With This Taveez (4) ch 29, p 134 - Page 90

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Posted: 8 years ago
Love the way u write
And the way u present them is so perfect

Nice teaser

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome Update
Maan did awesome dhulai of the goons, loved it,
Maaneet both cares for each other, loves each other but can,t say anything to each other, though can,t see them in pain yet enjoying the restlessness between them
Loved the way Maan,s dad trapped Maan to blurt out Geet,s name, now Maan,s dad and we are waiting, Maan kab tak chup rehta ahi

Nice Teaser
Waiting for update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Teaser has damaka waiting for Chandans next step update fast can't wait imagine karta karta energy gets drained.Chandan and Poonam u make me remember ff locket which u r not reposting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fab Teaser.. and I trust you.. you should do it your way 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oye what is happening here Avi dear ????
I have only finished my comments for chapter 27 and could not even comment for Chapter 28 and then ...BOOM

Chapter 29...😲

Give my some time yaar. I am too tied up with work as I am leaving this job. Will read Chapter 28 tonight and will comment ASAP.

Meanwhile plz try to send me password for 29 & 30 together
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey don't take any drastic decision
Please continue the story the way you want
You are one of the best writers forum is having
Don't deprive us from your writing

Regarding the update :
It's awesome
I m just waiting what could be answer from him

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SaakshiG

Hi

Thanks for pm..
Raj caught his son. Father has sensed his son's feelings. Maan need this shock ao he would be more active in pursuing with geet rather than staying entangled in past.
The fight sequence took me back to geet. How i missed maan in actiom dishoom... dishoom... and the emotion scene between maan n geet... the kiss on forhead is the maneet sign.. it took me back on all the scene where maan kissed geet on forgead in the show... the way geet broke down after maan left took me to scene where geet enters maan gym... after hide n seek maan confronts geet n later she breaks down as maan leves... this scene shook me from within on the show... geet breaking down reminds me the same..
How can i forget the dr tej... he is so smart... his theory on how he know geet was as if explaning a diagonisis... :D

It was so hearttouching n amazing post...
Cont soon.. i always keep waiting for you updates n pm...


@bold: thank u 😃
subah uthte hi such a nice comment
i was trying to convey exactly that feeling 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Doracake

Oye what is happening here Avi dear ????

I have only finished my comments for chapter 27 and could not even comment for Chapter 28 and then ...BOOM

Chapter 29...😲

Give my some time yaar. I am too tied up with work as I am leaving this job. Will read Chapter 28 tonight and will comment ASAP.

Meanwhile plz try to send me password for 29 & 30 together


ye ch 29 30 kaha se aaya?
i have not even written it 😲
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting teaser..
Suno sbki kro apne man(dil) ki...
Old readers know ur writting style,nd they always appreciate u...
So plzzz write in ur own way...
I love reading ur stories...
continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Teaser
Teasing teaser
Lovely somewhat scarry
Now there is going to be some complications regarding Dev tsra relationship
Coming to Maaneet
As you have mentioned we also love passionate intense love where maan geet are concerned
Even a light peck on an eyebrow or forehead is intense and passionate for us
As we feel what we read
That is the reason we love reading your writings
Because we relish,feel and experience each and every word or action as though we are visualising them there and then
And as for your fantastic writing style
That is unmatched and wonderful
We love it immensely
Please do write and keep geet forum alive with your fabulous work
👍🏼

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