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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lights, Camera, Action

SCENE 1:-

A hall is beautifully decorated with curtain & flowers & dim lights.. A man in black 3 piece suit is seen standing in the middle of the hall with a mask on his handsome face.. Seems like he is waiting for someone.. soft music is playing in the back ground.. A girl in a beautiful red gown is shown coming down the stairs slowly.. She reaches the man & keeps her hand on his awaiting ones... They start dancing slowly to the gentle rythmn if the music.. He twirls her around & lifts her up & bends her down & brings her back in his arms.. She keeps her head on his chest as they continue moving around the hall, their feet in synchrony..
he says 'I wanted to say you something since long'. Her heartbeat quickens as he bends on his knees & speaks his thoughts ' WAKE UP GEET WAKE UP' & she jerks up from her sleep & sits on bed rubbing her eyes, still not comprehending what happened..
'God Geet, how much you sleep?? I am trying to to wake you up since half an hour. Go & fresh up now, you are getting late for college.' She heard her mother's voice fainting slightly as her mother moved out of the room towards kitchen..
She hurriedly gets out of her bed & rushes to the washroom to get ready..
At breakfast table, 'Geet have your breakfast' said her mother
'No mom, I am getting late, will have something in canteen.' replying she rushed out of the house hearing her mother shouting in the background..
'This girl I tell you, she never listens to me. Can't she wake up little early?? No, madam will busy dreaming about her prince & get late, then skip her breakfast everyday.' The mother keeps ranting to her husband.
'Offo Parveen, why are you taking so much tension, she is not a kid.. she will have something later'
'Malik, it's your pampering that is spoiling her, you always side your darling daughter, meri toh koi sunta hi nahi!!' saying this she leaves to kitchen.
This is an everyday thing in Malik household.. Geet Malik is the only daughter of Shehzaad & Parveen Malik, a Muslim couple.. Shehzaad is a government officer & Parveen is a housewife.. Though Muslim, Shehzaad named his daughter as Geet due to his great respect towards his music teacher Miss Geetanjali Iyer..
Coming to the story...
'Your late, again' said Pari, her best friend..
'Sorry yaar, I woke up late' replied Geet..
'Tell me something new!! how will you wake up early when you are so busy dreaming about your superstar' said an annoyed Pari..
'Accha ab chalna, class is going to start' saying this Geet dragged Pari with her inside the college..


SCENE 2:-

A very handsome guy with lush black hairs, deep brown eyes, sharp nose, pink M-shaped kissable lips & a chiseled body wearing blue denim & red r-shirt is seen standing in a garden.. A girl in pink dress comes & hugs him from behind..
The guy turns around & looking straight into her eyes, says in his deep, husky voice to the girl, ''Tumhi meri chaahat ho, tumhi meri dhadkan, tumhi mera ishq aur tumhi mera Junoon''
"CUT IT"..
The next second, entire place was filled with cheers & claps for the wonderful shot given by the male lead..
Yes you guessed it right.. It's the shooting venue for the movie Qaynaat & the hero is none other than our very own Superstar Maan Singh Khurana aka MK..
'MK Sir, it was a great shot, you were amazing' said the director..
'My pleasure director sahaab' Replied MK..
Continuous ringing of his phone breaks his attention, he moves aside to pick the call..
PHONE CONVO;
'Where were you MK, I am trying to call you since past half an hour' asked his girlfriend of two years
'I was busy with the shoot Natasha' replied Mk in a tired voice.. His body language clearly showing signs of exhaustion
'When are you not busy? In fact you have time for everything but me' said she in an annoyed tone
'Not again Nuts, we had the convo earlier. you know I am not a normal guy, I am a superstar & I have commitments' said an irritated MK
'Don't you have any commitment towards our relationship? do you even remember it was our second anniversary yesterday?? No you were too busy with your shoots & parties to remember anything' she asked frustrated
'Nuts baby, I am sorry.. I know I am not giving you time, but try to understand I have to concentrate on my acting, my career is on peek & this movie is very important for boosting my career' MK said cajoling his GF
'You concentrate on your career, but please let me free' she said sounding angry
'What do you mean?' he asked confused by her words
'Let's take a break MK' she said in a firm tone
'Baby please...' He pleaded
'No Maan, don't. I can't handle it anymore.. it's better we move on' said she not letting him complete
'You know what, do whatever you want. I don't care' he said in anger & cutting the call he stormed out of the studio in rage..


SCENE 3:-

'Mehul Chacha please' she said pouting..
'No Geet, I am not giving you his number, besides it's against the rules' said her father's best friend & she pouted at it..
'No one will know about it chacha, & I will only wish him & won't even say my name. Please na, It's his birthday tomorrow & I want to wish him first. please, please, please' she showed her best puppy dog eyes..
'Fine!! but only wishing & don't you dare mess it up' said the director grudgingly giving her the no. of her hero..
MIDNIGHT;
'Should I call him, should I not.. ek kaam karti hoon. let me text him instead' she thought to herself lying on stomach on the bed & swinging her legs in the air ..
TEXT CONVO; in between *
* Happy Birthday Superstar, may all your wishes come true* she clicked the send button after lot of debating with self
* Who is this?* came the reply few minutes later
'OMG!! The Superstar MK replied to me.. I am officially dead & in heaven' an extremely hyperventilating Geet though aloud sitting straight on the bed..
'What do I reply? think Geet think. just tell the truth, after all you won't get another chance to speak with Him. But what if he gets angry?? Nahi nahi I need to talk to him, it's a life time oppurtunity.. Babaji apni bacchi ko bacha lena' she thought &..
* Hi MK, I am a great fan of yours & I wanted to be the first one to wish you so texted you on your personal no.*
* What is your name & how did you get my no.?*
* My name is Geet Malik, but I cannot tell you how I got your no. as I promised someone, I am sorry!!*
* Geet!! I liked your honesty.. thanks for the wishes.. lovely name by the way*
'Yippie!!' Madhu fell on the bed reading the message with her phone in hand & slept with a smile dreaming about him again..
[Kacchi doriyon, doriyon, doriyon se
Mainu tu baandh le
Pakki yaariyon, yaariyon, yaariyon mein
Honde na faasley]
Otherside;
'Geet' he softly whispered her name with a smile playing on his lips & went on attending other calls from colleagues accepting wishes..
Maan was in a bad mood since few days due to his break-up with his model girlfriend Natasha.. But sharing his heart with his dadi helped him feel lighter..
Now chatting with this fan of his, made him feel great.. The superstar loved his fans as much as they loved him after all..
Thus started the unusual & unique friendship of a superstar & his superfan..


SCENE 4:-

*Geet, lets meet* excited Maan
*But how MK?? you always have the media people tailing behind you.. what if they spot us together* nervous Geet
*Don't worry about the media. I will take care of them* assuring Maan
*MK, I am not sure* hesitant Geet
*fine, don't come.. If you are not interested to meet me then why should I bother* angry Maan
*accha baba, gussa kyu hote ho.. I will come. Happy now* cajoling Geet
*very happy* enthusiastic Maan.. he was too excited to finally meet his new friend..
[Eh naraazgi kaagzi saari teri
Mere sohneya sunn le meri]
Past four months they had been chatting through texts & calls.. They have become really close & knew almost everything about each other.. Now they are going to meet for the first time. Let's see what happens..
2 WEEKS LATER; a secluded cafe in outskirts of Mumbai,.
Maan has booked the entire place & is waiting eagerly for his new best friend, when he hears the door opening & turns around to find the most beautiful girl he has ever laid eyes on standing in front of him in a simple salwar suit..
Maan's world stands still looking at those deep hazel brown eyes with so much innocence..
[Dil diyan gallan
Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu milaa ke]
Geet is no less. She is feeling out of the world standing right in front of her her crush & best friend..
Their trance is broken by the waiter.. Both are embarrassed to be caught staring each other..
'Geet?' He asks for confirmation while she nods her head in a yes..
Both move towards the table & talk for a while until the waiter brings their food.. Geet is happily surprised seeing her favorite dishes on the table..
'Bismillah' Geet starts eating with short prayer..(As I said earlier Geet here is Muslim).
'Bismillah-ir-Rahman-ir-Rahim' prays Maan shocking Geet..
'What??' he asks seeing her staring at him..
'How did you...?' she is unable to complete the sentence still in shock..
He shrugs in response & continues eating while Geet has a sweet smile on her lips realizing his efforts..
[Dil diyan gallan haaye...
Karaange roz roz beh ke
Sacchiyan mohabbataan nibha ke]
AFTER LUNCH;
'Geet, I have something for you' Maan tells her..
'What is it?' she asks him getting excited.. He gives her a box which she opens & looks into..
'Til ke laddoo.. these are my favorite MK' she tells him happily..
'I know, that is why I asked dadi to make it' he replies..
'Thank you, thank you, thank you so much MK' she hugs him in excitement.. & he stiffens due to shock but later relaxes & tells her,
'My friends call me Maan & I consider you also as my friend'
The whole afternoon goes by in their masti & pulling each others leg.. Both enjoyed each others company a lot.. In the evening Maan drops Geet to her home & leaves to his place..


SCENE 5:-

Maan & Geet started meeting often now.. They share their problems with each other.. He said her about his break-up & she helped him through it.. He helped her with her college problems.. MK even spoke about her to his Dadi who was happy about him..
PHONE CALL;
'Geet are you not feeling well? why is your voice like this?' MK asked worried for her
'Mujhe Nasopharengitis hua hai, jise aam log zukhaam kehte hai' replies a bored Geet
'What is this Geet? can't you take care of yourself properly? Now take rest' he commands her in a strict tone.. He leaves for the shoot after ending the phone call, while she curses him for being such a brute..
SHOOTING LOCATION;
'CUT IT.. Let's take a break MK sir' the director said..
'Alright, I will be in my vanity' he replies & moves away..
Few minutes later when he is relaxing in his vanity, his co-star Ayesha Kapoor walks in..
'What is it Ayesha??' asked MK in a bored tone..
'MK, why don't we go out for dinner tonight??' she asked desperately trying to get his attention
'Not in a mood Ayesha, & besides I am quite busy' he said in a not interested tone..
'Why do you always avoid me MK? Now that you are single, we can have a great time together' she said in a sexy voice sitting on his lap.. He immediately pushed her down & shouted at her..
'Listen Ayesha, I am not interested in you.. This is the last warning.. STAY AWAY FROM ME' saying this he stormed out of the vanity to cool his anger..
TWO DAYS LATER; EVENING AT KHURANA MANSION;
'Seriously MK, you shouted at the poor girl' said Geet laughing at him..
'Ya, ya make fun of me all you can' He pouted..
'Aww!! your so cute Manu' she cooed..
'Don't call me that, & I am not cute, I am handsome' he smirked at her..
[Sataaye mainu kyun
Dikhaaye mainu kyun
Aiven jhuthi mutthi russ ke rusaake]
'When will your dadi return from trip?' she asked while sitting on the kitchen slab munching on a carrot..
'Tomorrow night' he replied while preparing daal chawal for her..
He chopped the cabbage but put it back in fridge remembering her dislike for the vegetable.. After dinner Maan asked her to stay for the night.. when she denied, he told her that he said Romaila, her bua to tell her parents she will be staying at her place.. So after chatting under the sky on terrace for sometimes, they went to sleep in their rooms..
NEXT MORNING;
Geet wakes up with the sound coming from kitchen & walks in to find a bare chested Maan preparing breakfast & looking extremely hot with his slightly wet hairs.. She is openly drooling at him completely lost in him... Feeling a gaze upon him Maan turns around to find her..
'Good morning sleepy head.. Finally up? Go & freshen up, preparing your favorite aaloo paratha for you' teased MK.. While she ran away hiding her embarrassment..
After breakfast, they take a stroll in garden area in silence.. Later he takes her to Obroma Mumbai to get her favorite choco-chip ice-cream.. They enjoy the ice-cream along with teasing each other & finally return to their respective places..
[Dil diyan gallan haaye
Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke]

