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Posted: 7 years ago
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The whole hall was packed with fans and their enthu to hear the voice of their superstar Rock star MSK (28 yrs) who has entered in the singing industry merely a yrs back and was sensationally hit in no time.. with his melodious and heart touching voice, his super heroic looks added more in his charm and thus in no time he was the heartthrob of not only millions of girls but boys also, went gaga over his voice and personality...and MSK became a super rock star...

But, no one new...inside this charming and ever smiling rock star there was a lonely boy, who was deprived of his teenage love that has made him do something and show the world what he actually was capable of doing...His lover's Hitler father snatched his love-Pari away from him and he witnessed how happily Pari got married to some NRI Business Tycoon...

Among millions of the fans who waited for MSK's performance on stage, there stood a unique girl-Geet Khanna(24 yrs)...Perhaps, she was the only craziest fan of MSK...well, as she claimed to be...The girl, who was studious in her school and college life...Now, was a bit spoilt to attend the concerts related to MSK...

She accidentally has come across one of MSK's concerts bunking her class for the first time, on influence of her friends ...that now has made her a complete bunker of her classes whenever MSK's concerts were in question...No matter what...Be that her tests on those days...or exams the next day, she didn't care but made sure, to not to miss MSK's concerts...

So here she was, waiting to see her Crush's one glimpse...and there she saw him...As the crowd started to go crazy when finally his arrival's announcement was made...and he stepped on stage in the next moment...

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Yaara, Yaaraa... yaara!

(Maan opened his close eyes, as he glanced around the audience who was going crazy hearing him perform in front of them all)

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de

(He watched as he started and the audience hummed with him)

Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de

(He smiled at them all and the fans went even crazier, seeing him smiling at them all)

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

(He played with the guitar in his hands and went crazy with the ppl)

Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si iltejaa
Ye meri zamanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai haan...

(He went lost in his past, where he thought of Pari to be the Angel of his life but with sudden happenings she was snatched away from him...A lone tear drop came out from his one eye, alerting him)

Apne karam ki kar adayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main

(And he controlled his feelings...playing a rather harshly with the guitar...He then threw it away to a passerby dancer and danced with a girl from the audience as she jumped on the stage...and Maan let her in)

Geet wasn't the only spectator who wished to be on Her Maan's side rather than the girl, who was quite lucky to dance with him...She laughed at her own folly, how she has become so much attached with MK that, she couldn't bear him with anyone else...

Their first meeting was quite filmy...

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Geet (21 yrs)was lost in the crowd of MK's(25 yrs) concert...Searching her friends she stepped in to the back stage and was hit with something...and in the next moment, she found herself falling down on MK...whose mike was on floor, with Geet on top of MK...and the crowd cheered and whistled...While MK lay under one of his fan's body...as both looked at each other...The Fan was gaping at him with mouth wide open so did her friends, who were cheering a while ago now were watching all that...MK's security personnel came in and tried to get the fan away harshly, when MK's hand raised to stop them...Rather he stood on his feet and offered her his hand with a gentle smile...Geet, who was embarrassed, got to her feet taking his offered hand and muttering a sorry just went back from where she came...

Meera:- Are you mad or what???How can you be so dumb to do such thing... (Geet looked down)

Pinky(went on her dreamy mode):- Hayee... At least she was in MK's arms...

Annie cleared her throat and diverted the talks... She knew girls were mad for her Bhai, her cousin Bhai yet she didn't reveal her true identity to anyone... She wanted to search a perfect match for her heart broken bro first, then she was to reveal her true intentions to her friends...and she noticed Geet...

Geet who accidentally had landed in a mess...was lost in world of her own...Her body was cold as if, she just faced a death...Her heart was beating fast as she thought of the eye contact she had with Rock star MK...And thus, her crush started then...

MK was in car, with his PA cum friend Adi...who was passing him meaningful looks... annoying him...Having enough of his silly looks, Maan finally asked him to speak up... and he did...

Adi:- You are so popular man...Not only in girls but boys also...I envy you...

Maan(smirked):- Really...Take my position then...

Adi:- One day I might... (He looked at the crowd and specially the girls who were going gaga over him)Look at them...All are so crazily in love with you...Why don't you find someone and get settled man???

Maan:- Hmm, for settling down...I need one girl...

Adi:- See naa...There are so many..and that girl is cute...Look at her...The way she is running to catch you...That's unique...Boy, she loves you...

Maan carelessly glanced at his side of window and saw the same girl who kinda spoiled his concert for abt 15 mints...An automatic smile spread on his lips seeing her,and his hand raised to wave at the girl...and saw the reaction too as Geet almost stopped at her place and stared at him ...his car till it was vanished...

Adi:- Baat chalaoon...

Maan:- Shut up... and both laughed...

~~~~

And another such incident followed shortly when MK was to come to her college for his concert...and there again she has collided with him when he was singing and this time he saved her...Errmmm, them from falling by grabbing her from waist...Geet closed her eyes and opened when she found herself in MK's arms...who again smiled at her and waved his hand...

Maan:- This is the second time, we are meeting and rather not so pleasantly...

Geet:- Am...Am sorry...

Maan:- Are you always this clumsy or this is specially for me???

Geet looked away rather embarrassed and he left her to continue with his singing... Her friends made fun of her for making a mockery of herself in front of MK...Geet left the venue crying badly at the repeated insults she faced...

~~~

Maan was going to sit in his van to get his belongings out when he heard sobs...He called his PA who pointed at a girl, who was sitting on floor shedding tears...

Adi:- Hey girl, just get away from here... (He looked at the familiar girl and smirked to Maan who too reached meanwhile) Hey man!!! Its your girl...

Maan didn't understand what Adi said, as he simply left them both alone... while Geet contd to cry...Somehow, he guessed it must be the same girl, so he too sat on floor with her and heard her sobs...

Maan:- What happened???

Geet(without taking her head up answered, thinking it to be the same guy's voice she heard earlier):- Am so clumsy...

Maan(smiled to himself):- Why???

Geet:- Always... I always make fun of myself whenever he is near me...

Maan:- He???

Geet:- MK...Maan Khurrana...

Maan:- Oh!!!Errmm...What are you doing in here in this lone place???

Geet:- I always land in trouble in his presence... Today too, I fell on him just like the other day and my friends were laughing at me... I was so embarrassed to face anyone that I came here to sit alone, away from everyone...

Maan:- But, you shouldn't be here, its not safe... to be alone right???

Geet(opened her eyes and now her mind worked):- Yes, you are right... (She tried to stand up saying and looking at the person with whom she was talking)I will just... (And she stopped, as MK was sitting there with her looking at her with a smile)You??? (And she jumped to her feet but before she could have fled from there, her hand was caught by him)

Maan:- Where are you going???(He teased her and with a small pull she was in his lap) When am here with you...

Geet:- Plzz, let me go...

Maan:- Oh I thought otherwise...

Geet:- What???

Maan:- Normally ppl take selfie or autographs when am near them and you are saying to let you go???

Geet(braced herself):- What are you doing here anyways??? Wasn't your concert on???

Maan:- It finished abt an hr ago...Guess, you have lost the track of time...Its nearing night now...

Geet gasped and looked around the special parking lot...Her one hand went on her mouth as it opened in shock...and she murmured...

Geet:- How can they leave me alone here???Where will I go now... How will I go from here now...

Maan:- Well, I can...

Geet(eyed him suspiciously, ST:):- He is stranger...Famous ppl ...infamous deeds... Geet get out of here right now... (Maan could see her uneasiness and he shook his head) I ...will leave on my own... Thank you...

With that she stood to her feet and Maan too got up to go... saying...

Maan:- As you wish... TC...

With that, he went from there to sit in his van...unlike what Geet thought abt him, he simply left her alone...Without wasting more time, she dashed outta there... Only to find MK's car, he was sitting behind the wheels looking at her with a small smile... in a gesture to get in...Geet looked down and opening the passenger door she sat...

Geet:- Thank you..

Maan:- I think, first you gotta tell me where to drop you???

Geet:- Oh yes... ABC Mansion...

Maan:- Woaho... You live there???(Geet nodded) You are a Khanna??

Geet:- Yes, my father runs business...

Maan:- Yeah, who wouldn't know him...The great personality of India... So, you must be spoilt??? After all you are the only heir...

Geet:- No no...Am very much good girl...

Maan:- Really???

Geet:- Yes, am the topper of my batch...

Maan:- Impressive...

Geet:- Umm, what have you studied???

Maan:- I was doing MBA...Before I changed my profession and became a singer...

Geet:- MBA is a nice stream, why did you quit???

Maan(glanced at her for a mint before shaking his head and replied):- It's a long story...Personal...

Geet(got his point and nodded):- Okhh...

As he dropped her, at her place...Geet bid adios and left from there...and hence they got to know each other...

Their next meeting was fixed by Annie...after she observed Geet and Maan and knowing Geet has a huge crush on him...Maan too liking Geet's talks...She decided to play cupid...So, here she was with Geet being blindfolded coming to see a surprise for herself...

Geet:- Annie where are you taking me yaar???

Annie:- Just keep quiet, you will know soon... I told you naa, there's a surprise for you...

Geet:- Annie, am tired of walking...We have been walking for abt 15 mints now... Now am tired of this... (She got no response as Annie has left her arm and left Geet in a dark room...Seeing no response, she called out) Annie...Annie??? Where are you???Annie??? Am removing this blindfold if you didn't respond now...Annie???

Now her heartbeat increased and in reflex, she removed the cloth piece round her eyes...Only to see darkness all around... She called and called out for Annie, but there wasn't any response...Geet was freaking out now...She turned to go when she hit something hard and shouted in response...

Geet:- AAA...

MK(who was not ready himself to see an intruder in his Mansion...Too shouted):- Oye... who are you??? (With that, he grabbed her from waist, as she was hitting his chest)

Geet:- Let me go... Go away... Leave me...

MK:- First you tell me...How did you come to my house??? Are you a thief...

Geet:- What no... First you let me go and switch some lights on...

MK:- Oh yes... But, you too are coming with me, in case you run away...

With that, he grabbed her hand and took her with him, as he went to the switch board... She only followed him silently, grabbing his shoulder for support...

As the lights were on, both were frozen to their spots... Both having different thoughts for each other...

MK:- You??? You sneaked in my house??

Geet:- No...My friend brought me here...She had planned a surprise for me ...

MK:- Here???

Geet(shrugged):- She brought me here...

MK:- This is my house...

Geet:- I really don't know...

MK:- Okhh, so where's your friend???

Geet:- I don't know, she just went... vanished..I was blindfolded... (Just then she got a text from Annie and reading that she smiled)

MK:- Why are you smiling for???

Geet:- My friend says, you are my surprise...Actually am your fan...and I always admire your everything...Have been there for every concerts of yours...So, she has planned this...

MK:- But, my house has a tight security... Tell me your friend's name...

Geet:- Annie...

MK(was taken aback):- Annie???

Geet:- Yeah, Anwesha Khurran...(She stopped as realization came to her) she is your relative ????

MK(smiled):- Yeah, she is my sister...

Geet(ST):- Oh no , she knows everything abt me...My dreams... My every single silly talk abt him...She, sure has told him everything...

