With This Taveez (4) ch 29, p 134 - Page 89

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Posted: 8 years ago
AMAZING
RAJ IS MORE SMART THAN THE SON
HE HAD HIT D BULLS EYE
POOR MAAN WHT WILL HE DO NOW
WILL HE BE BRAVE TO ACCEPT HIS LOVE
BUT BEF THAT HE NEEDS TO REALIZE LOVE MAKES U STRONG NOT WEAK
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...👏 👏 👏
At last geet ke dil mai ghanti bazi...😃
Geet has misunderstanding that maan love's someone else... They feels each others pain but can't realizes their feelings...
Raj plan got the desired reaction will maan open up in front of his father...😕
Thanks for the pm nd pw...
Eagerly waiting for next... Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Today i remembered the episode after teri deewani when maan said" aaj maine geet ki aankhon me wo ahsaas dekhe h jinse ab tk m lad rha tha." Today i feel the same feelings in geet by which maan is tortured from long time. He care for her she knew it but she want him to love her till eternity. All her imaginations are turning to that side only. She did not think of dr teji for once during the feeling of loneliness n she just prayed for maan's happiness. Sometimes life present happiness in front of us but due to fears we are not able to touch that. Maan has fear of repeating past mistakes n geet has fear of rejection as she thought maan loves someone else. They both are away from their happiness which lies in their love.
Raj uncle is a lovable father who is trying hard to gather his loved ones together in relation of love. Raj n kiran are unique couple who has set high goals for others.
Lovely song as ever. You threaten not to let maaneet meet then with whom maan will go as geet has dr teji but what about maan. Is he going to himalayas for sketings. Hehehe.
Thanks for pm n pw. Waiting for next.


@bold: Himalayas kyu jaana jab ghar baithe jhatka de sakti hai Avi? 😆
I am glad u were reminded of the Teri deewani sequence
because this was the turning point for Geet
most readers did jot catch it I have lost my writing skills
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maansi25

Ch 28
Maan is supermaan
Saving Geet from the goons
Remembering the scene of Hoshiarpur where maan saves geet
And geet bandaging maan
Though maan loves geet but loyalty for family not letting him express his love for geet
Aur jab insaan apne hoshonhawas me nahi hota tab dil ki baat juban par aa hi jaati hai
Jo hua bhi
Maan ke I love you ko
Geet ne otherwise liya
Socha jisse pyar karta hai use yaad kar raha hai
Aur maan ke liye babaji se dua bhi maang li
Babaji inhe inka pyar mil jaaye
Apne akelepan ka ehsas pehli baar
Maan ke saath ki ichcha pehli baar
Maan ki nazdiki ka asar pehli baar
Aur
Shayd kahin na kahin pyar ka ehsas bhi hua
Saath baithane par dil dhadka


Raj ne to maan ki class hi le li
Mission maan geet milao successful lag raha hai
Avi chaaahe to
😉
Waiting eagerly for lovebirds to realise love for each other


@bold: 👍🏼
shayad main acche se ye baat samjha nahi payi but u got it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update finally geet ko bhi kuch kuch hua. Raj is so intelligent usko apne bete ki dil ki halat pata chal gaya hai kitni achhi taraha se usko baaton main phasa liya ab to maan ko batana padega.waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago


Hayeee aaj toh itnaa achaa mauka tha dono ko confess karne ka. Lekin nahi. Dono ko galat hi samajna tha. Gadha maan , unko geet ke ankhon me nahi dikh raha hai kya. Lovvvd the part. Him kissing her to sleep. Lovvvd that part. Finallyy atleast his dad understood. Kisine toh samaj liya. Waiting to see kirans reaction as welll. And btw hope maan will atleast reveal to his dad what he feels for geet
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RedCoats

Ch 28

Filmy dreamy part
maan saves geet from goons and geet ko kuch kuch hota hai but she convinced herself his ILU msut be for the girl he cant get, uff kya hoga is geet ka
another maan's confession gone waste 😆
raj will surely make maan speak out his feelings for geet 😛
but, kiasa father hy he knows maneet are married fir bhi trying to suggest maan that teji will be good for geet 😡

sometimes parents have to use every means if their son is tedha😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
TEASER

" .. tum Dev se pyar karti ho ya nahi?" Chandan asked in a cold tone.

"This is manipulation. Aap humari baat iss baat se kyu jodd rahe Chandan veerji", Tara asked angrily.

"Baat ek hi hai. Agar dono gharane mein ladai continue rahegi toh na toh main Poonam ko pauga na Dev tumhe", Chandan argued.

"Baat ek nahi hai. Boht farq hai dono mein. Aap ne meri Di ka bharosa toda hai aur main aur Dev ek dusre ka bharosa nahi todege", Tara said boldly.

Chandan whitened at the insult.

It was true that he had believed the lies but Tara was not understanding how much he wanted redemption; how much he wanted Poonam to be well so she could forgive him.

Something drastic had to be done to prove his point.

He looked at the swordset hanging behind him.

Pulling a sword, he said, " .. aaj dekh lete hai".

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A/N: Teasers are usually meant to tease you. Scenarios are not generally what u expect so don't blast me without reason.

I am at a crossroads with the story. I believe in love being intense, being passionate, being out of the ordinary, especially where my Maan and Geet are concerned.

My writing style tries to follow what I want to convey but more and more I find your comments defeating my purpose.

For the first time I want to leave this where it is, incomplete, as my doubts are overpowering my enthusiasm. If I can't do this my way, I can't do it. I am not complaining or threatening or anything like that, don't get me wrong.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi
Thanks for pm..
Raj caught his son. Father has sensed his son's feelings. Maan need this shock ao he would be more active in pursuing with geet rather than staying entangled in past.
The fight sequence took me back to geet. How i missed maan in actiom dishoom... dishoom... and the emotion scene between maan n geet... the kiss on forhead is the maneet sign.. it took me back on all the scene where maan kissed geet on forgead in the show... the way geet broke down after maan left took me to scene where geet enters maan gym... after hide n seek maan confronts geet n later she breaks down as maan leves... this scene shook me from within on the show... geet breaking down reminds me the same..
How can i forget the dr tej... he is so smart... his theory on how he know geet was as if explaning a diagonisis... :D

It was so hearttouching n amazing post...
Cont soon.. i always keep waiting for you updates n pm...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey dnt say like that... Your stories n way of narration are awesome... I can literally visualise the scenarios reading every update... I love reading your works...

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