SCENE 6:-

It's been nine months since they know each other.. Maan has fallen for Geet.. He is planning to propose her & Dadi is aware of it.. One day morning;
'Maan beta, why don't you call Geet home today?' asked his Dadi
'She won't be able to come dadi, as it's the month of Ramadan & she will be fasting' he replied..
'Geet is a Muslim?' she put forth her doubt.. which he confirmed..
'Maan, I don't want you to continue your relation with that Muslim girl' his dadi ordered..
'But why dadi?? She is a nice girl & I love her' he questioned..
'I do not want a Muslim girl as my DIL.. what will the society say about it.. I can't face their taunts at this age.. This is my final decision' she went away breaking her grandson's heart..
Maan is devastated listening to his dadi, but he can't go against her as she took care of him & brought him up with great difficulty after his parent's died in a car crash.. So he started distancing himself from Geet.. Even she felt changes in him but he denied her saying work pressure..
[Tenu lakhan ton chhupa ke rakhaan
Akkhaan te sajaa ke tu ae meri wafaa
Rakh apna bana ke
Main tere layi aan
Tere layi aan yaaran
Naa paavin kade dooriyan, haaye]
FEW WEEKS LATER;
'Maan, let's plan holiday to Thailand' suggested Aditya.. All friends were hanging out together after a long time..
'No Adi, not in mood, you guys go' said MK
'Oh come on dude, don't make excuses.. we all are free & it's been so long since we went somewhere together.. you will have to come' ordered Vicky.. Abhay, Rohan & Sameer nodded in agreement..
'Okay fine guys, I will come' he said thinking it would be a good excuse to be away from Geet & control his feelings..
That evening he informed Geet about going to Colombo for work.. She requested him to not go as she was feeling something not right.. But he assured her & said it was emergency.. 3 days later he left to Thailand with his friends.. while Geet was anxious over here for him..
[Tenu lakhan ton chhupa ke rakhaan
Akkhaan te sajaa ke tu ae meri wafaa
Rakh apna bana ke
Main tere layi aan
Tere layi aan yaaran
Naa paavin kade dooriyan]
BEACH PARTY IN THAILAND;
'So, you love Geet' Adi stated
'No, I don't' MK refused
'We are not fools Man.. the way you wouldn't stop going on & on about her, the way your eyes sparkle on her mention, we are all aware of it' exclaimed Abhay..
Maan got pissed at his friends & walked to the bar & started drinking.. Here his friends decided to play match maker & boosted a drunk Maan to call Geet & profess his love.. So he dialed her number in the mid night.. Madhu woke up by the incessant ringing of her phone & answered the the call..
'Geeettt'
'Maan, is that you??'
'Geeettt I miss youu!!'
'Maan are you drunk??' she asked him
'No am not!' he shook his head even though she couldn't see him
'yes you are!! How can you be so careless Maan?? getting drunk in an unknown country when you are all alone.. do you know how dangerous it is??' she was scolding him when suddenly..
'I LOVE YOU' she went silent with it..
'i love youu so soo much Geeettt, sooo muchh' with this the line went dead..
[Main jeena haan tera...
Main jeena haan tera
Tu jeena hai mera
Dass lena ki nakhra dikha ke]

SCENE 7:-

Geet is in a dilemma.. she is not able to comprehend that superstar MK is in love with a girl like her.. With these thoughts plaguing her mind, she went into a restless sleep..
Next morning Maan wakes up to severe headache.. After freshening up he rests for a while & suddenly flashes of previous night come back to him.. He is completely shocked with his doings.. He immediately calls Geet & apologizes stating he was drunk & it did not mean any thing.. He also discloses that he is in Thailand & not Colombo out of guilt.. Geet is heartbroken with his words & his lies.. She does not even realize she is crying until she feels wetness on her cheeks..
[Dil diyan gallan
Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke]
After returning to Mumbai MK starts avoiding Geet & she is depressed with his ignorance towards her.. One evening while returning from college, she misses to see the vehicle approaching her due to being lost in Maan's thoughts.. The Lorry hits her & she falls on the ground with severe injuries.. She is taken to hospital by the people & her family is informed..
Romaila bua informs MK about it who is shaken up by the news & rushes out of the house only to be stopped by his dadi..
[Dil diyan gallan...]
'Where are you going Maan??' she interrupts him..
'Dadi, Geet had an accident, I need to go' he cries..
'Your not going anywhere Maan, you can't be seen near that Muslim girl' she said him strictly..
'Enough!! I don't care anymore dadi.. I love her & I won't leave her her for anything' he shouts glaring at her & leaves..
[Raatan kaaliyan, kaaliyan, kaaliyan ne
Mere dil saanwle
Mere haaniyan, haaniyan, haaniyan je
Lagge tu na gale]
Outside the OT; The doctor comes out & everyone rushes to him.. He informs that she is in critical condition for next 24 hours.. After lots of prayers & waiting Geet is finally out of danger & gets consciousness.. Her parents by now knew everything from Romaila, hence they give privacy to the couple to sort out their problems..
[Mera aasmaan mausamaan di na sune
Koi khwaab na poora bane
Dil diyan gallan
Karange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke]
MK sits beside Geet & speaks holding her hands with utmost care..
'I am sorry Geet.. you are in this condition due to me.. please forgive me' he pleads feeling guilty for her condition..
'No Maan it was not your fault' Geet consoled him not able to see him so broken..
'I love you Geet, I cannot live without you anymore, will you marry me' he proposes..
'I love you too Maan & yes I will marry you' she agrees & both cry hugging each other tighty..
when they calm down, coming out of the hug, but still holding each other they have their first kiss.. It was a soft & sweet kiss, everything that they had imagined & more.. It was simply magical..
[Pataa hai mainu kyun chupa ke dekhe tu
Mere naam se naam mila ke
Dil diyan gallan
Karange naal naal beh ke
Akh naale akh nu mila ke]
Geet blushes & Maan teases her..
'Kya baat hai Geet, mujhe nahi pata tha miss hoshiyaarpur express ko sharmaana bhi aata hai' He winks at her..
[Dil diyan gallan...]

PACK UP


Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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#82


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Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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1 )when did you first realize you pen down a story ? And what inspire you to write ?

offcourse its maneet only who inspired me aswell because of them only i am here😳
its in 2012 ,i started to read ff on maneet,first its my sister from whom through i got to know about this ff thing and i was trying to forget maneet that time😆because its off air that time and i was missing them but trying to forget them by watching madhubala as wanted so much to watch dd so,,i was watching it 😳but didnt liking it the way rk was always in power ,but for dd watching it⭐️

then my sister told me about ff thing ,thought to try it of rk madhu ,wanted to learn english language as well ,so in that i got one rk madhu ff,but that was my bad move, i didnt get interest that much like my sister enjoying arshi ff ,so i thought to try on maneet..but that again goes wrong move 😳ask why..? 😲because i got really badly addicted to it..just there was so much which i wanted to saw on my favourite couple..there passion..romance or honeymoon ☺️which was not shown in serial.😆.every twist,her fainting or his saving and its goes on and on.😳. so i just leaving studies almost reading all ffs back to back, even my dad was always scolded 😳 but i was so addicted to it like some drug wanted to read what happens next in ff, thats why always read completed stories😳..that time wanted to chat here on gf,,like other friends ,i always read everyones comments but didnt knowing about it how to do or how to sign in to if. as i didnt evevn use whatsup or did chatting.
but in 2016 my cousin help in doing sign in here and that to for pwd on blog 😆will be shock why for blog pwd here sign in ..that what i was saying ,i was too dumb to know that pwd to writer dete hai hume ,muze laga we have to use our own pwd😆 isliye blog bhi open kiya wordpress pe
but later litle by little reading everyones comments i came to know that and then i ask form t.peru di first and through her only i got to know about pm also😆

meri bakbak toh bahot ho gai on first question itself😆
reading everyone i so wanted to add my own imagination and twist on maneet, so i thought of writing own ff but my english was so weak even now,also i was fearing for it, but thought that i have to try ,aur abhi nahi to phir kabhi nahi aisa hota hai. so thought to post it soon though my data always not available on time but i thought like jo hoga kal dekha jayega 😉

its all my desire to wrote on my maneet that brought out the writer inside me😳 i never stop fearing from my dad's scolding, hiding from him i am posting it 😳

2 ) which genre you very comfortable in ur writing style ?why?

this is so much interesting question for me🤪 its always romantic one,passionate .
the reason is because i had always came from the time i was little from that time ..its like i have came up seeing lots of hindi movies and serials on dd national ,even star plus thoughthumare paas cable nahi tha that time but i was seeing that in neighbour.so thing is here that its always romantic one movies of karishma or salman,, its like hero and heroine i was known that time of them..beside that i had watch james bond and harry potter, but hindi always romantic one. and i was not liking that time any other like action movies, like hero is in main lead..though comedy i love but its like the thing got fitted in my mind that both hero and heroine to be shown in any movie or tv show.. so all happen through this thought😃
and when started to watch geet though i was hating so much serials that time dont know why even😆 my whole family, but when i started to see geet and its promo,its like wo dono bahot hi alga dikhe means different form all television and bollywoood world.both were looking just awesome ,i even thought geet or dd didnt does makeup even her kajal also didnt came into my notice ,i thought its her original self,that what magic geet or dd had done on me and even that show.
so when it started its always maneet who was my hero heroin like i said about movies😆
my mom dad also love them both now, they to wish them to be real life couple 😆
so my imagination was goes on and on on maneet,jo tv main dikhate the and jo nahi dikhate the like aage ky ahoga like in there honemoon ☺️its i know wiht every maneetian or maneet fan happend ,,i mean happening ..i know..i have read everyone guys.so i know😉😆 . so just like that i read ff and wrote it.. i always or its what came into my mind first so that what i prefer to wrote most.😉.as all scenes ..i imagine on maneet, and wanted to wrote it on them😳

3) what was your hardest scene to write?

oh it is hardest question for me😆
hardest scene means i didnt remembering anything sort of like that😲..ha..though i was so blushing and feeling consious to wrote maneet romance or passion in maine puch a chnad se song sequence in his maid ff😳.. as imaginging it is other thing but sharing it with others is different and difficult also,didnt it.😉.its our personal thoughts or dreams,woh bhi waise wale😉😆.but plus point in this that here are all maneetians only like me, all maneet fans and they also share same thoughts like romance of maneet like me.so its not get that too much difficult..and also there imagination also like me only.. and they too wanted to read it on maneet though yes little amt of readers dont like it though.
and second thing is when i wanted to wrote there passion or romance but have to see the situation also as what is happening in story now, what track is going on..and readers also dont like maan forcing or devilness in cage in my arms ff..little amt of readers did love it just like me but everyones taste are different so there i face hard time to wrote every part as it has to come out like reader wanted it also i was writing down my own wish as well like how did i love which scenes i love to include in ff.

it is like that.. that readers ke choice aur in there point of view also we have to check and there thoughts also are differents .and its our planning also about story ,what to include and our wishes and love that how to proceeds story further. its all..😃

4) Have you ever turned a dream or nightmare into writing pieces?

.this is one most interesting question for me😆

that is what i am saying all about in first 3 questions.. its all my dream and imagination in each ff i have wrote down there scenes, there romance,, there cs or there pics, there costumes.. to title.. to banner..,all edits .. its all my dream and imagination..🥳

5) what the most important lesson you have learned through last year of writing?

this question i cant answer but will try..
i just got to know like i said in 3rd question as we have to go along with readers point of view aswell.. they sometime dont like what twist we added or about cs.. its all about wrong and right.
like when its came to maneet,, wrote there passion or scenes didnt thought about right or wrong, its always maneet i think only.. kuch readers thought about this when i potrayed maan in devil cs and show there romance and closeness. its what happened even some didnt like rape scens or forcing heroine if that is needed in story also they cant wait also for next just leave story because they dont like.it even me too dont like if there will other than maan who rape geet or force her...its like our thinking is different each one..😃

6 )what do you mean readers to you ? And what do u want say to readers/friends?

