Tormented MG OS updated Final Part on Page 28 / 19-3-2018 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Geet bohoth mysterious hai...
The way she was sad..And when pinky touched her wrist..Geet reaction was a bit confused...
She sure did experienced something more than drastic...
Was your first lines about screaming refers to geet...
Geet had any kind of affections for maan !?
She sure felt something...
What the!?Maan had 4 girl friends and a fiance...
Goodness
Will b waiting eagerly

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Posted: 7 years ago
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why removing update
Phir koi chor ghuss Aya Kiya
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: hira2010

why removing update
Phir koi chor ghuss Aya Kiya

Apna inbox clear kar
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😳 sorry Abhi Karti hoon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I like the concept seems to be different and interesting one.. you know I don't have mobile so issue hua.. my all id were login in the mobile.. there was something that's why geet avoid eyes contact with him.. geet is a pamper child of her brother.. I loved the way their bonding is.. All over superb looking forward for it.. as always your concept new story line make your readers to be addicted and I am for those.. you know what ek din update n.a. ho tu how I feel continuously check it may be you update... sach mai loved your work and truly appreciate.. must go on..few years back something happened.. maan meet her and she was with friend her friend tease her but her her one look they quiet
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Posted: 7 years ago
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oh no you removed the update????? šŸ˜•
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Posted: 7 years ago
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why you removed
please cont
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Interesting start. It seems Geet has some hidden fears and Maan is some how related to it. Her brother Brij is very loving and considerate towards her. Maan has a GF Sameera. Curious to know about their past.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I removed it
not able to read
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Iss mei Geet ka character is very mistrious Hai

Why her friends are so protective towards her
Loved brij's neture

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