Geet smiled sheepishly at him and he gestured her to sit...while he went to call Annie, and after talking to her, he came back with a smile on his face...Treated her nicely and Geet fell more for him...

~~~~

Present...

As the song finished, Geet gave him a thumbs up and looking at her, he smiled... Unintentionally, she has become his inspiration to sing for...It was true, the day's song was selected by her...Though it was a sad one, yet he sang as she has requested him to sing for her... This song always reminded him of her...and that's why he avoided singing sad melodies...But, today...He sang for Geet...Its been months that Geet would come and sit for him, telling him, her likes and dislikes regarding his singing and he improvised his songs...singing as per she wishes and sometimes demands...Though, he had a fair idea of her liking rather say crush for him, courtesy Annie...he didn't dare to Q it...For, he was not ready and top of that she was young and she just fantasized him... he was her crush only, one day he was meant to be faded from her priorities first and last, her memories...So, he kept his own feelings at check...Just like the other days, Geet met with him after the concert...

Geet:- Wow, you were... as usual awesome...

Maan(glanced at her through mirror and smiled, removing his makeup and accessories):-Thanks ...

Geet(smiled back at him):- Maan... Have you ever been in love???

Maan:- What??? (Her sudden Q made him turn his back and look at her)

Geet:- I mean, so much painful song that was... How can one sing something with so much emotions if someone hasn't gone through them???

Maan(sighed and went to her, taking her hands in his he bent to her level):- Coz you wanted to hear me sing that song of mine, didn't you???

Geet:- Yes, But...

Maan:- Geet, plz let's not talk on it...

Geet:- Okhh...

Maan(smiled):- Thank you...

Geet:- Can I ask something else then???

Maan(nodded as he went to remove his remaining accessories):- Yes...

Geet:- who is this girl???

Maan:- Who???

He turned to ask Geet as she showed him a pic...where he was hugging Pari...And instantly he was angry...He moved towards her and snatching the pic from her hands, tore that, he discarded to the bin...

Maan:- How did you find it...

Geet:- Who is She???

Maan:- No one...

Geet:- Or maybe your inspiration...

Maan:- What nonsense Geet...She is ...no one... But you my dear are my inspiration...

Geet:- Really???

Maan:- Hmm... (He smiled as he looked at her)Ever since you have joined me as a manager, am getting more inspiration from you...You really help me boost myself and my singing...Thank you Geet, Thank you for being there for me...(He told her pulling her cheeks and Geet was delighted to hear and seeing his gestures)

Geet(after some time):-Maan...

Maan:- Hmm...

Geet:- You have a visitor...

Maan:- Geet, plz...Am very tired today, handle him yourself..

Geet:- It's a girl... She said you know her very well, and that's why I allowed her near...

Maan:- Who???

Geet:- It's the photo wali girl... (She hesitated but told him and he was astonished)

Maan:- What??? (He inquired with shock on his face and she nodded...He sighed)

Geet:- Can I call her in???

Maan:- No.. I don't want to meet anyone, and specially that girl...

Pari:- But, am here for you...(Both looked at Pari, who just entered..Pari, looked at Geet and said)Can I talk him in private???

Geet:- I will leave you two alone...(plastering a smile, she was abt to leave when she heard him)

Maan:- Stay Geet...

Geet:- Maan??? (He saw her being uneasy...and knew instantly her crush was not mere crush but it was more...Only if, he had talked to her openly...She would have confessed...Silly him)

Maan:- I said stay here... (He emphasized and Geet sighed looking at his Ex...Yes, she got it she was Her Maan's Ex and maybe it was time for them to patch up and get together)

Pari shrugged and went to hug him, he stood unmoved, closing his eyes...While Geet looked away feeling her eyes heavy with tears...

Pari:- I can't tell you how happy I am...I just left everything Maan, for you...(She came out form his hug and looked at him)I told Papa, am going back to my Maan...And look at you, you have become so popular...Am happy for you too...Now we can be together, forever... (Maan distanced himself from her, smiling faintly)

Maan:- You didn't get properly introduced with her...Let me do this...

With that said, he asked for Geet's hand...Pari wasn't expecting this response...While Geet was only gapping at him and his raised hand...Maan urged her and Geet gave her hand in his...Bringing her closer to him he looked at Pari...

Maan:- This is Geet... My fiance...(Both the girls gasped and were looking at Maan in shock while he announced looking at Geet) Soon we are getting married...

Maan wanted Pari to taste her own medicine...She left him when she thought of the better opportunities...and now, he was the best for her...She was back for her greedy reasons...But, now he was not going to take her back in his life...Coz he has started to move on, thanks to Geet's arrival in his life...who changed his sad moods to the jolly ones...But, this proposal was not planned...He hated seeing Pari in front of him and talking as if, she hasn't done anything wrong...That selfish behavior of her, made him announce something which he should have talked to Geet first...

Seeing the desired effect, Maan smirked as Pari shook her head and left from there with tears in her eyes... Same as one day, Pari has left him heartbroken... Tit for tat...His heart said and he sighed... But, the next mint he found Geet's eyes looking at him...and then she asked...

Geet:- You...didn't mean it right??? (She was not prepared for this ..It was going to give her temporarily happiness and then she was going to be heartbroken...So, she thought to tlak it out, there and then) You just said, just like that, right???

Maan(cleared his throat):- What if, its not pretense...I really mean it Geet...Its true, I didn't ask you properly before but... I want you to be beside me, in my every thick and thin...Will you be there???

Geet:- I...am anyways there... You don't need to...

Maan(put his finger on her lips):- Geet...You are with me from months...We know each other quite well and am the most eligible bachelor...Girls will die to be my GF and here I want you to be my wife...I don't see, why are you trying to convey that you don't like to be with me???(Geet looked away, and he made her look at him)I know you too like me... I know what you have been thinking abt me all these days...Is this Pari...Who has disturbed you???

Geet:- I thought I know you ...I know everything abt you...(She looked at him and shook her head with a sad smile) But, how wrong I was... I didn't know your past life...

Maan:- No Geet, you aren't wrong... My past is not related with me in any way... You couldn't find out abt it coz it was long lost past, that I left behind while joined this industry...

Geet:- But, now she is back...You too must be here for her???

Maan:- No, am not here for her...Whatever am today its not coz of her... Her father wasn't willing to marry his daughter with someone who was nothing but a useless guy then...She too rejected me and accepted her father's choice...Then I realized, she never loved me...the boy...who was immensely fallen for her...But, she chose the one, who could have benefited her in any way...and now, when she got to know of my popularity, she wants to be with me..that's it... But, now I know what greed she has behind this come back...I don't want her now.. You have been my pillar Geet, all these days... You don't know, and I didn't tell you ever, you...have been my inspiration...

Geet was smiling as he left his sentence unfinished, she was happy that he was opening up to her and that too telling his full past...which he wasn't willing a couple of mints ago...She accepted and just hugged him...

Geet:- I love you my Rock star...(She blushed, but confessed)

Maan:- I love you too my Angel...(Maan smiled and hugged her back)

The End...

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
our next award is


ek asi kahani jisne humare readers ko bhut rulaya
😭


our winner is SOJU

and 1st runner up is




Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
the cry story of the year goes to soju her " TATTERED MOTHER"WON MAXIMUM VOTES...
and here its her view and her readers thought about her story
congrats soju


INTERVIEW OF WRITER SOJU

1.You got nominated for the cry story of the year..How do u feel about it...
Well i was shocked at first that i even got nominated. i was not expecting this at all.
2.
Tattered mother got maximum votes...How overwhelming is that for u dear...
It was second shock, i got like what 46 votes??? even i dont know that these many readers are following my story. so yes i was happy, i was excited as this is my first ever nomination that won the award.

3
Few lines about your story and the readers who made u win
My story is all about mother. How a mother is even after she gets betrayed from her kids unknowingly. it is also not just about mother-child relationship. it is also about her struggle to overcome her fears and importantly acceptance of the present.

About my readers, they are very loyal. Even when i was unavailable for certain months they kept waiting and did not give up on me and my story.

4
What is your experience about this poll...
Well frankly speaking, i do not deserve this award. As Priya_21's votes got divided if you sum them up she would have been the winner.

Ps: could u give me two readers name of tattered mother...I need to take thier interview too

Taahir and Anu5, till now they have received exactly what i wanted to portray in my story.

so as writer wish here goes her readers interview about her story
interview of taahir

1.you are regular reader of tattered mother,how dod u feel the story won the cry story of the year

Its actually amazing that Tattered Mother won , this story holds every emotion and has been portrayed very well

2.few words about the storynline

Its a gripping story , a suffering about a mother and her journey to give her children her family the very best yet they all have made many mistakes , a family was broken because of a husband's ego

3.did u feel the writer did justice to the characters r u feel something that is missing.

Indeed the writer has portrayed every character very well at this point I feel there is nothing missing

4.your favorite character in the story

It has to be Ahaan , he is complexed yet kind and soft , he is aggressive want the need arises yet at the same time all he wants is his mother's love

5.your favorite scene

There is a few but two that always stood out was one morning Geet preparing breakfast for the entire family and tells Maan she is making toast for him , showing that how he had always discrimnated about her style of eating
the second was when Ahaan came home drunk and wanted his mother to scold him at that point I felt his craving for his mother's love


6.the one character whom u hate most

None but yes I dislike Maan for his past behaviour

7tand kheechai of writer..u can say few words about her good/bad😉

The writer has excelled in this story she portrayed each character each scene very well
the emotions portrayed by each character was very well written

interview of anu5
1.you are regular reader of tattered mother,how did u feel the story won the cry story of the year

Yupe iam a regular reader of Tattered Mother!! Well according to me Tattered mother should have won the category of Emotive and Touching story of the year rather than Cry story of the year. ( No, offence I felt so)...


2.few words about the storyline.

Soju, has protrayed the story of a tattered mother beautifully. A mother who sacrificed her happiness and existence to see her kids happy despite of facing lots of tribulations she never had grudges against her kids and all she did and wanted was best for her kids. The story truly represents the perfect definition of MOTHER !!

"The heart of a mother is a deep abyss at a bottom of which you will always find forgiveness".

3.did u feel the writer did justice to the characters r u feel something that is missing.

I truly believe the writer did justice to all the characters and was perfect when it comes to their characterization. She indeed knitted her story with lots of emotions and warmth. Though at times I felt Geet needs to teach good lesson to Maan apropos to his demeanor but I believe Geet will make Maan repent his deeds through his own way and Maan will be remorseful when he will get to know about insight of Geet's tribulations. Geet's forgiveness and her adapting her old lively and chirpy self is final redemption to all who have hurt and inflicted pain on Geet.

" To err is human; to forgive is divine" and " Forgiveness is final form of love "

4.your favorite character in the story

Definitely Geet, for her selfless being and warmth she carries around in an elegant way.

" Mother is the one who shows you light when you just see the dark and holds their heart forever"

5.your favorite scene

My favorite scene would be all those scenes where Geet stood up for her kids and loved them without any resentment and bitterness apropos to her kids deportment towards her. Loved her valour and tranquility deportment despite of all the hardships she faced and life threw at her.

6.the one character whom u hate most
Hate is the most strong and dreadful word which definitely doesn't exist in my dictionary. So, would like to use word dislike !!
At times I disliked Maan apropos to his haste and impulsive attitude and his unwavering trust on Geet which was important reason for Geet's miseries.

7.tang kheechai of writer..u can say few words about her good/bad😉

Iam not that close to Soju that I can pull her leg or turn ambience light with my words !! I like her narrative style and the way she tries to connect, her readers to the characters protrayed and emotions depicted !!

Congrats Soju !!! 🤗
All the best for your future endeavors and hope to get more writings from u on Maaneet and continue ur passion for writing.
Thanks for the fellow Maaneetian who took part in polls and nominated .....

Congratulations to all the winners who won other categories. 🥳 ❤️




thanks for taking your time and giving us this interview and making our maaneet anniversary special

Edited by SANJANA9167 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
t.peru's HUMDARD was closely followed and ended up as runner of cry story of the year
few words from her and her readers

t.peru interview

1 You were nominated for the cry of the year ..How do you feel about it...
I fell good that my story is nominated

You are the first runner up in this poll,do u have anything to say about this...
About first runner in poll I am little shock 😆
Seriously I don't know what to say

Few words about your story and your readers who voted for your story
About my story I fell happy that reader like my work
So because of this they voted by story
And One thing I know the person who win
That's person story touch another person heart😊

Few lines about this poll and your experience
About poll I like that

i want your two readers name dear who love your stories more whose cmnts you like more
Can't take any two people name
All like the stories 😊
ACTUALLY I WANT TOTAKE THIER INTERVIEW DEAR
Okk
Then khawiashfan & keeepdreaming

so as writers wish her readers words about her story

keepdreaming words

1.you are regular reader of humdard,how dod u feel the story was runner upof the cry story of the year
itna mushkil kaam main hi kyun !!!! okish here ,i feel happy

2.few words about the storynline
first of all I like arranged marriage concept and this is too based on arranged marriage but with different twist and character ...
geet for to marry paralyzed maan her journey too painful ..

3.did u feel the writer did justice to the characters r u feel something that is missing.
yes she is doing nice job,i like how her way of writing

4.your favorite character in the story
ofcourse geet

5.your favorite scene
now I'm liking maan is back in full form .

6.the one character whom u hate most
pammi and vikram even really dislike the way dadima always gave her order to do as per her wish ..

7tand kheechai of writer..u can say few words about her good/bad😉
want to thank the writer T. Peru for choosing this concept and doing justice of every character .

now khwaishfan words

