With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 8 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: dqno1
Thanks for the lovely comments and likes everyone😃

I have always loved scenes between parents n kids. And dad daughter bonding is something i lovvv the most in that... Thanku soo much Avi for that beautiful part of poonam and baapusa.. Like nt hoped, seeing him did really help poonam.

Lovvvd the update. Lovvve the parallel love stories that you narrate. Ek hi story me itne sare love stories padne ko milta hai yaar. Ab isme kisko problem hona hai. Write as u have planned dear..waitingg

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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#542

Lovely update. I am a little confused regarding the relationship between Daman and Dev... Samajh nahi aya.

Teji has a past, beta bhi... Ab Geet ka peecha chod dega... But y r they seperate?

Finally Maneet.. Ye Maan kitna cute he na... I love him yaar

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@Jyothi66

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Posted: 8 years ago

#543

chp34

The sweet & sharp talks of Maan & Geet are setting the way for their confessions.But Poonam & her father stole the show.And the mysterious past of the doctors add to the intrigue.Love your multiple tracks

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#544

Wow lovely romantic update..so a cobra is waiting to get his prey,but in front of my shark (msk) u r nothing..te way geet ki heart was now beating thud thud with my maan ki closeness was lovely..both hearts are talking so much but they lips were zipped..te way geet feeling so emotional seeing his care and concern but its his love for u geet baby..te way my maaneet ki hug was lovely..omg my naughty maan is teasing his biwi in front of his maa,shameless khurana..omg teji and sona was one in past,very interesting..i love te update

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SaakshiG

@SaakshiG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#545

I really really wish this story to be published in hard copy. Every caharacter has their own story. Every character hold importance. I admire tara's character. Though geet is main character but tara steals the light on many occasions.

Geet n maan i want to ship them. Their romance has unoffficially begun.

Rasika has appwared to. Troublen in paradise of maneet soon.

Thanks for pm.

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#546

My belief has been reaffirmed with this chapter. You go for no less than a happy ending for every character of your story. And I love the wholeness of your stories, the multiple stories under one name. It feels like life comes full circle, so please ignore those that feel a story only should have Maan and Geet. I am utterly interested in reading what happens with all the other couples, which are now 4.

So, Daman and Nandini and their motive behind being so heartless has been revealed. I do feel bad for the two Thakur brothers. Their father is still alive, right? I do hope they can uncover the veil that the heinous people hide behind! Soon.

Poonam's reunion with her father was very touching. A father's love knows no bounds but a daughter's love for her parents is beyond worship. Tara was right in having stood her ground to loop her father in. The Thakur brothers will soon understand and appreciate her decision.

Teji and Sona... Well, that gave the story a 180 degree turn. Totally didn't expect Teji to have a past like this, but then, who doesn't have a past. I do hope he finds his happily ever after with Sona, because that is the only way he will be able to help Tara without any grievances.

The conflict of Geet's heart and mind is so natural. I've already fallen for this innocent girl who is discovering the feelings of new love. As for Maan, who can't love a man like him? It isn't going to be an easy path for him to make her realise the depth of his feelings, especially if and when Rasika butts in with her vicious plans. But I'm sure he will win his lady love. Why? Because the writer is a die-hard happy ending lover. 😃

Thanks for updating, Avi! Enjoyed the chapter.

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#547

superb one beautifully written.loved the way maanedts feelings were expressed there care n love for each other is soo beautiful..aww geet felt soo emotional seeing someone caring for her..it was simply superb

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sweta

@LovelyDiva

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Posted: 8 years ago

#548

Nice update maaneet romantic moment are fabulous maan know geet don't like eggs poonam and taras father comeback

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cutical

@cutical

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Posted: 8 years ago

#549

nice part poir geet is ao shy she dont want leave maan maan want to cinfess bt want to make it special
nice update soon

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: mayyo
My belief has been reaffirmed with this chapter. You go for no less than a happy ending for every character of your story. And I love the wholeness of your stories, the multiple stories under one name. It feels like life comes full circle, so please ignore those that feel a story only should have Maan and Geet. I am utterly interested in reading what happens with all the other couples, which are now 4.
So, Daman and Nandini and their motive behind being so heartless has been revealed. I do feel bad for the two Thakur brothers. Their father is still alive, right? I do hope they can uncover the veil that the heinous people hide behind! Soon.

Poonam's reunion with her father was very touching. A father's love knows no bounds but a daughter's love for her parents is beyond worship. Tara was right in having stood her ground to loop her father in. The Thakur brothers will soon understand and appreciate her decision.

Teji and Sona... Well, that gave the story a 180 degree turn. Totally didn't expect Teji to have a past like this, but then, who doesn't have a past. I do hope he finds his happily ever after with Sona, because that is the only way he will be able to help Tara without any grievances.

The conflict of Geet's heart and mind is so natural. I've already fallen for this innocent girl who is discovering the feelings of new love. As for Maan, who can't love a man like him? It isn't going to be an easy path for him to make her realise the depth of his feelings, especially if and when Rasika butts in with her vicious plans. But I'm sure he will win his lady love. Why? Because the writer is a die-hard happy ending lover.😃

Thanks for updating, Avi! Enjoyed the chapter.

@bold: so true..
it is still so hard for me without him 😭
now that the holidays are coming it is even tougher.

Thanks for the jolt to the arm Mari.
I like weaving a story like this.
Mostly in life everyone is at a different place some happy some sad; it makes it worthwhile to give them a happy ever after together. Maybe it is the neat freak in me that I love to tie the loose ends and make it come together nicely.