. in my point of view..my readers are my friends which i never got properly in my entire life that is till now, for which i was always craving😭.. its like jealousy was growing inside me to see my friends that were always one or two in number with others most of the time.. my child heart or the child i was that time wanted to have one special friend of mine and with me always but that i didnt got😭 always got neglected till now even in college.. and college life i dont know that in real life as never feel that or enjoyed it, its always tv or movies and ffs of maneet i got to know through this medium.

so when i was always reading ff in past that time was craving to be here in gf friends reading comments there chatting here, feeling jealous to read that di word.wanted so desperately koi muze bhi pucho yaar.. i am also exstiting here reading you all.

and when with so much unsurety i posted my first story here, didnt thought or hope to get that little response also which i get that time through all of you guys, its you di whos first comment was there congratulation me on my first story.. and you had ask me to send pm to you but till now i didnt get your comment ha😡 maybe on first few updates ..but later didnt

so its started and my buddylist get filled and with there response they make my inseperable part..that i always waited for everyones comments or one word on my each thread so desperately.. they are my friends.. which i got in the mean of some treausre which i was. so longing to

even when i am getting less response or comments and likes, its now i am feeling😆 its make me so much angry but cant show them or hurt them in fear of they maybe leave me. 😲cant able to get angry on them. 😆
readers means supporter to each one wirter...reader nahi hoga toh hum kiske liye likhenege yeh sab,,so that is what power reader is holding here. and we need to go along there choices aswell to keep them glue to our writing or story..

and on geet forum ,i will just hats off guys for every reader.. as they are really supporting every writer too well.. i have see them regular readers on each ff almost.. just shows it is possible for them to read every story everyday😲 ..and there summarization on each part,,that is also a tact or power they hold in there hand👏


and i will just say to every reader of min,that.
guys..you are first my friend or di's 😳so before leaving any of my thread think of me not mine any story..😭 and i will always entertain you like the way you wanted as if any scenes, concepts,, cs..
i will think of everyones choices also and there will be always maneet in my stories ,, whatever story concept maybe,, but it will be always an happy ending with mine writing.. with maneet together.. all happy ..🥳

so be with me always 🤗 and big thanks to every reader who supported me here and responsing my stories and even voted for me in this poll🥳🤗

7) Any tips would you like to share about writing?

tips means what i can share when i myself is new here😆

even though one thing have came into mind i wanted to say that.. while writing your story you should think about future aswell as past of the story also.
let me explain.. i have read before also many ff of maneet where in any previous part there will any cs or scene that needed to be shown in further story or parts also but writers forget is, so like if maan ko chot lagi hai hath pe and there this part ended but in next updates also or further story, there will no explanation of this thing that maan ko chot lagi hai to uske bad kya hua like what happen about his that wound.. hope i have explain it enough make you guys understandable.
and about future writing.. we have to link recently we are what writing that is anywhere linkable to future of story,, offcourse it will always but like suspence scnes we have to thought on this line too much.. even me also.😲 if you are forgetting this then keep writing in anywhere your diary or something..😊

second tip is i have always said that think with readers point of view also, think about them ,there reaction before writing anyhting and what they wanted most to read, there choice😃

8) why u chose GHSP forum rather than other forum?

are di yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai.. i have explain on this question too much in previous all quesions ,i think 😆aur kisi bhi maneet fan ko puch lo,what say guys😉 honestly speaking as i said before i hate all tv shows leaving geet aside.. i just love geet too much to go on other forums😳.. no defence anyone..but i felt so angry or jealous as every show is now copying ghsp,evevn .. gul khan's shows i hated all that are all copy half of geet,, its producers are same but still i dont like it all appreciations goes to them when ghsp is first show of like this. so thats why i hated it..
but no defecne please..
always wanted to wrote on maneet.. no other couple i can imagine any scenes or story leave beside movies also.😳 as i SAID BEFORE its always maneet.😉

9) if u want enter in ur story like cameo ,which type of character as u enter like heroine,friend,stranger ,villian character, or some other character ?why

first of all i didnt like any side cs di.. i just hate it.. i felt its to be waste of time to read or watch any other side characters when it is of maneet story.. just wanted to see maneet and read them. so as wanted to wrote like that, but i know its needed to include them in story. as villian ne ke bina hero ka koi kaam nahi hota..

so my first chice is always to take villain as i said the line upwards and like agar villain ne heroin ko kidnaap nahi kiya or something like that then how our hero is going to rescue our heroine 😆
and there romance then going further, there falling in love, as its like side cs or negatives even like the whole story.. we needed it very much.. just i prefer most the villain.. as uska kaam more impt hota hai😉

muze hero heroine ke friends lene main bilkul accha nahi lagta because i didnt feel that like i said i dont have friends .so never imagine what to write its always movies geet serail and maneet ff 😳and most irriating is i dont like maan's closeness with female other than geet..its my feelings i cant stop them i always come hating his female friends in every ff.. 😆even i prefer vamp of him😉 you should be shock.. but it is its what my feelings are..they show there true colurs later mingling maneet at last with there negative cs.. i love it.. but i just hate postive females around maan other than geet😆

so this is my thoughts

10) last but not least , what u think about GHSP anniversary celebration?

oh it is honestly speaking di i dont think on this much or little even

as i had always visited it in past being silent reader and always love all edits ...or siggies there. but true fact is i dint read any story there, as i wasnt knowing about os first its my sister only she told me about one shot and i have always come up with reading ff that too complete one,so from that time only i wasnt liking os or ss, reason being they are short, i was use of long maneet stories,, filled with lots of twists and turns,with that come there romance..passion..all things.
so i never read any story on that thread and was getttings so much tired to see all pages of thread and as i said before mere pas kabhi data nahi tha. mean net.. its alwasy kabhi bhi like one day or two in month dad was giving us there modem,so never get a chance to glance it with free time.
and recently later i jsut got so emotionally weak or fearfull to read any sight painful story of maneet. because in past always read all type of stories that was made me cry ..with love triangle that too with maan always there was different female..so cant take it anymore now.. now meri energy full khatam ho gayi hai.. ab aur nahi sah sakti..if it is others than maneet like other couple than maneet,then koi bhi scen ho sad ho ya aur koi..muze rona nahi aayega😆

so thing is here abhi sab sad stories bhi hote hai aur love tangle ke bhi with maan there will be other female which i hate the most.so cant check that also fearing from them.

baki muze to bahot khushii hoti hai that still today also we are opening pour ghsp thread keeping them alive.its trully an amazing feeling.i feel so proud of on all maneet fans who make this thread and supported it participte in it.. take so mcuh efforts to create that and keep that operating.


love you all my maneetians🥳🤗




KALPI: wonderful interview and very genuine answer from u ..
I love ur answer mainly u did not hidden anything and told openly said
ur 6 th question, i knew u got angry with me not only u most of writers angry with me. last few months i did not comment any of writers stories. I know very well everyone missing my comments . my life schedule i did not properly comment even i am writing more stories , my most of stories i am not update long back .my followers , no i never say them to my followers , they were my friends, dearies and sweeties. my dearies with me always ,may be some person left because of their schedule , real life reason , yeah i miss them but i under stand their point view. may be i am also one of reason they left my stories right. i never post one word comment any of writers stories. i want to explain each lines which i love the most in that part .so it take more times . i am extremely sorry dear..After i am free my work .. i will comment ur story properly.

i understand ur carving ,sometime, me too jealous with other thread..they did more chatting personally and about stories everything.. after one thing realized ..first i did not open up with them how they could with me. first u free chat with them..definetly u get ur friend circle forum.. i got more friends but some friends very close to me. its happen without our knoweldge and we have more sweet maaneetians, surely u will get ur good friends in forum and i am also in that list 😉

if u want share anything , i am always available for u as like ur friend or sister..u can chat with me anytime 🤗







Sanju : yeah its really long interview
Kalpi : yes sanju di, next sweet words from taahir to MG13








As a new writer to GF she indeed excelled , her stories are fresh and certainly holds that intrigue
that every reader wants
she updates regular and now has three stories running
her VM's and Edits are always beautiful and has vibe
as her reader I certainly enjoy her stories
all the very best to her for her future stories

-Taahir






geet:dear,u already member of GHSP family and because of me everyone was here and our maaneetians very sweeter person like me unlike maan with chuckling face
Maan: geet..😡
Geet: what maan with innocent face
Maan:what do you mean because of u..everyone was here with fold hands in his chest..
Geet:yes, maan.. 😳
Maan: plz explain🤢
Geet: yes i do anything for u..just explanation only na i do .. 👍🏼
Maan: geet..with grinned teeth😡
Geet: ok..what is our forum name
Maan: GHSP 😃
Geet: see u also accept..GHSP not MHSP.. geet sabsi pyaar hai not Maan sabsi pyaar hai.. 🤣
Maan:😡

Kalpi : guys, u check next post runnerup interview .. 😎




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1)what u feel, she got New writer of year (runner up)

ANS:
like her story , although new she writing many ..like her simple way of writing and quick update

2 )pls tell us something about Ramjanaki and like and dislike character for her

ANS:
she is very fast writer and a nice one too. I hate Maan's mom in sympathy story

3) which story u love the most from her stories.why

ANS:
I like sympathy or love most then light of my life?

4) just imagination, u got magical power, u can change any humanbeing to other speices , now if Ramjanaki is ur target means, what type of species ..u would be change her

ANS:
I would like her to be become like star 😊 always shine happily

5)last but not least , what is ur view about GHSP anniversary celebration

ANS:
GF celebration always best but this time it's more grand . Those poll, interviews everything new and fresh . Very good idea to celebrate it including everyone .





1)what u feel, she got New writer of year (runner up)

ANS:

she totally deserve it . I think last year she joined yet very fast writer also writing many stories, happy that she selected as runner up.

2 )pls tell us something about Ramjanaki and like and dislike character for her

ANS:

im reading her every story . All are different concept like behad , myth, destined, sympathy ...
now light her life ..in this story I hate geet family
and in sympathy I hate maan's mom

3)if u want , she need change anything means , what do u want say or u want share something but till now u cannot express to her ,if anything u can

ANS:

she is a writer and doing good , don't think she need to change anything.

4) just imagination, u got magical power, u can change any humanbeing to other speices , now if Ramjanaki is ur target means, what type of species ..u would be change her
ANS:

lol its funny and difficult one I will pass it

5)last but not least , what is ur view about GHSP anniversary celebration

ANS:
all I can say thank you all for doing so much to keep this forum alive . In all these celebration all come together and it looks so good . You guys who organising it and who participating and who giving their precious view love all...thnx for this big thing







Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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#85
kalpi : am getting bored
sanju : kuch music bajao byi
kalpi bore ho rhi hai
priya : how can you get bore kalpi
we just posting next story
preety : but this story have only two parts
writer going continue later😉
Aashiq


He stared at his love . There was full madness in his eyes for her. His Dream Girl. Yes. DREAM GIRL. That what all world called her. And she is Dream girl to everyone but it will remain only one soon when he will make her his.


She is only his. HIS AASHIQUI GEETHANDA.


AND HE IS HER AASHIQ. ..


Saying so he kissed her on her lips on her big portrait which was there along with her other big posters .

Part 1


Huge crowd was there waiting for there dream girl. Just to get one glimpse of her. Security was tight around Fredo restaurant where the New York fashion show was going to happened in few hours. It was huge crowd include some of Indians also who was there to meet there dream girl. Mejority of press coverage was there. Waiting for her to appear soon so that they cam take her snaps to make headlines of there newspaper. There was going to be live telecasting of the huge event to which the geet handa going to be make more charming with her charms.


She is going to be a part of this show.


and Line of cars come across the huge crowd stopping in front of restaurant.

From behind cars well built bodyguards come out to push the crowd behind so that they can make place for there dream girl to come out without any problems.


Poster ke, jungle mein
Glamor ke daldal mein
Roshni ki hulchul mein
Gossip mein, scandal mein
Har dil mein basti hoon
Main heroine hoon..

In the jungle of posters,
in the quicksand of glamour,
in the bustling of light,
in gossip, in scandal,
I live in every heart,
I am Heroine.


And here comes the most awaited person of the eveing. As she come out with her all glory making all persons present there hold there breath at the sight of there beautiful mermaid clad in prom dress killing everyone with her persona.


Even women's or girls never save by her persona instead they admire and respect her for what she is. Wanted to be like her from inside and out.



She gave all of them a charming smile of hers charming all the crowd present there including press people be it restaurant people. She pose for sometime to let the press take her snaps. And started to make her way inside.


As they come out of there shock of there dream girl, the crowd started to push through borders that had made for her security. Her bodyguards take steps with her some behind and sideways .


Jeena marna ye aaina
Khud ko bhi to na pehchaana
Naqab banke mera dasna
Main khiladi hoon ya khilona
Kabhi teekhi, kabhi namkeen hoon
Main heroine hoon..

This mirror is life n death,
I don't even identify my own self,
my biting (is) with a facemask,
Am I a player or a toy?
I'm sometimes spicy, sometimes salty,
I'm the heroine.


"Welcome mam. We are honour to get your presence here on this event. "


Manager welcome her with great respect and all in her charms..


Its all my pleasure . Mr. Stiphs. ..she too not let down the respect he given her by replying in humble way.


He smile all happy at the thought she remember his name..


Come..this way...he take her inside and soon she was in her private room.

*****************************************


And event started with all its glory with the presence of Dream Girl. There was present all celebrity persons including producers, actors, Directors,with yes HER AASHIQ . How can he leave her. He has always followed her where she went. She is his love. His junoon. He have to be there near her. He had seen her entering in restaurant. His eyes has burn at extent to see that manager kissing her hand. Be it that greeting way but he it only his right. She is his ,only his. Any others not have that right to touch her. She is pure and that ba****manager just make her dirty with his kiss. He was all burning from inside. Sure today it's last day of that ba****.there was different madness in his eyes that stared at her as she make her way on the stage glowing it more with her presence.

As she take a steps .huge silence spread across the hall/ stadium. All just stared at her open mouth as she walk at last with her all glory mesmerizing the audience with her charms. Again she spread her charms giving her charming smile to everyone. She walk back again and meet up with the Fashion designer of this event come her friend John.


