her previous act where she ask him DU address standing in front of the building

Miss lost kha kho gye maan ask seeing her lost

Huh !!! Khai nahi aur AP k pass koi kam nahi Hai Jo agaye Mera sir khaney she frustrated asked

Woh kiya hai mujhe bhook lagi hai, dinner Abhi start nahi Howa toh socha tumari sir kha loon tasty toh hoga he said with innocent face Grinning at her red face

Geet grr!!! AP say bath hi nahi karni thi she stamp her feet went from there leaving a laughing maan behind

He shook his head , to see her , he didn't want to came here but Dadi emotionally black mail him to came with her at party , he was not used to attend parties only business parties he attended only for clients seck he was cursing his luck to get in Dadi blackmail , seeing him all girls came to him he hated it so much their plastic faces with tons of makeup , to save himself he went to meet some office client or business man he was talking with one of his client when his eyes caught a sight of her sitting at far corner of party with baby irritated face first he thought it's his imagination but when he saw boys went to her ask for dance , he understands she is there with blood and flesh , didn't like those boys approaching to her , but he laughed how she made them run away from her then he excuse from his clent went close to her


Too be continued

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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one more beautiful story adding now
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first read na 😉





It was night time and a man was standing on balcony watching the moon. His eyes held deep sorrow as he tried to control his tears,'' Tell me how I can live without you, tell me how I can smile, tell me how will I find the energy to get up each morning? ' Few tears escaped his iron control as he lowered his eyes,'' You betrayed me, why? Why?'' Finally, he broke down completely and sank to floor crying,'' I loved you so much.''

Suddenly, the silence was broken as people broke into applause, 'beautifully done Maan.''

Maan singh khaurana raised his head and slowly got to his feet, the expressions turning blank. His makeup man ran to him and handed him a tissue paper. He arrogantly took it and cleaned the tears.

The director came over and clapped him on shoulder,'' Simply wonderful. You manage to do this song in a single shot. Now, we can all go home early.''

Maan smiled lightly. Acting was his passion and it had been since he was a little kid. In a family where everyone was doctor, his career choice had raised eyebrows but his success had quietened every tongue.

As he walked toward his changing room, people tapped him on shoulder, he nodded politely at all of them accepting their compliments. He was not arrogant but he was proud of his work. He had worked hard to reach this level. From school skits to participating in stage shows he had done everything. Each medium had its own demand and was different but it provided valuable experience.

He entered his room and shut the door behind him, his makeup man knew that he liked to take off his makeup himself at the end of the day. He went through his routine, the muscles bulging as he took off his shirt. His six pack were visible in the mirror. He worked out each morning, ate a healthy diet to maintain his body shape.

He wore a simple tee shirt and sat in front of the mirror on stool and started to take off his makeup. His phone screen lit up as he was finishing. He picked up the phone, it was his manager. He had selected the choreographer for the reality dance show in which he will be participating. He read the name 'Geet haunda.'' He hadn't heard about her before but his manager knew his job. He replied okay and put the phone back on the dresser. His manager texted again, the choreographer was with him at this moment and she wanted to meet him today as she was going on a trip for a week.

Maan got up and grabbed his jacket and bag. He was tired after a full day of shooting but he had learned early in life that he needed to make time for things which mattered. He wanted to win this show and a good relationship with his choreographer and dance partner will help him a long way in achieving the goal.

As he came out his bodyguards stepped behind him. He walked without paying any attention to anything. He went outside toward his car. The driver was already waiting for him probably alerted by the departing crew which indicated that the shoot had finished. He handed his bag to one of the bodyguards and got into the car. He closed his eyes and rested his head against the seat. He mentally reviewed his workload. He was doing this serial since last two years, along with he was brand ambassador of a clothing line, and he did web series, worked in theatre every other month. He had done three art movies as well in these past five years. His movies were not commercially hit but they provided him exposure to a different environment. Now, he had another offer under his belt, the script was intriguing and it would be a commercial movie. His drama was gearing toward a leap at the same time. So, he would have to leave the drama. Although, the production house had already offered him a new role in a new series which will be starting next year.

So, he would be doing this reality show, then the movie and then start shooting for drama. He liked it.

There was a sound of ping against the car window. He opened his eyes and saw the falling rain. The car was stopped too. He looked at the bodyguard,'' Sir, it's a traffic jam.'' He closed his eyes in exasperation. This is one the third one this week. Last week, he had reached home in morning. At today, he needed to go meet his manager. He looked at time and stared outside of the window. If he walked, he will be at his manager's place in fifteen minutes but if he waited for traffic to move then at least one hour.

He looked at his bodyguard,'' Bring the car to Mohit's place.'' He was opening the car door before his bodyguards could protest. Who was going to recognise him in this rain at night?

He walked quickly through the sea of cars toward the pavement. The rain pelting his body but the jacket offered a shield. He didn't care, the cold water actually felt refreshing. For a moment, he stood under the street light as he raised his face to the pouring rain, a smile gracing his lips.

Suddenly there was a sound and then a curse. He turned to find a delicate girl lying at his feet like a pagan offering. He stared down at her as amusement lit his eyes. The girl watched him shocked. He offered his hand. The girl stared at him and then his hand. Then, she raised her hand and grabbed his hand. The shock of electricity was so strong that it vibrated through his bones. He let go of her hand and she fell back again. Her mouth opened in surprise.

He took a step back involuntarily, the urge to pick her up and held in his arms and ravish her was so strong that he did not know what to do. He just took another step back.