1.you are regular reader of humdard,how did u feel the story was runner up of he cry story of the year -
great accomplishment
2.few words about the storynline -
lovely interesting story

3.did u feel the writer did justice to the characters r u feel something that is missing. -
she is doing justice and nothing is missing

4.your favorite character in the story -
Geet and Sameera

5.your favorite scene -
Maaneet meeting in Shimla

6.the one character whom u hate most
- Pammi and Vikram

7tand kheechai of writer..u can say few words about her good/bad😉
she is a wonderful writer and regularly updates


thanks for taking your time and giving us this interview and making our maaneet anniversary special
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in our honor list
next name is SPVD & Vrinda22

both doing fabulous work
collecting update link then updating the list
is easy kya😉
😃
nhi hai na

so this honor for our both DI 👏

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Delhi..capital of India many times broght with lightings May be its Republic day, Independence day or festivals that somehow come every month making people enjoy their time with their family to share happiness and making environment to healthy with their laugh.

Same way, far from hustle bustle of people in a house people gathering laughter loud slow music echoned in environment some enjoying their drinks some busy in chatting or some complaining about traffic n today politics n some laughing loud on some jokes . Suniye.. Hearing it the men turn their head and a man excuse them settling his coat kaho Rano?? Said man. Kya kaho.?? Idhar ayiye aap. Said lady and taking man.baat kya hai Rano?? Said man baat yeh hai Ki aap sayad bhul rahe hai Ki Yeh party kis leye hai?? Jaiye apni ladali ko lekar ayiye.. Par wo to Ma but he cut by the one man of his same age.. kya Bhabhi aap be. Kyun tang kar rahe Ho mere dost ko. Mana Ki apni beti ka sangeet hai but yeh be to mat boliye Ki shaadi kisse hai.

Kisse hai Mr Raj Singh Khurana?? Said one lady cole wearing beautiful Dark pink colour saree and man shut his eyes as it was turn for Mohinder and Rano to smile. Lady come to him. kuuch to saram kijiye.. Aaj apke bete ka sangeet hai or aap guest ke sath baato Mein lage hai..Madhu yeh tum unko kyun daant rahi Ho. Yeh be kam nahi hai.. Said Rano pointed towards Mohinder. Bhai sahab to chalo theek hai ladke wale hai koi baat nahi but yeh inki to ladki ki shaadi hai yeh tak nahi dekhu Ki itna tym Ho gya abhi tak wo log aye kyun nahi. Logo ko puchu sab theek to hai? Caterer se puchu ohme much chahiye to nahi par yeh to ek guest Ki tarah lag rahe hai.. Said rano thinking to much. Both Raj madu and even Mohinder smile heard it as they trio know who thinkable rano is. Bhabhi aap kyun tension le rahe hai and Madhu to noded. Sab theek se jayega Rano much soch rahi Ho itna. Or bhulo mat hum sab ek pariwar hai Rano this time mohinder said. Beti nahii beta la rahe hai. Yes.. Said Raj nodes with Mohinder.

giving side hug each other and said Yes Now Maan is ur son and Geet is our legally said Raj winking at Madhu. They could not stop their hapiness when Maan n Geet said them they want to marriage each other n they love each other. Hearing it seem like their long wish come true which Raj always wanted to have Geet as her Badi bahu which he thought first time as he take Geet in his arms after her birth.

Chalo inke sath rahege to bas hum be inki tarah ho jayege. Said Madhu n rano noded in yes. But soon they to get busy with their friends who congratulated them n asking aboug Maan geet. Bas ate hi honge. Saying this they excuse from them. When Madhu caught her younger son and ask Where is Maan geet? And he pointed toward Stairs where A handsome sharp feature man come holding a girl who look like princess in light green color lehnga wearing peal necklace and long earing matching with man sherwani. As they stair down one stop light fell on them making girl nerverous but man try to comfort her and as their eyes met he ask her is she ok to which she to node in yes loking at him shyly n they both stair down where loud clamp voice welcome them. They meet all while mohinder hug Maan as he take his ashirward. Raj hug geet as she try to touched his feet. Geet ur not my Dauhter in law. U r may daughter n how many times i have to told u this. Hearing this geet make face and loked at rano. Raj understood. Jarur bhabhi ne kaha hoga said raj n geet ear n geet nodes in yes. Kya baat ho rahi hai.. mom mujhe to lagta dad ne abhi se geet seeing so many eyrs on him vicky corrected his word I mean Geet bhabhi ki team mein shamil ho gye hai. Yeah i can see koi bat nahi mein apne bete ki team mein chali jaugi fir. Par tum or annie apna soch lo said madhu making laugh everyone.

Both parents happily smiling standing with friends & relatives when maan and geet dancing hands in hands after the all family dance on their own songs choreograph by Annie after announcement of her. Maan and geet really get shocked seeing their parents dancing on peppy numbers and so as all guest. After all its their maan and geet wedding celebration and they just wanted to enjoy their moments in this time.

After some mins madhu send annie to bring them from dance floor so geet can keep mehendi on her hands and also maan to have to put shagun mehendi on his palm with geet name.

Annie inform them and they both come out where ladies take them outside where they take them on small round shape stage and said them to sit there. later madhu call Mehendi girl who first put write geet name on maan and madhu write maan name on geet palm and did shagun when mehendi girl start decorating geet name and maan is sitting beside her when annie and other ladies to come there long with meera and pinki who are geet best friends and maan left from there and join his friends Yash and Adi who start pulling his legs while sipping their drink.

After some times as after the dinner guest start leaving rano said maan to have dinner who node in yes and he plated dinner for him and geet and go back to stage where geet still sitting waiting when her mehendi will be dry.AAp kha lo meri mehendi abhi be nahi sukhhi saying this she show her her mehendi clad house and maan notice her feet also decorated with mehendi and tiredness can see on her face. Maan sit beside her and fill spoon with rice and kept near her mouth. geet looked at him and seeing him noded in yes she start having it. But when another spoon he put near her mouth but geet said him to have it mein baad mein. But seeing her glares Ok .. he to start and feeding her as well. far from both parents seeing this scene happily while geet parents get emotional. Seeing this Offoo Mohinder tum log phir se and rano and mohinder quickly wipe her tears and looked at Raj wo bas. Geet kaun sa tum dono se bahut durr ja rahi hai ek awaz doge wo tum dono ke samne khadi hogi or nahi to kya rano said Madhu as both handas and khuranas are neighbor and distance by one one wall. Chalo abhi baatein baad mein phle yaha se free ho jay or phir kal to bahut kam hai and trio to noded and leave to seeing their work so they to can have dinner.

Later meera and pinki take geet to her room so she can take rest. Mumma utar du abhi.. said geet looking at mehendi who look dry now. Abhi ruk ja. Geet thoda or rang aane de. Geet noded and look at rano who packing her clothes .

Changing in her night dress geet standing on her balcony and looking at stars when someone from behind hold her and hug her. Maan.. she call his name who only hummed enhalling her fragnance . Aap soye kyun nahi abhi tak. Said geet. tumhe thankyou jo kehna tha. said maan. mujhe or thankyou said geet breaking hug and looked at maan. Maan noded ha wo. Party se phele jo hua. Uske leye So.r.. but maan keep her fingers on his lips (thank god she wipe mehndi from her hands) I know aap Dadima ko bahut miss kar rahe hai na. mein be. Said geet and maan looked at her. mein be dadima ko bahut miss kar rahi hu. Shaddi ke sare function unke bina and tea escape from her eyes seeing this maan hug her and try to change topic. So kal ready rehna Miss Handa said maan and geet hug him tightly and said I am already ready Mr khurrana and maan plant a soft kiss on her forehead and left before anyone see them like this.I love you said maan giving flying kiss in air and mouthed slowly before he disperse in front of her eyes .Geet smile looking at him and and pass flying back to same direction.

Geet trying to sleep but due to excitement and in nervousness some where she cnt able to sleep. This is with her from her childhood whenever she excited or nervous for something she not able to sleep. Khud doctor banke mein apna ilaz nahi kar pai. Thought geet coming out from bedsheet in sitting position. Abhi kya karu mein is time. Thought geet and then her eyes fall on wall picture where both handas and khuranas present in it her eyes fell on every person when an old lady came she caress her face dadima.. kal I will become khurana bahu par aap nahi hongi na mere swagat ke leye. We all miss you a lot. Dadima especially your loving grandson Maan his name take her to past when they first meet each other.

Flashbacks start:

Bhaiya ji jaldi kijiye na.. said a girl little in angry tone as he order still not pass to her. Do mins Madam said waiter abhi be do mins getting hyper she start walking outside and said waiter to cancel her order and go back to her scooty which she parked outside on shop and she getting out her helmet from Dicky Thud.. some car from back hit her scooty and seeing dent on scooty Geet looked at car who still standing there geeting angry she marched towards car and shout oye ollu ke pathe dikhta nahi kya yeh kya.. but she stop seeing a well built man come forward to her wearing Black Coat and pant and wearing black shades. Shade hi kale hai ya aakhein be. Said geet and loud enough to heard by maan also. U miss. What miss. Ha.. deikhta nahi kya.. meri scooty ko..oh nahi.. nahi.. dikhega kaise.. tum jaise ameero ko road pe hum jaise log dikhte hi kaise hai.. pata nahi apne Dad ki. Listen dnt create a scene here I will pay u Ok. Said man angry. Itne paise hai to Delhi ki sari bikes ko giraka kar apne paise dikho meri nahi . samje.. Gadhe kahi ke ghaddi chalani ati nahi.. but man now harshly pull her arms cnt you listen in one time. Leave me.. leave me.. U idiodt, monley donkey.. phle meri scooty ko giraya or ab mujhe chot pauchne ki koshish kar rahi ho. Help!!!help!!!!! Save me..!!! hearing her sound many people start coming to them and ask man to leave girl hand or they are calling police. Call Now !!1 bhai sahab hearing it man leave her hand and quickly sit in his car while girl hold her arms in pain. Kaha bhag gya..wo.. chodiye madam jane dijiye. Aap dekhiye apki scooty to chal rahi hai na said one man and geet to noded and he sigh when her scooty get start but seeing mask on her arms ek baar mil jay wo ollu ka patha nani na yaad dila di to mera naam be GEET HANDA nahi...

Man driving car and cursing girl. Kitni jagralu thi God!!! Is not I ask sorry to her bt No seem like she want to create a scene n created .. Para nahii kaha se yeh illiterate log yaha Delhi Mein a hate hai said maan increasing Ac speed when his phone ring and he pick up and speak Yeah Dad M coming. No kuchh nahi Hua dad. Ok bye saying this maan cut the call still angry on dat girl. Ek baat wo mil gyi na usse na Dikhaya Ki Maan singh Khurana kya hai to mera naam be Maan nahi phir. Saying this he speed up call and take U turn.

Kaha reh gyi yeh Geet said two girls walking each other direction and looking at their wrist watches. Bit seeing her coming in scooty they both looked at each other and smile Geet parked her scooty and come to them n ask what are doing here Meera Pinki.. Dr. Sushant waiting for you. Kaha thi tum. Kitne call kiya. PG se to phle hi nikal gyi thi. Ha wo baad Mein bataugi. Chalo phle. Reaching there she was informed she have to go for a camp with Meera and Dr. Prem who is senior to both girls.

Geet and another staff standing in front of Khurana Construction . Geet meera come. Said Prem who said them to come in as he talk to gate keeper and talk to owner of company asking about place where they can see their workers and on being inform he call them along with staff. Geet n staff get stucked seeing decore . Wow everyone just mouthed gaping at italains wall n decoration on it. Here Doctor they see one man guarded them. When suddenly someone from side a door open and Geet who is walking holding a box could not see person and as they collide and result in they box from Geet hand fell down scattering things on ground along with them and loud voice escape from them. TuMm. Get up u Stupid Girl.. Said maan n hearing it Geet give him glare n stand up. What are you doing here?? Oho.. To tum ab mera peecha kar rahe Ho.lagta police ko na dekar bahut badi galti kardi meine. U Mr Blind. Lagta aakhein band karke chalna shauk hai tumara hai na. And tumara BAs bolte rehna Miss Basanti. Said maan. Oh hello.. Mind ur language. Yeah u need it. Said maan cutting Geet.

U monkeyy.. Tuhme yaha kis ne naukari de di.. Maan get shocked listen this. Dikhta to tume hai nahi kaam kaise karte honge. Or tum bolti to itna Ho kaam much karti Ho. for ur kind information . Geet.. Prem stop her. Meera an rest keep gaping at them. Erm.. M sorry Mr Khurana. Actually we are here for medical camp for worker. Maan noded n look at Geet. She is also a doctor.one of my team member and Geet he is. What's happening here all heard a tough voice from their back

Man. What are you doing here ?? Ask Raj Khurana father of Maan Singh Khurana. Senior Khurana eye fall on girl who standing showing back to her and as she turn her face and he mouthed Geetu and to mouthed Raj uncle. Raj quickly came to her and ask her what are doing here Geet? Ask raj little shocked happy.Geet hug him hapily.aap yaha kya kar rahe hai?? First I ask you said Raj playfully hugging her. Offoo. Aap be na. Said Geet smiling. Meine batya tha na ohoo ha . Silly me.. Said raj smiling n making another to laugh on them who now looking at Geet and raj even Maan to. Excuse me sir, Again Prem disturb them n seeing all eye on her Geet looked at Raj. Can we do now our work ask Prem liking at Geet to which she noded. Geet today dinner with us .. Bt. I wil not listen anything Madhu and maa will be so happy to see you. Ok. That's like my Girl saying this Raj plant a kiss on her forehead. Dad you know her ask maan as Geet left from there. Yeah. Maan she is Geet. Yeah I know it Dad but how do u know her. She is Mohinder daughter is not I talk to about you. Oho.. U mean ur Pari.. Raj noded. WO to kissi angle se nahi lagti yeh crazy girl. Thought maan. Lets go. Said Raj n man noded while Raj inform Madhu on phone about Geet and maan rolled his eyes seeing excitment on his Dad face after meeting that stupid girl though it shocked him to heard about she is Doctor.

In evening Geet came for Dinner all really get happy seeing her. Seher Mein rehte hue bhi aise mil rahi Ho. Said Madhu while Geet hug her n then dadima aap ko para hai na mujhe khud ka. Ha Ki tune Geet Handa nhii Geet ban ke rehna haii yaha.. Said Raj joining rest while after some time Annie n Vicky to join them n soon House charm with all laughter except Maan who showing his eyes to her n same she is doing.Tum waise each Mein doctor Ho ya degree kharidi hai.. Said maan getting everyone attention. Or Tum sach Mein dekh lete Ho ya nahii. Kahi Raj uncle ke work ka appreciation Mein b tum to nhi le lete U Mr blind Akdu.said geet now getting attention on her. u Jangali billi para nhu tha India Mein billiya b doc ban Sakti hai said maan irritated. Or mujhe be nahi para tha Ki Blind logo ke leye Oxford ne new opening kholi hai. U badtamwez ladki or tum oh so blind monoster Man.or tumm wo.enough..loud voice of Raj echoned In hall. What happening maan?? Ask maan huh apni ladli Pari se hi puchiye saying this maan left from there and all looked at Geet who sheepishly smile seeing ol eyes on her. Geet. Raj take her name seriously n she narrated everything what happen in morning n soon again. Laughter echo in hall. Kya tum be Geet. Bhai ko kya naam diye hai. Hearing it Geet make face.ok. Chalo BAs geet come beta dinner ready haii. Aap sab be chaliye. Mein maan ko bulata Hu said Raj n all join in dinner table