He present his latest design along with thanking her and at last event ended on a great note.


Part 2


He come inside his room smirking at his victory. He did took his revenge on that manager leaving him to almost death. But he leave him in hell torturing him at his heart content. He laugh evilly but soon his anger was back again making his eyes devil red . He glanced at all around his room. His room was fill with her. Yes Her. Geet. His Geet.. He is living with her. Her dupatta. Her cloths all was there making her presence with him. Her AASHIQ.


He come towards her statue which was place there .she looks more beautiful than this lifeless creature of hers. He thought as his eyes turn passionate staring at her statue. He hold statue from waist sticking it with own body.



YOU MADE ME AASHIQ (LOVER) GEET .AASHIQ OF YOURS.

aashik banaya aashik banaya

aashik banaya aashik banaya

aashik banaya aapne

aashik banaya aashik banaya

aashik banaya aapne

[ made me a lover

made me a lover

u made me a lover

made me a lover

u made me a lover]

He came close to her huge photograph and sing as if telling her his condition couse is her only.

tere bin suni suni hai bahe

tere bin pyasi pyasi nigahe

[ the nights are lonely without you

without you my eyes are all thirsty]

He carrased her body coming to another statue of her. He carrased her thigs as if feeling her. He breathed in highly aroused with his feelings for her.



tere bin bin asar meri aahe

tere bin tere bin suni suni hai bahe

tere bin pyasi pyasi nigahe

tere bin bin asar meri aahe tere bin aashik banaya aashik banaya

aashik banaya aapne aashik banaya

aashik banaya

aashik banaya aapne

tere bin lamha lamha sataye

tere bin bekarari jalaye

tere bin chain mujhko na aaye tere bin tere bin lamha lamha sataye

tere bin bekarari jalaye

tere bin chain mujhko na aaye tere bin

[ without you my breaths are unworthy

Without you

the nights are lonely without you

without you my eyes are all thirsty

without you my breaths are unworthy

Without you

made me a lover

u made me a lover

made me a lover

u made me a lover

without every moment kills me

without you restlessnes burns me

Without you peace is not mine

Without you

without every moment kills me

without you restlessnes burns me

Without you peace is not mine

Without you]

He goes in bathroom to get shower , and calm his burning desires for time being.


still her face is not leaving his mind. She is crave on his heart mind and soul. He felt her hands roaming on his body from backwards carrasing his chest.


He pulled her infront own .there was mischief glint in her eyes which he loved the most about her.

meri nigaho me tera chehra basa

hai

gahre hai arman jane ja

pagal shama hai

meri nigaho me tera chehra basa

hai

gahre hai arman jane ja

pagal shama hai

tere bin jina nahi hai gawara

tere bin dil ka nahi hai gujara

tere bin kaun apna sahara tere bin

aashik banaya aashik banaya

aashik banaya aapne

aashik banaya aashik banaya

aashik banaya aapne

[ ur face is always there in my eyes

deep are my desires and the climate is crazy

ur face is always there in my eyes

deep are my desires and the climate is crazy

without you it's unfair that I exist

without you, my heart doesn't beat

you are my only one

without you

made me a lover

u made me a lover

made me a lover

u made me a lover]

He slam his lips on her petals with his eyes closed to relished her taste and kissed her hungrily quenching his thirst of long time. She make him hungry this much.as he opened his eyes there was not his jaan. He slam his hands on wet wall as shower continued to cascade down his burning body.

bechiniyo ka faslo ka silsila

hai

darde jigar ka ye sabab hamko mila hai bechiniyo ka faslo ka silsila hai

darde jigar ka ye sabab hamko mila

hai

tere bin rat katti nahi hai

tere bin pyas mitti nahi hai

tere bin duri ghatti nahi hai

aashik banaya aashik banaya

aashik banaya aapne

tere bin suni suni hai bahe

tere bin pyasi pyasi nigahe

tere bin bin asar meri aahe

tere bin lamha lamha sataye

tere bin bekarari jalaye

tere bin chain mujhko na aaye

[ it's a stage of restlessness and distance

I have received this pain of heart

it's a stage of restlessness and distance

I have received this pain of heart

without you the nights don't pass

without you my thirst doesn't die

without you the distance doesn't decrease

made me a lover

u made me a lover

the nights are lonely without you

without you my eyes are all thirsty

without you my breaths are unworthy

without every moment kills me

without you restlessnes burns me

Without you peace is not mine]



You will be mine soon Geet. You will be in my arms very soon. It's promise to you of your AASHIQ (LOVER )



Note : Writer given to us only Two parts, so wait for May end, after that you going get new parts😉

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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preety : before moving towards our next story
kalpi : hume laga khi aap hume miss toh nhi kr rhe hai
sanju : so we are here
Priya : this story about desire
jo uske pass hai
mere pass kyun nhi
preety : sshh
😉

Disclaimer by the writer

It's GHSP's 8th Anniversary..To here is a mature story of a couple married for 8 years..This is not hard core romantic story but based on the feelings which many of us pass by once or the other times in our life..Everyone of us may feel connected to it as it's inclined towards the real life



Part-1

Maan Singh Khurana was happily married to his wife Geet for eight years now.. Both were blessed with a sweet daughter Nitya five years ago..

Maan works in a public bank. He is the Branch Manager..Hard working and efficient employee, thus getting the promotions at the right time.. Because of his Government Service they have to move from one city to another city in every three or four years..He was getting his postings in small towns and cities so they could find a specious house for his HRA (House rent Allowance) which bank was providing them..They were living nicely within their source of income

When they got married Geet was also working in private sector..She worked for two and half years after marriage but decided to leave her job one she got pregnant. She wanted to take care of her daughter herself. She did not want her to grow up in any Baby care center.. Maan though wanted her to carry her job as he thought that working woman are more active than housewives but seeing Geet not ready to leave Nitya alone, he agreed..

Geet was an intelligent yet homely girl.. Her parents had taught him the value of relations and other things. Maan was an public servant so he was not getting very handsome salary but he was getting so many perks other than his salary from the bank so they were leading a satisfied life when it comes to monetary grounds.. She was managing her house well in whatever they were getting..

Geet was from finance department so Maan had given her the responsibility to take care of their savings.She was managing that well too with other responsibilities of their home and family.

Though she was at home only but in efforts of taking care of everything she got exhausted and by the time Maan came back she was on his lowest level of energy..

Geet was a beautiful girl and Maan was flat on her beauty after their marriage.. She was quite energetic till she was working and as Maan had thought she was now getting ignorant towards herself..Maan many time had asked her to see some nearby Parlour to take care of her looks but she always gave him a sweet smile saying that she would definitely go some day when free..

And Maan always gave her a frown knowing her well that free time would never come.. It was not like he did not love her..He loved her but wanted to see her smiling when he was back from work and also wanted his wife to be present as beautiful as she was in actual... He was very well aware that she was the owner of immense beauty but was being inattentive towards herself in the pretense of being busy in taking care of him, Nitya and the home. She also was not the lady who liked to waste money in extra expenses which were not much needed..

She was never interested in buying expensive clothes or accessories for herself, yet lived nicely simply yet gracefully

She never lacked in taking care of Maan and Nitya.. Even if she was not well she tried her best to give Maan and Nitya healthy and homemade food..

Maan used to say that he would have his lunch at bank but Geet never listened to him..

But she always made him shut

" Maan you know na..I don't want you and Nitya to eat that oily and unhealthy food from the canteen.. and most important is that I too can have something in lunch. Otherwise I will have to cook for myself alone.. and when I have to cook anyhow so why not in the morning? We all will have proper meal"

and she always gave a sweet smile to him to which he always surrendered in front of her..

She was taking care of Nitya's studies well and as a result Nitya was one of the best students of her class..Teacher always praised her in parents' teachers meet and Maan and Geet always felt proud of their daughter.

In all we can say that they were living just the way a small medium class family lives normally.. They were happy with each other as they knew their limits..

This Year Maan's promotion was due and he was going to sit in the exams.. Geet's full support was with him as he had to take leaves to prepare for the exams and Geet always kept in her mind that he should not be disturbed while he was studying.. She even made Nitya agree not to watch TV in high volume as it would disturb her father..and Nitya being the daughter of caring parents remembered it and did not watch TV much..

Maan appeared in exams and after a month the result was out and like always he had cleared the exam and was called for the Interview.. He cleared it too with good score..

He was too happy when he got the confirmation of his promotion as well as transfer..

He shared his happiness with his family and they both too were too happy to know..

" Dad.. I want a treat" Nitya said with a pout "And tell mamma that I want that treat outside not at home by having the pizza made by her.''

And Geet looked at her daughter with open mouth and Maan while laughing kissed his daughter..

"Off course sweet heart.. We will be enjoying outside and you can order what you want."

" Sachhi?' Nitya could nor beleive

" Mucchi" Maan assured her and looked at Geet who was giving them a glare

"Come On Geet..We can do this for once..Nothing will happen.''

And Geet looked at father and daughter and gave a nod not trying to make the moment sad by her denial

And seeing her agree Nitya jumped on her and kissed

" Thanks Mamma."

And Maan seeing Nitya so much excited he too kissed her

" Thanks mamma."

And Geet eyes opened wide seeing him flirting in front of Nitya who was clapping and giggling seeing her dad kissing her mamma..

They spent their evening out .It was like a pleasant change for Geet too.. She also enjoyed with Maan and Nitya leaving everything behind..

They returned home tired

Nitay had already slept in the car so Maan put her in her bed and tucked her properly with the quilt..

Maan and Geet were in bed..

" Maan You did not tell where we are going after your transfer?" Geet asked and Maan with a smiled turned towards her , rested his head on his palm with his elbow on bed

That's an amazing place Geet.. I m sure we all will love it.

" Really? Now don't create suspense. Please tell na."

" Geet.. We are moving to Mumbai." Maan excitedly told her and Geet for a moment felt happy but next moment she was in thinking mode

" What Happened Geet? What are you thinking?"

Maan Mumbai is a very big and expensive city..Will we be able to lead a decent life there? I Have heard that it's not easy to get a house in Mumbai.. Many decent earning people live in chawls there."

" No Geet We don't need to live at any chawl.. Bank has built it's own society there and we can get a flat for ourselves"

" Oh.. That's good." Geet took a deep relaxed breath hearing Maan and he smiled seeing her getting relaxed

" When you will be going there to join?" Geet asked

" Coming Sunday." Maan replied

" What? So soon? Maan today is Friday itself.. Why did you not tell me before?" Geet complained and Maan smiled

" Why? Are you going to miss me?" Maan looked at her with intense eyes

" Obviously Maan.. Nitya can't stay without you any single day. What's is there to ask?"

"Only Nitya will miss me? You won't miss me?"

Geet pouted at his question and Maan pulled her towards him..

" As I m leaving for Mumbai soon so we should not waste our time in talking".

Maan grabbed her lips in his and she moaned under him

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Maan was ready to leave as his flight from Delhi was in the evening but he had to go to Delhi by cab as they were living 120 kms away from Delhi..

Nitya was crying..It was Maan's first posting after Nitya started to understand the situation.. Last time she was only 2and half years old when he was transferred.. So for Nitya it was the first time that Maan was going away from her..

" Dad Come back soon." Divya said crying and Maan kissed her

" I will Baby.. Till then take care of your mamma..See she will also start to cry like a baby..But Nitya is my big girl no? So she will not cry..Right?" Maan consoled both checking his own emotion within as it was really hard for him too this time to leave then as Nitya was crying badly..

He for one last time kissed Nitya and even Geet too and sat in the car and waved his hand to them..

" Bye Maan..Take care..and call me after you reach Delhi."

Maan nodded and the cab left from there..

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Mumbai (Maya Nagri)

Maan checked in to the guesthouse of the Bank where he had a booking under his name

He after getting fresh called Geet and talked to her..

" Are you settled Maan?"

" Yes Geet just had coffee and then called you..How is Nitya?Is she still crying?"

She has slept Maan.. She was tired after crying for you..then I had to take her to her friend's house.. There she after some time started to play and was normal..and now sleeping so don't worry about her. She would have been happy to talk to you but.."

" No problem Geet..Let her sleep ..and yes..Keep the door locked properly in my absence."

" Don't worry Maan..It's not the first time I m alone. I'm used to it Maan .So stop worrying." They chatted for a while and then called it a day..He was going to join the office next day.

Next morning he reported at the corporate office in Mumbai..

He after completing the joining formalities was led to his department..There he met the people. Few of them were much elder to him and almost on the verge of retirement..Few were of his own age group..

One of them welcomed him with a smile

"Hello Mr Khurana..Welcome to the office..Myself Dev..Dev mehra..You will be sitting near me." Dev informed him

"That's nice and please call me Maan". And Dev nodded with smile "Sure Maan Maan shook his hand with him warmly..

