With This Taveez (4) ch 29, p 134 - Page 92

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome part. Loved it. Maan saved Geet and he confessed his love for her in his sleep. Geet concert soled herself as it was not for her. Maaneet moments were cute and sweet. Raj tried to know his son's love for Geet and he successfully found about it. Now he is waiting for maan's reaction towards the news


Sorry for late reply. I somehow missed the pm😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
aww majnu dad or a majnu beta...good one raj..way to get to the truth of your son...hope you can make him confess and feel he will not let his family down if he loves and confesses to geet...she will make sure the family will remain intact...the previous time was not long term love...
so love the care/affection each has for the other...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great update. . Maan fighting with goons,Geet scared because of previous incident, but also feared for Maan's life. Maan's feeling towards Geet ,his care ,his worry his understanding...great maaneet moments,superbly written.
Conversations between father and son very interesting. I sooo love papa Raj.
Teaser very interesting but why sword...
Plz continue you are an amazing writer .

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sidlik

Awesome Teaser Avi ❤️

So finally Tara encounter with Chandan
It will be exciting
Their convo is superb
Will wait for Update Avi😃

Now coming to note
I don't know what to say😳 but still I want to say Sometime reader don't get you and as per my Ma'am saying only writer knows the real meaning of their story or anything they write... Hardly any people get you or your meaning... But it doesn't mean you are not talented or anything like that... Cracking a writer is hardest job and Those writer are famous..
I may not able to understand what is your Actually mean but It's my lack-ness not your... So don't feel deshearted of someone don't understand you... You know that you are the best.⭐️
Honestly speaking Avi, I am big fan of your Writing and I told you so many time for how many reasons I choose you... I was addicted to read not now... But I don't like stories which is same base and I hate it now... I don't know why but your stories are always refreshing, passionate, lovely and most important which is for me is Very Decent😃and I adore you for that... And so many reasons too...
I am not so good in lecturing after opting career in lecturer😆at least I feel that... I am not good in writing too so spare me If I hurt you anytime but Please Write for me or all of us who love you so much and find your stories good enough to adore.😃


thanks dear
i am my own critic and own basher 😆
it frustrates me when i can't do it well
thanks for supporting so much 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally Maan does say I love you. But what is the use. One is not even aware of having said it and the other thinks that it is for someone else. But atleast Geet realises that she has feelings for Maan.
At least now that Maan's dad is on his case he will find a way. By the way, like your selecting for Maan's parents.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome part
the goon fighting scene reminded me of hoshiyapur track which is one of my favorite

it is somewhere leading to realisation of the feelings maaneet have. For geet first time seeing maan in diff light and maan Seems to take time to Sort out his thoughts regarding love n raj pushed him to find his path... waiting for kiran's reaction towards current situation


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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing part yaar..maan manage to beat every good after seeking geet condition n got injured in his arm in the process..maan geet was shocked with maan confession in his sleep n thinking it fr his love hurt her..maan is in pain seeing geet breakdown after his departure..but holding him self..maan dad is really a wise maan, he know his son love geet n act to arrange proposal of tej to geet..cant wait fr next part...trs sounds thrilling..chandan fr once going to prove his love fr poonam..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part26..
Geet blame him for to send other office..MAan worry about her..After seeing Teji, he even offer to marry her..stay around him..I think MAan's dad just want to see if they like each other..Geet not going away from Dadima..
Who try to kill Poonam..Chandan love her then what happen to her..
Dev going to meet him..with Tara..let see what happen..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Maan saved geet aur wo usse Tara ke ghar le jaata hai
Jab Maan Geet ko chodh ke jaane lagta hai but geet uska haath pakad leti hai
Maan confessed his love but kya faayda he is not aware about it and geet
Loved maaneet's concerns
But I loved the part of Raj's haha wo Maan ke dimag ko knowk knowk kar rahe hai
The song was awesome
Beautifully written
Loved it 👍🏼 ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome teaser
Hey dear aap cheezo ko kyu apne dil par le rahi ho
I loved ur way of writing

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