Aise muah kyun banaya hua hai.maan said dadima entering in his room. As if you dnt know Dadima.. apne dekha nahi neeche wo badtameez ladki but dadima cut him. Wo aisi nahi hai maan. she is really very sweet n lovely. My foot. Said maan. Dadima smile seeing him and pinch on his nose. Dnt get so hyper Gentleman. Said Dadima smiling again and maan sigh seeing her smiling and maan to could not stop to smile .You know I love you the most said maan hugging her and Dadima to mouthed ME to but not your Dada ji and Then maan make face and said I know you lady. But phir be I love..bt suddenly he stop seeing geet on door. What are you doing here said maan again in anger? Huh.. tuhmare kamre mein to meri jutti be na aye. Samje Mr. Khadoos blind. Said geet in equal amount while dadima smile seeing again them fighting like this. Dadima chaliye mein apko lene ayi hu. Maan looked at her. where are you taking Dadima. Said maan. Tumse matlab said geet showing her eyes . Chaliye na dadima. Said geet in pleading voice pata badi muskil se meine Raj uncle ko ice cream treat ke leye manaya hai. chaliye ab..Dadima noded and said Ok. Chalo. Maan come beta.. No dadima. Aap jao. Acha hai na dadima chodo ise.. waise be yeh hamare sath fit nahi ata.. said geet looking at maan making dadima to chuckle chalo ab!!! Said geet taking dadima with her. God!! Yeh ladki!! Mere gharwalo ko hi mere khilaf bhadka rahi hai or mere ghar wale be to!!!Pari My foot she is Devill Ms Bakbak ..said maan crushing cushion.

Days to month start changing and it kept continue whenever both maan and geet see each other they instantly start fighting each other making Vicky and annie to enjoy circus yeah CIRCUS as they call all maan geet fight a circus scene where elder tried to sort out their difference but they admant on their word. Mr akhdhu sadhu blind for geet and for maan she is really stupid and irritate girl and call her bakbak battery.

Raj hume lagta hai aapko maan or geet ki shaddi ka khyal chod dena chahiye abhi. Said Dadima while sitting in hall with Madhu while younger are slipping along with maan. hearing it madhu n dadima start laughing. Has lo ap log. Maa. Mein yaha parshan hu ki kaise maan se geet ke bare mein baat karu or aap log. Raj beta abhi aise koi baat mat karna maan ke samne abhi to geet ka naam sunte hi uska gussa satve asman pe paunch jata hai. abhi yeh khyal chod do!! Madhu to noded and said waise be Raj agar un dono ko ek hona hoga to wo khud apni kismet se ho jayege abhi hum log kuch nahi kar sakte isme.. hai na maa ask madhu and dadima to noded Agar Maan ke nasseb mein geet hai to geet jarur khurana khandan ki bahu banegi or mein uska swagat karugi bas and Raj noded with all smile..

One night all are sleeping in khurana mansion when suddenly Raj mobile phone ring. Adjusted himself Raj pick up call yawning said Mohinder is time pe phone said raj looking at closk which showing 1 am in midnight sab theek to hai Bt on hearing another side seem like his all sleep gone. Kya?? Yeh kab hua? Hmm theek hai hum abhi ate hai.Geet ko pata hai ki Darji theek hai.mein aisa karta hu munshi jo ko be phone karke tumare waha bhej deta hu. Nahi mohinder itne log ayege ha mein geet ko lekar ate hai Hoshiarpur. Saying this Raj cut the call and wake up Madhu. Kya hua hai? Raj ask madhu Madhu wo Darrji nahi rahe. Said Raj informing her. kya.. MAdhu to get shocked ha abhi mohinder ka phone aya.. hume geet ko lekar wo jana hai. Geet ko pata hai? said madhu making bunn of her open hairs. Nahi. Mohinder ne bas yahi batay use ki darr ji ki tabiyat kharab hai ise leye wo hamare sath hoshiarpur a jai he bout to say more when his phone ring again with geet name. hello geet beta.. aap ro kyun rahe ho. Koi na hum a rahe hai apko lene apne packing ki li hai. bas beta hum be a rahe hai. saying this he cut call and said madhu to ready soon and pack their clothes while madhu get start ready Raj knock on maan door . Dad what are you doing here. Said maan to In sleepy. Maan we have to go hoshiarpur beta driver ka number be nahi lag rha hai.. Sab theek to hai na dad seeing his serious face maan could not stop to ask. Nahi beta. Wo Geet ke Darrji nahi rahe hume abhi janna hoga. Darrji. Ha wo geet ke Dada ji. Abhi mohinder ka phone aya and he narrated everything to him usne geet se be batane ko manna kar diya hai nahi to wo yeh soch ke hi royi ja rahi hai ki darrji ki tabiyat kharab hai.par.. maan looked at his father face dnt worry dad mein abhi ready hota hu. Raj noded and left .

Exactly after half an hour they pick geet from her PG. apna khyal rakhna geet. said meera and pinki hugging them. As they to tense seeing geet crying after her papa call. And they start their journey to hoshiarpur.Maan saw her sitting in car silently while tears marks still visible on her cheeks. Geet beta aap theek hai?? ask madhu and geet noded wiping tears after turning her face and maan all see it from mirror. Sab theek ho jayega BAcha.. said Raj who sitted along with maan in front while madhu and geet take back seat. Maan eyes again n again felling on her. Dnt know why her silent behavior he not liking it.He in short time start missing Loud Bakbak Geet Handa. Suniye hume Maa ji ko bata dena chahiye tha hum aise bina une bataye. MAdhu I understood but abhi maa ko batana theek nahi hota or phir raat ka safar . subh mein une phone kar dunga. You dnt worry . let her sleep or tum dono be so jao. Geet beta tum be so jao try it beta saying this Raj forward his head.

At Around 8 am they they park their car infont of a big house. MAdhu.. geet ko utha do.. said Raj seeing her sleeping while he and maan come out of car but maan eyes still on geet. Hearing Madhu voice geet wake up at once and madhu said her they have come. Ghar a gya hai geet and noded she take out from car but seeing gathering outside of house she not getting good vibes.chalo beta..said madhu taking her seeing her looking at around as they come close to door she heard loud voice of crying of some ladies and she quickly run inside and seeing scene infront of her her all body start shaken up .. Darr..ji.. she only mouthed seeing big Darrji photo with garland on stool and his body on floor cover in white bedsheet. Tears start coming from her eyes and she looked at her mother and Dad who to sitting their crying looking at her.MAa Darrji.. Said geet running to her mother lap .her mother Rano only node in no while Raj maan an madhu to enter room and raj and maan go to mohinder while madhu sit beside Rano.. yeh nahi ho sakta.. Darr ji aise kaise ja sakte hai..nahi..saying this she uncover cloth from her Darr ji face and seeing her darrji lying there as she at once start shouting crying loudly while some lady again cover darrji face but geet angry looked at her and uncover his face again. Darrji dekhiye uthiye.. Darr ji.. Utheiye na.. dekho mein. Ayi hu.. aap hasenge nahi.. nahi uthege aap. Darrji.. seeing her Rano came to her and take her in her arms nahi uthege Darrji ab geet. kissi ki baat nahi sunege ab. Maa.. Darrji.. Maa and she thumped fell on her closing her eyes.. Geet.. Geet...Rano call her and mohinder maan an raj came to them ..Geet.. Mohinder to pat her face .. munshi ji jaiye doctor ko bulaiye jaldi said Raj, Hume geet ko uske room mein lekar jana chahiye. Maan geet ko room mein le jao.maan noded and taking her in his arms he lie her down on bed Madhu and Rano to come with her. Rano start crying seeing geet. sab theek ho jayega rano doctor bas ate hi honge.

Darne wali baat nahi hai bas shocked ki wajah se BP shoot ho gya tha doctor said to mohinder and Rano and left Mohinder and Raj go outside to do rituals while Raj said Rano and madhu to stay with her and they start Final journey of Darrji and mohinder did last ritual of darr ji and they all come back after fired up darrji body.

Papa..darrji. geet again cry as mohinder come to her home. Mohinder try to soth her pain while hugging her and said her to not cry much as it automatically hurt her beloved Darrji. Par mein.. Geet beta Darr ji aaj be hum sab ke sath hai beta.. said Raj kya tumne bhula diya apna bachpan wala unke sath bitya hua time to which geet noded in no. to phir darr ji sath hi hai hamare. Hamari yaadein mein. Hai na.. geet noded and all sigh . Far from door Maan seeing all this.

After Prayer meet Raj to think to go back Delhi and infrom this to mohinder. Geet ko be le jana. Raj wo itna jaha rahegi utna hi darrji ko miss karegi waha kaam mein lagi hogi to apne aap in sab se bahar a jayegi. Raj to noded and continue. Geet ko nahi tume or bhabhi ko be Darr ji ke sadme se bahar ana hoga and mohinder to noded. Mohinder kyun nahi tum Delhi shift ho jate. Madhu and rano who to looking for their handsome see them and hear this. Delhi mein.. mohinder said. And Raj noded. ha bhai sahab. Said madhu approaching them. Raj bilkul sahi keh rahe hai. Par yaha par. Said Rano. Tum yaha Darrji ki wajah se hi ruke hue thy na. mohinder or ab jab darr hi nahi hai to kya karoge yaha ruk kar be. Or phir tumara business be sara Delhi mein hai. geet be wahi reh rahi hai to kyun na aap dono be Delhi hi shift ho jao. Par bhaisahab yaha ka karobar. Uske leye hum kissi ko rakh lenge. Or waise be aap dono nahi chahte ki geet ki shaddi se phle aap log uske sath be kuch time beeta le. Said Raj making mohinder and Rano look at each other. Sahi keh rahe hai Raj bhaisahab. Yeh ghar apse kahi nahi jayega bas aap hamare or karib a jayege kyun raj and raj to noded n said even hamare sath wala ek house abhi khali hua hai kaho to mein baat chalau tum jab chaho bhabhi or geet ke sath waha shift ho jane. Kya soch rahe hai. ask rano and mohinder noded in no. theek hai Raj. We will see. Said mohinder looking at rano who to noded in yes. Raj and madhu know about this could not control their hapiness and they hug each other . infact while going back to Delhi Raj infrom this to Geet n maan as wel. Sachi mein Papa and mohinder noded in yes. Geet quickly give hug to her parents showing how happy she is. I will wait for you ok. Said this geet kiss mohinder and rano cheeks and get in car. Pagal.. said rano. seeing geet antics while all smile seeing this. In this maan was also one who smiling seeing her coming back in life.We will wait for you saying this Raj to hug mohinder so madhu to rano and they start their journey back to delhi.

So geet tumne maan ko khet dikhaye they apne? Ask Raj and geet noded in No. Ohoo.. then Bad luck for maan hai na. said raj winking at her and geet noded in yes smiling back keeping her hand on his hands like (de talli) Raj.. madhu call her.. what? Meine kuch galat kaha kya geet and geet noded in no smiling. MAan is hearing all this all smiling. Khadoos kuch jyada nai has raha hai do char dino se thought geet looking at him but then chided.. sanu ki. Farak penda.. and she close her eyes to catch some sleep.

After coming Delhi Dadima give good words to Raj to not waking her that night bt Raj said her Its for her health he not infrom her and maan n madhu to support Raj in this. Hear about mohinder n rano to shifted there dadima to get happy and ask about geet to which madhu said she is fine now .Dadima noded where seniors log left maan still standing there thinking about geet.

Slowly slowly again time start running and its been 3 month and everyone again get busy in their life. Geet in hospital maan in business and raj to welcome his friend as neighbor.

So how is house? ask raj to mohinder and rano as they sit after performing puja. Mohinder smile as usual Great like you every green said mohinder and Raj looked at madhu. See I said u na they will like..said raj to madhu.but its unfair papa.. said geet. meine be uncle ki help ki hai.. said geet and all eyes turn to Raj. But Raj u told us who alone look all this. Said Dadima. Jhuthe kahi ke. Said madhu and Raj looked at smiling Geet and soon all over laughter echoned in house. waise yeh bahut acha hua jot um dono yaha a gye. Said dadima making everyone smile.Ji maa ji bas humne be socha hum be kuch time apne beti ke sath gujar le ise phle ki wo shaddi karke. But geet cut mohinder him Papa... yeh kya.. Mujhe shaddi nahi karni na abhi na kabhi.. par shaddi to har ladki ko karni hoti hai.meine be ki na. said rano. ha par mumma apke pass mere wale no1 papa nahi thy na jo mere pass hai.. to meri shaddi cancel. Yeh kaisi baat hai geet. said Rano.. theek hai.. Raj uncle.. ap mujhe apne ghar le jana theek hai phir mein ek hafte yaha or ek hafte waha.. abhi to theek hai. all laugh hearing geet. but Madhu Raj and dadima looked at each other. Raj thought something and said kyun nahi Geet mohinder phir MAAN or GEET ki shaddi ki baat kare phir akhir kar hum ladke ... ek min .. ek min.. apko kisne kaha ki mein us Sadhu Akdhu maan se shaddi karugi.. said geet stopping maan. to phi raise kaise augi waha rehne..waha rehne ke leye to bahu banna hoga na.. geet thought raj is playing with her so she to thought to play with him.. Oh aisi baat hai ..Maan again apke jaise sweet n cute hota to mein sochti be. Par wo akduu kabhi nahi... said geet this loudly making everyone to laugh again while Raj really start thinking that now maan n geet they never come together n his dream never come true. Jokes apart. Geet u know na u have two house jab be dil kare you are most welcome there ok. And geet to noded and said I know hugging Raj making other smile while making a one person fume. Yeah maan is all standing outside hearing this after speak to client on phone.

Hey hi.. Said geet seeing maan on hall working on laptop but maan totally ignore her. akdu.. said geet. Ghar pe koi nahi hai kya? Said geet and maan again not ans him she again ask n maan again turn his face ..geet this time go close to him again ask shouting in her ear making maan to stumble and as he turn geet fell down on him and poor laptop fell down on floor. What was it geet? said maan huh tuhme pata nahi jaise.. said geet. no mujhe nahi pata.. batogi.. they not know while talking they coming close to each other their faces mile inch away from them.Ha to suno saying this geet climb on him while to protect her maan hold her from her waist. Kaho said maan. ha.. meri mumma kehti hai jo jaan kar be na sunne unee sunnana jaruri hai. or wo aise hi sunte hai. kaan mein maiel jo padi hoti hai..U.. geet.. said maan angrily taking her under him as their eyes meet with each other they kept looking at each other..But maan vibrating phone take them out from each other. yeh kya kar rahe ho tum.. utho. Said geet. patting him. It anger him more. Agar na uthu to.. said maan smirking. Utho nahi to..nahi to kya Ms Bakbak.. Nahi to mein chila kar sabko batugi kit um mera rape..but before geet complete her sentence maan at once get up. Dekha. Meri trick.. said geet patting her unknown to her she anger him.. yeah!! What a trick na when in road someone hold u you shout to protect urself and need police and and in just silly thing you come with so brilliant idea so u walk head up infront of me.. Disguesting!! Said maan holding his laptop and walking on stairs. Oh.. hello Khadoos. Meine aise be kya bol diya.. said geet. shouting from his back . This is the thing You ur self dnt know what you speak in you stupidity that hurt a person and one more thing Rape is very big word for any woman so dnt use it in ur silly mistake. Ms Geet Handa you are a doctor na?ask maan And geet remember what she speak and now she understood the word hit him very badly. Sorry Maan. mein.to.. but maan was already gone.


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After three days. Maan busy in his gym when geet enter in room. What the heck. What are you think of yourself ha.. said geet making him look at her .. Teen din se mein tumare peeche ek sorry ke leye pagalo ki tarah chakkar laga rahi hu or tum akhdu. Meine to nahi kaha..said maan now leaving weight machine and doing push ups.I know meine galat kaha tha m really sorry for .. said geet. I dnot need ur story Ms Handa. Go .nahi jaugi.. kya karoge tum ask geet. theek hai mein hi chal jat hu. Said maan and left gym. Yeh kya kar diya meine phir. Mouthed geet and run behind him and only to see him running to hall Geet madhu crying voice as came to her ear she to quickly go to her. Dad.. but Raj not look in his sense.. wait I call Doctor. Said maan punching his number while get quickly running came to there. Uncle.. Geet pat his cheeks.Geet dekho na beta pata nahi kya ho gya unne. Geet noded and check his pulse and open Raj eyes and tongue see saw his hands. Aunty chocolate ya koi mithai koi be meethi cheej hai to jaldi lekar ayiye.. Madhu noded and stood when maan said Mom doctor a rahe hai.. Par geet.. mom doctor bas ate hi honge. Said maan. maan I am also a doctor could u not understood it!! Said geet shouting seeing raj felling from sofa.. auty jaldi laiye.. and seeing seriousness in her voice he did not said anything n madhu give her one chocolate and geet trying to make raj eat this as his mouth to not open n she harshly putting chocolate in his mouth Aunty thodi si Tea bani hai na. wo lana.. madhu noded and