As they both were having their seats nearby so they could talk to each other a lot while doing their work..

Dev asked about his family and Maan told him about Geet and Nitya.. and Dev too told him about his family..His wife was Meera and he had a son of Nitya's age whose name was Ansh

By the end of the week they had become good friends..

Maan noticed something about Dev in this one week..He was a handsome man and he used to were expensive branded clothes and Maan could easily guess the cost of those clothes as they were the brands of elite class people and he was actually surprised to see him like that..but he was new there so did not say anything..

He was talking to Geet and Nitya daily after reaching the GH..

" Maan how is work going on? Geet asked

"It's good Geet.. Corporate office is just like an ocean where so many people are working..there are so many departments..It's in a huge area. And i have made few friends here." and Geet smiled

" Maan .. What about the house?" Geet asked

"Geet tomorrow we have holiday as it's second Saturday..So I'm going to see where the bank society is situated and in which condition the flat is.. If it needs some repair or not..so after that I will inform you.

"Ok Maan..Nitya is waiting to talk to you"

He talked to Nitya

"Dad ..I m missing you..Mamma doesn't allow me to play in park for long in your absence " and Maan smiled listening to the sweet crib of his daughter..

" Mamma is right Nitya..I m not there na so you need to come back to home early.Mamma has so many work to do alone so do what mamma says."

" Ok Dad. Love you" Nitya agreed

"Love you too baby"

Next day Maan went to the Bank Housing society but he was disappointed to see the size of the flat there..

It was a very small two bedroom set.It was too small in the comparison of their present house where they were living till now in Meerut

He thought to search the rented houses on his own but after hearing about the amount of the rent his courage gave up

No decent worth living set was less than 60 thousand.Bank was providing the amount of rs.30.000 as HRA

After roaming for the whole day he returned to the guest house dejected and frustrated. He called Geet

" Geet The flats bank is providing are very small in size..We cannot adjust our whole furniture and other stuff here "

" Oh..Now what?" Geet asked

" I tried to search private rented houses but they are on very high rent..Every decent worth living set is more that 60 thousand."

And Geet's eyes got wider hearing the rent "60 thousand?..That too par month? How can we afford this much rent Maan?"

" I'm also thinking the same." Maan worriedly told her And sensing his worried sound she thought for a moment and said

" Hmmm.. Maan don't worry.. Do one thing..Book the flat in the bank society..We will be shifting there only..We can't afford rented house at any cost"

" But Geet..How we will adjust?"

" I have a solution..We will dispose off some of our furniture..Will keep only what is required there minimum.. I can't see you this much worried for just a house. I want to shift with you as soon as possible..I think it's just first problem.. and I m sure there will be more problems too. Mumbai seems actually an expensive city. And we have to adjust in many ways there so I have decided to shift as soon as possible..We both will face the situation together."

" Are you sure Geet? Think one more time"

" I have decided Maan.. No need to think one more time.and most importantly me and Nitya want to be with you as soon as possible"

" Ok Geet on Monday I will give my confirmation for the flat. Though I m not satisfied but right now we don't have any other option."

Though Maan had agreed but he was not satisfied with the situation..Till now they were living in spacious houses as they were in small towns so specious houses were available at affordable rent but here in Mumbai he found it impossible to fine such an open house.

It was Sunday evening and Maan received a call from Dev

" hey Maan..Dev here.. What's up?"

" Nothing Dev.. Just watching the TV."

" Why don't you come to us? Join us on dinner..You will meet my family too."

Maan thought for a minute and said yes as he was getting bore in the GH.

He asked for the address and Dev sent him his location..Maan hired a cab and reached the place and found that it was not any bank society*

( Bank had many societies around Mumbai*)

It was a fully constructed house..He was received by Dev at the gate and was led to the first floor of the house..Maan was stunned to see the house..It was a three BHK floor ..Maan looked around and could not stop himself from praising it..

" You have a beautiful house Dev."

" Thanks Maan"

" Is it your parental house?" He knew that that a bank officer like him and dev could not make such a luxurious house with their loan limit also

" No Maan .. My parents live in Pune ..This is the rented house. and Maan was shocked to hear that

" Rented??..But Dev rents here are so high..How do you manage?"

And Dev smiled

" Not me Maan..My wife manages this."

Is she working in some private company? As i know people working in private company get a handsome salary"

And Dev laughed

" No Maan she doesn't work. She treats herself like a queen of the house. She loves to enjoy her life"

Maan was surprised to know

And few minutes later a lady entered the drawing room holding a trey with two glasses of water in it

Maan stood and folded her hands

" Namastey."

Before he could say anything else Dev stopped him

" Maan she is our maid Seeta"

And Maan was embarrassed

" Sorry." and sat back on his place.. Seeta served the water to Maan nad Dev

" Memsaab ko bhejo. Tell her that Maan is here."

" Ji Saab'

After few minutes another lady entered the room and Maan's eyes fell on her..She was a modern and fashionable lady.She came near them and Dev introduced her to Maan

" Maan meet Meera..My wife."

And Meera forwarded her hand towards him

" Hi Maan"

And Maan shook his hand with her

" Hi Meera.. This is for Ansh". he handed some chocolates to Meera and asked " Where is he?"

"He is watching his favourite cartoon show." She informed and asked Seeta to serve the dinner

Ansh joined them for the dinner and Dev asked him to wish Maan and he wished him animatedly as if he was not much interested to meet and wish him..Maan smiled to see him and talked him about his school and other things

He asked the name of his school and he told that he was studying in XYZ school

On the dinner table Maan could see many dishes and could judge that the food prepared was far more than needed. And he was surprised to think if they were going to use this food for next two days?

And even after having so many dishes Ansh was cribbing for not cooking his favourite food and Meera ordered seeta to prepare his favourite dish..

And he was more shocked when after the dinner Meera asked seeta to take all the leftover food to her home for her family..

After spending some more time with them he came to GH thinking about Dev's family which was quite opposite of his own family..

Next day Maan applied for the flat for his family but Dev's beautiful house was dancing in his eyes. He was feeling unhappy within while giving his consent to the flat

Maan applied for the leaves to shift the family and after two weeks Geet and Nitya were shifted to Mumbai..They had disposed some of their furniture and other things off before shifting.

And Dev invited them again on dinner as a welcome gesture..And like Maan Geet too was impressed with the beauty of the house and complimented Dev and Meera for maintain the house so beautifully.. and they both thanked her with a proud smile..

Nitya wished Dev and Meera even without being told by her parents. Ansh was still in his room watching his favourite cartoon show..

" Seeta take Nitya to Ansh's room..She can watch TV there"

" No Aunty I won't.. I have seen my favourite show..and I don't watch TV for long time..Mamma says that it harms our eyes." Nitya told and Dev was awe stuck by looking at that girl while Meera just shrugged her shoulders

"Ansh never moves from in front of TV until he watched his all favourite shows. He creates a mess if asked to study and play outside of in the park. I can't handle his crying to let him do what he wants."

Nitya does what me and Maan ask her to do..She never creates any problem to us'. Geet proudly caressed Nitya's cheek and looked at Maan and Maan smiled too

" Well. She is really very sweet kid Geet.. Ansh never listens to us in this matter" Dev said looking at Meera but Meera seemed unaffected by his look

Geet with a smile looked at Nitya.

" She know mamma talks for her good only."

Maan's eyes fell on Meera then he looked at Geet. Unintentionally Maan compare Geet and Meera.. Meera was dressed up better than Geet even though she was the host and Geet was the guest.

And on the dinner table Dev and Meera saw Nitya having the food silently and cleanly without spoiling her clothes..Where as Ansh was again making a fuss for having his favourite food..

On the way back to home Dev's family was the topic of their chat

" Geet.. We must appreciate Meera to manage everything so well.. Dev is earning as much as Iearn..Still she is maintaining everything perfectly..Can't we do the same?"

" I don't think the same Maan..We cannot afford so much luxuries within such limited source.. At least I can't maintain such high status.. We could not afford it even if we were in Meerut. I don't think they can manage this in their salary" Geet gave him a look

" What do you mean Geet?"

" I mean to say Maan that they may have some other source of income too.. Such luxuries cannot be obtained with your income alone."

" You mean to say that Dev has some other sources of income?"

And nodded "Not sure but I guess yes."

" I don't think so.. I never heard him talking to anyone on phone related some other money earning issue."

" May be Maan..But I'm not convinced."

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Their house was settled perfectly.. The search for Nitya's school was going on side by side..

Maan went to the school to buy the adimssion farm for her admission in which Ansh was studying..But when he inquired about the fee, the earth moved beneath his feet.. It was highly unexpected. Geet came to know about that and asked Maan to admit Nitya in some affordable school..

"But Geet.. Nitya will not feel good..How will she learn other things? Like extracurricular activities and other hobbies?"

" You don't worry Maan.. I will see other sources for those activities.. I m sure we can get some good classes for that in her holidays. it will save our money and I don't want my daughter to feel inferior in front of those rich kids who study in that high standard school. so she will go to the school where the kids of the parents like us study"

Maan looked at her for few moments and by a look on her face he knew that she would not listen to him now so they admitted Nitya in central school in their locality..It had good reputation among middle class society and was known for good results..

One day Geet said to Maan

" Maan now everything is settled in our life here..I think we should invite Dev and Meera on dinner.''

Maan heard her and thought for a minute

" Umm.. I will talk to Dev."

" OK." Geet got assured that he would invite them.But Maan thought otherwise

He compared his living standard with Dev and felt little inferior about himself..So he did not talk to Dev about it..

Whenever Geet asked him he excused every time with one or the other excuse.

And Geet believed him. She did not have the nature to have any doubt on him..Least she knew that her husband was changing with each passing day.

Maan and Dev were working one day and all of a sudden Dev said to him

" Maan.. today I m coming to your home for dinner."

" What?" Maan was shocked

" What happened Maan? You don't want me to come and join you and Geet for dinner? Actually Meera is at her parents' home and Seeta is also on the leave today.. But don't worry if you don't want then I.."

Before Dev could complete Maan stopped him..

" NO Dev ..Nothing is like that..You are most welcome.. I m informing Geet about you."

" Thanks Maan"

Maan informed Geet

He was little nervous while taking Dev to his house

He knew that Dev was leading a very nice life full of luxuries where as his family was living just like a bank employee lives..Simple and ordinary Life..

He knew very well about Geet too.. She wasn't a woman who liked to waste anything just because it was to impress others or show off. He was thinking about the reaction of Dev after seeing their house and food..

He pushed the door bell of the house and Geet opened the door..

And with a smile she welcomed them..

Dev gave a look to the house and with a smile said to Geet

" Nice home Geet."

" Thanks Dev . Have a seat and feel at home."

" Yeahh sure."

Maan and Dev settled in to the small sofa which was kept in a corner of the drawing cum dining room

" Where is Nitya?" Dev asked and Geet told him that she was playing in the park of the society with her friends

" Has she made friends here too? That's really quick. Ansh never tries to make friends." Dev said

" yeahh ..Because I send her daily to play in the park and make friends herself.. By doing this she learns to interact with people." Geet replied him and served hot tea for all of them..

Maan was sitting quite as he did was still not out of his inferiority complex. .The decor of Dev's house was playing in front of his eyes and he was now comparing the both..

Door bell again rang and Geet opened the door..It was Nitya ..She came in and wished Dev politely

" Good evening Uncle.. Where is Ansh?" Nitya asked him and he told her that he was at her nani's house

Dev handed a Barbie doll set to her and she gladly took that and thanked him..

" Woww it's my favourite Barbie doll uncle.. Thank u so much."

And all the elders smiled to see the excitement of Nitya..

Dinner was served and as Maan had thought Geet had cooked just two dishes with one dish of curd and salad Though it was sufficient for four persons but Maan felt little low as he was comparing the dinners they had at Dev's house, The crockery and cutlery was very ordinary too where as he clearly remember that Meera used expensive crockery and cutlery for them..

He looked at Geet who was busy in serving hot and crispy chapattis to them..

Dev started to eat the food and could not stop himself from praising the food..

" It's amazing Geet.. Food is just wowww.. I feel as if I m eating such a tasty and homely food after ages." Dev said while munching the food and Maan looked at him..He did not see any artificiality in his voice he was genuinely enjoying the food..

And Geet thanked him with a smile

" But Dev..The food we ate at your place was very nice and tasty too." Maan said

" You may have found that tasty Maan as seeta cooks good food..but the feel of love and care is missing in that.. You are really lucky Maan..Your family seems very cozy."

Dev said while taking a deep breath..and Maan took Dev's statement as his modesty as he thought that Dev did not want to show that he was leading a superior life than them.

