With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141 - Page 56

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Posted: 8 years ago
TEASER


He stared at the phone in his hand double checking he had dialed her number.

"Geet? Geet?", he said but she was still silent.



Swaying his revolving chair, Maan stared out at the landscape.

It was such a beautiful day.

He could just imagine her sitting out on the swing in her favorite part of his garden.

It had been only a few hours and he was missing her so much.

He could hear her soft breaths so he knew she was listening.

"Biwi, tum agar theek nahi ho toh main ghar aa jau?" he said knowing that she would not like the biwi part.

Still she remained silent. Aaj toh I am going to cure him of his teasing, she decided.

"Gussa ho?" he asked, prying again, " .. waise tum gusse main bilkul wo lagti ho".

Geet strained her ears to listen to his whispers.

Wo lagti hu?

Kya lagti hu?

She was curious but decided to remain firm.

Main nahi puchugi!

"Main toh kehta hu shaadi ke baad tum roz gussa karna mujh pe. Ye laal laal gaal, ye teekhi teekhi nazrein, kya lagti ho!" he teased bursting into laughter when she slammed the phone loudly.

He flipped his wrist and checked his watch.

Perhaps it was not too early to go home for lunch?



A/N: Tease ho gaye?

Please finish commenting so I can update.

Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG Really Avi
It's a Teasing Teaser
Why Avi Why, You love to torture us so much
After getting this kind of teaser how can we wait
It's next to possible

Eagerly waiting for Update
Loved the Teaser

Maan in Teasing Mode and Geet in Punishing mode to give her paper on husband a good silent treatment

Update Soon

Take Care

Lots Of Love
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yaar can't wait to read update after this teasing teaser
Loving this maan for each gasture n naughtiness
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 34
Nice update like always...
Poor Poonam ...she has gone through hell in the past...
I am glad she recognized her dad...
this Daman is good for nothing...
moi really inquisitive about Tejji and Sona's past...
waiting for the next part...


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Posted: 8 years ago
How to wait after this teaser😉 Please update soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Indeed it's a teasing teasing ❤️
Will be waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update. Loved the naughty maan. And he was so hell bend on making geet embarrass in front of kiran. Loved the hole update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow superb teaser
Another round of cute nokjhok coming up

Waiting for update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 34 - so geet was feeling lots of emotions seeing maan close to her but her mind still not ready to accept any such feelings for him. And he was ready to make her weak on knees. Maan controlled himself seeing her not ready and making special for their confessions.

So kiran accepted her as her daughter-in-law. She was not bad as she seemed earlier but still she is more possessive for her son than others.

Glad poonam recognised her bapusa and she voiced out too. Hope she soon recovers. Tara too was overwhelmed seeing her calling her bapusa.

So finally teji found out that sona had their daughter. First he was sad listening to maan that she moved on and have one daughter but seeing her actually he recognised her as his daughter only.

So it was daman dev-chandan's cousin brother who was did all this. I thought it was brij. So what role brij is going to play. Daman wanted all property in his name but it went to chandan so he did that with poonam. Hope soon dev-chandan finds out this.

Masala to chahiye warna story ekdam fiki fiki lagegi.

Waiting for more.

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Posted: 8 years ago
geet could not control her feelings and she was angry on him but he took that for teasing her.
so he is going to meet his angry mishti at lunch.

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