Geet start feeding him forcibly while she ask maan to wipe sweats from Raj face. Raj start breathing normally Aap theek hai abhi.Raj nodes her head in yes all take relief. Dadima and Vicky Annie to come as servant inform dadima about Raj fell down In Hall. Theek hai na Aap. Madu to ask to which Raj nodes in yes n ask water. Mein Lata Hu said maan and Geet start rubbing his hands and feet's. Till than Doctor to come and Madhu ask maan to leave Raj to their room. That's really good Geet you not wait for me.said doctor after examine her coming to family where all waiting for him along with Mohinder and Rano. Ek ya do mins or Ine much meetha nahi Diya jata to he may get paralysed. Said doctor shocking everyone. kya.. Said maan. Ha maan bete. Tumare Dad ko sugar attack aya tha. Unka sugar level bahut jyada down Ho gya tha or unki maan tak ja Sakti thi agar Geet sahi time PE une much na khilati. Raj ko sugar Ki problem hai kya? To which Madhu nodes ha unki Sugar badhti hai par kam to kabhi nahi hui. Aise Mein apko unka or khyal rakhna hoga. Unke sugar level Pe. Meine much medicine likh di hai Geet ko Geet beta wo magwa Lena.or Raj ko time PE de Dena.Geet nodes. Waise ab apke ghar Mein ek doctor hai to mujhe kyun bhulwaya. Said Family doctor caressing Geet head making mohinder smile in proud. or Geet.doctor said something to Geet to which she noded in after sending doctor they all enter Raj room to see him when Geet inform that Raj is sleeping due to seductive and said Aunty n dadima uncle theek hai. Aap aise hi fikar kar rahe hai. Madhu noded n came to Geet and said Thanku. Aunty Mein apki beti nahii. Beti ko koi thanku bolta hai.kya. Chalo chalo aap log jai or ab mere parents ko rest karne do. Said Geet making everyone smile n she send mohinder and Rano to .

After some hours. Ab aap kaise Ho? Ask Geet still wiping sweat from his forehead. Fine Bas thodi Si weekness lag rahi hai said Raj getting up in sitting position hmm or much ask Geet and raj nodes in no. Aunty bas soup la rahi hogi apke leye. Wo lijiye . Yes Doctor or.. Much said Raj seeing at her all smiling. Or ..ha.. 2 din ke leye no office.. Ok. Geet.par.. Theek hai 3 din. Baat to suno. Theek hai one week. So it finall aap one week office nahi ja rahe jai.or rest kar rahe hai. Par aap chahte hai Mein or 15din badahu hear it Raj get silence and Madhu chuckled seeing all this along with Dadima n maan. hans lo aap dono be. Said Raj n Madhu kept soup bowl infront of him. Yeh lijiye or apni energy badaiye. Said Geet and Raj start having it. Geet bete hum hai yaha. Tum ab chale jai. Subh se yahi Ho rest karlo thodi Si. Mein theek Hu aunty or waise be meine Hospital se chutti le li thi. Aaj ka din apne new patient ke sath bitane ke leye. Dadima n Madhu smile. Aap log jaiye aap KO be to kaam hoga na or dadima aap be rest kijiye . Said Geet sending them. Later she give medicine to Raj who again slept and in evening again great together held in Raj room as mohinder n Rano to come to see him and after dinner

But Geet said them that as a caution she will stay there with Raj to monitor his health and it necessary for Raj health. Noded with Geet talk Mohimdr n Rano left feom there. When Geet said Aunty aap be Guest room mekm be so jaiye meim hu uncle ke satg par tum ask madhu. Mein hu. U dnt worry apko be to energy chahiye hogi na unvle ko sambalne ke leye. Noded Madhu to left from there . After aome time Raj slept bt geet to feel sleepy so she thought to make coffe for her. On kitchen entrance she collide with maan kuch chahiye tume tu which geet said Yeah one coffee . Mein bana deta hu waise be apne leye yo bana hi raha hu. Geet doest not tell him.anything onlu nodrd n maan start preparing coffee. And yeh tumara. Yeh li said man forward her coffe cup. Thanks geet said n man nodes.Geet man call her while siping her coffee she looked at him. Sorry woh. Subh ji hua. You was helping Dad n meine. Geet smile n said Its ok. I knkw ubwas angry on me thats why u said that. Its ok and actually I am sorry. I know my words hurt u most. So can u pls forgive me. Pls. I never wanted yo hurt u wo bas aise hi... its Ok to geet. Said maan. Friends. Said maan forward his hand and geet to kept her her hands on his n said Friends.

And they actually become good friends after that. May be more in these days as with passing days they start kbowing each other their more and their liking to start growing & long conversation of their phone calls never come to an end but still thy not forget to fight they fight still sometime on phone or sometime when they met on caf but now learn it handle it more maturally and sort out their difference soon while bringing smile of each other face.

Three more months had passed Handas and Khuranas senior couples enjoying their lunch outside as it was Sunday when Raj ask about geet? to which Rano said she go to market. Kya baat hai Raj. Said mohinder putting some more gravy in his bowl. Nahi kuch nahi. Lagta geet ke pass apne uncle ke leye time nahi hai said raj making face .Madhu and all chuckled hearing it. Aisa nahi hai Raj wo bad hospital mein thoda busy rehti hai. phir be phle be to thin a phir be roz sham ko milne ati thi or aaj kal hafte mein ek baar uske darshan hote hai. said Raj chuckling remembering geet talk. Kya Raj aap be. Let her do her duty. Said MAdhu meine kab roka hai madhu. Mohinder n rano know how much Raj love geet n adore her. Koi baat nahi Raj mein teri complaint teri pari tak pauncha duga. Phir tu jane or teri pari theek hai to which Raj noded and Madhu n Rano smile. They eat their lunch and after paying bill they are coming out when a girl giggling voice came to their ears. Oh my poor baby!!!! Said Geet caressing some boy cheeks while her laughter she not controlling it.. both couples looking at each other Rano to mohinder and Raj to Madhu. Mohinder tune to kaha tha geet hospital hai Duty ke leye to which Mohinder said Ha geet ne yahi kaha tha. then raj with greeted teeth to phir yeh kis ladke sath yaha.. but Madhu hold his hand. Raj he must be geet friend. Phir be. Bhabhi Jhuth kyun bola usne.said Rano looking at Smiling geet . Madhu looked at trio like you not understood why she is here. Though Raj understood but not show infront of her. chalo mohinder zara dekhte hai and mohinder to noded with equal amount of anger ladies looked at each other worriedly and march toward them. Raj .suniye.. Madhu and Rano call him. But they not heard. Pata nahi kya karnge yeh ab. Said MAdhu and Rano to noded knowing how both protective towards Geet. Ok. Ok.. Chup. Said geet still controlling her laughter but cnt have it and she laugh out making Maan angry.. Dnt show me your big eyes Akdhu I am scared of it. Said geet making both couples to stopped. Maan. both Raj and madhu mouthed and looked at each other. That girl not boy not boy.. agrhhh.. he is just torturing me and you only smiling seeing this. Cnt you stop him doing that. Said maan irritatingly . And Why you think I should stop him he really love you Maan. he say that.. said geet.Pyaar to tum be karti ho mujhse to you to seduce me in public. Said maan You Mad girl.. I not love that wala.. said geet. oh.. ms geet handa ka pyaar kon sa hai.. waise tuhme batau tumare pyaar ka matlab mujhe bas tang karna hai. said maan highly irritated .phele wo tumari sangai ka jhutha drama or ab yeh kuch to taras karo apne lover pe. Said maan now in really sad voice. Geet laugh and caress his face again. Dat drama it was all because orf you.. u know stupid.. said geet. M not stupid. Said maan. so I am also not mad. Ok. Agar tum mujhe seedhe seedhe 3 magical words keh dete to mujhe yeh drama nahi karna padta. U know pure 2 mahine 18 din or 50 ghante meine intzaar kiya tha. ki u wil tell me now. This and than. But you. U can be great business man bt not man. Ok.. who cnt propose a girl. Hearing it maan make face as she was telling truth. I tried.. Yeah I know. U much u tried.. wo to mein drama na karti to tum to abhi be wahi.. Gee..t mujh ..tumse..wo.. mein.. apni presentation ke time pe be aise fumble karte ho kya. Said geet smiling again.. D'nt laugh ok ..Kyun.. ask geet. Kyunki I will talk to our parents about us. Bas. Tab hasna.. but geet again start laughing again. Mr khurana.. leave it.. said geet holding his chin , That is not you.. u or raj uncle se... agrhh . meine kaha na I will so will.. ok Handa ki bachi.. said maan greeted his teeth. For u kind information I m mohinder handa ki bachi.. but you.. tum to Raj uncle ke bache lagte hi nahi.. said geet. and raj looked at madhu embarrassing come out from shock . See Raj uncle kitna pyaar karte hai Aunty se. how romantic he is. But you even dnt know R abt it. Aye papa se baat karne. I know ok. Said maan. Oh U know than theek hai phle propose phir shaddi ki baat with family.Till than keep practising ok. I will . said maan Will see. Abhi kuch order karo mujhe bhuk lagi hai maan. said geet and Maan call waiter while geet smile seeing him irritating as he look super cute in that look and she really enjoy it. Dnt laugh geet handa. I will complete your challenge.. ok.. yeah!! Then we will talk . abhi chodo. Or mujhe bato. Ki. And they get busy in their new conversation leaving all hitted arguments or cute nok jhok back .

Raj are you seeing same what I am seeing and Raj hummed and Looked at Mohinder. Iska matlab maan or geet said madhu looking at rano. bacho ne phle hi ek dusre ko pasand kr liya hai. said Rano hearing it Raj and mohinder hug each other . Mubaraka mohinder.. mubaraka ..while ladies to hug each other.

Chalo bacho ko bata dete hai ki hume koi problem nahi hai unki shaddi mein. Said mohinder but Raj stopped him . not so soon mohinder. They looked at him when they can hide from us their family than we can also hide a surprise from them. Matlab said rano. oh ho!! Mein samjata hu sabko phle ghar chale and happily leave from there.

Next morning Geet was leaving for her duty when Rano looked at mohinder who noded in yes. Geet.. come beta I have to talk to u something really Important papa sham ko baad karte hai mein late ho rahi hu. Geet.. Rano call her. 2 mins lagega beta nahi to tere papa sara din yahi sochte rahege. Geet understood its Imp talk and till than mohinder not told to her he will be thinking all this and this may effect his health. Ji Mamma.said geet

Kahiye papa. Said geet taking her seat close to mohinder. Mohinder looked at rano who noded in yes and geet seeing it all. Bataiye na papa kya baat hai. said geet. wo Geet hamane tumara Rishta pakka kar diya hai beta. Said mohinder shocking geet. Ri..S..hta.. par meine kaha tha mujhe koi shaddi nahi karni hai. kab tak get beta. Koi to hona chahiye na hamare baad jo tumara khyal rakh sake pyaar kar sake jiske sath tum apni zindagi ache se gujara sako. Hamara kya hai beta. Pata nahi kab . papa.. aise mat bolo. Said geet getting emotional to which he earn glare from rano. mere kehne ka matlab hai. ladka bahut acha hai. khud ka business sambal raha hai new York mein or wo agle hafte hi engagement ke leye a rahe hai. une tumari photo be bahut pasand ayi hai.. pls beta.. geet doe not know what she tell to her parents. Hum tere bhale ke bare mein hi sochege na beta.. geet noded and ask kab a rahe hai wo. To which moinder said next week tumare bday pe . ek baar mil lo ladke ko. Acha lage tab hi hum baat aage badayege. Theek hai to which geet noded in ok.

She try to call maan to know about this new problem. But maan think she again fooling him. Geet I love you baby. Mein ek baar fool ban gya dubara thoda banuga. Mein ek imp meeting mein pe hu. Baad mein baat karta hu. Ok. Saying this he cut call not listen geet. she again try to connect him bt maan put his phone on silent and Maan your phone.said Raj seeing geet name. ha.. Dad. Nothing Imp. Suru kare and raj noded and said. Suru to kabse kar diya hai humne hamra plan.. ab dekho tum dono. Kitni tension din a tum dono ne mujhe. I will see it all. Said Raj in his mind.

God!!! 15 missed calls said maan seeing geet miss calls. Kahi sahi mein.. maan u know na.. how she is. Or aisa kuch hota to Dad mujhe batete nahi thinking this he sent her message that he will meet her in evening to which she get ans back go to hell you and angry emotions dnt disturb me now!!! Oh teri itna gussa.. replied maan again. Though geet see it. But could not message him as she get busy in her duty.

At night when Maan came home he looked at ladies of the house who look busy in clothes. Mom dadima. Kya ho raha hai. said Maan while kissing dadima cheeks. Lo aap ko nahi pata. Said annie making maan wonder what he dnot know.Kya annie. Said maan. Arre Geet ko dekhne Ladke wale a rahe hai so we are just preparing for it. Said annie winking at Madhu as they add annie and Vicky to their plan. Kya.. said maan getting shocked and at once standing. Kya hua bhai. Aap khush nahi lag rahe? Said annie. Me..in.. nahi.. to.. aisa kuch nahi hai.. mujhe koi imp kaam yaad a gaya. Mein abhi ata hu. Saying this he go to his room making ladies to laughing on him. My poor child. Said madhu looked at maan. koi poor woor nahi hai mom. Dekha na kaise itni badi baat bhai or geet ne humse chupai. Abhi baari unki hai. said annie.You are to bad like Raj.said madhu. I am bad dadima ask annie to which dadima noded no and annie hug her.

Kya hai?? said geet as she pick maan call. To tumhe sach mein is baar ladke wale dekhne a rahe hai. to mein subh se tuhme kya batane ki koshish kar rahi thi. Wait a min. tume kaise pata chala maan. and maan tell her everything. Ab kya maan? ask geet. I am coming to pick you phir sochte hai. no maan. said geet. kya ask maan. Night shift hai meri. Hmm. ab kya.. mein kuch sochta hu. Tum tension mat lena. To which geet only hummed in sad tone. Pakka tum dekh longe na. ask geet. mumma ka be phone aya thaw o or aunty mujhe shopping ke leye lejana chahte hai maan mujhe to aisa lagta gharwale ko jaise pata hi hai ki yeh engagement hoke hi rahegi.. mumma annie dadima sabhi baar baar phone karke..meine kaha na. mein dekh lunga. You just smile ok mein papa se baat karta hu. Said maan forgetting all previous convo. Hmm. jaldi karna. Maan noded and cut the call.

God!! Ab sach mein geet ki sagai kissi or se.. maan what are u thinking u have one week.. soch kuch. Soch.. and maan get busy in planning.

Dad.. mujhe aap se baat karni hai said Maan seeing Raj and mohinder sitting together. Not know maan business ki baat abhi nahi mohinder or mein busy hai abhi thoda sa.. but dad.. pls beta.. we will talk later abhi wo ladke walo ke gift hum choose kar rahe hai. akhir geeet is ghar ki be to beti hai. maan noded half heartdly. Maan Raj call him again. Mein 2-4 din office nahi a pauga. Pls beta see all work there. yaha pata kitni tyarriya baki hai party ke leye. Abhi tak to humne koi hall tak nahi dekha. Party ke leye. Bahut kaam hai beta. Man noded and left from there. he saw her mom and trying to talk to her but she to said him she is going to market with Rano and Dadima. And they all everyone time give him some excuse so that they cnt talk to him more, even Raj some how manage to making maan to busy in office work saying all work is important that he held up with files. I am trying geet. said maan. you know maan. mumma and dadima take me to mall for my engagement dress or tum waha apni file hi dekho. Said geet really getting angry on him while a tear escape from her eyes but she wipe it soon seeing rano calling her.

And finally day come Raj and mohinder welcoming guest. Aap logo ne bahut satya hai mere bte ko. Said madhu still complaining to Raj. Or yeh surprise jan kar tumara beta hi khush hoga. Said Raj . bas be karo tum dono. Said dadima as from morning she only hearing tumara beta . tumara beta from madhu and raj. Maan kaha hai? or geet?

Here come girl said Vicky looking at geet who in pink gown looking really beautiful. Party mein kaise baat ho payegi ladke se. thought geet looked at party loud music and Dj. Or mumma ne yeh dress be aaj dalwa di kal mera bday hona jaruri tha kya thought geet and approach all. Madhu and dadima plant a kiss on her forehead . Geet u look gorgeous yaar. Said Annie. And geet noded in ok. Maan kaha hai? ladke wale bas ate hi honge or yeh ladka abhi tak nahi aya. Said Raj intentionally. Vicky go and bring Maan. said Raj and Vicky noded.