After having the dinner Geet served them with cold fruit custard which Dev liked a lot and told that it was his favourite desert. Dev left after thanking Geet for a beautiful evening..

" Geet I think we should buy a nice dining set to serve the guests..This one is quite old now.. I clearly remember that it was given by your friends as gift in our marriage. "

Maan said looking at Geet and she looked back at him

" Why we should Maan? You know na that we don't have enough space to keep things and secondly this dining set has an emotional value for me..It makes me remember my friends whenever I use it." Geet replied to him unaware of anything running in his mind.

Though Maan knew that Geet was right and he also was aware of his financial status but he was not able to get rid of that inferiority complex which had captured his mind since he met with Dev and went to his house.. One thing he was not able to understand that how Dev and Meera were managing to lead such a good life

He once or twice tried to ask Dev indirectly the secret of his life style. Dev told him that it was all because of Meera that they were leading that life and thus Maan had started to compare Meera and Geet too

He knew that Geet was more beautiful than Meera but The way Meera presented herself in front of the people was much impressive than Geet.. He found everyone complimenting her for her nice sense of dressing and fashion and he could see a proud smile on the face of Meera and Dev..

It was a party hosted by the office on Diwali

All the employees with family were invited at that party.

He introduced Geet to his friends and colleagues and Geet met with all of them keeping a smile on her face..Nitya was with her holding her hand..She too greeted all of them with a smile and everyone praised that sweet gestures of Nitya. They saw Dev and Meera entering the party hall. Every eye fell on them..They walked inside of the hall with hand in hand and Seeta was following them holding the hand of Ansh..

Meera and Dev shook hands with everyone and Maan could see admiration in the eyes of his colleagues and jealousy in the eyes of their wives..

" Hi Meera.. Hi Dev " Geet greeted both of them and Meera replied with a smile

" Hey Geet..how are you?"

And they both started to chat..

Maan observed both of them from a distance where he was standing with Dev having their drinks..

Both of them were wearing sarees still both were looking different..

Geet was wearing a silk saree with a matching blouse stitched in a very simple way..Geet chose the silk saree because the party had a festive motive where as Meera was wearing a chiffon saree which was almost see thru and everyone could see the cuts and curves of her body thru her see thru saree and almost invisible blouse.

He did not have any bad intention for Meera in his mind as he knew that she was Dev's wife who was his friend. But he felt little jealous seeing Dev getting compliments from their colleagues for having such a modern wife. They also praised Meera for her capabilities to handle everything so perfectly..and Maan could sense the jealousy factor clearly in their praising. He himself was passing thru the same path..

He in his inferiority complex could not see that Geet had mingled with other ladies till now and was talking to them with a smile on her face.. Ladies were also talking to her nicely where as Meera was standing beside Geet sipping her drink.. She was not talking to them but just passing a short smile to them every now and then.

Nitya also had started to play with the children of her age where as ansh was still sitting with Seeta in a corner who was taking care of him. Ansh was talking to her with irritated face as if he wasn't happy to be there.

"I want to go back to home..I m missing my favourite shows..It's so boring here." He cribbed But some how seeta was managing him alone..Meera was not even looking at them..

Dinner was served and he saw Meera and Dev having their food together.. Ansh was being taken care by Seeta so they both were peacefully having there dinner while as Geet was sitting with him but her full concentration was on Nitya to see if she was having her food properly or not.. She wasn't in the mood to have dinner as she wanted to play with her hew found friends But Geet had caught her with her and insisted her to have her food first..Maan was little annoyed today at her as he was feeling jealous seeing Dev and Meera enjoying the time together. Today Dev has given him one more point to make him feel more inferior in front of him..

Party was over and they were heading towards their home..Geet praised the party as she felt good to be there for the first time after shifting to Mumbai.. She had made few good friends today with whom she could chat later on phone or meet because few of them was from their society only ..and she hadn't meet them as they lived in another block of the society

She found him lost while she was chatting to him only..Nitya had slept as she was tired..

" Maan.. Where are you lost?" Geet asked him when she found him lost

And Maan snapped out of his thoughts..

" It's nothing Geet.'He replied in short while thinking something in his mind

After a pause he said

" Geet.

And she looked at him..

" Ummm.. I want you to stitch some sleeveless blouses like Meera was wearing." Maan looked at her with a hope in his eyes as he knew that she loved to live simple

And Geet's eyes widened

" What? Are you ok Maan? She touched his forehead "No you don't have any fever." Saying this she started to laugh

" What's there to laugh? Maan asked feeling irritated

" What else I can do Maan other than laughing..? You remember when we were newly married? I had few low cut blouses in my wardrobe.. One day I wore one of them and went to attend a wedding at one of our relative's place..and that day you were so irritated as every male eyes was focused on me only. And you felt so protective towards me that you warned me not to wear such blouses ever in future.. Though I loved those styles but I accepted what you wanted and never wore any revealing dress.."

Maan now remembered that incident and smiled a little remembering those moment when he felt possessive for his wife

" Now what happened Maan that you saying me again?..But I'm really sorry Maan that I cannot do this again..You know today I could see everyone staring at Meera with weird eyes as if they were eating her with their eyes. I was feeling awkward for her but she and Dev were so normal..May be it's the effect of living in such a big city..I'm not used to it now Maan. I m really sorry"

Geet clearly told him and he realised in a way that she was right..She just was following what he asked her and it was not possible for her to accept his every command every time. She was not any newly married or a teenage girl and had her own individual identity now who knew what is right and what is wrong for her..

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Part-2

Time was passing slow for Maan because even after his lot of efforts he could not be able to increase the standard of their lifestyle. Though Geet and Nitya were happy with their life They were loving this city now as they were able to explore so many things here..Nitya was learning new things everyday.. Geet's guidance was helping her to know every good and bad thing.. So opposite to Maan their time was passing fast..

Nitya's annual exams were over and she told Geet that her friends were going to join a summer camp where they had to stay for a week and at the weekend they would be joining by their parents to spend the weekend while camping and playing games and participating with them in some competition..

She handed her the pamphlet which was distributed in their school today..Geet checked all the details..The activities were nice and were going to help the kids in gaining their knowledge..But her eyes were big seeing the charges for registration for that summer camp..

Amount asked to pay was Rs. 50,000..

Geet was going to say No but she found Nitya looking at her with hopeful eyes..She thought for a moment and said

" Nitya..let's ask dad for it Ok?""

" OK Mamma"" she agreed and started to wait for Maan eagerly though she knew that he would be coming after few hrs as it was not even evening..Geet was observing her and hoped in her heart if she could fulfil her daughter's this wish..

Today Nitya did not switch the TV on even for her favourite cartoon nor she went to play out as she was waiting for her dad only.. Door bell rang and before Geet could open the door Nitya ran and opened the door

Maan saw her and picked her up in his arms..He caressed her face.

" Good evening dad."She greeted him warmly and excitedly ank kissed his cheeks

And Maan was amazed to see her like this

"Is something special today Nitya? You are showering extra love on your dad?"

" Nitya let dad get freshen first baby." Geet asked Nitya and Maan looked at Geet and asked her with his eyes to know what the matter was and Geet shook her head signalling her that it was nothing..

He went to get fresh and came back..Nitya was waiting for him impatiently.. Geet had prepared coffee for him and herself..

Nitya was looking at him and he realised that she was trying to tell him something

" Come to me Nitya" He said and she jumped into his lap.. forwarded the pamphlet towards him and he after reading knew what she wanted to tell him and why Geet was silent.

" Nitya.. you want to join this summer camp?"

" yess dad" Nitya got excited with his one question." My many friends are going to join it." She told him and she looked at him..Maan could see the ray of hope in those little eyes.. He knew that it was a huge amount for them to spend just for a week.. But Nitya was child and cold not understand their problem.. Already full of guilt Maan felt more guilty..He looked at Geet who was looking at him with worried eyes

He looked at her daughter and wife one by one and then said looking in to Nitya's eyes

" Ok Nitya..You can join this camp."

" Really dad?'' Nitays eyes started to twinkle..

" yes sweetheart." He kissed him and in return got a tight hug and kiss from his daughter who was so much excited after getting a nod from her dad while as Geet was still looking at Maan with worried eyes..

At night after Nitya slept.. Geet found Maan lost and she knew the reason

"Maan .. What are you thinking? About Nitya?'
Geet asked and he looked at her

"Geet she was so much excited that I could not say no to her..But the problem is that the amount is big and it will disturb our budgetof monthly savings..We have to deposit the money in our monthly saving schemes and medical insurance schemes and if we do not do it, all the benefits of the schemes will be forfeited.. I do not want this to happen either nor want to make Nitay sad..I'm really feeling guilty for not fulfilling the needs of my family.'' Maan said

And like always Geet was there with her suggestion

"Don't feel guilty Maan.. You are the best father any child can have..I too do not want to spoil her happiness.. I want her to join but know that it out of our affordability.. Umm Maan I have an idea.. What if I sell one or two of my rings?''

" What? Are you out of your mind Geet.?'' Maan asked with anger in his voice..Geet's suggestion made her feel that he was not able to keep his family happy that too for just for mare few thousands..

" What's the harm Maan?..They are lying unused in locker..At least one can be used for it..After all it's for Nitya. Though we have bank balance too but I don't want to use it for this purpose so thought to sell my ring.''

" No way Geet.. You don't worry..I will see in to this matter. Now sleep It's getting late.''

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Maan was sitting silently. His eyes were on Dev who was working in his system..He observed Dev from head to toe..Everything he was wearing was branded that too some elite class brands..From his specs to his shoes ..Everything was telling it's price itself..

and Dev noticed him starring at him self

" Maan.. Where are you lost today?''

"It's nothing Dev.''

"Come on Maan..I can see that your disturbed for something.''

" I feel jealous of you Dev.''

" What? Dev laughed " But why?''

" Because you are very lucky.''

" How do you know that I am lucky?''

" Just look at yourself and you will understand everything.'' Maan inhaled deeply

" But you know Maan? I think you are the luckiest man of the planet. You have such a cute and intelligent daughter and very understanding wife.''

" All looks good from far Dev but in real it's not. It's you who are the luckiest man who spends his life so comfortably with i limited sources of income where as me and Geet are hardly managing our normal life in my salary in this big city..Earlier it wasn't a problem when we were in a small town. May be Geet is not able to manage well here. "

Dev looked at him and asked

" is there any problem Maan?''

" Dev..You are my friend ..right?'' Maan asked Dev and Dev was surprised

" Off course I'm your friend Maan..You have any doubt?''

" Then please tell me the secret of your success..I m not able to understand the way you and Meera manage your life..This Mumbai is too much expensive but it seems it doesn't matter to you. You both are still living a very nice and lavishly life style.. I m tired of thinking how to improve the life of my family..I really want to follow you.'' Maan looked at him and colour of Dev's face paled

" I have already told you Maan that all you see is just because of Meera. She is the one who is responsible for this life of us'' Dev said in little low voice

" What do you mean Dev?''

" Nothing Maan..Now tell me why you are so much upset and asking me the tips to earn money?''

Maan pushed himself in to his office seat " Actually Nitya wants to join a summer camp in her summer vacations ..but the charges are quite high and I don't have this much spare money in my account. She is so much excited for this camp and I me and Geet don't want to disappoint her by our denial.'' Maan was little frustrated when he shared his problem with Dev

Dev looked at him for a moment and took his cheque book out of his bag and asked

" How much money you need Maan for Nitya?''

" What do you mean Dev?'' Maan was confused seeing the cheque book in his hand

"I asked how much money you need for that camp?I m giving it to you.''

" No Dev you are getting it wrong. I don't want money from you.. I will manage myself.'' Maan was ashamed of himself for sharing his problem with him..

" You just asked if I'm your friend or not.. Right Maan? And Now I m asking you..I 'm your friend or not Maan?''

Maan nodded and replied with a meek sound

"Yes you are''

. "So it's just like a friend helping his friend in his need..I m not donating it..I m lending this money to you..You may return it later when ever it's convenient for you''

Maan looked at him and then at the cheque in his hand.. He was going to deny but Nitya's innocent face played in front of his eyes and he held the cheque with a hesitation.

He gave that cheque to Geet and Geet looked at him baffled seeing it

"How did you manage?'' She looked at him with some worried eyes

" Don't look at me like this Geet..I haven't stolen it.. Dev had money in his account and he helped us'' I will return his money in installments and Geet was more shocked

" Maan don't you think that there is something fishy?''

" What do you mean Geet?''

" I mean to say Maan that he may have been doing something wrong.'' Geet put her doubt and Maan snapped at her

"Come on Geet. If someone is leading a happy and comfortable life which is better than us that doesn't mean that he is doing something wrong to avail that..it can also be possible that his wife is more smart and intelligent who is managing this much with his earnings. It also may be possible that you are not that smart to manage your house well. Otherwise the difference could not be this big between them and us.''

and Geet was stunned to hear him.. He was indirectly blaming her for their ordinary life style..She felt the core of her eyes burnt but controlled her.

