All it was?||Chapter 3 Pg 16||13th April||

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

thts sounds dam interesting
he wanted to start a fresh when she leave. he is broken now. wht could be the reason. is she geet or someone else

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Congrats for new story

Nice prologue

Waiting for update

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mehreen malik

@Lavender4545

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

nice prolouge maan new start jarna chata hai wo both happy jota hai but jb wo apne house ata hai to us ki wife use chor ke chali gayi hoti maan ka temper high hota hai aur hai air wo ring ko phek deta hai

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

wow another fav of my maaneet from u

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

wow lovely vrey interesting po

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

wow new story amazing proluge maan is really happy n thinking that going to start a fresh with is wife wen he reached h is home his wife left himhe saw her luggage is also absent maan angry n broken may be there will be a valid reason is his wife is geet or some one else nice continue soon waiting for the next part update soon

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Awesome prologue interesting he was all set to win her back marry her all over again so excited but he was shocked to find that she left him she ran away breaking him completely he was angry and shattered and he hates her how she broke him

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

interesting pro

maan was happy going home with so much hope but wen he came home his wife left him he get concern but after not getting hr any msg he get frustrated and throwing things

whom his wife

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

He wanted to renew their marriage vow again, the promise that they made. But his wife left him with a broken heart now.

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Prologue is intriguing. Only thing we could see is husband trying to patch up with his wife. What was the reason of their mu or where is wife is, everything is a query including the name of the characters.