As maan come down his eyes fell on geet. how beautiful she is looking thought maan. gosh this pink dress on her truly making her pari. But soon raj make him come out from his thought. Itni late ..tum to aise tyar ho rahe hai jaise. Geet ko tum dekhne a rahe ho!! Come I will meet you with my some good friends from our college said Raj taking maan. but maan eye was only on geet and seeing tear in her eyes. He completely lost it and Said Dad I wanted to talk to you.. Dad.. maan again call him but seeing again getting raj busy with his friends he his hand and start walkng with him. Mom Dadima uncle Aunty. Pls.. mujhe apse kuch kehna hai. said MAan.. abhi? Ask mohinder ji uncle Important hai. nahi to nahi kehta. Geet come said maan noded his head and wiping her tears. Chalo ab. Said maan and geet noded.

Yeah maan kaho!! Said raj ..maan looked at all and than geet. tumne hume kis leye bulaya hai beta. Said raj again. Wo.. Dad.. he looked at dadima and madhu. Ha bolo. Said madhu. Mom. Wo.. he go to geet where she standing and intertwine his hand fingers with geet and looking at Raj and mohinder. Uncle taking a deep breath. We love each other said maan in single breath. What!! Said Raj again shocking but this time madhu pat him on his shoulder while all start laughing. Bas karo ab .. kitna tang karoge aap in dono ko. Said madhu and maan a geet looked at each other and all who smiling looking at them. Dad.. Mom.. Dadima.. said maan. sorry bte. But we all know it. Said dadima coming forward to them and annie and Vicky to noded. matlab.. said maan. matlab saaf hai. beta tum dono ne humse tumare pyar ke bar mein chupaya or hum logo ne tumari engagement ki news. Said Raj getting up. Engagement. Said geet and looked at her parents who noded in yes. is not tum log nahi hum be tumse baat chupa sakte hai.. yes bhai and its all surprise for you and geet on her birthday yes!! only 1 hour left for 12.. so propose her.. nahi to Dad can cancel this party as Dad to know geet not marry you till u not propose her infront of all. And this shocking news making both maan and geet to open their mouth. Go and enjoy this moment. Said dadima caressing their cheeks. Happily maan hug dadima and geet to all smiling and shyly and one by one they go to all . you know from the day I first time pick geet in my arms I dream for this. When geet will be my legally daughter and bahu of khurana mansion. I am very happy today said raj hugging them making madhu and dadima to get emotional . ha. Or yeh sara plan be inki ka hai. said madhu wiping her tears. Let s go Dad. Bahar sare hamara hi intzaar kar rahe honge said Vicky and all noded.so ready bhabhi for maan bhai proposal said annie teasing him making her blushing.. oh god!! Blush.. wah!! Tease annie. Bas kar ab tu be. Chalo. Ab said madhu and they enter in party hall.

And finally moment come man purpose her making her beetroot red while loud claping voice echoned in hall as maan go on his knees and ask for marry and geet said in yes...loud musc voice started and Vicky annie come to them and they start dancing showing their excitement and hapiness and exactly 12 am birthday song play when all one by one wish geet and a cake came while Rano give ring to geet and madhu to maan and they exchange their rings infront of their family and their relatives.

Next day their paper come in some newspaper which annie show them all as they all think to be releax today. They all spent their time happily with family while they sent geet and maan to enjoy their day

And With happiness when time past no one knew but this is also said with happiness sadness is also a part of life. As life is all about change. After spending so happy moments khuranas and handas get big blow when Dadima suffer with heart attack. By god grace Raj and Vicky was in home while maan went for a conference in Bangalore. They quickly take her to geet hospital and doctor start treating her all from morning waiting for doctor knowing about dadima health as whenever doctor or nurse came they only said they cnt say anything as she get major heart attack making them worried and ladies to cried .Geet is to part of team who seeing dadima with snior doctor Manish Singh who is best in his field all our India .

After monitoring and briefing nurse he and geet come out when Rano and madhu go to her and ask about Dadima health.while raja nd mohinder go to doctor. She has a major heart attack We check her ECG report also. For now we can say anything and 72 hours are very crucial for her. just pray for her. hearing it madhu and annie start crying loudly while annie and geet trying to control but they to crying with them. Mohinder to somehow help raj to make him sit on bench.

Kya chances hai geet? said raj as Raj mohinder and rano sitting on bench outside while Vicky take madhu and annie to home back. aap aise.. kyun.. said geet struggling with her tears. Pls beta. Said raj and geet said. 80-20%. Raj phone voice bring them out of silence. Raj pick up phone taking a deep breath ha madhu.where on another side madhu inform that maan is coming to hospital and he look very upset and said him to handle maan as they both know what is dadima for maan as after completing all his study in London he only have dadima with him on London who stay with him as Raj have to handle business and madhu to rest Annie Vicky and Raj . though they to sometime go to meet him an dso dadima who may be come to live in india also but for maan she is great booster for him and they know how he connected to his dadima. Mein Dekhta hu madhu thinking this raj said this and cut the call.

Kya hua Raj said mohinder keeping his hands on his shoulders. Maan a raha hai hospital. Raj quickly go to geet and said her and mohinder. Maan ko yeh baat abhi mat batana. 20 % hai na chances we will still hope. And geet and mohinder noded and geet left to see the dadima leaving Raj mohinder and rano to praying for dadima.

Maan at once come hospital and straight come to ICU ward. Raj and mohinder saw him.Dad dadima kaisi hai ab. Wo doctor ne wait karne ke leye hai 72 hours are critical for her. said Raj making maan to shocked. Dnot worry MAan beta Maa ji jaldi theek ho jayehi. Said mohinder and Maan look at him and then start marching to dadima room where she lying with all machines.Maan..Maan ruko beta.. said Raj trying to catch him while tear coming out from his eyes as well and he about to fell down while coughing when mohinder hold him. Aaram se Raj. Maan came to dadima room door and saw her from hole. Jaldi theek ho jaiye dadima..said maan and raj keep his hand on his shoulder. She wil be fine maan and raj hug him while tear coming from both eyes. Chalo yaha we can't stand.. said Raj taking him on bench geet ka hai maa ke pass dnt worry. Said Rano this time.

In evening again doctor come to check dadima and he again repeatd his words and said geet to meet them all to dadima but one by one and if any emergency come then call him to which geet noded and he left.

Maan kuch to kha lo. U have not take anything from afternoon. Said geet trying to feed him as they are alone sitting on bench outside of room as she send both parents to house to rest. Mujhe bhukh nahi hai geet. said maan maintaining his strong face. I know bhukh nahi hai chalo phir mere leye kha lo. Dadima theek ho jayegi Maan dnt loose hope. I know she is strong she will be fight geet noded. Mein dadima ko dekh sakta hu.abhi tumne dekha to hai dadima.ek baar pls kya pata ab wo akhein khol le mujhe dekh ke. Said maan and geet noded and they enter in dadima room. MAan caress her hands and plant a kiss on her forehead and call him but nothing go to dadima ears. Seeing tears in his eyes geet trying to give him comfort and kept his hand on his shoulder. I am really scared geet. Kuch nahi hoga maan. pls.. tum apne aap ko sambalo said geet wiping her tears as she know for her family she have to be strong. Chalo khanna khate hai phir tum beth jana bas. Said geet and after wiping tears maan and geet left to canteen giving instructing to nurse.

After some times they both enter in dadima room and geet said maan to releax on sofa while she start preparing medicine for her noted down on paper it take her 20 mins and when her eyes fall on maan who slept in sitting position she smile and cover him with her shawl and get again go back to her job.

Early morning again all come to hospital to see Dadima and doctor said there is an improvement sign in her health to which geet to noded looking at maan who looking at her but still Mr khurana we will have to wait next 48 hours Raj and all really took relief hearing it and they start hoping that Dadima wil be fine soon . on being questing why dadima not opening her eyes geet said she has in her conscioness bt due to medicine she not able to open her eyes as medicine start working she will soon open her eyes to. All noded in yes and geet and doctor left from there while Raj sent Madhu and annie to home he ask maan to but he refuse it.

Later in evening Dadima slowly open her eyes making all of them happy and hoping she get soon Raj ask about how she is to which dadima noded in yes while nurse stop him as not to disturb patient while maan sit beside her and dadima noded in yes looking at her and caressing his hair slowly . chaliye abhi aap pls patient ko rest karne dijiye said nurse and all come out sighing while Raj and madhu pray to god .

They are all sitting outside of Dadima room in evening when Suddenly nurse come running from the room. All ask her what happened. But she without saying anything run to doctor cabin where geet and Doctor discussing something. She knock on door and controlling her breath she said Doctor patient is sinking. Hearing it doctor and Geet at once stood to their seat and walk to dadima room seeing doctor and geet coming madhu and mohinder try to ask her what happened why suddenly this nurse but doctor call her shocking all Geet come first we have no times. Geet noded looking at all while her eyes to fill with tears. All looked at her retreating figure composing herself geet quickly enter in room.

Maan.. Maan looked at all around hearing dadima and seeing her ruffling his hair he looked at his front. Dadima maan said who sitting near him on same bench as usual in cream saree while his throat get heavy and tears come out from his eyes. AAp yaha. Kya kar rahi hai. Aap theek nahi hai abhi be. Chaliye mein apko wapis room mein chod ke ata hu saying this where he get up dadima looked at her all smiling.Baitho maan. par dadima.. ek baar meri baat sunn lo and maan noded and said jaldi kahiye.Maan..dadima call him.ok kahiye said dadima. You know after you Dada ji whom I love most is only you not even Raj though He is my son and I am proud of it. He is great son and love me to .I love him to. but not as much as I love you and you know why because I always saw ur Dada ji on you and you know about this na. to which Maan noded and said I know dadima ise leye to when I shifter to London for study aap mere sath aye. Mom dad sabko chod ke. Dadima noded and u know when your Dada ji leave this world you took promise from me to be with you always and not leave you . Maan noded keeping his hand on her. but today I want you something Maan said dadima looking at him. Kahiye dadima. But you promise me you will obey me. aap kahiye to.not first promise me. said dadima forward her hand and maan keep his hand on her promising her. ab kahiye. Let me go maan and promise me you will cry yourself and let other do it.You are strong boy like you Dada ji Maan take his hand back listen this mein nahi janne duga aapko samje aap . I have to go maan. understood this.No I will not. You not want I be happy with your dadaji said dadima.You know I always tease you saying I love ur dada ji most but Maan I love you the most Beta and that's why I cant go without saying bye to you. Said dadima caressing his cheeks and wiping tears while smiling. Nahi dadima aap nahi. He about to hug dadima when dadima disappearer. Dadima .. Dadima..he shout wipingly and stood to go to ICU ward when he saw all are crying loudly. He running some to them when annie saw him and hug him and saying bhai Dadima.Maan looked at up while tear come out from his eyes. He saw doctor and geet to come out. Geet is to crying. Doctor said sorry to him while geet join rano and Madhu . Mohinder stood close to Raj giving him his support while he to start crying like kid.

Next morning Maan kaha hai? bulao use maa ko Agni usi ne deni hai. said Raj looking at Vicky who noded as women preparing Dadima for last time. Yahi hoga Raj . said mohinder nahi mohinder tum be jante ho maan ko.hum jab se maan ko lekar aye hai wo abhi tak yaha nahi aya , Na kuch bol raha hai.. or ab pata nahi kaha chala gya hai. said Raj worrying about Raj ans he to know Dadima sudden death shocked him most. Geet who was near by listen this and seeing Raj condition she said them Uncle mein dekhti hu maan ko. Aap tension mat lijiye. Raj noded and said pls use dundo. Maa ko widhai usi ne deni hai. saying this his eyes again get moist and geet noded wiping her tears and start looking for him. She ask from guest to whether they see maan and checked all Khurana room but maan was not in any room. she get worried and then her eyes fell on terrace door which is open.she climb up stairs and try to locate maan and found him cryingly on floor on the side of wall hiding his face in between his leg joints.


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Maan. Geet runningly go to him seeing her still he not stop his tears and hugging him from her waist he sobbed. Kyun chali gyi dadima.. geet. kyun. Ask Maan. She say she love me most but now love is lost . I will never. He did not complete his sentence. But geet make him look at her and wiping his tears she said who told you dadima left. Dadima is with us Maan. ha ab hum unne nahi dekh payege. Par wo to hume aaj be dekh rahi hongi na. or yume aise dekh ke pata une kitna bura lag raha hoga. Neeche all Uncle aunty sab kuch dekh be rahe hai or tumari tension be le rahe hai maan. unke leye be itna asan nahi yeh maan. par phir be Dadima ke leye they are doing their responisbilites na. to tum aise kaise bhag sakte ho maan. Chalo utho. Sab tuhme neeche bula rahe hai. dadima ko lekar .. her throat to get heavy saying this while tear start from coming her eyes to. Raj uncle bahut pareshan hai maan. you have to be strong unke leye. Aunty ke leye. Hum sab ke leye or dadima ke leye.. saying this geet again wipe his tears and plant a kiss on his forehead and as maan close his eyes dadima words come to his mind.Hum sab ke leye ab tuhme strong hona hoga. Samje.Maan noded as again dadima word come infront of him. Don't cry urself and let other to. he noded wiping his tears and they both join family and after doing some rituals Maan did farewell to Dadima. I miss you dadima and I love you a lot as after giving fire to dadima he said looking at fire and wiping tear one last time.

Geet bte maan ne khaya. Ask madhu as geet and rano serving dinner to all. Ji mom maan ne kha leye hai or so be gya hai. aap loh kha lo ab. Though they all said they have not mood but geet and Rano forcefully feed them.

Later all retired to their room to sleep but sleep was not in anyone eye. Geet who make maan to sleep he to get up at midnight and go to dadima room. He touched all things, chair book stand , her bed and picture of dadima in wall smiling with child maan and another dadima with all, and another one with maan from London an then his Dada ji and Dadi ji marriage picture which he remember he gifter her 2 year back to dadima on her birthday and he again lost in past where he spent his time with dadima.

Next morning..Madhu worryingly enter in room and call Raj. Kya hua madhu. Ask Raj. Maan apne room mein nahi hai. Raj mein use coffe dene gyi to wo nahi tha apne room mein meine washroom be check kiya hai. Raj noded and they came to hall when they ask about maan to annie who to not see him. Geet and her parents to enters and seeing them worried they ask when madhu told them annie guest room yeah terrace check kiya to which madhu noded no. come with me saying they left to check that places. Yahi hoga maan Madhu. Said rano.

