With This Taveez (4) ch 29, p 134

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#901

Hmm very nice part.
Geet was safe all thanks to maan. Lekin dono ko hi chot lagi 😔
Maan ka toh bura haal that geet ko aise dekh kar. Aww so sweet of him he stayed with her . Kya sab chal raha hai bechare ke dimaag me.
Chalo finally geet ko bhi kuch feel hua maan ke liye 😃
Geet babaji ko kyun tang kar rahi ho jiske liye pray kar rahi ho wo tumhare saamne hi hai 😉
Haye dono hi kitne dard me hai.
Love u raj unkle teer kya nishane pe mara hai ❤️
Ab toh aapke saath hume bhi intezaar hai maan ke jawab ka 😊

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#902

Nice teaser. Ye chandan kya kar raha hai hope kuch nuksaan na kar baithe.
But tara bhi apni jagah sahi hai.

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#903

Hey avi
We trust u and ur way of writing 😊
Continue soon.

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#904

Lovely update!!
Maan came on time and saved Geet from those goons!
HE was hurt too...but all his concern is for his warrior princess
He brought her to Tara's house!!
How much he is loving her...but he is not voicing out!
And when he did it unknowingly..Geet thought that it was for his Ex😒 and she is hurt too!
Uff..what can he done with these two!
Raj is doing his job perfectly😉
For how long u will hide ur love Maan babu😛
Loved the update di...
Sorry for the late comment...Exam time😒

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#905

Maan saved geet aur veet ko bhi kuch kuch hone laga maan is in dilemma k kya kare apne ko promise kar k betha he but he confessed in sleep and geet misunderstand usko lagta he k maan ka i love you kisi aur k liye he. Plz dp something k kuvh akal aaye maan ko but lagta he raj ka teer nishane pe laga he bas maan confess karle taki maaneet ki gadi aage bade..aur wo shayari wali kaun he uska bhi raaz kholo

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tabby999

@tabby999

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#906

Hi avi ..

Whose blasting on u ? I don't kissi ki itni himmat hai so be cool cool ...

Teaser mein maan kahan gayab..uske haile dil ka kya pata kya ho raha hoga ...ab papa ji ne itna big blast kiya hai ...teji for geet ...hayee re maneet ke naanhe munne baacho ka kya hoga ...woh kahan se aayega if geet marries teji ji ..

Geet thinks maan can't love her ..Uff maan toh pehle se hi Fida hai papers on wife ...hope he soon makes u true wife ..

Update is nice but maan pe bomb.

.dekho kya asar hota hai ..

Thanks for update

Waiting for next

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miss_mystery

@miss_mystery

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Posted: 8 years ago

#907

Awesome Teaser Avi ❤️

So finally Tara encounter with Chandan

It will be exciting

Their convo is superb

Will wait for Update Avi 😃

Now coming to note

I don't know what to say😳 but still I want to say Sometime reader don't get you and as per my Ma'am saying only writer knows the real meaning of their story or anything they write... Hardly any people get you or your meaning... But it doesn't mean you are not talented or anything like that... Cracking a writer is hardest job and Those writer are famous..

I may not able to understand what is your Actually mean but It's my lack-ness not your... So don't feel deshearted of someone don't understand you... You know that you are the best. ⭐️

Honestly speaking Avi, I am big fan of your Writing and I told you so many time for how many reasons I choose you... I was addicted to read not now... But I don't like stories which is same base and I hate it now... I don't know why but your stories are always refreshing, passionate, lovely and most important which is for me is Very Decent😃 and I adore you for that... And so many reasons too...

I am not so good in lecturing after opting career in lecturer😆 at least I feel that... I am not good in writing too so spare me If I hurt you anytime but Please Write for me or all of us who love you so much and find your stories good enough to adore.😃

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anum fahim

@aqvum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#908

Awesome update.. Gundas try to hurt geet but maan like a knifht fight with them n save her.. But geet fainted n maan takes her to tara home but is reluctant to leave alrhough he have to after she gained consciousness n tend to his wound.. Raj asks maan about how he kikes teji for geet was awesome.. Ab maan kese chupae ga apni feelings from geet.. Really wants to read more.. Update soon.. Thanks for pm..

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#909

sorry for being late but exams r going on so could not read before...superb one loved it. loved maans care towards geet..it was beautifully expressed ahh i loved the bait that maans father played poor maan got struck wondering what will he do now..loved the update