The girl looked away from him and tried to get up, her white shirt was pasted to her body and under the street light bared her body completely to him. He gulped and then his inner gentleman kicked him in mind and he took off his jacket and moved forward and offered to her.

She took the jacket and wore it as she had realised the state of her own clothes,'' Thank you.''

But he was already turning and running away from her toward his manager's house. He felt scared of his own emotional intensity.

...

Geet watched the man running away and shouted to catch his attention again but he was already gone. She touched his jacket and stood there for a long time. The incoming call on her phone managed to get her out of her state of shock.

She picked up the call and reality hit her. She was supposed to be meeting a client. With hurried feet, she left toward the address. She went into the apartment building and took the life to the apartment. Normally, it would be risky to go meet a client at this time but the manager happened to be her brother in law. So, she was relaxed.

She knocked on the door and her sister opened the door,'' Geet where were you? I was so worried.''

Geet smiled ruefully at her sister,'' long story but in few words, rain and traffic jam.''

Her sister nodded,'' I know its really bad out there. Maan just came in before you and he was saying the same thing. He went to change clothes. You go fresh up too. Take my any dress from my wardrobe.''

Geet nodded and went toward her sister's room. They both were same size, and were used to sharing each other's clothes their whole life.

She opened the door and walked and stopped dead. The stranger was standing in the middle of room just wearing a jeans and he was in the process of picking up his shirt.

Those dark eyes fixed on her.

Geet looked down away from the sudden intensity in those eyes. Then, she spoke guessing that he was Maan,''Sorry. I thought Manish would have taken you to the guest room.''

She left the room and closed the door behind her. Then, she leaned against it feeling the burn of his gaze,'' wow'' she muttered to herself as she tried to wet her suddenly dry throat. She had never felt such intense chemistry with a man before in her life.

The door suddenly opened and caused her to tumble back into his arms. She stared at his eyes as he held her in his arms. His eyes moved from her brown ones down her nose onto her pink lips. She had the urge to wet them suddenly. Her tongue came out and moistened her lips. He slowly helped her stand up and then, stepped back and lowered his gaze.

Then, he looked up at her again,''geet?''

She nodded.

He spoke again,'' You needed something form the room? Please, go ahead. I am done.''

His civilised words contrasted with his uncivilised stare. Her own eyes were behaving in an undisciplined manner too.

He walked back into the room, still staring at her as she stepped forward and then, he walked past her and toward the door. Then, he paused and turned back his face back toward her,'' I am waiting.'' He paused as he looked at her lips, then said,'' For you.'' Then, he was quiet again for a little bit as he stared into her eyes again, 'outside.''

She nodded, not trusting her voice. Her heart was dancing on gangam style in her chest. She watched him with big eyes as she waited for him to close the door and leave. He stood there staring at her.

Finally, she said,'' I need to change, can you please close the door behind you.''

He nodded and then, closed the door.

...

After changing clothes, geet walked out on tentative feet. She could hear voices from sitting room. She went toward it and entered. He was sitting on a sofa while her brother in law was sitting with her sister on other sofa.

He was the first one to notice her. He stood up from sofa as she walked into the room. She was holding his jacket in a bag in her hand. She walked over to him and gave it to him,'' Thank you.''

Her sister and brother in law looked at both of them.

Maan took the bag from her hand, and in the process, his hand lightly touched her hand. Gete held her breath at the little spark of awareness it created. There eyes held each other for a moment, then geet looked away and walked back toward her sister and sat down on empty chair next to them.

Her sister left to get them coffee.

They spoke about the show, the contract, his preferences and his schedule. She listened and contributed to the conversation as needed. Her sister had come back and handed everyone coffee. When finally everything official was finished. There was a silence in room.

The sound of rain against the glass window could be clearly heard.

Manish,''Its raining badly outside and the traffic is still jammed. You two should spend the night here.''

Both maan and geet looked at each other and then, looked away as they each accepted the offer being made.

Geet's sister and brother in law seemed to understand the undercurrent tension between them. They started to talk about general things giving both of them an opportunity to talk and open up. They discussed everything from the weather to the politics. Slowly geet and maan started to relax. Their eyes now meeting each other more often but not looking away.

Geet's sister first got up as she left to sleep and soon her brother in law left too but maan and geet were comfortable on their own. Maan started to tell her about his passion for acting, how it started and how much important it was to him. She in turn told him about her love for dance especially classically dance.

They were talking and talking, soon sharing even the things which no one had told anyone else, baring their souls to each other. At the one point in night, they felt hungry and raided the kitchen where they made sandwiches and then cleaned up together. It felt nice.

They walked back to the sitting room, the sound of rain was there back drop. Maan went over to the window and looked outside. It was pouring hard. He had a sudden image of him dancing in the rain with geet. He looked at her and asked her. he wouldn't have if he hadn't been feeling so relaxed with her.

Geet looked out in the rain and then, extended her hand,'' why?.''

Maan accepted her hand as he moved toward the door which lead to the balcony,'' To celebrate our first...Our first meeting, our first rain, our first dinner and our first partnership.''

They stood under the rain and then Maan lightly pushed her away and then pulled her in his arm as they had their first waltz without any other music then the sound of their breathing and rain.

They moved in harmony as they celebrated their first meeting. It was like they had practised their moves their whole lives. As they danced, they flowed with each other making it a dance of two souls rather than bodies.

When they finished they were breathing heavily but laughing. She asked him,'' what next?''

He looked at her and then, decision made he bent down to his knees and said,'' How about making this first last forever? Will you marry me?''

She looked down at him and knew that she had found the person who matched her soul and replied, 'Yes.''

...

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