When annie came to them and said bhai Dadima ke room mein so rahe hai. hearing it they all go to room and seeing him sleeping on dadima bed while holding picture of dadima their eyes again get moist. Let him take rest said Raj and they come out from room.Time will heal everything Raj. Said mohinder and Raj to noded and said Hope so worriedly. Last time to Maa thi to he handle maan bt ab. Said madhu remembering how he was to heart broken and become emotionless when Raj Dad expired. As they know Maan is more attach to them as compare to his parents and same with his (Raj) Parents. He and all family know how Important Dadima is in maan life and now when dadima to left Madhu only getting worrying and her worry get true when from one month she seeing Maan doing only work and work. He and Raj tried to talk to him and said geet to go with him. But he refuse everything saying his work need his attention. He day by day becoming aloff. Most of time he spent on his office and come very late at night some time 2 or 1 pm and when raj said him to take rest next day. He again excuse something and on the name of expanding work he start touring from one country to another.. Geet who to like Raj and madhu tried to talk to him but only get his hmm or geet mein busy hu baad mein call karta hu. She waited thinking he may call her but his phone never come crushing her all hopes bringing tears in her eyes. When maan come back after tour Raj ask about marriage date to maan he left saying he cnt do it now crushing everyone hopes making madhu to cry saying to raj meine kaha than a Maa ji ka sadma hamare bte ko be le jayega. Dekhiye pichle 4 mahine se kya ho gya hai. yeh hamara beta nahi hai. yeh wo maan nahi hai jisse hum jante hai. yeh maan to. saying this Madhu hug raj while handas who enter stood there.

Mom.. geet call madhu while approaching them. Geet, dekho wo hamara maan. geet wipe her tears and noded in no. I promise you I will bring old maan back. I promise you. Apko mujh pe believe hai to which madhu node to bas aap dekhte rehiye bahut ho gaya ab maan ka. Said geet getting really angry and hugging madhu while Rano mohinder and Raj looked at each other. Mr Khurana now wait for GEET HANDA and soon to be Mrs Geet maan singh khurana.

Next morning. Geet enter Khurana construction and ask receptionist about Maan as now whole world know about them so she not stop her. As he walk to maan cabin all eye on her and she smirk seeing reaction of all.Maan saying this she open maan cabin door and enter in seeing him busy in phone. She waited for 10 mins but maan not keep his phone away straightly she cut the call and stood near maan. Geet what the hell is this? Ask maan angry which make her to fear but she courage herself. And what the hell are you doing Mr khurana? Said geet folding her hands on chest. What I doing said maan again trying to hold phone but geet take it back. Geet that was an Imprtaant. More than me or our family. Ask geet and maan not give her any answer. Seeing him silent she approach him and sat on his lap. While maan turn his face as he not want to see his pain to her. do you think you will hide your pain from me. said geet making him look at her.No.. u never said geet caressing his right cheeks. You know your allofness ur behavior disturbing our family so much. Madhu aunty. I mean Mom geet corrected herself Maan she really worried for you . I know said maan meekly. You know then why not you talk to her and Dad (Raj) ask geet.I not wanted to give any pain to them I need time to cope up with but completed him to cope up not seeing dadima. Maan look at her. tumhe lagta hai sirf tuhmne ohne khoya hai. par maan sach yahi hai ki humne be one khoya hai sach yahi hai ki wo tumse nahi balki hume be yaad ati hai. par iska matlab yeh to nahi ki baki gharwalo ko bhul jao. Ignore kardo unne. Meine ignore kissi ko nahi kiya said maan. oh really mr khurana to fir geet mein baad mein phone karta hu. Kon kehta tha. tume pata mein sari sari raat tumre phone ka intzaar karti thi. Par tum kabhi. Her eyes get moist. Dnt did this with Mom and Dad. Maan they to really love u . Maan looked at her Mom dad ki marriage anniversary ke leye hum sab Goa ja rahe hai kal and you are to coming with us. Koi excuse kuch nahi chalega. They will be very happy and maan noded putting his forhead on her and releaxing a little. He hold her tightly and slowly hide his face in her neckline . I am missing her Geet. said maan after some time noticing his tear geet break hug and make him look at her. I to infact we all missing dadima. but that not mean we spent this life like this like you crying for her and getting weak .this life is a god gift maan. we should take this gift with open arms to spreading love and hapiness in all over around us . you know who told me this? To which maan noded in no. geet smiling said Dadima. dadima ne mujhe bataya tha yeh or tum uni ki sikhayi bateiono ko bhul rahe he maan. she always said Family is where they Eat together laugh together and take each other pain. Yahi kehti thin a. to which man noded . to tum kya kar rahe ho. Or hurt kar rahe ho mom dad ko and you know u not hurting them you hurting dadima. Maan. where she is tuhme lagta tume or baki sab ko aise dekh kar she will be happy there. so make her happy and build new memories with her. hum hai na sab hum banayege nayi memories so hum dadima jab be yaad kare hans kar yaad kare naki.. dusro se alag hoke. And maan noded understanding geet every words. She is right. He in his grief lost so much that he not look at his mom and dad or even not on her. who to bearing same pain as they to attach with dadima same way that he is connected with her.sorry maan mouthed after big pause you should be said geet still hugging him but not to me ask sorry to mom dad and mumma papa. You know ur this stupid behavior they start searching for new groom for me. said geet laughing while maan get shocked and said what!!! To which she noded in yes making baby face. How can they we are still engaged said maan showing her his ring while he check her fingers to and sigh seeing the ring and geet could not control his laugh and said you stupid and maan understood she is making fun of him so without any warning he keep his lips on her stopping her laughing and they share a passionate kiss .

And life again came back to road where it left behind after dadima death. Maan ask sorry to his parents and enviornment get really heavy but at end at night all sleep contended except maan and geet who keep talking to each other on phone till early morning and then they take flight for Goa where they stay whole week and celebrate Raj and Madhu marriage anniversary happily while Maan and geet take out some times for each other to and they enjoy their own time to which they spenting here. Maan said Raj and mohinder about marriage date and said them to fix any date and listen this both parents get really happy and Raj from there call Pandit ji and ask about date for their marriage. Pandit ji suggest a month later date or second date after 6 month later. Bt Raj himself not wanted to late marriage more so she said them Pandit ji give month later date making geet to blush while maan to smile and all get ready and start preparation for it.

After landing back to Delhi both family get busy in marriage preparations and marroge invitations sent to friends relatives while Hotet resort to booked for marriage rituals but clothes shopping is still on while madhu and rano shop for both man and geet. but they said them to choose their own choose dress for Marrige and then reception and getting time both maan and geet shop for it while geet chose pink color lehnga maan go for cream and pink mix traditional dress for marriage while for reception geet said him she have shop he choose for himself on asking she not told him what she is wearing saying it surprise for him and all making him wonder , but he shop for him later for reception to.

As only 3 days left for marriage all guest from both side start coming and both family get busy receving them. When annie call madhu and said her get ready for sangeet in green dress . where geet cousin make her ready rano to come and she did najar utarana and said her to wait here as she and maan coming together to which she noded and Rano left . but geet thought to surprise maan and thinking this she left for his room. where she saw him holding dadima pic. She kno his condition as she to feeling same while preparing for their marriage. Maan.. she call him. But his all concentration was on dadima pic.Maan as she put her hands on his shoulder seeing her he smile and wipe his tears and you dnt need to hide me. maan. geet call him again and make him look at her. you will not understand this. Said maan making geet to look at him her eyes to get moist but before they speak anything maan said her lets go. To which geet only noded.

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Geet come out from her thought hearing alarm she looked at clock which showing 4 in early morning. Mein be kaha kho gyi thi.said geet patting on her forehead and thinking to catch sleep for some hours ..

Next morning as uual from both side hustle bustle start some relatives ladies said Madhu to call maan for haldi and after applying haldi to maan they sent haldi to geet and haldi function start at geet place to. but all ladies smile ssing her cheeks have already haldi filled from one side and which make her blush thinking about maan.

After that Geet Maternal Mama after bath wear her chuda (marriage bangles) and annie take geet to beauty parlour while mohinder said rano and other guest to ready. While he and raj again go to menu seeing preparation.

After some hour Maan barat get ready to take dulhan with band baja annie Vicky Raj and madhu all dance making maan to smile looking at them who is sitting on horse as the place is near her menu with in 10 mins they reach venu where Mohinder and rano with their relatives waiting for them and seeing Mohinder Raj pull Mohinder and Rano to and barat show sambadis dance for some mins before geet cousin brother come forward and help maan and take him inside. Geet friends and cousin all stood on door to welcome their jija ji and when they demand 51,000/ yash and Adi stop maan and said him to go back to which meera nd pinki said them yes take him but soch lo geet nahi milegi phir maan and that's it maan keep money on them and the girl go aside leaving path for maan making his mother happily. Yeh bache be na. said madhua nd raj noded and they with handa couple entered together.

After sometimes Geet cousin and Rano, annie and madhu bring geet to place where maan waiting for him blushingly geet came forward to him and as maan forward his hand a loud hooting voice echoned in hall making her blushing more and pandit ji call on stage for garland ceremony and with lot of teasing they put garlands on each other.

After that maan with his friends sit on mandap for next marriage rituals . pandit ji start havan and both family to join maan and after some times pandit ji call rano to bring geet and again madhu anie and rano bring her and pandit ji said her to sit beside maan and again he start mantra and said Rano and mohinder to did kanyadan accepted and then pandit ji said geet to take one vow which she to noded in yes and after that pandit ji ask for mangalsutra and sindoor to madhu and forward it to maan and maan first filled geet Maang with sindoor and then he tied mangalsutra on her neck making her his than pandit ji said them to stood now and take pheras which they obliged and after that pandit ji call them husband and wife and both raja madhu and get parents bless them happily.

One picture.. said Vicky while bringing the photographer and they click some pics together when Maan take geet to dinning table where again both family eat together and then pandit ji said Raj to about the departure of barat and start mohinder to prepeartion for it which he noded and rano could not control her tear and that bring automatically tears in geet eyes though thy know geet is not going anywhere but to thinking now geet not stay with them thought itself enough for rano to get emotional but madhu and raj said her not to cry and let geet happily enter in her second house hearing it she wipe her tears and so she wipe geet tears to hugging her daughter

Later madhu welcome Geet in khurana mansion happily and said annie to take them to mandir while she look at raj and said Maa hoti to aaj she cnt complete it bt tears come out from her eyes raj noded and hug her. Later annie make maan and geet to play some game and seing teasing annie madhu said her to stop and said guest to rest as well. Maan u take ur wife to ur room now said mashu smiling and he noded and hold her fingers while Raj stop him and said aise hi dulhe raja ho. Kuch to sharam karo.. Raj madhu call him. And madhu said maan to pick geet in his arms and take to their room making both blushing but hold her in his arms and take her to their room to start new life of his with her. hmm.. junglii.. said maan as seeing no one near them geet bite his cheeks smiling as he still taking her to their room. and once he enter in room and locked it. Now ready jaan. Ask maan and geet noded shyly and hug him while maan take her to bed and they start enjoying their togetherness. Their new life together.

And Slowly slowly again time start running fastly . after marriage maan and geet go to honeymoon for one month on Greece and paris after coming back where Maan join his office geet to join hospital. Hapiness again start pouring in rain as again laughter start echoned in their lives though they all still miss dadima but now they all start moving on with life. Hearing about decision that he shifting his business to maan name Raj leave his retirement plan till Vicky not get his experience in business line as Maan really handle business very well they all are happy where life goes . Maan and geet to in their busy schedule get some times for themselves as night they know that's for them. With time their love and understanding to start growing more like geet to come to know maan still miss dadima and when he miss her he go to her room and that room it silence really give him pain. So whenever maan get hyper or not his mood not look good she cheer him with her bak bak and he leave all his anguish pain and start smiling with her.

One fine day both families having breakfast together on Sunday morning when while serving them she collapse on floor. Maan is first who saw it and quickly came to her and pat her cheeks. Worriedly Raj said Vicky to call doctor and doctor check her and after examine her when maana nd family ask about geet . doctor give them good news . kya they not believe their ears but doctor node in yes and madhu distribute sweets to all and they enter see geet who to smiling blushingly hearing it. Madhu and rano come to her and geet hug them looking at maan who is saying I wil see u later by his eyes making her shy more.

Next day as per elder order maan take geet to checkups and doctor to confirm it spreading more hapiness in their life. Both Rano and madhu start taking care her like after one hour phone her asking whether she have eat that they pack or not. Geet only noded in yes only seeing her friends on her but as month passing it became difficult for her to do duty sue to her sickness and when it start paying on her health she decide to quit and she really thankful for all who not one time ask any question to her not even maan. as he only said him he is with her. that is geet wanted this time as she wanted her full concentration on their baby and family. Senior doctor not accept her resignation and said her he granting maternity leaves for her. Geet tried to make him understood. Geet told this to family and maan as well and they all said her she can think this later noded geet to left this thought and start pampering from all. Where from morning to rano and madhu pampare her evening after coming to office Raj and mohinder pamper her and at last at night his husband pamper her. though he pamper her less tease her most but still she like it.

Geet was on her six month pyeriod time when suddenly geet with her baby bump come to elder wipingly who sitted outside in the garden enjoy sunny day. Mom..Papa.. she get her attention they get worried seeing her crying. They get worried kya hua geet? they all sk one by one and she said maan. and again start crying loudly. Ab kya kiya maan ne. ask Rano and geet narrated, Mom Dad he call me fatty and again sob.. o.r he told.. me..in ha..ta..ni.. lag rahi hu. See Dad phir kaha maan ne.. said geet sobbing making elder to smile as from last months this going on maan said her something seeing her mood swings and she complete to them. Though they stop him infront of her but again maan said her something and she complaint to them. Aap be hans rahe hai..