" I m really sorry Maan.. I did not mean to hurt you. I will deposit the registration charges of that summer camp tomorrow..Nitya will be so happy..Thanks for arranging the money.'' Saying this Geet left to kitchen to prepare dinner..

That evening was spent silently in that house..It was the voices of Nitya who was so much exited to hear that she was going to join the summer camp.

Geet was noticing that Maan was behaving little different from many days but today she understood the reason of his frustration. She did not want to increase his frustration so she kept mum. But somewhere in her heart she felt hurt.

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Nitya had gone on her summer camp which was going to be continued for one week..At Friday nights the mothers of the kids were to join them to spend the night with their kids and on Sat the fathers were asked to join them as there were few games and competitions which was going to be joined by the parents and At Sunday the kids were to be leaving to their homes with their parents

Nitya was not at home and Maan was coming late from office to avoid Geet. Somewhere in his mind he knew that he was wrong for accusing her but he was not ready to accept that. Geet was feeling alone these days. She daily waited for him but he looked tired and frustrated when he was back from the office so Geet did not disturb him much..

It was Friday and Maan was ready to go to office

" Maan.. Today I have to go to Nitya's summer camp.. I will not be at home in the evening..I m giving you the duplicate set of the keys. You don't have to worry about your dinner I will keep it in fridge You just need to warm it.''

Maan was listening to her talking to him but he did not respond in return..

Geet kept telling him

" and please keep in your mind that you too have to join me and Nitya tomorrow as there are few games and competitions in which kids have to participate with parents''

She came near him holding the keys and the Photo ID Card provided by the camp authority for the parents. While taking the keys and card Maan's eyes fell on her..She looked little low and sad and he realised that he was not talking to Geet nicely since the day they had that argument but she was behaving very normal with him and he was neglecting her for that whole week..In spite of his negligence towards her she did not complained for anything..He felt bed and a strong guilt feel hit him..He took the keys from her and left to go

" Maan..Me and Nitya will be waiting for you tomorrow.. She will feel happy to see you there.''

He heard Geet and without uttering a word he entered the lift. Geet felt her eyes wet but she ignored his indifference and got busy in her work as she had to prepare something for him to have in dinner in her absence

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It was evening and Maan returned from office..He pushed the door bell but there was no response ..He pushed one more time but when the door did not open he remembered that Geet told him in the morning about her going to the summer camp.. He searched the keys in his bag and entered the house after opening the door.. He after freshening up went in to the kitchen but empty house was not bearable..He wanted to make coffee but he was feeling not to make it for himself.. and he thought to join Dev and Meera for the evening. He thought to inform Dev but then changed his mind.. He decided to give a surprise visit to them..

He pressed the bell on Dev's house and after two or three bells Dev opened the door and seeing Maan on his door his face became pale and he looked little tensed

" What happened Dev? You don't seem happy to see me?

" You did not inform me before coming here? Dev asked and Maan was shocked to hear him but smiled at him

"There is something Dev which is called surprise. And Surprises are not to be told in advance. And secondly friends do not need to inform in advance He laughed and he entered the house and he was shocked to see the condition of the house..

Everything was scattered here and there..Not a single thing was at place.. Carpet of the drawing room was not at actual position. It was lying under the table with the folded edges . Cushions of sofa set were lying on the floor..Ansh was crying loudly as he was hungry and wanted to eat his favourite pizza..Few used cups were kept here and there..Crushed biscuits were lying on the floor..It seemed as if house was not being cleaned for many days

" What's going on Dev? Where is Meera? Why the condition of the home is so much disturbed? Is she fine? Maan could not stop himself from asking few questions..

Dev who was tired of something.. He took a deep breath and told him

''Meera is not at home..She has gone to beauty parlour.

" at this time?''

Maan looked in to his watch it was quite late and Meera was not at home when her husband and son were hungry and tired after a long day..

" Yeahh because she has some kitty party tomorrow morning.''

" And seeta? Where is she?'' Maan asked

" She is on leave of two weeks as she goes to her hometown for two weeks every year''

" If Seeta is on leave then Meera should have take care of home and family''Maan looked at him feeling pity for Dev

"I wish she could'' Dev was frustrated "but you know she doesn't know how to make a good coffee or tea leave food aside''

"What? Maan was hell shocked "But you always gave her the credit of your happy life Dev? What was that for?''

"Yes I gave all the credits to her but not for our happy life Maan but for making my life hell with her nonstop demands for getting all those luxuries. I just did not want to make my life a joke in front of all so I was hiding everything from all of you''

Till now Dev was successfully was presenting himself and Meera as great couple but sudden arrival of Maan unveiled everything..He knew that he could not hide it any more from him

And Maan could not believe his ears .Dev looked at him and gave him a mocking smile

''You must be wondering Maan that how I was managing my luxurious life? Then listen Maan...Everything you see is on loan and credits. My whole salary is flushed out in the first week of the month only. I have taken maximum personal loan from office too to fulfill our needs that too on a high rate of interest''

Maan could see a completely dejected Dev in front of him..He was sounding too much frustrated as if he was tired of his life. That's why he was spilling beans in front of him as he had seen the actual state of him and his house..That's why Dev always told him to come to his house after informing him only.

"But Dev if you have so much problems with Meera then why you are fulfilling her all the illogical demands? Why don't you tell her that you can't afford them?''

"Because I can't do that.. I love her and we had a love marriage..She is from a rich back ground..After our wedding her family broke their ties from us.. and I promised her to take care of her, to fulfil her every demand..and see this is the result of that promise. Her family after two years accepted us seeing us leading a luxurious life''

"If you are so much in financial problem then how did you help me that day?''

Dev stammered hearing his question

"Aac..actually that day I had some money in my account for some reasons so thought to help you. You were in dire need of money''

Maan's head was spinning listening to Dev..He one more time looked at the condition of the house.He was not able to stand there anymore.He wanted to puck to see the condition.. It was not like any dream house ..For him it was some litter house at that moment. He wanted to run from there as soon as he could.. He excused himself from there and returned back to his own home..

He opened the door and a gush of cosiness spread thru his veins as he had a look on his neat and clean house. Geet was not at home but he could feel her thru the tidy condition of the house. Everything was on it's place and that view made him to feel good and cosy..He went in to the kitchen and found a sticky note on the gas stove from Geet

" Food is in fridge..warm it in MW before eating and keep the leftover food back in to the fridge.And Maan please try to come to the camp tomorrow ..It's for Nitya.''

- Geet

He moved his fingers on her name and felt as if she was in front of him and he regret in his mind for hurting her for her no fault..

He ate the food and felt satisfied after eating it..Though it was cooked in the morning but it was giving him an unknown sense of satisfaction which he could not describe in words..

While lying in his bed he was thinking not about Geet but himself.. Today he realised that he was behaving like an idiot. He was like that deer in the desert who assumed the shining sand as water and feeling thirty. He ran toward it to quench his thirst but when he reached at that place he found it again far away from him and he ran again in search of water. But to his bad luck he could never find it and finally he died with thirst..

In the same manner he was running after to get a luxurious life which was nothing but only a mirage. He thanked to his stars that he realised it before he could die of the thirst for money..He was actually feeling lucky for himself that he had Geet in his life who would not let him rum after that Mirage..

The mirage,which had created an illusionary and imaginary world around him in which he was almost trapped and had started to hurt his wife.

He turned towards another side and looked at that side of the bed..it was Geet's side but today she wasn't there.He moved his hand on her pillow and felt as if she was there and was looking at him with a smile

He blinked his eyes to check if she was there in actual or if he was just imagining her..He again found her smiling at him..He put his hand on her face he closed his eyes feeling his soft skin under his palm

" I am sorry Geet.''

He opened his eyes but she wasn't there.. and he smiled at his stupidity..How she could be there? ..She was with Nitya today..He was now waiting eagerly for the time when he would be joining his family at summer camp.

Next day Maan went to office and he was going to join Geet and Nitya after the lunch..
Dev was working silently today..He did not have anything to show in the name of high status today. Maan knew the truth of his life now and he saw Maan working with a smile on his face..

" Maan you look happy today ..Anything special?''

" No Dev... Actually I m waiting for the lunch time to be over..I m going to join Nitya and Geet on camp ..We will stay there only for the night''

" That's great.'' Dev replied "I m sorry Maan''

Maan heard Dev and looked at him

" Why Dev?''

" For whatever you saw yesterday''

" Oh for that? No Dev you don't need to be. I m actually thankful to you''

And Dev looked at him shocked and Maan smiled

" Forget what ever happened Dev..I promise I won't share it with anyone here.'' and Dev smiled

They were working and there was sudden movements..Before they could understand anything they saw few policemen coming towards them..

"Mr. Dev ..You are under arrest ''

And not only Dev's colour went pale but Maan was shocked too..

Dev gulped his saliva

" But for which crime? What I have done?'' Dev asked and he looked at Maan who was looking at him with his wide eyes

And they both heard the police inspector

" For creating the forgery in accounts of the customer to cheat them for money.. Crime branch was keeping an eye on you since long and finally we have full proofs against you.''

And Maan felt as if he was pushed from the edge of the cliff..He could not believe that Dev was a fraud.

Dev did not have anything to say. He came near Maan and said

" I know Maan what are you thinking right now about me..Whatever I did was my own need but I never cheated you in friendship..I know that the money I gave you was not earned by good source..it was the same money which i earned by cheating the customers..But I consider you my good friend that's why I did not tell you how I earned the money even you asked for it..I did not want to another Dev to be born.. You are very lucky Maan that you have Geet with you. She is your true life partner who knows how to live happily in her life without having big dreams and desires.. I will always pray for you and your family's bell being..and I m not feeling guilty for what I did because I knew well what I was doing. I was well aware of the outcome of my deeds and the result of those frauds'' He said looking at the police inspector. Then he looked back at Maan."If possible. Take care of Meera till I come back. Good bye Maan''

Maan was looking at Dev like a dumb and watching Dev moving ahead towards the police inspector..

And they all moved out of the office by keeping Dev with them..

Maan was not in the situation to understand anything. The turns of the events were so much fast that he was feeling stuck between them.

He just wanted to rum from there.. Everyone was discussing about Dev in office and he not able to hear them anymore came out of the office to take some fresh air..

He was waiting for the time to fly and to join his family..

Finally it was lunchtime and he almost ran towards his car. He just wanted to hold his family near him to feel little peace after witnessing that ugly side of the life

He reached the camp and showing his ID card to the guard he entered the camp area.. and he felt good to see the arrangement..It was decorated with so many colourful themes. And it was situated at the sea shore on a safe distance from sea water..

He searched for Nitya or Geet.. He asked someone and was informed that one competition was going on there..He was directed towards that side..

He reached and could not stop himself from smiling as Geet and Nitya both were running holding hands.. A spoon was held by it's stick between their lips and a lemon was kept in the spoon and they both were walking very carefully to protect the lemon from falling..Other kids and their mothers were walking faster than then but by doing so one of them was not able to hold the lemon in spoon..so one by one many pair of kids and mother eliminated..there were three pair of kids and their mothers were left..Geet and Nitya were one of those..

"Come on Nitya..Come on Geet..Buck up fast''

Geet and Nitya heard Maan and their enthusiasm was double now. And near the end line of the race the girl of other pair who was walking parallel to them lost her balance and the lemon was on the ground.. Geet and Nitya were declared the winner

Nitya came running towards him and he picked her up in his arms

"I missed you Dad.'' Nitya told him and he reciprocated her feeling

"I missed you to baby.. So How was the stay here?''

"It was so good dad..I enjoyed here. But missed you and mamma a lot''

Geet too came near them and smiled seeing at him..and in return he smiled back.

Next competition was to make a sand castle and both the parents were to help their kids in that work. Maan and Geet both were trying to make the castle.. Geet was little successful in making little bit base of the castle but Maan unexpectedly sneezed and the plastic bowl which he was holding slipped from his hand and fell on the base and all the work done by Geet was in vein now..Nitya and Geet looked at it once and then at Maan with little anger to which Maan gave them an apologetic look

" Sorry..I didn't know how it happened''

Geet and Nitya shook their heads as nothing could be done and started again to built the castle again.Maan let Geet and Nitya lead in making the castle and he followed what they told him to do as he did not want to repeat his blunder to spoil the efforts of his two girls

After the hard work of more than two hrs the castle was ready.. It was looking like a palace. Geet had brought a doll family set with her to decorate the castle.. It was a set of three doll which included a male, a female and a baby doll..