Mein nahi rahugi yaha.. mein or baby ja rahe hai. hum nahi rukege yaha saying this she left to them while rano and madhu said mens to stop and not making fun on her. saying this ladies start seeing her. geet they call her. but not see her any room they started getting worried as they know who high geet moods swings are so they quickly call maan and them and told them geet is not here. Maan who know about his wife harmones these days said ladies to not worried and he go to all places where he find her back when she get upset from him but when he to get empty hand now all start worried for her and maan ask what she tell before leaving and madhu repeat this words and oh shit!!! Maan said..mom she will do same. U know na her harmones dese days . saying this he run to outside door and watchman that she saw geet to leaving from there to which he noded in yes and he go to one direction and send watchman to another direction but looking for her everywhere he came empty hands kaha hai geet? ask rano and maan noded in no. I think hume police ko bata dena chahiye kahi kuch thinking all rano start crying looking at mohinder and mohinder to said hume police ko bata dena chahiye 2 ghante ho gye hai geet ko dundte hue.

Sir apka phone said servant to mohinder and mohinder cut the call and he looked at all who look worried kya hua apko. Ask servant nd rano said ha wo geet mil nahi rahi hai. par geet madam to ghar mein so rahi hai. said servant and all looked at him. Kya. Ask raj and he noded in yes ji wo geet madam ghar pe ayi thi rote hue or apne kamre mein chali gayi. Tumne batay kyun nahi. Mujhe laga aap yaha hai apko pata hoga said servant and all left to see geet and smile brought to their face seeing her sleepy madhu and rano looked at each other. Rano covered her in blanket and loose hold of teddy from her hands.

Dekha mom. Hum yaha pareshan ho rahe hai or yeh madam so rahi hai said maan. to tum na tang karte meri beti ko. To na wo aise yaha ati. Or ab no more teasing her. waise be aisa hota hai maan in dino mein. Yeh sukar hai kahi sach mein kahi or nahi chali gyi geet. said madhu and all to noded in yes and maan to. so after that he not tease her about her weight or anything.but it does not mean she not disturb her when he talk to baby and shower his all love on him/ her and Geet to not irritate her with her mood swings or companing him to cook for in midnight or going for a long drive at night when he came home after office but They both enjoying their time happily thinking and waiting for baby. Their Baby .As Geet reach on her 7th month of pregnancy family plan God bharai function and they surprise maan n geet celebrating it on High note. Seeing them dancing and laughing togther maan and geet who sit togther look at each other after pooja and maan plant kiss on her forhead and mouthed thankyou while Annie and Vicky disturb their moment saying they can romance on their room but now Maan can Dance and they take maan to dance which he refuse but seeing sadness on their sibling face he just start clapping while standing on their place and said them to dance and as they all celebrate function very happily . At night maan take sleeping geet in his arms and enter in their room and covering her properly he to change in night wear and switch off light of room and sleep holding geet. while in midnight he look disturb in sleep and tilt his head left and right while he wet with sweat..Dadima.. maan said seeing dadima and running to light where dadima standing happily. Aap kaisi hai dadima. pata meine apko kitna miss kiya. Meine nahi sare mom dad hum sab appko. Wo chodiye aap ko pata mein or geet .Dadima noded keeping her soft hands on his she smile and said I know Maan and I am also very happy to come back to you all. Heard this maan looked at her.ha maan. Mein augi beta tumari beti ban ke. Dhyan rakhoge na mera. To which maan only noded is head in yes while he in shocked. yeh sirf tumara pyar hi hai beta jo mujhe wapis tum logo ke beech la raha hai said dadima. tume pata pyaar mein wo power hoti hai jo kissi ko be jhuka sakta hai so be strong but never forget to love your family .I love you Dadima and I love you most..said dadima planting kiss on his forehead and she get disappeared making maan to get up in sleep shouting dadima name. Geet who sleeping beside him to wake up hearing his voice Kya hua? Ask geet aap theek to hai?said geet seeing sweat on his forhead and drinking water. Hm.. maan hummed maan baat kya hai? koi sapna dekha kya? To which maan looked at her ha wo.and she narrated him about dream . Sachi.. said geet will wiping and maan noded and both pat her big tummy and hug each other just only thinking about this.

Geet now completely get to know how Important Dadima is in maan life. From start she think he may get out of Dadima grief but No he still miss her same way whenever he happy or want to lash out his anger he simply go to dadima room and spent some time with her things. He even start some bulding construction on name of Dadima a full complex where from house to hospital to collge everything will be on Dadima name and Mom and dad to very happy when they know about this and more to when they heard maan said them there they can lives freely as all expensense will be pay by Khurana NGO. She first time saw how deep he love Dadima and may be her to.

Geet looked at sleepy maan who sleep now again taking her in his arms carrying baby. She softly smile and plant kiss on his forhead and she to close her eyes and they both again sleep but this time contended .

After that day maan become more happy seem like peace which he lost sometime back again he feeling it and seeing him happy geet is also happy and she thank his Baba ji . they again start running fastly as maan thought to complete complex work ASAP so from day to night he start spending more time there and also add vicky with him and soon with in 2 month building get ready and maan announce this to family who to look very happy after hearing it and it was decided next week they will inaugurate this building for needed people. But as location was out of Delhi madhu and rano look at each other and then Geet as her due is also close to which geet noded seeing what her mothers thinking about this time and they to noded after that.

So they all started preparation for it and cards were distributed and Madhu and Rano invited 11 pandit ji for havan and Lunch.

Geet ..geet looked at her husband who is calling him as she is getting ready for function and all family mebers already left to complex . boliye.. said maan slowly getting up from dressing table and marching to him. Wearing a pink and violet color suit with the minimum makeup she standing smiling at him. But as she walk she felt pain. Maan quickly come to her..theek ho tum ask maan to which she noded and said kal se bahut laate maar rahi hai mujhe said geet making face while maan smile. Tume abhi se bata rahi hai ki wo footballer banegi.. said maan. jo banna hai bane bas apne papa jaise nahi honi chahiye. Sadu jo hamesha har baat pe badi baddi akhein dikhate hai. said geet and maan said acha breaking hug and geet noded. mein badi akhein dikhata hu.kab dikhayi meine? Ask maan. mujhe nahi par bechare Vicky ko or baki sab ko to dikhate hai na. said geet.kitna darate hai aap ?mein nahi chahti meri beti be dusro ko aise daraye wo to na but cut her and said ha wo to dusro ko bas Galliya deti rahe bina uski baat sune.wo kya tha. ha Ullu ke pathe, khote gadde or kya tha.. ask maan teasingly to which geet said. Suna rahe ho.. chaddo mein or baby nahi jayege.aap jao.. said geet walking to bed and sitting . Maan looked at her and said again mood swings. Geet mein to majak kar raha tha. said geet sitting beside her. geet looked at him who smiling so overly like sugar coated. Sachi aap majak kar rahe thy .. to which maan said ha. Pakka na. ask geet again and maan noded in yes and said ask baby and seeing him making face she looked at him and said chalo. Maan sigh. Yeah holding her they walk to room .

In complex place after maan and geet reach there, Raj said Pandit ji start puja and he said geet and Maan to sit on chair as geet cnt sit on floor so they arrange chair for them and after some time pooja start with pandit ji mantra and at last all family did arti and pandit ji take maan to door of complex while geet sit on chair and rano sit beside her but rest family join maan where Dadima statue inside building before entering to apartments and another building after pavitra mantra they enter in complex and see each and every corner of it on ground floor as building ghave 5 floor do pandit ji give some rice and water to Vicky to sparkle this in every corner of next floors for shuddi to which he to noded and then Raja n madhu said paindit ji to first have lunch then they distribute it to relatives and maan invited some NGO childrens to so he said them to not go before lunch.

While coming back to geet someone from his business associate stop him and they get busy in their business chat when geet start feeling pain more sharply through from some mins she trying to controlling it as thinking it may be regular pain as doctor due is still one week pending. But when at once a more sharp pain hit her she hold her tummy tightly and a moan come from her mouth. Rano who sitted besdie her quickly leaving her chair come to her. kya hua geet? mumma bahut dard ho rahi hai and one more time as pain hit her Mumma.. Maan.. said geet still holding her stomach and loudly shout in pain. Rano understood and she looked at each other and seeing mohinder near them she call them.. suniyee... maan ko bulaiye.. lagta geet ko hospital le jana hoga.. hearing this mohinder to come to geet and call Geet.. papa.. maan..said geet in great difficulty holding her tummy.mohinder quickly run while rano hold her and wipe sweat pearlf from her forhead. Geet. bas thodi der mata papa gye hai maan ko lene geet noded but again as pain hit her she about to fell down on chair but Rano quickly hold her and now she lying on floor which is cover with green carpet. Geet head on rano lap. A raha hai maan beta,, bas kuch der sabar kar. Geet noded but pain become unbearable for her .Maan beta wo geet. hume use abhi hospital jena hoga..Madhu who come mohinder to telling him to have lunch heared this they quickly go with mohinder on way MAdhu told raj about geet is in labour pain. Maan quickly came to them seeing her lying on ground. Maan we have to take her hospital soon. said rano worriedly and maan noded and taking her in his arms they walk to car. While madhu sit beside geet who groaning in pain maan took driver seat and they left in one car Raj mohinder and Rano take second car and Raj inform Vicky and Annie also and said them to take care of guest.

Doctor!! Maan shout taking geet in her arms who still in pain but taking his name. Meera who came to reception for some work see them and call nurse and ward boy and they by stretcher take her to labour room. meera rhen inform geet doctor also who on hearing it quickly came there and and she examine her and come to family who waited outside Seem like baby want to come soon. said doctor smiling. She in labour pain. With in mins we will start treatment normal delievery hai aap pls reception pe sari formaility puri kar lijiye said doctor and maan noded and he sign form and deposit some rupees

While nurse and doctor take get to OT. Ma..an.. geet call seeing him.. sab theek ho jayega. Geet. we waited for this moment na.to which she noded then all the best to baby mumma. Said maan planting kiss on her forhead and caressing her cheeks and they take her in and close the door..

Inside Doctor wear mask and start treating her saying her taking deep breath while outside maan and all worriedly waiting for them. Whenever geet loud shout go to maan ears he get scared. Raj put his hand on maan shoulder while mohinder rano and madhu seated outside bench waiting to heard good news. Mins change into hour and one hour change into two, three and four seeing taking so much time maan is getting really scared for them when they heard cry voice of baby.hearing it madhu Rano Raj and mohinder getting up from chair come to maan who standing near the door and waited for doctor to come and soon doctor come smiling removing her mask Congrata Mr khurana Its Girl. Maan noded smiling and thank her while madhua nd rano to thank her as maan hug raj and mohinder. Geet kaisi hai? ask maan. she is sleeping now but we will shift her in ward and you can see baby as well.Annie and Vicky to join them when doctor said this and they to hug madhu.

They patiently waited for geet shift soon after an hour geet shifted to private ward as maan said them and soon after nurse to come with baby. Maan annie and Vicky eyes struck at baby. Mom is not she so small said Vicky still looking at baby and cute to added annie. But as they to enter in room. Nurse stop them first let us patient feed baby. Aap pls wait kijiye bahar. Said nurse and making sad face maan annie and Vicky come out while elders smile seeing their faces. It just matter for few minute maan. said raj seeing him getting impulsive and madhu to noded and soon nurse open the door and said them come in and all go to geet who now sitting taking baby in her arms. Only for few mins only one person can stay .said nurse and maan give her a glare so annie and Vicky and mouthed heartless emotionless. It was first Raj who see her grand daughter with close eyes. She still sleeping..ask raja nd geet smiled Raj caress her soft cheeks and come back after giving blessing to geet and then madhu go she to see her baby with moist eyes and then rano and mohinder to looked baby. Rano plant kiss on her forhead and ask she is alright to which geet noded in yes then Vicky and So annie see baby. Bhabhi can I. ask Vicky asking for holding her and geet noded and as geet forward her. he get scared. No bhabhi rehne do. She so small. Kahi gir na jaye. Making everyone to small. She so soft and cute said annie caressing her. geet smile. Maan only looking at this from one side. Seeing Maan. Raj said everyone to leave as geet need rest maan u stay there. maan noded and asfter everyone go he slowly come to geet bed and stand beside her and looked at baby.. she really so small geet. said geet and geet noded and said him to sit beside him. As he sit geet give her baby. Hold her.. but geet.agar kahi. Mr khurana she is ur daughter. Said geet and maan noded and cautionly he take her in his arms and baby open her small eyes.. see she open her eyes also. Said geet making maan to look at her daughter. Maan caress her cheeks and plant a kiss on her forehead. While geet keep her head on his shoulder and maan plant a soft kiss on geet cheeks as well making her smile.Maan have to thought some name for her. ask geet. and maan noded and said yes. kya.. but u not told me. said geet. hm. Tume kabhi pucha nahi. Said maan. so now tell me. what you thought. Maan smile and looking at baby said SAVI.. she is Savi Khurana. Our Daughter .. our pride.. our everything. Geet noded and holding his one hand geet looked at him and said Maan I love you. To which maan looked at geet and said I love you most.. planting kiss on geet and baby forhead. I love you most u two.and he spread his arm and hug geet saying I am now not wanted to live in regret that I never said You I love yo most said maan making get to smile while he continue you know I always told this to Dadima and never thought I will tell to anyone more But yes, I love you to Geet and Savi you Father and mother both Love you to saying this he plant kiss on savi eyes while geet hug him more tightly after hearing this and said I love you More I know said maan winking at her as geet again hug him while she plant kiss on her baby forehead nd look at Maan smiling face

Here is End of story or say new beginning of Maaneet life with their love and their Savi.We always say life may be go on but never said this about on our emotions/ feeling . As life go on our feeling to walk with us to making relationship which we share to better to best or good to worst as it all depend on how we live this life not how we breathe in this life. like Geeta Say. You come here alone and you will go from here alone but still while living this life we bind with so pure and wonderful relations that we not able to forget entire life and we cherished that relations and moments that we spent ever after his/her life end.

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