Maan saw that dad, Mamma and Nitya was written on those dolls respectively. Geet placed the dolls in the castle..and the castle was looking like a home now with the family members sitting in it..

Maan had a look at it and a wide smile played on his face seeing the efforts of Geet.. He knew that she was the perfect wife and perfect mother along with a nice human being who knew only to make other smile forgetting her own miseries..

Geet's eyes met with him and she could see some admiration in his eyes for her.and she instantly forgot everything which happened in last week...She felt good to see him smiling

" Mammaa they both heard Nitya and looked at her.."It's so beautiful mamma.. I m sure we are going to win..Just look around. Our home is most beautiful home''

Maan took her in his lap as they were sitting on the sand

"You are right Nitya..Our home is the most beautiful home of the world because it is made by your mamma.'' and he looked at Geet as if he gave all the credits to her for making their home most beautiful..Geet looked at him confused..She was thinking in her mind

''What happened to him? he was so much upset with me for many days and now he is smiling and praising me?''

Nitya was sleeping She was tired of the activities of the day so was in deep sleep..She saw Maan after one whole week so slept in his lap only..He settled her in the bed made on the floor inside of the tent and tucked her nicely as it was the sea shore and was bit cooler than the day.. He was silent and lost in thoughts. Geet noticed his silence and she called him

" Maan''

" Hmm'' He responded and looked at her

"What happened?'' She asked

"Geet.. Can you come with me for few minutes?''

And she nodded

They looked at Nitya once and found her sleeping hard

They walked out of the tent.

"Maan we can't go far.. Nitya can wake up and look for us''

"Ok..We will be right here only.. Can we have small walk?''

They were walking and Maan was still silent..Geet noticed his silence

"Maan.''

He looked at her

"Want to say something?''

And he halted at his place and than only Geet realised that he was holding her hand .She also stopped and looked at their entangled hands first then at him. And now she was worried..She came closer to him and looked in to his eyes..

before she could ask him she heard him

"Geet..You were right''

"About what Maan?''

"About Dev and Meera''

"Dev and Meera?''

"Today police arrested Dev''

"What?.. But why?'' Geet was shocked

And he narrated everything..Geet was listening to him silently..

He told her everything. She could feel remorse in his voice.

" I'm sorry Geet''

And she was surprised to hear his sorry

"Why you are saying sorry Maan?''

And she was startled when he pulled her to him..He hugged her tightly and hid his face in her shoulder

"For hurting you Geet. For getting angry on you. For comparing you to that unworthy Meera. For everything. I'm really sorry Geet.''

Geet smiled hearing him..It was night and all tents were closed so no one could see them.. She consoled him by moving her hand on his back and then she parted him away..

"It was your right Maan to get angry on me as I have given you only that authority to hurt me. Because I belong to you and you have every right on me.''

"You are not angry with me?''

"No.''

And Maan was amazed at her softness.. He felt so light in his heart

"But why?''

''Kyunki agar Subah ka bhoola agar sham ko ghar wapis aa jaaye to usko bhoola nahin kahte''

"to kya kahte hain?'' He asked in a naughty tone

Geet with a smile on her lips said

"usko Maan kahte hain'' Saying this she tried to run but she found him holding her hand

"it's late and cold here Maan..let's go'' saying this she moved but he did not let her

He came near her ..Her loose strands were playing with the wind on her face..He tucked them behind her ear and Geet closed her eyes feeling that cold touch on her ears..

"Maan'' she called him slowly

''Hmm''

"We will return Dev's money''

And he looked at her

''I don't want my daughter to enjoy on the money earn by unfair means''

"but''

"No if or but...I will give you my rings. And I have decided so don't try to say anything.''

He felt a determination in her voice and he also knew that it was the only way left so he gave up. He looked at her with a smile

"Why are you looking at me like this?''

"I love you Geet.''

He confessed his love to his wife of 8 years old marriage as if he was confessing it for the very first time

And Geet looked at him with widely open mouth at his open confession in the midst of the summer camp of their daughter. She was surprised to hear those words as Maan was not a man of words she knew..She looked in to his eyes and found various emotions in his eyes as if she was seeing them for the first time..

And she found herself pulled towards him.. His one hand was on her waist and other was on the back of her neck..He was pulling her towards him..

"Maan. Someone can come here.''

"No one will come Geet..Everyone is sleeping''

His eyes were speeking in volumes to her and she surrendered in front of him.. He softly grabbed her lips

And Geet clutched his shirt in her fist

And the kiss which was soft and slow in the beginning turned in to a deep and passionate one..He felt himself lucky to have a wife like Geet as he knew that she would not allow him to go on any path which is not right for them..

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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#88
for this category
we only get some nomination

Ghost of haunted House & Bhoot aaya(teri meri kahani) get maximum nominations - due to this, we not organized any vote... both are winners 👏

and one more thing Arcane Divinity become our second runner up




Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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priyas bhoot aya seiers 3 aka teri meri got maximum votes in horror story of the year
here is few words from her and her readers

priya aka PD words
you story got maximum votes in horror category how did u feel about it
i feel happy thanks to my readers

few words about your story
i I just start bhoot aaya series for khusboo buddy, i try to write horror but at end it become funny, my two starting series of bhoot aaya is written in funny way and now about teri meri kahani, here maan married three times due to uncle wish... he loved family so much...

why maan married multiple tyms in your stories/r he had affairs teri maan sab se differentkyun hai
maan is not only mine , sbka hai
he is lovely human being in teri meri kahani, don't mix questions

cd aka crystal story got equal vting what is your view
i really enjoyed ghost of haunted house, she written more beautifully and am happy for her

aap readers ko itni kyun rulathi hai
i loved when u cried mrs. sanju ,(i hate u pd😡😡) hehe... i loved emotional story in sort
i hope you enjoyed my story , try to come back soon here
for for you all, hope aap bulenge nhi kuch mahino me mujhe

tuh kaha jaa rahi hai
Mrs. sanju, my close friends now where am going, why i taking break...first reason due to less response, second you already know😳😳😳

will any of your story will complete ..will ever complete
i hope complete ho jaayengi ...
hehe😲😲😲(bhagwan jaane)

there is arumous you wantedly cheated and losse the title of cry story of the year..is it true
i not cheated, but my members played dumb actually, i just showed full list of nominations, after counting , yes my stories name selected in this process...
but readers not able to vote properly then what can i do, but i feel soju really deserve this award

tell few words about crysal and her story u r her reader too
crystal is one of slow writer, but she write good and yes, create suspense scene good...i liked first season too and second also enjoying
hope madam give little fast update

pixelflower words

few words about story
It is a great story love the suspense in it ...

few words about writer and her updates
The updates are timely and to the point

did u feel anything missing r the writer expresses perfectly
The expressions r perfect

any particular scene u want in this story
Ghost possessing Maan;s uncle Jugnu

the character u dislike apart from ghost
I don't like Chirag's parents they spoiled his and even Jyyoti's life by the forced marriage
the character u love
Geet ohh she is so cute

nakh aka nadiakhan word

few words about story
I absolutely loved the story though still on going I liked it from the start the concept is amazing

few words about writer and her updates
though in start I was expecting it to be a comedy but Priya Didi made it dramatic one

did u feel anything missing r the writer expresses perfectly
I am loving where it's going though nothing is missing till now but Priya sure knows how to keep ppl on their feets with the update getting intense and mysterious

any particular scene u want in this story I would want to see more closeness between maaneet and more of ghost past
the character u dislike apart from ghost
the character u hate apart from ghost
though there isn't any character I don't like or irritating except the ghost

the character u love
I loved Sasha character in it and her bond with maan was good


thanks for your time😉
Edited by SANJANA9167 - 7 years ago
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CRYSTALS GHOST OF HAUNTED HOUSE STOOD WITH EQUAL VOTES ALONG WITH PRIYAS SO HERE IS FEW WORDS FROM HER




Q. your story ghost of haunted house won horror story of the year. how do u feel about it

Ans. Well! M abhi tak y soch rahi hu ki y kab hua... coz iss baar kya chal raha h anni thread par mujhe koi idea nahi hai... But of-course I'm really-really happy that GHOST OF THE HAUNTED HOUSE (Season-2) won in this category because it shows that you guys are loving my work and that's what makes me happy and gives me a new zeal to continue writing. Thanks to all my readers for making me win in this genre for the second time. Last year it was Season 1 of the same series and this year Season-2.

Q. priya's bhooth aaya3 aka teri meri got equal response...even u r her reader tell few words about her and the story.
Ans. Really happy that Teri-meri also won this along with mine GTHH season 2. As I'm reading this I can definitely say it is a really different story from Pd (Priya's) other works even from its season 1&2 coz it really has some horror elements. And this one has become one of my fav stories from all other works of her coz it had both horror and reincarnation elements in it which I loved. Love you pd for fulfilling my wish and writing not 1 but 2 stories on rebirth.

Q. few words about your story line.
Ans. Hmm! GHOST OF THE HAUNTED HOUSE (Season-2) as the name suggests is the story about a haunted house and the ghost residing in the same and not to forget our very own lovely couple Maaneet. For this story I'm telling few lines which will describe what its all about...

Two soulmates who are modern, passionate and non-believers of ghost & souls will get stuck in something which will left them thinking, force them to believe in something which they don't want to give an ear too...
What will they do now?
Will they believe it?
Or let it pass, ignoring them?
Will they ever come to know why all this is happening?
How will they face it?
Will they ever be able to overcome it?

Q. what inspired you to write on this
Ans. Well! I always gets intrigued with ghost and horror related stories or shows... so thought why not to try myself. So here I am *Wink*

Q. always in haunted series the lead will b the haunted one but in your both series its the third one who is haunted why so?
Ans. Umm! Maybe because I like it this way... *wink*

Q. few words for your readers who made u win and bug u for regular updates
Ans. Guys I love you so much. You guys are one of the reasons why I'm still writing. Your appreciation for my works encourages me to continue with my work even though I'm held up with other things in my life. The way you supports and understands me makes me feel special. So thank you so much my lovely readers and friends for always being there for me and yes last but not the least reading my crap *Giving out a silly smile*

Q. few words for our poll
Ans. I know how many efforts you guys are putting to this poll. And Kudos to you guys for it. Because honestly it's not easy but still you all are doing this. I personally like this poll as though it's for fun but we got to know about many other stories which we don't know even exist on gf. I don't know about others but for me it is like this.

Q. why your stories in blog not on gf any reason
Ans. Okay! That's quite a tricky question I guess. By the way it's your questions or readers? Well! First of all I would like to say the first thing which readers will think when they hear that the story is on blog is that they'll think that it must be password protected as I'll be choosy to select my readers. But you know it's not the case. My blog is open for all. And regarding to your question I would just say that I myself don't know an apt answer for it. It's just that I wanted to shift over blog and so I did. *Wink*

preetymaaneet words
you r reader of ghost of haunted house it is the best horror story of the year..
ghost of the haunted house is one n only series which acc to me is actually on horror concept on IF

what is your view on this..
. i have read many other stories on horror on IF but they didn't justify horror category (no offence to any writer its just my view )

few words about story
ab writer ke bare main kya bolu sabse alsi writer of IF aur updates intni chotu si hoti hai madam ko kitni baar bola hai to use use some bright colours but uski sui toh pink pe atki hui hai sometime i have to use glases n zoom screen to read

few words about writer and her updates
sometimes she use short cut in her stories n kitna suspense create kar deti hai uppar se update bhi nahi deti jaldi jaldi

did u feel anything missing r the writer expresses perfectly any particular scene u want in this story
let writer decide her story i can't say anythink its her imagination i am no 1 to suggest anything to her

the character u dislike apart from ghost
maan's dadi

the character u love
maaneet
maaneet no doubt in that

twinflames aka ritzi words

you r reader of ghost of haunted house it is the best horror story of the year..
its best horror story, so it deserves a good rank

what is your view on this..
I love how the story is moving

few words about story
few words about writer and her updates
writer is amazing & I love all her updates.. & twists in her studies

did u feel anything missing r the writer expresses perfectly
nothing is missing. Penned down really well keeps u glued

any particular scene u want in this story
nothing specific

the character u dislike apart from ghost
none

the character u love
maneet of course

thanks for your time

Edited by SANJANA9167 - 7 years ago

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Posted by: TangledThoughts

4 months ago

Maan Geet SS || The Unyielding Heart||

Hello everyone! I have come back to the forum after a long time. I have been planning a SS on Maan and Geet Amritsar track. The infamous part...

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Posted by: Mahimaan

1 years ago

Geet teaching kis*

OLD PART LINK https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5011127 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5009334 new part on blog who want please...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5011127
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Posted by: Mahimaan

4 years ago

Geet ff do dil part 7 on page 6

Do dil.....

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